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05-23-2001, 12:20 AM
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Once Bitten Twice Shy(Fan Fic)
~ A hot night on a street in San Fransico~
*Car pulls up to red light with window down* Lady: *tapping the stearing wheel waiting for the light to change* Guy: *comes from out of no where with a gun pointed* Get out of the car now *hands shaking* Lady: *looks surprised* I.. I.. Guy: *puts gun closer to her face* I said get out of the car NOW! ~Next morning At the S.F.P.D.~ CD: *walks in* Angela: *looks up* Morning CD! CD: Good Morning Captain: *comes out of the office* Alright ladies.. *looks through files* CD and Angela there was a car jacking on North Maple late last night..The woman was pretty shaken, here is the file, and her address, along with the description of the car. Angela: We're on it Cap! ALright let me know what you think! ------------------ Are you seriously asking me these questions? ~CD I have a partner and I trust her to be there for me. You I do not trust now get out of this parking lot and with your pants zipped. ~CD Jesus is my hero because He loved me so. He took my sins to the grave and rose again. Thats why Jesus is my hero!~ Bro Sam Blakely |
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05-23-2001, 08:47 AM
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Hug-A-Tree is still off of the computer...I'm still usin this name!
And THAT RULES! ------------------ Hey, I've got a few quotes that are said in my bethel: Kunkee(HQ):Girls this ceremony is to make Diane, Evan, and Doug honorary members. Diane may cry and our three mini Dianes may cry too. Nikki(Choir): Who are the three mini Dianes? Kunkee:Kate(ME)Dehnia, and Sally. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Diane: I'm I'm I'm (Starts to cry) So flattered. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Between me and randy (associate bethel guardian) We're standing at the door, he pushes me, I push him. He pushes me into the fan I push him into the chair! Jobie Luv, Jobie Girl 4ever |
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05-23-2001, 06:10 PM
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MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!
Ok i think you get my point MORE please? ------------------ Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?! CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober. Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea. Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate. Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in! Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness. Jinny: Youre damn right. Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home! Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us? ~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~ The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun. |
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05-23-2001, 10:47 PM
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Get a posting,Girl! lol
 Great Job So far!! Keep it Up!------------------ Magda : "What would you do if a guy didnt call? " Jinny:"Oh, they always call. They want to know me, they want to be a part of my life. They want to share." Magda: "But if they didn't? " Jinny: I would breathe a great big sigh of relief unless of course I liked him then i would just hunt him down and slash his tires. |
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05-24-2001, 02:01 AM
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alright you ask for it! here it is!
~CD and Angela in the car~ Angela: *stares blankly out the window* CD: *glances over* You ok Ang? Angela: Yeah ... *voice trails off* CD: *shrugs* OK then.. ~long moment of silence~ Angela: CD I....*gets cut off* CD: Look at that! *points to a car over the enbankment* Angela: *grabs the file* Hey thats the car! CD: *pulls along the road and gets out of the car* *walks over* Yup! A blue 1987 Camaro with gold wheels..*shakes head* Angela: Well we better call it in.. *gets her cell phone* CD: Yeah go ahead and call... Angela: ok *dials the phone.. *phone rings* Captain: *picks up the phone* Captain Kate McCafferty SFPD how may I help you? Angela: Yeah Cap, this is Angela. We found the car... Captain: OH good! Angela: No not really.. Captain: Why do you say that? Angela: Because its over a hill. Captain: Oh! Any sign of the driver? Angela: NO.. Captain: OK well call me if there is any more developments. Angela: You got it Cap! ~Back at the station~ Jinny: *flipping through files* Magda: *walks over to Jinny* You know Jin I was thinking that since we're partners and all we should be able to tell each other stuff.. Jinny: OH? *jinny says casually while still flipping through files* Magda: Yeah Jinny: Well ok Mag. What is it you want to tell me? Magda: Jinny! Im talking about you! Jinny: Me?? *looks shocked* Well what would I have to say? Magda: Well youve been acting kinda strange lately so... Jinny: *looks down* Well I got into a fight with Teddy again.. Magda: OH?? Jinny: Yeah and we havent talked since.. I havent even seen him... Magda: How long has it been? Jinny: About 2 weeks. ------------------ Are you seriously asking me these questions? ~CD I have a partner and I trust her to be there for me. You I do not trust now get out of this parking lot and with your pants zipped. ~CD Jesus is my hero because He loved me so. He took my sins to the grave and rose again. Thats why Jesus is my hero!~ Bro Sam Blakely |
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05-24-2001, 02:03 AM
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Hey!! Great Fan-Fiction! (Even though I've read it already! hehe)
------------------ Jinny: "Captain Amazing here decided to defend his wallet and laptop to the death. It didn't work,but you gotta admire the effort." Theodore: "My whole life was on that laptop." Jinny: "Ooh sad commentary." Angela: "Did you see his face?" Theodore: "White male. 18 to 22,Shaved head ,dagger tattoo on his wrist. I mean he caught me by surprise I could have taken him." In Honor of Nancy McKeon http://nancymckeon.homestead.com/WelcomePage.html The Division http://thedivision.homestead.com/TheDivision.html |
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05-25-2001, 12:05 AM
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Well thanx! Here is more!
