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mrvitale · 10-12-2002, 03:50 PM

first of all keep in mind I have NEVER done this before but I am going to attempt to - so if this stinks or even if it is good please let me know what you think and feel free to add other stuff in if you want.

Steph - Yes I cant believe I survived
Michelle - survived what
Stephanie - my grounding - remember dad grounded me for a month for breaking curfew, well today I am free.
DJ - so what Steph - your grounded all the time why is this one any different?
Stephanie - because Gia is getting tickets to go to a concert tonight and I am going to get one.
Michelle - How do you know?
Stephanie - Gia told me in school today.
DJ - well then you better hope dad will let you go
Stephanie - why wouldnt he? I was locked up in here for a month
DJ - thats exactly why he wont let you go, you broke curfew once why wouldnt you do it again?
Stephanie - because I learned my lesson I swear
DJ - you convinced me kid but that doesnt matter.
Danny ( from the kitchen) - Girls breakfast hurry up your leaving for school in 10 minutes
Girls - COMING DAD
Stephanie - so dad today i'm not grounded anymore right
Danny - right sweetheart
Stephanie - good so then after school I can go to the mall with Gia get some clothes, go play some video games, then go to a concert with Gia and be home by my curfew ( 11 00)
Danny - wait a minute I didnt agree to any concert
Stephanie - c'mon dad I was grounded for a month can I please have 1 night of fun.
Danny - You can have fun without going to a concert
Stephanie - no I cant dad - you know music is my life.
Joey - I think steph has a point, we all know she loves music, she has done her time, it is a friday night so it's not a school night let her go Danny
Jessie - yeah Danny I agree give her a break
Stephanie - c'mon dad PLEASE
Gia comes knocking at the door
Stephanie - hey Gia
Gia - hey steph, hey everyone
everyone - hey
Stephanie - did you get the concert tickets?
Gia - yep and my dad will drive us there and take us home
Stephanie - see dad I even have a ride there and home so can I please go
Nicky and Alex - let her go Danny
Everyone - you see even the boys want you to let her go
Danny - OK have fun sweetheart but remember
Danny and Stephanie at the same time - BE HOME AT 11
Danny - right
Stephanie - no problem
Danny - OK girls school time
Bye bye bye
at school
Gia - Steph major problem
Steph - what
Gia - my dad has to work late and he cant take us
Steph - o no what does that mean
Gia - it means I have to drive there
Stephanie - WHAT you only have your learners permit
Gia - relax I can drive as long as were home by sunset
Steph - news flash the concert starts at 8
Gia - relax I will take care of everything are you still in?
Steph - I really want to go to the concert so I guess for now i'm in.
Gia - Ok see ya after school
After school at the mall
Steph - so are we ready to go?
Gia - yep lets ride
Steph - so whats your curfew for tonight?
Gia - Curfew yeah right like I have a curfew
Steph - damn your lucky
Gia - yeah I know of course my mom thinks i'm with my dad and my dad thinks i'm at a friends
Steph - you mean you lied
Gia - yep my parents dont even know I bought the concert tickets with there money
Steph - Gia are you nuts your gonna be dead.
Gia - relax steph I can take care of it.
Steph - Gia I cant believe you would do this
Gia - hey your in this to
Steph looked shocked because she knew Gia was right. If they would be caught Steph and Gia wouldnt see the night of day for the next 6 months.
Both girls together - we cannot get caught
During the concert
Steph - this is awesome
Gia - yeah I cant believe it
Steph - hey should we head back?
Gia - no we have time
Steph - no we dont it's 10 30
Gia - hey i'm not ready to go so sit back and enjoy the concert
Steph - how cant I? it's gonna be the last one I ever go to
2 hours later they leave and head home
Steph - I'M DEAD
Gia - relax steph your dad is probably sleeping now
Steph - yeah but what about everyone else in my house?
Gia - trust me your gonna get away with it
Steph gets home
I'll see you later Steph.
Steph - Yeah i'll call you if I can
Gia - ok see ya
Steph opens the door and very slowly walks in and goes upstairs to her room
Danny - FREEZE
Stephanie - dad what a pleasant surprise
Danny - yeah
Stephanie - I was just getting a glass of water before going to bed
Danny - Steph I heard the door open and I saw Gia driving you home would you like to tell me what happened?
Stephanie - no I wouldnt
Danny - let me re phrase that what happened
Stephanie - dad I screwed up, Gia's dad had to work late so Gia drove us
Danny - Gia has a learners permit and thats it?
Stephanie - not for long she wont
Danny - what do you mean?
Stephanie - forget it thats none of our business
Danny - so then why didnt you?
Stephanie - I was having fun dad plus I couldnt find a phone
Danny - Steph like I told you a month ago - I give all you girls a curfew because I dont want to worry where you are and because a lot of creeps come out at night and I dont want them and you to meet up ever.
Steph - I know dad but you have to trust me
Danny - I do trust you but you have to follow the rules and becase you didnt
Stephanie - I know I know i'm grounded right
Danny - yep - for the next 6 weeks
Steph - 6 weeks thats a new record dad - and this wasnt my fault
Danny - ypu broke curfew which means you pay the price - no tv, friends, phone, music, mall for 6 weeks
Stephanie - ok but can I please call Gia to make sure she came home ok
Danny - sure 5 minutes
Phone rings
Gia - hello
Steph - hey
Gia - Steph I cant talk i'm busted
Steph - really
Gia - yeah my mom spoke to my dad and they are freaking out
Steph - yeah me 2
Gia - what happened to you?
Steph - grounded ( again)
Gia - me 2
Steph - how long did you get?
Gia - 2 months
Steph I got 6 weeks
Steph - hey we always have the concert though right
Gia - totally
Steph - see ya in School Monday
Gia - yeah see ya
END OF SHOW. WHAT DOES EVERYONE THINK?

