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The Facts Of Life:
The Long Night Tuesday, January 20, 1981 11:30 PM We are inside the cafeteria of Eastland Academy, a private school for girls grades 6-12 near Peekskill, New York. Joanna Marie "Jo" Polniaczek, age 14, is a tough, streetwise girl from the Bronx in New York City who does not feel that she has to fit in with the "rich and spoiled" element at Eastland. One girl from that society however, has become a close and personal friend of Jo's-Blair Warner of Dallas, Texas. Jo is also friends with Natalie Green, a Jewish girl from nearby Hastings-On-Hudson, New York, and Dorothy "Tootie" Ramsey born in Washington D.C. and raised in Falls Church, Virginia, a D.C. suburb and one of the few African- Americans among the girls of Eastland. Jo comes in through the kitchen as Mrs. Edna Garrett, Eastland's school dietitian is cleaning up in preparation for the next day. Mrs. Garrett is a close friend to our four girls, partly out of necessity-she is the girls guardian. A few months before, Jo, Blair, Natalie and Tootie snuck into an adult bar on the rough side of Peekskill and ended up in jail after pouring beer on a police officer's head. Although the girls escaped expulsion from Eastland, they were forced to live with Mrs. Garrett in a special apartment above the cafeteria as part of their probation and also work in the cafeteria to pay off the 2,000 dollars worth of damage caused to a school van during their "little escapade". At first, they were reluctant to accept these terms, but soon learned to adjust to their new situation and in the process they developed a close friendship with each other and a close bond with Mrs. Garrett, in fact they consider her to be their surrogate mother. Last edited by Lee : 06-30-2007 at 07:14 PM. |
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When are you going to post it?
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I can't wait to read it
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What's it gonna be about?
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I can't wait to read your story.
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JO
Hey, Mrs. Garrett. I just got up from my nap, and I'm ready to go on this ride-along thing or whatever it is. EDNA Well, good luck to you. Who is the officer? JO Gabriel Hernandez. You know, I still can't believe I said yes to riding along with one of Peekskill's finest. Frankly, I still hate cops. One of them was responsible for making me have to live with you four. But I suppose I owe it to Ma to get to know one of this city's police officers. I also kind of promised this to his 12 year old daughter Maria. This is her first year here and the kid is a good kid who really loves her father. EDNA But I am really proud you decided to do this. You know, I have friends in the Peekskill Police Department-my old Korean War friend James Davis is Captain of the North Precinct, where Gabriel works. And Natalie's uncle, Nathan Green, is chief of police here. JO Yeah, but to me, they're all cops. And as far as I'm concerned, all cops live to do nothing but harass people and cause trouble- I know because that's how they were with me back in the Bronx. EDNA Well, did it ever occur to you that perhaps the reason those officers "harassed" you was because you were running around like a juvenille delinquent being truant and causing a menace? JO Hey, I may have had my problems in life, but I do know this:cops cause more problems than they solve. They're more of a hinderance than a help. EDNA Well, I think maybe you need to ride with Gabriel so that you can see what our police department really means to this city. JO Well, maybe you're right and maybe you're wrong. Either way, I guess I have to find out for myself. EDNA And I hope you will find that I'm right. JO I hope so, too.(They hug) Last edited by Lee : 06-30-2007 at 06:54 PM. |
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I like it.
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11:50 PM
A police patrol car is parked just outside the Eastland cafeteria entrance. The patrol car is colored grey and black with the words "Peekskill Police" spelled in capital letters across the front doors and two red-colored globe lights on top of the car. Inside the patrol car is Officer Gabriel Hernandez, a handsome Puerto Rican man about 34 years old who is a former marine and father to three children-Maria, age 12, Jorge, age 8 and Linda, age 2. Gabriel has heard about this young woman from the Bronx named Jo Polniaczek. About her hatred and distrust toward police officers. This police officer feels some compassion toward Jo- although he was born in Puerto Rico, Gabriel grew up in the Bronx, poor and dropping out of high school before his senior year to join the U.S. Marine Corps. at age 17. He felt that his life basically had no purpose until he met Ina Kapellis, a young Lithuanian-American woman from Youngstown, Ohio who was stationed with her family in Hawaii while Gabriel was stationed in Vietnam. Almost from the moment they met, the two were soul mates and will be forever. But Gabriel is also wary of the young woman because he is proud of his police department and strives to defend it from those who are against it. Last edited by Lee : 06-30-2007 at 06:36 PM. |
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This is SUPER! I can't wait for more!