~CD and Angela at the scene~ CD: Angela call the tow truck so we can get this thing out of there Angela: OK *dials phone* CD: *walks around looking for anything that might be helpful* Angela: *hangs up the phone* They are on their way! CD: OK! ( The tow truck arrives and pulls the Camaro up onto the road) Tow Truck Guy: Walks over to CD and Angela* Well The front end is pushed in a bit and it will need some other minor repairs but other than that it should be easily fixed.. *CD and Angela look at him questioningly* Tow Truck Guy: Who ever was driving was going at a very hihg rate of speed. CD: Alright! Thank you. Tow Truck Guy: No problem! ~Back at the Division~ Captain: *comes out of her office and calls Jinny and Magda in* *Jinny and Magda walk in behind her* Captain: OK ladies, I have a case for you invovling several reports of dog attacks.. *hands Jinny the file* Jinny: *flips through the file* Captain: Any questions?? Jinny: *looks up* I havent got any... *looks at Magda* You?? Magda: Not right now... Captain: Ok then. *Jinny and Magda get their jackets and leave* ~In the parking lot~ Jinny: Your car or mine? Magda: How bout we take mine? Jinny: Sounds good to me! *Magda and Jinny get into Magda's car and drive off* ~In Magda's car~ Magda: So where is it we're going? Jinny: Uhhh... *looks in folder* The address in 356 Strawberry street Magda: OK *Magda turns onto Strawberry street and they begin to look for the house* Magda: *stops the car* This must be the house.. Jinny: Yeah but it looks so run down and almost unliveable... Magda: yeah *shrugs* Well lets go check it out.. *Jinny and Magda get out of the car and Magda makes sure the doors are locked* *They walk slowly up the sidewalk to the house and when the reach the front door Jinny knocks* (A medium height man with scraggly hair and tattoos all over his arms opens the door) Man: Yes may I help you? *Jinny and Magda show their badges* Jinny: S.F.P.D. We're investigating some reported dog attacks Man: *opens the door wider* Come on in *Jinny and Magda step inside* ~Back at The Division~ Theodore: *walks in* Jinny. Jinny? JINNY! Captain: *comes out of her office* Whats all the noise? Theodore: *walks up to her* Where's Jinny?? Captain: She's on a case.. Where else would she be? Theodore: I dont know. Captain: Well did you want me to tell her you were here? Theodore; NO NO NO! We had a fight and we havent spoken since... Captain: *crosses her arms* How long has it been? Teddy: *looks down* About 2 weeks.. Captain; And? Teddy: And... oh I dont.. *gets cut off* Captain: *motions for him to follow her into her office* Teddy: *walks in* Captain: *closes the door* ~Back to Cd and Angela~ Angela: Well I guess the next step is notifying the lady.. CD: Yeah... *looks at the guy from the Tow Truck* Hey take the car to the lot. We'll let ya know what the lady wants done with it after we find out. Tow Truck Guy: OK.. *gets into the truck and drives off* CD: *looks at Angela* Lets go tell her, her car was found.. Angela: OK *CD and Angela get into CD's car and drive off* ------------------ Are you seriously asking me these questions? ~CD I have a partner and I trust her to be there for me. You I do not trust now get out of this parking lot and with your pants zipped. ~CD Jesus is my hero because He loved me so. He took my sins to the grave and rose again. Thats why Jesus is my hero!~ Bro Sam Blakely |
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05-25-2001, 10:21 AM
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Please write more!This is going great!
