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BonniesLilCutiePie · 07-15-2002, 11:39 AM

This is my first Fan Fiction so I may suck at it, so don't get mad at me. Here is what it is going to be about. Kate is in a car wreck. She has so many scars and brusies that she thinks that she will never be pretty again. But, Ross comes to her rescue and shows her just how pretty she really is! Sound good? I hope so! I think is it! LOL! Tell me how you like it! Thanks.

TeddyisMINE!!!! · 07-15-2002, 11:47 AM

Sounds good, Can't wait to read it!

BonniesLilCutiePie · 07-15-2002, 11:57 AM

Thanx. I will try my very best to post the first part of it this afternoon.

BonniesLilCutiePie · 07-15-2002, 05:51 PM

"True Love"

At the Division everyone is leaving* Kate: Goodbye everyone! See you all tomorrow

Magda: Bye Captain

Raina: See you in the morning

C.D. *nods*

Nate: Bye

Jinny: See you guys later.

Everyone leaves. Kate is in her car on the road.All of the sudden a car runs a red light and smashes into Kate! Someone else sees this happen, and calls 911. The Paramedics come and take Kate to the Emergency Room. They find her purse and find out her identity. They call Magda.*

The phone rings at Magda's house*
Magda: *answers the phone* Hello?...Yes I know her. Is something wrong?... Oh My Gosh! *starts to get teary eyed* ....I'll be right there. Bye *hangs up*

Magda calls everyone else on the squad. Then she calls Ross.*

Ross: *answers the phone* Hello?...OMG! Is she okay?...OMG!... *trying to hold back the tears but it isn't working very well.* I'll be there in 10 minutes. Bye.

Ross sits down on his bed, puts his head in his head and sobs. Then he goes to the hospital.*

At the hospital. Ross walks into the hospital room where Kate lays the bed looking helpless and lifeless. Ross ruhes to her side.*

Ross: *stares at Kate for a minute* I love you Kate! *Ross kisses her, and he takes her hand.* I love you more than you will ever know! *Ross starts to sob again.*

TeddyisMINE!!!! · 07-15-2002, 05:55 PM

Awwwww ! keep going!

BonniesLilCutiePie · 07-15-2002, 05:59 PM

I will. I just have to figure out what to say next lol

TeddyisMINE!!!! · 07-16-2002, 12:01 PM

well,hurry up. I wanna know what happens next!

BonniesLilCutiePie · 07-16-2002, 12:18 PM

Okay. Well here it goes

BonniesLilCutiePie · 07-16-2002, 01:15 PM

*Then Magda walks in Kate's hospital room*

Magda: Am I interupting something?

Ross: Oh no. Come on in.

Magda: *walks in* How's she doing?

Ross: She's uncouncis right now.

Magda: Oh my gosh! She looks so helpless lying there like that.This must be really hard on you. How are you taking all this?

Ross: I am okay I guess. I could be doing a lot better though. I just wish the doctors would come in here and tell mmething. I can't stand seeing her like this.

Magda; Yeah. I understand. I'll go and ask a doctor about her.

Ross: Okay. Thanks.

Magda: You're welcome *leaves the room*

Ross: Don't worry darlin. We are going to get through this. I am here for you.

*Outside in the hall*

Magda: Doctor!... Can you give me any information about Ms. McCafferty?...*fighting back her tears* Okay. Thank you. ... * goes back to Kate's hospital room*

Ross: What did they say?

Magda: They said... Well...She's... She's going to have to have a kidney transplant. *Starts to cry*

Ross: OMG! This can't be happening! Are they sure?

Magda: They are positive. *Hugs Ross* Everything will be fine. Don't worry.

Ross: I hope that you are right.

Magda: me too... Me too

*A couple of minutes later*

Magda: I need to go home now. My son, Ben, is probably getting hungry by now. Will you be okay here by yourself?

Ross: Yeah. I'll be fine.

Magda: *gives him a phone number* Call me when you find out something.

Ross: I will.

Magda: Bye *leaves*

Ross: Bye *looks at Kat for a minute*

Ross: Kate, if you can hear this, then please answer. I love you so much! More than anything in the world! Before you came into my life, I was nothing. Now that I have you in my life, I feel like the greatest man alive! If we ever get through this, I am going to take you away for the weekend. I love you so much, and nothing will ever change that. You make my life worth living. You are the most beautiful person that ever lived. I am so greatful to have a woman like you in my life.

Kate: Oh Ross! I love you too!

Ross: Oh Kate! *kisses her* How do you feel?

Kate: I was feeling awful, but now that you are here I am feeling better.

Ross: *smiles* That's my girl.

Kate: What happened to me?

Ross: Well, you were in a car accident. They rushed you here to the hospital, and you were uncouncis. Also you um... you... well... You need a heart transplant.

Kate: Oh god! Why me?