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Keep up the good work.
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Jo steps outside through the cafeteria enterance and makes her
way toward the patrol car and slowly climbs in and faces the dark skinned and handsome policeman. JO Hello. Officer Gabriel Hernandez, right? GABRIEL Yes, that is my name. You are Jo Polniaczek, right? JO Yes. Are we ready to go now? GABRIEL I am if you are, Jo. JO You're calling me by my first name?. GABRIEL Well, I am trying to gain your trust, if you will let me. JO Well, what do I have to lose? I'll either be right or wrong. Jo steps into the patrol car as the front seat passenger with Hernandez as driver and the two drive off into the night. They soon arrive in the city of Peekskill, New York. There is contrast everywhere-there are prominent businesses and bars, nice- looking residential homes and housing projects, clean streets and dirty streets, all elements of society. Gabriel steers his patrol car through the streets of the city like it is his old friend. In his six years and three months with the Peekskill Police Department, he has gotten to know Peekskill extremely well. GABRIEL This is Old Highway 40, one of the main streets of Peekskill-I drive through it every night about this time. I chose the midnight-8 AM shift because I feel that is when the city needs me most. JO Why did you move from the Bronx to Peekskill? GABRIEL I got tired of all the crime around me, and I felt I needed a town where I could escape from that. Peekskill is actually a pretty safe town except for some parts of it late at night. Then you have to watch out for yourself. I have learned to hande it well. JO You're Puerto Rican, right? GABRIEL Yes. I was born in Puerto Rico and raised in the Bronx. My wife is Ina, she is of Lithuanian descent and from Youngstown, Ohio. JO Well, I'm from the Bronx, too. I'm half polish and half sicillian, my mother is named Rose and my father-well, my father is named Charlie. I don't like to talk about him because he left mom and I and he's now in prison upstate for armed robbery. GABRIEL Well, I am sorry to hear that, but you should not stop loving your father just because of that. JO I wish I could believe you, but I don't know. He never let me know whether or not he loved me, he just left when I was three years old and left my mother to support me by working as a waitress in a cocktail bar. As a result, I grew up mostly by myself and was headed toward life as a juvenille delinquent. My mother was sorry that she neglected me earlier, but for my own good, she sent me to Eastland to get me away from those bad influences. In a way, I should thank her, but I am still angry at her for neglecting me all those years. On the other hand, I have turned my life around and made four lasting friendships-Blair Warner, Tootie Ramsey, Natalie Green and Mrs. Edna Garrett. GABRIEL Tootie Ramsey? JO Dorothy, we just call her Tootie. Listen, I was going to have some food before I left, but I didn't have time to eat. How about some doughnuts and coffee? That's what a cop eats, right? GABRIEL Well, not all police officers eat doughnuts and drink coffee, but I happen to like both of them. I know a place just a mile down the road-G.W.'s Doughnut House. JO G.W.? GABRIEL George Washington Reynolds-a former Nashville police officer who came here about five years ago to start a doughnut shop. It is one of the most sucessful private businesses in the city. JO How do you like your doughnuts and coffee? GABRIEL I like my coffee with extra sugar and cream and my favorite doughnuts are chocolate with chocolate frosting. JO Same with the doughnuts, but I like my coffee black, no sugar. GABRIEL I cannot stand black coffee. But I respect all people's tastes. Jo and Gabriel arrive at G.W.'s Doughnut House and go inside to meet its owner, George Washington Reynolds, a tall african- american man about 49 years old. G.W. Gabe! Who is the young lady with you tonight? GABRIEL G.W., meet Jo Polniaczek, a student at Eastland Academy. She is riding along with me to experience first hand a night on patrol with a Peekskill police officer. I would like four doughnuts, two for each of us-both chocolate with chocolate frosting. JO Gabriel would like coffee with double sugar, double cream and I would like mine black with no sugar. GABRIEL And we would like them to go. I have to keep patrolling. G.W. Alright, here they come! Hope you can keep warm-radio said it was supposed to drop down to 8 degrees and come a heavy snow. But hey, you're one of Peekskill's finest! GABRIEL Well, I have got a heavy jacket on and Jo does as well. We should be okay if it gets really cold. Let us go, Jo. Gabriel takes the coffee and Jo takes the doughnuts to the patrol car and then they are again off as Gabriel Hernandez starts his night of patrolling the city of Peekskill, protecting its citizens. Last edited by Lee : 06-30-2007 at 07:50 PM. |
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this is pretty cool! To steal Sabrina's phrase...That's cool...like Mr. Cool.