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05-25-2001, 08:46 PM
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05-25-2001, 11:51 PM
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thanks for getting into this! here more more more LOL!
~Jinny and Magda at the rundown house~ *the guy leads them into the living room and offers they sit on the couch* *jinny and magda sit down* Jinny: Well my name is Inspector Jinny Exstead and this is my partner Inspector Magda Ramirez and this is the address we were givin... (is cut off) Guy: Well my name is Steve and I dont know nothin about any dog attacks.. Magda: Well, sir thats not what we were told... Jinny: Do you happen to own a dog, Steve? Steve: Yes Inspector as a matter of fact I do! *whistles* Come Hooch! *Jinny and Magda look at each other expecting to hear or see this Big dog coming through* (This little dog comes in.. No bigger than the size of a football) Steve: Come here boy. *taps on his leg* (the little dog jumps up on his lap) Steve: This is my dog.. *Jinny and Magda look at each other both of them shocked at the dog's size* Magda: aww what a cute little dog! *reaches over and pets the dog* *the dog licks her hand gently* Steve: Now if that will be all.. Jinny: *sighs* Yes I supposed theres nothing more.. *Magda and Jinny get up* Steve: *stands* Here let me show you to the door. Jinny: (says sarcastically) How kind of you. (Jinny and Magda are walking to the car when Jinny hears something) Jinny: Magda RUN! *Jinny and Magda run to the car* (Jinny just gets in and closes the door before... BANG! a huge dog slams against the side of the car) Magda: *looks at Jinny* WOW that was close! Thanx Partner! Jinny: No problem! *trys to force a smile* Magda: We need to call animal control.. Jinny: Yeah to come get this mutt. Magda: *gets her phone out of her pocket* *dials* *phone ringing* Magda: Hello? Animal control? Yeah this is Inspector Magda Ramirez.. Me and my partner are stuck in my car.. Yeah by a dog... yes sir.. The Address is 356 Strawberry Street.. Right.. Uh huh.. We'll be in a car sitting outside the house.. OK.. Thank you! BYE! Magda: *looks at Jinny* They're on their way! Jinny: Good! (Animal control arrives and sedates the dog and puts him in a cage) *Jinny and Magda get out of the car *Magda: Does he have a license or anything? Animal control guy: Not that I can see.. However he does have a blue collar... Jinny: OK thank you... Animal control guy: No problem there. Its my job! What do you want us to do with him? Magda: Well.. (gets cut off) Jinny: He nearly attacked us! Shoot him, Stab him I dont care just get rid of him! Magda: Now wait Jin...Dont you think we should find out who owns this dog?? Jinny: *sighs*I suppose so.. But at least we can report that the attack dog has been found and put away... (Jinny and Magda go back to the station) Captain: *comes out of her office* Well? Jinny: The dog has been found and is at the Animal Control center... Captain: So the guy gave him up huh? Magda: Well.. not exactly... Captain: Well then how did you get him? Jinny: That dog almost attacked me and Mag! *frowns angerly* Captain: Oh Gosh! *mouth drops open* ------------------ Are you seriously asking me these questions? ~CD I have a partner and I trust her to be there for me. You I do not trust now get out of this parking lot and with your pants zipped. ~CD Jesus is my hero because He loved me so. He took my sins to the grave and rose again. Thats why Jesus is my hero!~ Bro Sam Blakely |
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05-26-2001, 12:07 AM
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05-26-2001, 12:32 AM
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keep up the terrific work girl!!!
