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Colonel Brandon
Join Date: Mar 23, 2004
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I know that I usually write about J&J, but I wanted to try something different this time!
Chapter 1 Terror Terri is walking home from the hospital.*I can't wait to get home* Jack is working late, and Janet is visiting her parents. *It sure is dark out here.* she thinks to herself. She hears a noise, but shrugs it off. *Just my imagination* All of sudden, A man jumps at Terri, draging her into the bushes. "HELP!!!" He covers her mouth. A little while later, Jack is at home when the phone rings. "Hello?" "Yes, This is Jack Tripper. What? Oh my God!! I'll be right there!" Jack rushes to the hospital. When he arrives, He talks to Dr. Anderson. "Jack, I'm afraid Terri has been raped." "Oh God!! Is she ok?" "She's going to be fine, but she is very frightened." "May I see her?" "Right this way." Dr. Anderson leads Jack to Terri's room. She is lying in bed crying. "Oh Terri honey! I'm so sorry!" He hugs her. "Oh Jack! It was awful! I feel so dirty!" "Oh Terri! It's not you're fault! Let me take you home." They arrive back at the appartment. "Oh Jack! Don't leave me!" "Terri, honey, I'm not going to leave you! (Holds her) I'm right here." Jack holds Terri on the couch all through the night, comforting her.
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Join Date: Feb 29, 2004
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That's really good
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I'm scared now...is this working out? When my voice is on the way, Who's to think about? I'm scared one day I'll say, "I don't love this anymore," Turn my back on all my fans... Who's to think about? The brighter I shine, the darker my shadows. And they pull me behind, as I let off the pedal. Why should I divide what feels so right? Is this where I want to lay? |
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Colonel Brandon
Join Date: Mar 23, 2004
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Chapter 2 Discoveries
Jack awakes the next morning to start breakfast. He looks at the sleeping Terri. *She is so beautiful. I love her so much! Wait, what am I saying?* He shrugs and goes into the kitchen to start breakfast. Later, Terri awakes to the smell of bacon. *Jack must be cooking breakfast. I love that man! If only he felt the same way about me.* Terri enters the kitchen. Jack turns and smiles at her. "Morning Sleeping Beauty! Did you sleep well?" "Morning Jack. I slept, not well, but I slept. I do feel much better though." "Good. Here, Eat up." "Thanks Jack." They enjoy their breakfast together. "Jack, Could I ask you something?" "Sure Ter! What's on your mind?" "Do you think... Well... Do you think we could ever be more than friends?" "Sure I do! Terri, I've always liked you, I just never knew how you felt about me. Now that I know, Terri, will you be my girl?" "Oh Jack! Of course I will!" "Come here Terri." He kisses her passionately. "I love you Terri." "I love you too Jack." |
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This is awesome!
Continue soon![]() |
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Join Date: Mar 09, 2004
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Aww it's cute! Great job!
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Join Date: Sep 28, 2003
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A Jack & Terri story,this is going to be interesting since this is the first one I've read
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Join Date: Mar 23, 2004
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Chapter 3 Love
Janet returns home from visiting her parents. "Hey guys! I'm home!" "Hey Janet!" (kisses her) "Hey Jack! Where's Terri?" "She had to go to the market. Did you have a good time?" "I sure did! You know how Larry drove me down? Well, we starting talking, and He and I have decided to date!" "That's Great! Terri and I have decided to date too!" "That's Great Jack!" Later Terri returns. "I'm home!" "Hey baby! (kisses her) I missed you!" "Oh Jack, I missed you too!" "Hey Terri!" "Hey Janet!" They hug "How was your trip?" "Wonderful! Larry and I are dating!" "That's Great! Jack & I are dating too!" "Yeah, He told me! I think it's great!" "Hey! Let's all go out and celebrate!" "Great idea Jack! I'll go tell Larry!" They go to the Bistro to celebrate. Jack proposes a toast "To us!" "To us! Cheers!" "I love you Terri!" "I love you too Jack! They kiss. |
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wow,now Janet & Larry are dating?Wow, is this interesting
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Join Date: Mar 23, 2004
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Sorry Guys! I won't be able to finish this fanfic. I thought I could write about Jack & Terri, but there's no chemistry there like there is between Jack & Janet. The perfect couples are Jack & Janet and Terri & Zack. Stay tuned for a new fanfic that Jackhammer & I will be writing together!
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Aww .. great story!
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