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Wednesday, January 21, 1981
12:30 AM Inside the patrol car... DISPATCHER Unit 20, Unit 20, Domestic Disturbance at 2300 Morris Avenue, shots have been fired. Use extreme caution-handle code 3. GABRIEL Unit 20 responding!(activates lights and siren) Jo, when I get to this address, you are to stay in the car-understood? Neither of us knows how dangerous this could be. If the man has already killed his wife, or if the woman has already killed her husband, he or she will not hesitate to kill a police officer. In any case, I do not want you involved. JO No problem-I may be tough, but I'm no fool! The patrol car speeds through the night with lights and siren on, and soon arrives at the address-a beautiful mansion-like house with a large swimming pool. A woman with a 9mm german luger is firing shots at her husband, a man with slightly graying brown hair. The woman is blonde-haired with blue eyes. Hernandez is out of the patrol car with lightning-fast speed, .38 service revolver already drawn and ready. He aims toward the woman. GABRIEL Police Officer! Drop Your Weapon! KATHERINE Well, if it isn't the man in blue! Well, it looks like you and me are both going to die! GABRIEL Do not do anything foolish! Put the gun down! KATHERINE Since you've got the badge and uniform on, you put yours down! GABRIEL No deals! Put the gun down or run the risk of death! Suddenly, George Chandler steps in and punchs the woman in the face, knocking her unconscious. Gabriel runs over and removes the gun from Katherine Chandler's grasp and then rolls the woman onto her stomach and snaps handcuffs on behind her back and rolls the woman over to check her signs. She is unconscious but not hurt. Gabriel goes to the patrol car and radios the dispatcher. GABRIEL This is Unit 20, cancel the assist. Suspect is in custody, will proceed to North Precinct Station, Unit 20 out. DISPATCHER Roger, Unit 20. Gabriel turns to George Chandler and checks him over GABRIEL Are you alright, sir? GEORGE Yes, officer. My wife... she just... went crazy and pulled that gun on me and then chased me around the house and was about to kill me when you arrived. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. GABRIEL Just doing my job as a police officer. GEORGE You are to be commended for saving my life. Don't be surprised if you are given an award by the Peekskill city council! GABRIEL Sir, I would not be deserving of it... GEORGE Hush, now I will not hear another word of it. You are a true hero. GABRIEL Actually, sir, it was you who knocked her out. GEORGE Well, if it wasn't for you, I wouldn't have been able to do that. GABRIEL Your support of your local police is all I really ask. GEORGE I say you deserve that metal and I won't leave you alone until you take it! I'll have a dinner in your honor next week at city hall! Gabriel sees this is going nowhere, so he takes Katherine Chandler, who is now awake, to the patrol car and puts her in the left back seat behind the car's metal protective barrier. Last edited by Lee : 12-15-2007 at 04:01 PM. |
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