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05-29-2001, 01:57 AM
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ok im feelin pretty stupid right about now.. i think I have skipped part of my FF..  ------------------ Are you seriously asking me these questions? ~CD I have a partner and I trust her to be there for me. You I do not trust now get out of this parking lot and with your pants zipped. ~CD Jesus is my hero because He loved me so. He took my sins to the grave and rose again. Thats why Jesus is my hero!~ Bro Sam Blakely |
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05-29-2001, 02:23 AM
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ok im gonna post it all simply because i dont wanna skip ne more! lol here goes!
~ A hot night on a street in San Fransico~ *Car pulls up to red light with window down* Lady: *tapping the stearing wheel waiting for the light to change* Guy: *comes from out of no where with a gun pointed* Get out of the car now *hands shaking* Lady: *looks surprised* I.. I.. Guy: *puts gun closer to her face* I said get out of the car NOW! ~Next morning At the S.F.P.D.~ CD: *walks in* Angela: *looks up* Morning CD! CD: Good Morning Captain: *comes out of the office* Alright ladies.. *looks through files* CD and Angela there was a car jacking on North Maple late last night..The woman was pretty shaken, here is the file, and her address, along with the description of the car. Angela: We're on it Cap! ~CD and Angela in the car~ Angela: *stares blankly out the window* CD: *glances over* You ok Ang? Angela: Yeah ... *voice trails off* CD: *shrugs* OK then.. ~long moment of silence~ Angela: CD I....*gets cut off* CD: Look at that! *points to a car over the enbankment* Angela: *grabs the file* Hey thats the car! CD: *pulls along the road and gets out of the car* *walks over* Yup! A blue 1987 Camaro with gold wheels..*shakes head* Angela: Well we better call it in.. *gets her cell phone* CD: Yeah go ahead and call... Angela: ok *dials the phone.. *phone rings* Captain: *picks up the phone* Captain Kate McCafferty SFPD how may I help you? Angela: Yeah Cap, this is Angela. We found the car... Captain: OH good! Angela: No not really.. Captain: Why do you say that? Angela: Because its over a hill. Captain: Oh! Any sign of the driver? Angela: NO.. Captain: OK well call me if there is any more developments. Angela: You got it Cap! ~Back at the station~ Jinny: *flipping through files* Magda: *walks over to Jinny* You know Jin I was thinking that since we're partners and all we should be able to tell each other stuff.. Jinny: OH? *jinny says casually while still flipping through files* Magda: Yeah Jinny: Well ok Mag. What is it you want to tell me? Magda: Jinny! Im talking about you! Jinny: Me?? *looks shocked* Well what would I have to say? Magda: Well youve been acting kinda strange lately so... Jinny: *looks down* Well I got into a fight with Teddy again.. Magda: OH?? Jinny: Yeah and we havent talked since.. I havent even seen him... Magda: How long has it been? Jinny: About 2 weeks. ~CD and Angela at the scene~ CD: Angela call the tow truck so we can get this thing out of there Angela: OK *dials phone* CD: *walks around looking for anything that might be helpful* Angela: *hangs up the phone* They are on their way! CD: OK! ( The tow truck arrives and pulls the Camaro up onto the road) Tow Truck Guy: Walks over to CD and Angela* Well The front end is pushed in a bit and it will need some other minor repairs but other than that it should be easily fixed.. *CD and Angela look at him questioningly* Tow Truck Guy: Who ever was driving was going at a very hihg rate of speed. CD: Alright! Thank you. Tow Truck Guy: No problem! ~Back at the Division~ Captain: *comes out of her office and calls Jinny and Magda in* *Jinny and Magda walk in behind her* Captain: OK ladies, I have a case for you invovling several reports of dog attacks.. *hands Jinny the file* Jinny: *flips through the file* Captain: Any questions?? Jinny: *looks up* I havent got any... *looks at Magda* You?? Magda: Not right now... Captain: