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Zone1 · 06-17-2003, 07:06 PM

Hi all

This is my first post. Obviously. Nice to meet u all

I Love Twilight Zone

Pls add to story Below

Mr Z

DarleneIllyria · 06-17-2003, 08:22 PM

Hey,

Welcome to the board. Hope you have fun posting.

bry · 06-18-2003, 10:38 PM

hey dude. be looking forward to chatting with ya. i have been slow to this board myself but i am branching out. come on back.

Zone1 · 06-19-2003, 11:30 PM

Hello Jenny, maam

Excellent place you have here, everyone is real cooool.

I have been other places, where ppl just shout each other down,
this place does not seem like that. Its Friendly.

I have a Q, can we post stories here? I have not surfed enuf here to see a story page,sorry . If not thats cool to

Thanks for moderating,maam

BRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mr Y, Hey pal,great to seeeee u. yup its me Mr ZZ. BRY, sorry it took so long to reply,busy.

This place is cool, it takes time to get use to this place, but I like it.

I will try to come back when I can, I am more busy these days though

BRY, have a safe and great trip, I wish u the best always

Mr Z

DarleneIllyria · 06-20-2003, 12:06 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Zone1
Hello Jenny, maam

Excellent place you have here, everyone is real cooool.

I have been other places, where ppl just shout each other down,
this place does not seem like that. Its Friendly.

I have a Q, can we post stories here? I have not surfed enuf here to see a story page,sorry . If not thats cool to

Thanks for moderating,maam

BRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mr Y, Hey pal,great to seeeee u. yup its me Mr ZZ. BRY, sorry it took so long to reply,busy.

This place is cool, it takes time to get use to this place, but I like it.

I will try to come back when I can, I am more busy these days though

BRY, have a safe and great trip, I wish u the best always

Mr Z

Hey. Thanks.

I know what you mean about other message boards and how people are creating fights and just acting like jerks to each other. Hey, I don't mind stories. If you love writing stories that have the eerie TZ feeling going on, go ahead and post them.

Zone1 · 06-20-2003, 12:39 AM

Jenny, thanks

I will post a TZ story once in a while then. And I would love honest criticism of it.

Also I like the ideal of ppl adding on my stories, i.e. I write a line of a story, they, or you follow it up, and then some else, and so on until someone gives it an end ( this can be 2 posts or 20,etc..)

Heres goes:
------------------------------------------
Midnight on Manor street:

Zorra, an intelligent real estate agent, entered the abandoned house , which looked like it came straight out of the Adams Family.
Zorra was on edge, yet she walked past the cobwebs and saw...

---------------------------------
Now someone else can add on,if they like.

Lets keep it Twilight Zone

bry · 06-20-2003, 07:44 PM

an old grandfather clock, keeping perfect time. one should wonder how, in a house deserted for so long, that the clock could work so well.
the house had been abandoned for at almost three decades. the couple that lived there moved away when their son was killed in the early days of viet nam. so the house set with no one taking care of it.
yet the clock was clean. no dust. or cobwebs as the rest of the house is covered with them. she looks around and finds a forgotten photograph of the young man in his "dress blues".
she knew him. her oldest sister was friends with the young man.
BONG!!!!!! BONG!!!! BONG!!!! it startled her. she gasped for breath and realized that room was different. no dust or cobwebs. everything was clean. just as it were in 1966.......

bry · 06-21-2003, 06:53 PM

......then she heard voices. she followed them only to find a woman rolling out bread dough in the kitchen. and then from the door, he comes through excitedly.
her face drops in disbelief. "it's him!" she thinks to herself.
"ma,...i just enlisted in the marines".......

Zone1 · 06-23-2003, 05:30 PM

Sorry to be so late on this.
I tried a few days earlier to post, I wrote alot, and it was erased by accident. I ran out of time,so I had to gooo,sorry.

the idea I have is Zora is forced to enter the kitchen, the mom and son try to play her as if she killed them, but keep enuf room for her to not be sure. Also Zorra wonders if she has amnesia abt killing them, and is feeling guilty.

So now she has to be in this world of the past, then more victims come out of the woodworks, and try to do the same thing, try to confuse her. She wonders if she is mad.

Now she asks what they want , and they respond....

( sorta like the Ring, if u have seen it)

bry · 06-23-2003, 06:40 PM

.."you. to bring to us the lives we didn't have together. "
"but you died. in viet nam. and you died... a year after you moved away. i can't..."
"your will was not for us to be here. only your will can give us the life we should have had."

Zone1 · 06-24-2003, 08:50 PM

" I ... I am not sure-"

" Oh but Zorra u must be sure, we r counting on you, besides you did "The Mom does not finish her sentence.

" I did what?" Zorra asks beligerently.

" How can u not remember? Well, it will come dear, now bring us life, " The mom demanded.

Zorra nods her head reluctantly, and as if an invisible puppeteer pulls her out of the house and she is now on her way to find victims to trade places with the mom and son.

On the corner stands a figure, Zorra draws near and sees its...

