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Old 05-08-2001, 08:49 PM   #1
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Post A new Jinny/Teddy fan fic, R+R!

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*The station. Jinny's on the phone talking*
Jinny: We'll get on the case... so a robbery over at the conveience store... *Teddy comes up behind her. Jinny notices*... thank you. Goodbye.
*hangs up*
Jinny: What's up??
Teddy: Guess who's leaving?
Jinny: Captain? *jumps up* My wish came true! I'm the luckiest cop in the... *Captain comes over, shaking her head*
Captain: Not me.
Jinny: Darn! *sits down* Just kidding somewhat. Then who?
Teddy: This person's going out east, because the person got a new job as a big lieuteant in New England, and this person is leaving in about a month... *strokes her shoulders*
Jinny: I don't know.
Teddy: Me.
Jinny: You?
Teddy: Me.
Jinny: You're leaving in a month? What... what about...?
Teddy: What about what?
Jinny*gets up from her desk*: I need some coffee.
Teddy: Jinny...
*Jinny continues walking, ignoring him. Teddy runs up*
Teddy: And I was wondering also, if it's all right with you... *Jinny pours herself some coffee, barely listening*... if you wanted to come along too.
*Jinny drops the coffee cup abruptly. She turns to look at Teddy in shock and surprise.*

~I'll add more when I can, probably Thursday since I have two tests on Thursday to study tomorrow! Let me know what ya think ~

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Old 05-08-2001, 09:02 PM   #2
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AWESOME!!!!

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Old 05-09-2001, 12:08 AM   #3
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I like. Please post more soon. Thanks

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Old 05-09-2001, 08:36 AM   #4
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Continue Continue...good...very good!
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Old 05-09-2001, 03:53 PM   #5
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I havethree words for you, MORE and SOON!!!

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Old 05-09-2001, 07:59 PM   #6
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Quote:
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I havethree words for you, MORE and SOON!!!



Sorry i should have been a little nicer, so

More Please


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Old 05-09-2001, 08:25 PM   #7
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(You asked for it! Isn't it great when teachers decide it's not worth having a test? <grin> I love those days...)

Jinny: You can't be serious.
Teddy: I'm never wrong.
Jinny: You can't be serious. I can't just pack up and leave here!
Teddy: It's just a suggestion.
Jinny: Is a proposal in this?
Teddy: I was going to get to that...
Jinny: So if I come, you'll propose, if I don't...
Teddy: I'll propose when I come back. It's only for about three years.
Jinny: Only three years? *groans* *sarcastically* That's such a short time, Teddy.
Teddy: I knew you'd think so.
Jinny: Well... *hesitates* I'd be back in three years, married, possibly with a kid --
Teddy: Who said anything about kids?
Jinny *ignoring that comment*: Anyway... I'll go.
Teddy: Really?
Jinny: A change of scenery's always nice.
Teddy: Thanks, Jin.
Jinny: I'll go tell everyone.

(Another cliffhanger here! Sorry, but I do have one other test to study for so I gtg... it's just a possible test but who knows with teachers?!? )

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Old 05-10-2001, 12:46 PM   #8
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Love it!!

Can't wait for more.

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Old 05-10-2001, 02:22 PM   #9
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oooooooooooo more please

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Old 05-10-2001, 03:30 PM   #10
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AWESOME MORE!

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Old 05-10-2001, 04:23 PM   #11
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This kicks!


MOR MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE etc etc etc etc etc!

Pweasy squeezy lemon peasey?
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Old 05-10-2001, 05:26 PM   #12
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[b]This kicks! B]
Thanks!

*Jinny walks back over*
Jinny: Hey, guys. I've got an announcement.
Magda: Yeah?
C.D: Something wrong?
Jinny: Teddy's leaving.
Angela: He is?
Jinny: And I'm coming with him. We're going to New England for about three years, give or take, get married, have some kids, the whole deal.
Kate: Is this definite?
Jinny: Definitely.
Kate: And you're doing this without some permission from your boss?
Jinny: It's just a sabbatical.
Kate: And you'll be back in three years.
Jinny: Well...
Kate: I'm counting on you to be back under my command.
Jinny: I will! *mutters under her breath that if she had a choice she wouldn't be under her command*

*Jinny's father's house. Jinny rings the doorbell*
Mr. Exstead: Jinny. What a surprise..
Jinny: I have something to tell you.
John: She's probably getting married. About time.
Jinny: Close. I'm moving. For three years.
Casey: Where?
Jinny: New England. With Teddy.
Mr. Exstead: Just for three years?
Casey: And then you'll return, right?
Jinny: Maybe.


~I'll add more later!~




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Old 05-11-2001, 07:34 PM   #13
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In the words of Dana:

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Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

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Old 05-11-2001, 07:56 PM   #14
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(Here it is. A very sweet ending!)

Mr. Exstead: What do you mean, "Maybe"? Of course you're coming back.
Jinny: I don't know how long Teddy expects us to be there. It could be for one year or two or three, maybe even ten. I don't know.
John: And I'm guessing since Teddy is getting a new job, you're getting a new job with him?
Jinny: I don't know. He never told me.
Casey: Jinny, I don't want you to leave.
Jinny: I don't want to leave either.
John: Then call this Teddy and tell him you're going to skip out on it.
Jinny: That's what I'll have to do then.

*Jinny's apartment. She picks up the phone and dials Teddy's number*
Teddy: Hello?
Jinny: Teddy? It's Jinny. Um.. uh, about that New England thing.
Teddy: What about it? You're going, aren't you?
Jinny: NO! *cools down* I mean, um...
Teddy: If you don't want to go, just tell me. It's not like I'm forcing you to go.
Jinny: Well, it sure sounds like you are! You know, Teddy, I don't think I want to go.
Teddy: I'm still going then.
Jinny *by now almost crying*: Fine. Have fun. Don't forget to write.
Teddy: Bye, Jinny.
Jinny: Yeah, bye.

*A month later. Jinny's at her desk, working on some papers. Magda comes over*
Magda: So, did he leave?
Jinny: Please. Don't even discuss it.
Magda: I'm taking that he did.
Jinny: He hasn't left yet for his plane. But he's going to call me when he does.
*Phone rings*
Jinny *picks it up*: Hello?
Teddy: Jinny?
Jinny: Who else?
Teddy: Jinny, I left something outside the station. Can you go out and get it?
Jinny: Yeah, yeah.
*She goes outside and sees Teddy standing there with his cell phone. She looks at him blankly*
Jinny: You found it, I guess.
Teddy: What if I told you I changed my mind? That I thought that it wasn't worth losing you and just calling you instead of seeing you?
Jinny: What if I told you that you made the nicest, best decision in the world?
Teddy: Thanks, Jinny.
Jinny: No.. thanks for doing this, Teddy.
Teddy: Any time.
Jinny: So.. what do you want to do tonight?
Teddy: Anything.
Jinny: Sounds good to me.


The end! (Perfect ending, huh? )


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Old 05-11-2001, 10:11 PM   #15
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Awww! That was good!!! BRAVO!

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