Ross: We are going to get through this. Together. I promise. I can't stand the thought of losing you.

Kate: Oh Ross! I can't stand the thought of losing you either. You mean the world to me. I love you so much!

LiLCaptAinKaTe06 · 07-17-2002, 12:20 AM

Good job. It's coming along great! I can't wait to read more of it when I get back from vacation!

-*Forever*- · 07-17-2002, 01:33 AM

Erm.... no comment Laura.

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo · 07-17-2002, 01:48 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by ~*Roxie Rickman*~
Erm.... no comment Laura.

what's that suppose to mean?

I think it's good.. keep going

-*Forever*- · 07-17-2002, 02:58 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo

what's that suppose to mean?

I think it's good.. keep going

You know Little Dixie Carter (AIM Name - DixieCarterRulz or DixieCarterYea)? *whispers* Any Bonnie user names except for Kate McCaffery and Bonnie's Biggest Fan are her.

BonniesLilCutiePie · 07-17-2002, 10:17 AM

Thanx Jasmine, Emma, and JoJoJoJoJo.... But as for Joyce, *I believe that's her name8 Please don't post here if you are not going to talk about my fan fiction. Thank you.

BonniesLilCutiePie · 07-17-2002, 10:29 AM

Ross: I am going to go and see if I match you, so I can give you one of my kindneys, so you can have the transplant. You just lay there and rest.

Kate: Okay. Thank you Ross. You are the sweetest man alive.

Ross: *Kisses her and leaves*

Kate: * goes back to sleep*

*Ross comes back a few minutes later*

Ross: Kate?

Kate: *wakes up* What did you find out?

Ross: Promise me you won't get upset?

Kate: I promise. Why would I ever get upset with you?

Ross: * tries to smile* I... I... I...

I am leaving you hanging here on purpose.

07-15-2002, 11:39 AM	#1
BonniesLilCutiePie Senior Member Ivy Winthrop Crane Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,740	My First Fan Fiction "True Love" This is my first Fan Fiction so I may suck at it, so don't get mad at me. Here is what it is going to be about. Kate is in a car wreck. She has so many scars and brusies that she thinks that she will never be pretty again. But, Ross comes to her rescue and shows her just how pretty she really is! Sound good? I hope so! I think is it! LOL! Tell me how you like it! Thanks. Attached Images __________________ ~ Ivy Winthrop Crane~ http://www.stefaniepassion.com/LifesPassions/TFKim1.jpg

07-15-2002, 11:47 AM	#2
TeddyisMINE!!!! Forum Regular Crazed Nancy Fan!!!! Join Date: Apr 03, 2002 Location: Tennessee Posts: 495	Sounds good, Can't wait to read it! __________________ "Don't cry because it's gone,SMILE because it happened." "I've discovered that the hardest discovery to make is who you are."-Bonnie Bedelia "You're born,ya move on,ya die,thats life."-Jo's philosophy on life. Kate: You think I'm like 80,don't cha Jinny? Jinny:No...not... 80 (I love the way she said that) "Look Buddy! I got pMS,and I got a gun! Any questions?"- Jinny Exstead. "It's not reaching your dreams that counts. It's going towards them." Cher. ~Emma~ P.S. TEDDY IS MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

07-16-2002, 01:15 PM	#9
BonniesLilCutiePie Senior Member Ivy Winthrop Crane Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,740	True Love Then Magda walks in Kate's hospital room Magda: Am I interupting something? Ross: Oh no. Come on in. Magda: walks in How's she doing? Ross: She's uncouncis right now. Magda: Oh my gosh! She looks so helpless lying there like that.This must be really hard on you. How are you taking all this? Ross: I am okay I guess. I could be doing a lot better though. I just wish the doctors would come in here and tell mmething. I can't stand seeing her like this. Magda; Yeah. I understand. I'll go and ask a doctor about her. Ross: Okay. Thanks. Magda: You're welcome leaves the room Ross: Don't worry darlin. We are going to get through this. I am here for you. Outside in the hall Magda: Doctor!... Can you give me any information about Ms. McCafferty?...fighting back her tears Okay. Thank you. ... * goes back to Kate's hospital room* Ross: What did they say? Magda: They said... Well...She's... She's going to have to have a kidney transplant. Starts to cry Ross: OMG! This can't be happening! Are they sure? Magda: They are positive. Hugs Ross Everything will be fine. Don't worry. Ross: I hope that you are right. Magda: me too... Me too A couple of minutes later Magda: I need to go home now. My son, Ben, is probably getting hungry by now. Will you be okay here by yourself? Ross: Yeah. I'll be fine. Magda: gives him a phone number Call me when you find out something. Ross: I will. Magda: Bye leaves Ross: Bye looks at Kat for a minute Ross: Kate, if you can hear this, then please answer. I love you so much! More than anything in the world! Before you came into my life, I was nothing. Now that I have you in my life, I feel like the greatest man alive! If we ever get through this, I am going to take you away for the weekend. I love you so much, and nothing will ever change that. You make my life worth living. You are the most beautiful person that ever lived. I am so greatful to have a woman like you in my life. Kate: Oh Ross! I love you too! Ross: Oh Kate! kisses her How do you feel? Kate: I was feeling awful, but now that you are here I am feeling better. Ross: smiles That's my girl. Kate: What happened to me? Ross: Well, you were in a car accident. They rushed you here to the hospital, and you were uncouncis. Also you um... you... well... You need a heart transplant. Kate: Oh god! Why me? Ross: We are going to get through this. Together. I promise. I can't stand the thought of losing you. Kate: Oh Ross! I can't stand the thought of losing you either. You mean the world to me. I love you so much!