KimFieldsFan637 · 10-18-2002, 11:40 AM

It was good

mrvitale · 11-02-2002, 06:57 PM

can anyone do a little bit better then just say it is good.

KimFieldsFan637 · 11-02-2002, 07:02 PM

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Originally posted by mrvitale
can anyone do a little bit better then just say it is good.

umm...i think if I wouldn't of even posted it was good you wouldn't have any comments...so don't make it seem like my "it was good" wasn't what you were looking for. It wasn't professionaly written and for not being in a professional script format and written by someone who is an amatuer it was good....what more do you want?

mrvitale · 11-02-2002, 07:36 PM

thanks a lot - at least I got some critisizm. That's all I wanted, I appreciate you trying to cover it up by saying " it's good" but I wanted some critisizm so that the next time I want to type an epsiode ( If I want to do it again) I know what to work on.

KimFieldsFan637 · 11-02-2002, 07:41 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by mrvitale
thanks a lot - at least I got some critisizm. That's all I wanted, I appreciate you trying to cover it up by saying " it's good" but I wanted some critisizm so that the next time I want to type an epsiode ( If I want to do it again) I know what to work on.

Well, it depends on what you wrote this for. If you wrote it for fun, than it was well written, in the wrong script format, but well written. If you're thinking of writing scripts as a profession and wanted to see what the reactions were to your first, you need to work on it. It won't take long to get the script format down. But other than that I really enjoyed reading your script. And if you want to write another one for fun go ahead, I'd read more of your writing...also...try spending more time on writing. You have to become the character your writing. You have to become ALL of your characters. And try to come up with a more exciting ending. An ending that would make someone want you to write another script to continue the episode...Do you know what I mean?

mrvitale · 11-02-2002, 07:57 PM

to be honest I just did this for fun - I have never considered writing my own tv episodes for anything.