Ok then. *Jinny and Magda get their jackets and leave* ~In the parking lot~ Jinny: Your car or mine? Magda: How bout we take mine? Jinny: Sounds good to me! *Magda and Jinny get into Magda's car and drive off* ~In Magda's car~ Magda: So where is it we're going? Jinny: Uhhh... *looks in folder* The address in 356 Strawberry street Magda: OK *Magda turns onto Strawberry street and they begin to look for the house* Magda: *stops the car* This must be the house.. Jinny: Yeah but it looks so run down and almost unliveable... Magda: yeah *shrugs* Well lets go check it out.. *Jinny and Magda get out of the car and Magda makes sure the doors are locked* *They walk slowly up the sidewalk to the house and when the reach the front door Jinny knocks* (A medium height man with scraggly hair and tattoos all over his arms opens the door) Man: Yes may I help you? *Jinny and Magda show their badges* Jinny: S.F.P.D. We're investigating some reported dog attacks Man: *opens the door wider* Come on in *Jinny and Magda step inside* ~Back at The Division~ Theodore: *walks in* Jinny. Jinny? JINNY! Captain: *comes out of her office* Whats all the noise? Theodore: *walks up to her* Where's Jinny?? Captain: She's on a case.. Where else would she be? Theodore: I dont know. Captain: Well did you want me to tell her you were here? Theodore; NO NO NO! We had a fight and we havent spoken since... Captain: *crosses her arms* How long has it been? Teddy: *looks down* About 2 weeks.. Captain; And? Teddy: And... oh I dont.. *gets cut off* Captain: *motions for him to follow her into her office* Teddy: *walks in* Captain: *closes the door* ~Back to Cd and Angela~ Angela: Well I guess the next step is notifying the lady.. CD: Yeah... *looks at the guy from the Tow Truck* Hey take the car to the lot. We'll let ya know what the lady wants done with it after we find out. Tow Truck Guy: OK.. *gets into the truck and drives off* CD: *looks at Angela* Lets go tell her, her car was found.. Angela: OK *CD and Angela get into CD's car and drive off* ~CD and Angela pull up to the address given of the woman whos car was stolen~ CD: *knocks on the door* (a woman opens the door a small crack and peers out) CD: *shows her badge* Inspector CD Lorenzo S.F.P.D. and this is my partner Inspector Angela Reide. Angela: *shows her badge* Woman: *Opens the door for them to come in and then quickly closes it* *Walks to the living room.. motions for the to follow* Woman: Please have a seat.. *smiles* Would you like some coffee or lemonade or some cookies? Angela: *smiles a little* I'll take a glass of lemonade. Woman: And for you deary? *looks at CD* CD: *smiles* A glass of lemonade sounds good! Woman: OK I'll be right back! *leaves* Angela: *whispers to CD* How is this woman supposed to get her car fixed?? (they both look around..) CD: Yeah you can tell she dont have much... Woman: *comes back with a tray* *hands CD her glass and then Angela her's* Here.. I brought some cookies in too! Just in case! *winks* By the way my name is Nancy. CD: Takes a sip of her lemonade.. Well its nice to meet you ma'am. Nancy: *laughs* Oh please call me Nancy! CD: OK.. Nancy..*smiles* Angela: Well we came here to tell you your car was found... Nancy: Oh! Goody! CD: Well.. not exactly.. You see it was down over an enbankment.. Nancy: Oh deary me! *shakes head* How will I ever pay for the repairs... Angela: *walks over and puts her hand on Nancy's shoulder* Now Now.. They said that it wasnt wrecked that bad... CD: *walks over* Yeah.. They said it shouldnt cost that much to repair... *CD and Angela finish their lemonade* Angela: *looks at her watch* Well we better be going.. *looks at CD* CD: Uhh yeah IM afraid we must. Nancy: SO soon?? CD: *smiles* Yes Im sorry Nancy: OH dear, its ok.. Its just I.. dont get much company any more.. CD: Im really sorry but we need to be going..