07-17-2002, 12:20 AM	#10
LiLCaptAinKaTe06 Occasional Poster Member Join Date: Jul 16, 2002 Location: California Posts: 18	Good job. It's coming along great! I can't wait to read more of it when I get back from vacation! __________________ ~Always & forever~ Rochelle

07-17-2002, 01:33 AM	#11
-Forever- Forum Celebrity <3333333333333333333 Join Date: Nov 22, 2001 Location: Manlius, NY in reality. Deerfield Beach, FL in my heart. Posts: 27,984	Erm.... no comment Laura. __________________ "Mmm... no... Jeter does not do it for me. He looks like the Rock had sex with a muppet."

07-15-2002, 11:57 AM	#3
BonniesLilCutiePie Senior Member Ivy Winthrop Crane Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,740	Thanx. I will try my very best to post the first part of it this afternoon.

07-15-2002, 05:51 PM	#4
BonniesLilCutiePie Senior Member Ivy Winthrop Crane Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,740	"True Love" At the Division everyone is leaving* Kate: Goodbye everyone! See you all tomorrow Magda: Bye Captain Raina: See you in the morning C.D. nods Nate: Bye Jinny: See you guys later. Everyone leaves. Kate is in her car on the road.All of the sudden a car runs a red light and smashes into Kate! Someone else sees this happen, and calls 911. The Paramedics come and take Kate to the Emergency Room. They find her purse and find out her identity. They call Magda.* The phone rings at Magda's house* Magda: answers the phone Hello?...Yes I know her. Is something wrong?... Oh My Gosh! starts to get teary eyed ....I'll be right there. Bye hangs up Magda calls everyone else on the squad. Then she calls Ross.* Ross: answers the phone Hello?...OMG! Is she okay?...OMG!... trying to hold back the tears but it isn't working very well. I'll be there in 10 minutes. Bye. Ross sits down on his bed, puts his head in his head and sobs. Then he goes to the hospital.* At the hospital. Ross walks into the hospital room where Kate lays the bed looking helpless and lifeless. Ross ruhes to her side.* Ross: stares at Kate for a minute I love you Kate! Ross kisses her, and he takes her hand. I love you more than you will ever know! Ross starts to sob again.

07-15-2002, 05:55 PM	#5
TeddyisMINE!!!! Forum Regular Crazed Nancy Fan!!!! Join Date: Apr 03, 2002 Location: Tennessee Posts: 495	Awwwww ! keep going!

07-15-2002, 05:59 PM	#6
BonniesLilCutiePie Senior Member Ivy Winthrop Crane Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,740	I will. I just have to figure out what to say next lol

07-16-2002, 12:01 PM	#7
TeddyisMINE!!!! Forum Regular Crazed Nancy Fan!!!! Join Date: Apr 03, 2002 Location: Tennessee Posts: 495	well,hurry up. I wanna know what happens next!

07-16-2002, 12:18 PM	#8
BonniesLilCutiePie Senior Member Ivy Winthrop Crane Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,740	Okay. Well here it goes

07-17-2002, 10:17 AM	#14
BonniesLilCutiePie Senior Member Ivy Winthrop Crane Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,740	Thanx Jasmine, Emma, and JoJoJoJoJo.... But as for Joyce, *I believe that's her name8 Please don't post here if you are not going to talk about my fan fiction. Thank you.

07-17-2002, 10:29 AM	#15
BonniesLilCutiePie Senior Member Ivy Winthrop Crane Join Date: Jul 14, 2002 Location: The Crane Mansion Posts: 1,740	True Love Ross: I am going to go and see if I match you, so I can give you one of my kindneys, so you can have the transplant. You just lay there and rest. Kate: Okay. Thank you Ross. You are the sweetest man alive. Ross: Kisses her and leaves Kate: * goes back to sleep* Ross comes back a few minutes later Ross: Kate? Kate: wakes up What did you find out? Ross: Promise me you won't get upset? Kate: I promise. Why would I ever get upset with you? Ross: * tries to smile* I... I... I... I am leaving you hanging here on purpose.

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