10-12-2002, 03:50 PM	#1
mrvitale Occasional Poster Member Join Date: Apr 30, 2002 Posts: 9	my own episode of Full House first of all keep in mind I have NEVER done this before but I am going to attempt to - so if this stinks or even if it is good please let me know what you think and feel free to add other stuff in if you want. Steph - Yes I cant believe I survived Michelle - survived what Stephanie - my grounding - remember dad grounded me for a month for breaking curfew, well today I am free. DJ - so what Steph - your grounded all the time why is this one any different? Stephanie - because Gia is getting tickets to go to a concert tonight and I am going to get one. Michelle - How do you know? Stephanie - Gia told me in school today. DJ - well then you better hope dad will let you go Stephanie - why wouldnt he? I was locked up in here for a month DJ - thats exactly why he wont let you go, you broke curfew once why wouldnt you do it again? Stephanie - because I learned my lesson I swear DJ - you convinced me kid but that doesnt matter. Danny ( from the kitchen) - Girls breakfast hurry up your leaving for school in 10 minutes Girls - COMING DAD Stephanie - so dad today i'm not grounded anymore right Danny - right sweetheart Stephanie - good so then after school I can go to the mall with Gia get some clothes, go play some video games, then go to a concert with Gia and be home by my curfew ( 11 00) Danny - wait a minute I didnt agree to any concert Stephanie - c'mon dad I was grounded for a month can I please have 1 night of fun. Danny - You can have fun without going to a concert Stephanie - no I cant dad - you know music is my life. Joey - I think steph has a point, we all know she loves music, she has done her time, it is a friday night so it's not a school night let her go Danny Jessie - yeah Danny I agree give her a break Stephanie - c'mon dad PLEASE Gia comes knocking at the door Stephanie - hey Gia Gia - hey steph, hey everyone everyone - hey Stephanie - did you get the concert tickets? Gia - yep and my dad will drive us there and take us home Stephanie - see dad I even have a ride there and home so can I please go Nicky and Alex - let her go Danny Everyone - you see even the boys want you to let her go Danny - OK have fun sweetheart but remember Danny and Stephanie at the same time - BE HOME AT 11 Danny - right Stephanie - no problem Danny - OK girls school time Bye bye bye at school Gia - Steph major problem Steph - what Gia - my dad has to work late and he cant take us Steph - o no what does that mean Gia - it means I have to drive there Stephanie - WHAT you only have your learners permit Gia - relax I can drive as long as were home by sunset Steph - news flash the concert starts at 8 Gia - relax I will take care of everything are you still in? Steph - I really want to go to the concert so I guess for now i'm in. Gia - Ok see ya after school After school at the mall Steph - so are we ready to go? Gia - yep lets ride Steph - so whats your curfew for tonight? Gia - Curfew yeah right like I have a curfew Steph - damn your lucky Gia - yeah I know of course my mom thinks i'm with my dad and my dad thinks i'm at a friends Steph - you mean you lied Gia - yep my parents dont even know I bought the concert tickets with there money Steph - Gia are you nuts your gonna be dead. Gia - relax steph I can take care of it. Steph - Gia I cant believe you would do this Gia - hey your in this to Steph looked shocked because she knew Gia was right. If they would be caught Steph and Gia wouldnt see the night of day for the next 6 months. Both girls together - we cannot get caught During the concert Steph - this is awesome Gia - yeah I cant believe it Steph - hey should we head back? Gia - no we have time Steph - no we dont it's 10 30 Gia - hey i'm not ready to go so sit back and enjoy the concert Steph - how cant I? it's gonna be the last one I ever go to 2 hours later they leave and head home Steph - I'M DEAD Gia - relax steph your dad is probably sleeping now Steph - yeah but what about everyone else in my house? Gia - trust me your gonna get away with it Steph gets home I'll see you later Steph. Steph - Yeah i'll call you if I can Gia - ok see ya Steph opens the door and very slowly walks in and goes upstairs to her room Danny - FREEZE Stephanie - dad what a pleasant surprise Danny - yeah Stephanie - I was just getting a glass of water before going to bed Danny - Steph I heard the door open and I saw Gia driving you home would you like to tell me what happened? Stephanie - no I wouldnt Danny - let me re phrase that what happened Stephanie - dad I screwed up, Gia's dad had to work late so Gia drove us Danny - Gia has a learners permit and thats it? Stephanie - not for long she wont Danny - what do you mean? Stephanie - forget it thats none of our business Danny - so then why didnt you? Stephanie - I was having fun dad plus I couldnt find a phone Danny - Steph like I told you a month ago - I give all you girls a curfew because I dont want to worry where you are and because a lot of creeps come out at night and I dont want them and you to meet up ever. Steph - I know dad but you have to trust me Danny - I do trust you but you have to follow the rules and becase you didnt Stephanie - I know I know i'm grounded right Danny - yep - for the next 6 weeks Steph - 6 weeks thats a new record dad - and this wasnt my fault Danny - ypu broke curfew which means you pay the price - no tv, friends, phone, music, mall for 6 weeks Stephanie - ok but can I please call Gia to make sure she came home ok Danny - sure 5 minutes Phone rings Gia - hello Steph - hey Gia - Steph I cant talk i'm busted Steph - really Gia - yeah my mom spoke to my dad and they are freaking out Steph - yeah me 2 Gia - what happened to you? Steph - grounded ( again) Gia - me 2 Steph - how long did you get? Gia - 2 months Steph I got 6 weeks Steph - hey we always have the concert though right Gia - totally Steph - see ya in School Monday Gia - yeah see ya END OF SHOW. WHAT DOES EVERYONE THINK?

10-18-2002, 11:40 AM	#2
KimFieldsFan637 Senior Member Kim Fields #1 Fan Join Date: Oct 06, 2001 Posts: 2,353	It was good __________________ !LaUrEn! Kimmie RoCkS!

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11-02-2002, 06:57 PM	#3
mrvitale Occasional Poster Member Join Date: Apr 30, 2002 Posts: 9	can anyone do a little bit better then just say it is good.

11-02-2002, 07:36 PM	#5
mrvitale Occasional Poster Member Join Date: Apr 30, 2002 Posts: 9	thanks a lot - at least I got some critisizm. That's all I wanted, I appreciate you trying to cover it up by saying " it's good" but I wanted some critisizm so that the next time I want to type an epsiode ( If I want to do it again) I know what to work on.

11-02-2002, 07:57 PM	#7
mrvitale Occasional Poster Member Join Date: Apr 30, 2002 Posts: 9	to be honest I just did this for fun - I have never considered writing my own tv episodes for anything.