*stands* Angela: *stands and walks towards the door* CD: *follows* ~Next morning~~At CD's house~ (alarms goes off) CD: *pushes the alarm button off* *yawns and and stratches* *rubs her eyes* *Paul is in the kitchen fixing breakfast* CD: *heres clanging in the kitchen and gets up and goes out to see whats going on* Paul: Mornin Honey! CD: *smiles a little* Good morning.. Paul: I made you breakfast! *point to the table* CD: Thanx.. *sits and eats* Well I gotta get ready for work! Paul: OK.. CD: *gets ready for work and then leaves* ~Jinny's house~ (alarm goes off) Jinny: *yawns and slaps the alarm to get it to turn off* Jinny: *gets up and stumbles into the bath room* *looks at herself in the mirror* Man oh Man.. Getting up this early should be a crime.. HAHA thats funny a crime! Jinny: *fixes herself breakfast and gets ready for work then leaves* ~Magdas house~ (alarm goes off) Magda: *gets up* Ben: *comes running in* Mommy! Magda: *smiles a little* Good morning Ben! Ben: *gives Magda a hug* Magda: You get dressed for schooland I'll fix you some breakfast and pack your lunch! Ben: K! *runs off* Magda: *smiles and shakes her head* *gets dressed and fixes some breakfast* (Ben and Magda are eating breakfast when there's a knock on the door) Magda: *Goes and answers the door* Mom! Ben come on grandma's here! Ben: Alright! *gets his coat and book bag* Magda: *leans down to Ben* Now you be a good boy! Ben: Yes mom! Magda:*watches Ben leave and looks at her watch* I better be going too! *leaves for work* ~Angela's house~ (alarm goes off) Angela: *Gets up and shuts the alarm off* *walks into the kitchen* *sees a note* (Note) Honey, Had an early call at the clinic.. See you tonight! Love Always, Daniel Angela:*sighs, gets ready for work and leaves* ~Kate's house~ (alarm goes off) Kate: *pushes the button and gets up* *gets ready for work and then leaves* ~AT The Division~ (Kate is the first to arrive) Kate: *puts on some coffee and turns the lights on* *walks over to her office* (CD is the next to arrive) CD: *Walks in* Morning captain! Captain: Good Morning! (Jinny is next) Jinny: *walks in* Mornin all! (captain and CD morning Jinny) Jinny: *walks over to her desk and sits down* (Angela and Magda walk in together) Captain: *notices Angela* CD and Angela come on in please.. (CD and Angela walk in) Captain; *looks up from the paper she was reading* *takes her glass off* CD: You wanted to see us Cap? Captain: Yes! Finger prints were lifted off the stolen Camaro.. Angela: We need to see if it matches any one in our criminal print records.. Captain: Actually... CD: What is it Cap?? Captain: The guy that stole the car is a recent convicted criminal.. In fact hes on prohbation now.. Angela: For?? Captain: Car theift and attempted Homicide.. (CD and Angela look at each other) Captain: His name is Charles Snyder .. Here's his file.. *hands Angela the file* Angela: *flips through the file* Captain: See if you can find him.. bring him in for a chat.. CD: We're on it Cap! (CD and Angela leave Cap's office) Angela: I'll get my coat. (CD and Angela get their coats and exit the division) *phone rings* Jinny: Inspector Jinny Exstead SFPD.. Magda: *walks over* Jinny: uh huh.. uh huh... ok we'll be there.. *hangs up* Magda: Whats going on? Jinny: Looks like some one has reported a missing dog... Magda: I'll get my coat. Jinny: *pulls her jacket off the back of her chair and heads for the door* Magda: I'll tell Cap... Jinny: *stops* OK.. Magda: *knocks on theCaptains door* Captain: *looks up* yes? Magda: We got new information on our case.. Captain: OK well go check it out and be careful out there huh? Magda: *smiles* We will Cap! ~Jinny and Magda pull to the house that reported the missing dog~ Jinny: *looks at Magda* Ready? Magda: Yeah! ~Jinny and Magda get out and walk up to the front door~ Jinny: *knocks on the door* (a small girl opens the door a crack) Magda: *shows her badge* Hey there is ur mommy or daddy home? *smiles* small girl: DADDY! Jinny: *smirks a little looks at Magda* Oh great Mag ya scared the little kid.. Magda: I didnt mean to! Jinny: *laughs* ~A guy comes to the door~ Guy: Yes? May I help you?? Jinny: *shows her badge* My name is Inspector Jinny Exstead and this is my partner. *points to Magda* Magda: Did you report a missing dog?? Guy: Yes I