06-17-2003, 07:06 PM	#1
Zone1 Frequent Poster Member Join Date: Jun 17, 2003 Location: USA Posts: 71	1st Story add on Hi all This is my first post. Obviously. Nice to meet u all I Love Twilight Zone Pls add to story Below Mr Z __________________ Peace be upon you Last edited by Zone1 : 06-24-2003 at 08:44 PM.

06-18-2003, 10:38 PM	#3
bry Forum Regular Member Join Date: Jan 20, 2003 Location: n.c. Posts: 809	hey dude. be looking forward to chatting with ya. i have been slow to this board myself but i am branching out. come on back. __________________ that's Y-A-T-E-S.

06-19-2003, 11:30 PM	#4
Zone1 Frequent Poster Member Join Date: Jun 17, 2003 Location: USA Posts: 71	Hi Hello Jenny, maam Excellent place you have here, everyone is real cooool. I have been other places, where ppl just shout each other down, this place does not seem like that. Its Friendly. I have a Q, can we post stories here? I have not surfed enuf here to see a story page,sorry . If not thats cool to Thanks for moderating,maam BRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mr Y, Hey pal,great to seeeee u. yup its me Mr ZZ. BRY, sorry it took so long to reply,busy. This place is cool, it takes time to get use to this place, but I like it. I will try to come back when I can, I am more busy these days though BRY, have a safe and great trip, I wish u the best always Mr Z

06-23-2003, 05:30 PM	#9
Zone1 Frequent Poster Member Join Date: Jun 17, 2003 Location: USA Posts: 71	Hi Sorry to be so late on this. I tried a few days earlier to post, I wrote alot, and it was erased by accident. I ran out of time,so I had to gooo,sorry. the idea I have is Zora is forced to enter the kitchen, the mom and son try to play her as if she killed them, but keep enuf room for her to not be sure. Also Zorra wonders if she has amnesia abt killing them, and is feeling guilty. So now she has to be in this world of the past, then more victims come out of the woodworks, and try to do the same thing, try to confuse her. She wonders if she is mad. Now she asks what they want , and they respond.... ( sorta like the Ring, if u have seen it)

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06-17-2003, 08:22 PM	#2
DarleneIllyria Forum Veteran Gone Join Date: Oct 15, 2000 Posts: 19,030	Hey, Welcome to the board. Hope you have fun posting.

06-20-2003, 12:39 AM	#6
Zone1 Frequent Poster Member Join Date: Jun 17, 2003 Location: USA Posts: 71	Jenny, thanks I will post a TZ story once in a while then. And I would love honest criticism of it. Also I like the ideal of ppl adding on my stories, i.e. I write a line of a story, they, or you follow it up, and then some else, and so on until someone gives it an end ( this can be 2 posts or 20,etc..) Heres goes: ------------------------------------------ Midnight on Manor street: Zorra, an intelligent real estate agent, entered the abandoned house , which looked like it came straight out of the Adams Family. Zorra was on edge, yet she walked past the cobwebs and saw... --------------------------------- Now someone else can add on,if they like. Lets keep it Twilight Zone

06-20-2003, 07:44 PM	#7
bry Forum Regular Member Join Date: Jan 20, 2003 Location: n.c. Posts: 809	an old grandfather clock, keeping perfect time. one should wonder how, in a house deserted for so long, that the clock could work so well. the house had been abandoned for at almost three decades. the couple that lived there moved away when their son was killed in the early days of viet nam. so the house set with no one taking care of it. yet the clock was clean. no dust. or cobwebs as the rest of the house is covered with them. she looks around and finds a forgotten photograph of the young man in his "dress blues". she knew him. her oldest sister was friends with the young man. BONG!!!!!! BONG!!!! BONG!!!! it startled her. she gasped for breath and realized that room was different. no dust or cobwebs. everything was clean. just as it were in 1966.......

06-21-2003, 06:53 PM	#8
bry Forum Regular Member Join Date: Jan 20, 2003 Location: n.c. Posts: 809	......then she heard voices. she followed them only to find a woman rolling out bread dough in the kitchen. and then from the door, he comes through excitedly. her face drops in disbelief. "it's him!" she thinks to herself. "ma,...i just enlisted in the marines".......

06-23-2003, 06:40 PM	#10
bry Forum Regular Member Join Date: Jan 20, 2003 Location: n.c. Posts: 809	.."you. to bring to us the lives we didn't have together. " "but you died. in viet nam. and you died... a year after you moved away. i can't..." "your will was not for us to be here. only your will can give us the life we should have had."

06-24-2003, 08:50 PM	#11
Zone1 Frequent Poster Member Join Date: Jun 17, 2003 Location: USA Posts: 71	" I ... I am not sure-" " Oh but Zorra u must be sure, we r counting on you, besides you did "The Mom does not finish her sentence. " I did what?" Zorra asks beligerently. " How can u not remember? Well, it will come dear, now bring us life, " The mom demanded. Zorra nods her head reluctantly, and as if an invisible puppeteer pulls her out of the house and she is now on her way to find victims to trade places with the mom and son. On the corner stands a figure, Zorra draws near and sees its...

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