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panman · 06-16-2001, 06:06 PM

Open On: Apartment

Janet and Terri are sitting on the couch as Jack walks in.

Jack: Hey girls. Guess what?
Terri: What?
Jack: My uncle gave me a job at his office for one week. Im getting 100 bucks an hour!!!!!!!!
Janet: Oh, Jack thats great.
Jack: Yeah
Terri: Maybe we can come too and help ya?
Jack: Yeah, but the boss is very strict, so he probably wouldn't pay you.
Janet: Oh Jack, we don't care about money.
Terri:..............We're not getting paid?
Jack: Hey! (everyone laughs)

Scene 2-Uncle Tripper's office

Mr.Tripper is on the phone.

Mr.Tripper:Theres no coffee left? Alright i'll go accross the street to the cafe.(he hangs up the phone) Kids, will you excuse me?
Janet: Sure!

Scene 3-Downstairs Main Hallway

Mr.Tripper: I'll be back!
Excecutive #1: OK.
Excecutive #2: I think we should practice our new lock-down drill system.
Excecutive #1: OK, you secure this floor, ill do the 2nd and 3rd floor.
Excecutive #2: What about the 4th?
Excecutive #1: No, Tripper just left, and everyone els up there is on lunch break. Theres no one up there.

The audience is "ooohhhing" and "oh noooing"

Scene 4-Different Hallway

Excecutive #2 stops at a small gray machine built into the wall. He types in 2 and 3 and looks on the right for a list of transactions. He chooses "lock-down drill". Sounds of automatic doors are heard shutting and locking.

Scene 5-Tripper's Office

Jack: What was that?
Terri: Check the door.

Jack does.

Jack: It's locked!!

The alarm goes off. BEEP BEEP BEEP

Janet: Oh no! A fire!

Terri: and we're locked in!!!!

TO BE CONTINUED

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callmetootie · 06-16-2001, 06:19 PM

I don't get it...I'm confused.

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Andrew Carden

panman · 06-16-2001, 06:39 PM

Why? Read it slowly and carefully.

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The Facts of Life are all about You!

callmetootie · 06-16-2001, 06:41 PM

I think that I don't really like it that much because it's a tiny bit too short, or maybe I'm just getting tired of all of these fan-fics with Terri...

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Andrew Carden

panman · 06-16-2001, 07:49 PM

You know what? I just read it again, and I agree. Im not gonna continue it. Thanks for telling me!

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The Facts of Life are all about You!

panman · 06-17-2001, 02:15 PM

Actually, I want everyones opinion. Should I cancel it, and not make part 2? Or, do you wanna hear the funny conclusion?

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The Facts of Life are all about You!

Sean Snow · 06-17-2001, 02:35 PM

Continue it!!!!

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06-16-2001, 06:06 PM	#1
panman Forum Regular Member Join Date: Nov 28, 2000 Posts: 326	The Drill (1) PLEASE READ!!!!!! Open On: Apartment Janet and Terri are sitting on the couch as Jack walks in. Jack: Hey girls. Guess what? Terri: What? Jack: My uncle gave me a job at his office for one week. Im getting 100 bucks an hour!!!!!!!! Janet: Oh, Jack thats great. Jack: Yeah Terri: Maybe we can come too and help ya? Jack: Yeah, but the boss is very strict, so he probably wouldn't pay you. Janet: Oh Jack, we don't care about money. Terri:..............We're not getting paid? Jack: Hey! (everyone laughs) Scene 2-Uncle Tripper's office Mr.Tripper is on the phone. Mr.Tripper:Theres no coffee left? Alright i'll go accross the street to the cafe.(he hangs up the phone) Kids, will you excuse me? Janet: Sure! Scene 3-Downstairs Main Hallway Mr.Tripper: I'll be back! Excecutive #1: OK. Excecutive #2: I think we should practice our new lock-down drill system. Excecutive #1: OK, you secure this floor, ill do the 2nd and 3rd floor. Excecutive #2: What about the 4th? Excecutive #1: No, Tripper just left, and everyone els up there is on lunch break. Theres no one up there. The audience is "ooohhhing" and "oh noooing" Scene 4-Different Hallway Excecutive #2 stops at a small gray machine built into the wall. He types in 2 and 3 and looks on the right for a list of transactions. He chooses "lock-down drill". Sounds of automatic doors are heard shutting and locking. Scene 5-Tripper's Office Jack: What was that? Terri: Check the door. Jack does. Jack: It's locked!! The alarm goes off. BEEP BEEP BEEP Janet: Oh no! A fire! Terri: and we're locked in!!!! TO BE CONTINUED ------------------ The Facts of Life are all about You!

06-16-2001, 06:19 PM	#2
callmetootie Senior Member Member Join Date: Mar 06, 2001 Location: Clifton Park, NY Posts: 4,734	I don't get it...I'm confused. ------------------ Andrew Carden

06-16-2001, 06:39 PM	#3
panman Forum Regular Member Join Date: Nov 28, 2000 Posts: 326	Why? Read it slowly and carefully. ------------------ The Facts of Life are all about You!

06-16-2001, 06:41 PM	#4
callmetootie Senior Member Member Join Date: Mar 06, 2001 Location: Clifton Park, NY Posts: 4,734	I think that I don't really like it that much because it's a tiny bit too short, or maybe I'm just getting tired of all of these fan-fics with Terri... ------------------ Andrew Carden

06-16-2001, 07:49 PM	#5
panman Forum Regular Member Join Date: Nov 28, 2000 Posts: 326	You know what? I just read it again, and I agree. Im not gonna continue it. Thanks for telling me! ------------------ The Facts of Life are all about You!

06-17-2001, 02:15 PM	#6
panman Forum Regular Member Join Date: Nov 28, 2000 Posts: 326	Actually, I want everyones opinion. Should I cancel it, and not make part 2? Or, do you wanna hear the funny conclusion? ------------------ The Facts of Life are all about You!

06-17-2001, 02:35 PM	#7
Sean Snow Forum Veteran moo Join Date: May 06, 2001 Location: Georgia Posts: 10,345	Continue it!!!!