did.. Jinny: *glances at Magda* *pulls a picture of the dog out of the folder* *shows it to the guy* Guy: Yes thats him.. Magda: *nods at Jinny* Jinny: We'll need you to come down to the station to answer a few questions. Guy: what for??? Jinny: Because your dog nearly attacked me and my partner and has attacked other victims.. Guy: No it couldnt have been.. Magda: Im afraid it was sir.. Guy: But he was so gentle with little Samantha.. Jinny: Well sir how long has ur dog been missing?? Guy: About a week.. ~CD and Angela on the street~ CD: Where do you think we should start first?? Angela: Hmmm CD: How about that biker bar?? Angela: ok.. ~CD and Angela walk in~ CD: *walks up to a man standing at the bar* Have you seen this man?? *shows the picture* (the man doesnt say a word but points to the back corner of the bar) *CD and Angela walk to the back of the bar* CD: Is there a Charles Snyder here?? Charles: That would be me. *puts one finger up and smirks* How may I help you lovely ladies? CD: Save the charm pal! *shows her badge* Inspector CD Lorenzo SFPD Angela: Please stand sir CD: *pulls her hand cuffs out* You are under arrest for violation of parol and car theift. You have the right to remain silent anything you say can and will be used against you in a court of law. *cuffs him and finishes reading him his rights* Angela: *follows CD out of the bar* ~Magda and Jinny at the guys house~ Guy: *sighs and walks out on the door step and closes the door* Jinny: Well Sir Im afraid the dog is going to have to be put down.. Guy: *puts head down* Magda: And you may have a few law suites from the victims too.. Guy: What?? Oh man I cant afford what I have now how will I ever afford that?? Jinny: I dont know sir... (CD and Angela back at the station) CD: *walks into the Captains office* Hey Cap! We got Charles and informed Nancy that he was caught.. Cap: Great! CD: *walks out of the office* *looks at Angela* Wanna get a drink?? Angela: Sure! CD: Hey Cap me and Angela are going to the bar if there is nothing else here! Kate: No you may go! Its past your shift anyway! CD: See ya tomorrow! (Jinny and Magda walk into the Division) Kate: Welcome back guys! Jinny: Hey Cap.. Kate: Did you find the guy?? Magda: Yes we did.. Kate: What did he say?? Jinny: He said to go ahead and put the dog down Kate: OK Oh Jinny can you come here please.. Jinny: *sighs* OK Cap.. *walks into the office* Kate: Shut the door please Jinny: *shuts the door* Kate: please sit.. Jinny: *sits* Whats the problem? Kate: Whats going on between you and Theodore? Jinny: Why do you ask? Kate: Because He came in here screaming for you yesterday... Jinny: *frowns and crosses her arms* Kate: Whats going on with you two? Jinny: What do you mean?? Nothings going on I just got tired of being tied down is all. Kate: Oh I think its more than that but I wont push it.. Jinny: Thanx is that all?? Kate: Yes you may go.. Jinny: *gets up and storms out of the captains office* Magda: Whats wrong Jin?? Jinny: Oh she was asking what was going on with me and Teddy.. Magda: What is going on? Jinny: We had a fight Magda: And?? Jinny: And what?? Magda: Why did u fight? Jinny: Im not sure.. Magda: Well why dont you call him and get it straightened out? Jinny: *drops her head* Magda: You do want to get it staightened out right? Jinny: The truth is Im not sure what I want.. Magda: Well, what is your heart telling you to do? Jinny: Im just not really sure... Magda: *puts one hand on Jinnys shoulder* Well Im here for you with whatever you decide.. Jinny: *forces a small smile* Thanks ~To Be Continued~ well there ya go! I hope every one enjoys it! ------------------ Are you seriously asking me these questions? ~CD I have a partner and I trust her to be there for me. You I do not trust now get out of this parking lot and with your pants zipped. ~CD Jesus is my hero because He loved me so. He took my sins to the grave and rose again. Thats why Jesus is my hero!~ Bro Sam Blakely [This message has been edited by TKD_Princess (edited 05-29-2001).] |
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