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|10-12-2002, 03:50 PM||#1|
Join Date: Apr 30, 2002
my own episode of Full House
first of all keep in mind I have NEVER done this before but I am going to attempt to - so if this stinks or even if it is good please let me know what you think and feel free to add other stuff in if you want.
Steph - Yes I cant believe I survived
Michelle - survived what
Stephanie - my grounding - remember dad grounded me for a month for breaking curfew, well today I am free.
DJ - so what Steph - your grounded all the time why is this one any different?
Stephanie - because Gia is getting tickets to go to a concert tonight and I am going to get one.
Michelle - How do you know?
Stephanie - Gia told me in school today.
DJ - well then you better hope dad will let you go
Stephanie - why wouldnt he? I was locked up in here for a month
DJ - thats exactly why he wont let you go, you broke curfew once why wouldnt you do it again?
Stephanie - because I learned my lesson I swear
DJ - you convinced me kid but that doesnt matter.
Danny ( from the kitchen) - Girls breakfast hurry up your leaving for school in 10 minutes
Girls - COMING DAD
Stephanie - so dad today i'm not grounded anymore right
Danny - right sweetheart
Stephanie - good so then after school I can go to the mall with Gia get some clothes, go play some video games, then go to a concert with Gia and be home by my curfew ( 11 00)
Danny - wait a minute I didnt agree to any concert
Stephanie - c'mon dad I was grounded for a month can I please have 1 night of fun.
Danny - You can have fun without going to a concert
Stephanie - no I cant dad - you know music is my life.
Joey - I think steph has a point, we all know she loves music, she has done her time, it is a friday night so it's not a school night let her go Danny
Jessie - yeah Danny I agree give her a break
Stephanie - c'mon dad PLEASE
Gia comes knocking at the door
Stephanie - hey Gia
Gia - hey steph, hey everyone
everyone - hey
Stephanie - did you get the concert tickets?
Gia - yep and my dad will drive us there and take us home
Stephanie - see dad I even have a ride there and home so can I please go
Nicky and Alex - let her go Danny
Everyone - you see even the boys want you to let her go
Danny - OK have fun sweetheart but remember
Danny and Stephanie at the same time - BE HOME AT 11
Danny - right
Stephanie - no problem
Danny - OK girls school time
Bye bye bye
Gia - Steph major problem
Steph - what
Gia - my dad has to work late and he cant take us
Steph - o no what does that mean
Gia - it means I have to drive there
Stephanie - WHAT you only have your learners permit
Gia - relax I can drive as long as were home by sunset
Steph - news flash the concert starts at 8
Gia - relax I will take care of everything are you still in?
Steph - I really want to go to the concert so I guess for now i'm in.
Gia - Ok see ya after school
After school at the mall
Steph - so are we ready to go?
Gia - yep lets ride
Steph - so whats your curfew for tonight?
Gia - Curfew yeah right like I have a curfew
Steph - damn your lucky
Gia - yeah I know of course my mom thinks i'm with my dad and my dad thinks i'm at a friends
Steph - you mean you lied
Gia - yep my parents dont even know I bought the concert tickets with there money
Steph - Gia are you nuts your gonna be dead.
Gia - relax steph I can take care of it.
Steph - Gia I cant believe you would do this
Gia - hey your in this to
Steph looked shocked because she knew Gia was right. If they would be caught Steph and Gia wouldnt see the night of day for the next 6 months.
Both girls together - we cannot get caught
During the concert
Steph - this is awesome
Gia - yeah I cant believe it
Steph - hey should we head back?
Gia - no we have time
Steph - no we dont it's 10 30
Gia - hey i'm not ready to go so sit back and enjoy the concert
Steph - how cant I? it's gonna be the last one I ever go to
2 hours later they leave and head home
Steph - I'M DEAD
Gia - relax steph your dad is probably sleeping now
Steph - yeah but what about everyone else in my house?
Gia - trust me your gonna get away with it
Steph gets home
I'll see you later Steph.
Steph - Yeah i'll call you if I can
Gia - ok see ya
Steph opens the door and very slowly walks in and goes upstairs to her room
Danny - FREEZE
Stephanie - dad what a pleasant surprise
Danny - yeah
Stephanie - I was just getting a glass of water before going to bed
Danny - Steph I heard the door open and I saw Gia driving you home would you like to tell me what happened?
Stephanie - no I wouldnt
Danny - let me re phrase that what happened
Stephanie - dad I screwed up, Gia's dad had to work late so Gia drove us
Danny - Gia has a learners permit and thats it?
Stephanie - not for long she wont
Danny - what do you mean?
Stephanie - forget it thats none of our business
Danny - so then why didnt you?
Stephanie - I was having fun dad plus I couldnt find a phone
Danny - Steph like I told you a month ago - I give all you girls a curfew because I dont want to worry where you are and because a lot of creeps come out at night and I dont want them and you to meet up ever.
Steph - I know dad but you have to trust me
Danny - I do trust you but you have to follow the rules and becase you didnt
Stephanie - I know I know i'm grounded right
Danny - yep - for the next 6 weeks
Steph - 6 weeks thats a new record dad - and this wasnt my fault
Danny - ypu broke curfew which means you pay the price - no tv, friends, phone, music, mall for 6 weeks
Stephanie - ok but can I please call Gia to make sure she came home ok
Danny - sure 5 minutes
Gia - hello
Steph - hey
Gia - Steph I cant talk i'm busted
Steph - really
Gia - yeah my mom spoke to my dad and they are freaking out
Steph - yeah me 2
Gia - what happened to you?
Steph - grounded ( again)
Gia - me 2
Steph - how long did you get?
Gia - 2 months
Steph I got 6 weeks
Steph - hey we always have the concert though right
Gia - totally
Steph - see ya in School Monday
Gia - yeah see ya
END OF SHOW. WHAT DOES EVERYONE THINK?
|11-02-2002, 07:02 PM||#4|
Kim Fields #1 Fan
Join Date: Oct 06, 2001
umm...i think if I wouldn't of even posted it was good you wouldn't have any comments...so don't make it seem like my "it was good" wasn't what you were looking for. It wasn't professionaly written and for not being in a professional script format and written by someone who is an amatuer it was good....what more do you want?
|11-02-2002, 07:36 PM||#5|
Join Date: Apr 30, 2002
thanks a lot - at least I got some critisizm. That's all I wanted, I appreciate you trying to cover it up by saying " it's good" but I wanted some critisizm so that the next time I want to type an epsiode ( If I want to do it again) I know what to work on.
|11-02-2002, 07:41 PM||#6|
Kim Fields #1 Fan
Join Date: Oct 06, 2001
Well, it depends on what you wrote this for. If you wrote it for fun, than it was well written, in the wrong script format, but well written. If you're thinking of writing scripts as a profession and wanted to see what the reactions were to your first, you need to work on it. It won't take long to get the script format down. But other than that I really enjoyed reading your script. And if you want to write another one for fun go ahead, I'd read more of your writing...also...try spending more time on writing. You have to become the character your writing. You have to become ALL of your characters. And try to come up with a more exciting ending. An ending that would make someone want you to write another script to continue the episode...Do you know what I mean?
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