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*InThisMoment*
03-09-2003, 05:25 PM
well i know i'm not a real good fan fic writer so go easy on me LOL. but still i feel like writing it and it is a good idea even if I'M not a good writer. ;)...
(the opening scene beaver is up in his and wallys room looking a bit nervious geting ready for a date with violet)
Beaver:wally?
Wally:yea?
Beaver:how do i look?
Wally: oh fine.
(beaver wrecklessly puting on his tie)
Wally:calm down.what ya' all shook up about?
Beaver: oh nothing (hiding some thing)
Beaver:well i got to go i don't want to be late.
Wally:were ya going anyway?
Beaver: oh me and violet are going out to eat.
Wally: oh. well i'll see you later.
(they scene fades into beaver and violet sitting down to the table that they reserved the day before)
(beaver sits down and they order. beaver looks like he's nervious or some thing is wronge.Violet notices)
Violet:some thing wronge?
Beaver: oh no.
Violet: ok good.i sure can't wait to eat i'm starving.
Beaver: oh, me too. (he really didn't have much of a apetite for food. he had some thing on his mind)
(about 10 minutes later they order and the waiter comes up to thier table sets down their plates and leaves)
Violet:yumm this looks good.
Beaver:yes.
Violet:some thing wronge beaver.you haven't been acting your self.
Beaver: oh no.well i'm sure it's nothing i ate. because i haven't ate yet (trying to hide his nerviousness)
(beaver and violet continue their meal and are leaving for the movies)
(beaver and violet get in the car)
Beaver:did you have a nice time (a little more calm than earlier)
Violet:wondorful beaver, just wondorful.
Beaver:good. i thought so too.
(they head to the movies)
Violet:beaver?
Beaver:yes violet?
Violet:are you enjoying your self?
Beaver:yes i am.i'm just a little tired.
Violet:beaver.listen why don't we skip the movie and go home huh?
Beaver:why?
Violet:well i don't know what but you seem to have some thing on your mind.and i think maybe we should head home.it's geting late any way.
Beaver: ok violet what ever you say. (trying to pretend he didn't know what she mean't)
(beaver drove violet home and is kissing her good bye on her porch)
Beaver:uh violet?
Violet:yea beaver?
Beaver:well i know you noticed a change in me and... well i didn't mean to ruin your evening but maybe now you'll know why...
(beaver gets on his knees)
Beaver:would you marry me?
(beaver stands up and violet falls into his arms)
(Violet near crying)
Violet: oh yes beaver i will!
(Beaver and violet kiss)
to be continued...
i'll write more if i get some replys :)
Corvetteguy
03-09-2003, 07:54 PM
I can't wait to read more. I can just picture Fred having to buy the best of everything and running around taking pictures left & right and Lumpy eating out of the wedding food and fred scolding him
Fred:"Clarence keep your hands off that food. it's cost me $80 bucks for that shrimp.
Lumpy: "Yes Daddy".
*InThisMoment*
03-09-2003, 08:25 PM
Originally posted by Corvetteguy
I can't wait to read more. I can just picture Fred having to buy the best of everything and running around taking pictures left & right and Lumpy eating out of the wedding food and fred scolding him
Fred:"Clarence keep your hands off that food. it's cost me $80 bucks for that shrimp.
Lumpy: "Yes Daddy".
thanks i will write more later on today or tammorow i'm glad you like it.you know i'm gonna use some of those ideas in my fanfic.that does sound very real! :lol:
.:BF:.
03-09-2003, 09:19 PM
Wow good fanfic, very romantic.
TheHappyBurgerMeister
03-09-2003, 11:18 PM
Hey, that's cool! How old are they supposed to be in the fanfic? Well, it's almost funny because I'm still thinking of them as 2 kids in grammar school and here Beaver is proposing to Violet! Well, I guess I should try a bit harder to imagine them older. I can't wait for more- keep it up!
:)
*InThisMoment*
03-10-2003, 12:03 AM
Originally posted by TheHappyBurgerMeister
Hey, that's cool! How old are they supposed to be in the fanfic? Well, it's almost funny because I'm still thinking of them as 2 kids in grammar school and here Beaver is proposing to Violet! Well, I guess I should try a bit harder to imagine them older. I can't wait for more- keep it up!
:)
i guess they are saposed to be around 18 or 19.and i also thought it was hard to picture them that old too!. i'm glad you are all enjoying my fan fic. i'll proably write more tammorow.
*InThisMoment*
03-10-2003, 12:36 AM
ok heres the next part...
(the scene fades into beaver and violet siting in the cleaver living room telling june ward and wally the news)
June: oh my little babys geting married!!! (in tears)
Ward:calm down june.
June:yes (holding back her tears)
Wally:congradulations! beaver! i never thought i'd see the day my little brother was married before me! (yes i'm saying wally isn't married i wanted him to still be single so it could add more of the BEAVER quality.i don't think it would be right for both the cleaver boys to be married.LOL)
June: oh beaver.oh violet.i'm so happy for you.
Violet:thank you mrs (about to say mrs cleaver)..mom!
Ward:well son. i'm very proud of you. (looks at june) please dear stop crying.
June:i'm just so happy for them.
Ward:well june than act happy.
June:yes
(and i'm saying the whole time he's talking shes crying histerically.just so you don't think ward was over reacting)
Wally:i'm real happy for you beav.
Beaver:thanks wally.
(the scene fades into beaver and wally in their room talking)
Beaver:wally?
Wally:what?
Beaver:would you...
Wally:what?
Beaver:i want you to be my best man.
Wally:well gee thanks beav i would love to be your best man!
Beaver:thanks. i hope the wedding turns out to be everything i hope it will be.
(the scene fades into violet's house were fred and gwenn are discussing the wedding)
Fred:we are so proud of you violet.
Violet:thank you daddy.
Fred:and just think some day clarence will be geting married.
Lumpy:yes daddy.
Fred:and violet i can't wait to talk with ward about this.i'll see to it that you two have the best wedding you could ever imagine.
Violet:thank you daddy.
Gwenn:yes violet you have made a wondorful decision marring beaver.
Violet:thank you mom.i love beaver alot.and i know he loves me too.i can't wait to be married with him.
Fred:you two do make quite a cute couple.
to be continued...
i know it seemed to have some rough edges but it wasn't THAT bad ;)
This is great so far! Eagerly anticipating more soon!
*InThisMoment*
03-10-2003, 02:43 PM
thanks, i'll write the next part later :)
.:BF:.
03-10-2003, 03:24 PM
Wow! cant wait to read about the wedding, Keep it coming. :)
*InThisMoment*
03-10-2003, 08:32 PM
thanks everyone.i promise the next part later today :)
*InThisMoment*
03-11-2003, 12:26 AM
ok heres the next part...
(the scene fades into ward's office where ward and fred are talking about beaver and violets wedding...
Fred:yes ward old man just the best for our violet.first class all the way.
Ward:well i plann to do my fair share too.me and june are very glad for beaver and violet.
Fred:us too.us too.
(ward and fred go on talking about the wedding.mean while beaver and violet are pretty much having the same conversation over dinner)
Violet: oh beaver i'm so exited about the wedding! i just know we'll be so happy!.
Beaver:i do too.
(beaver and violet kiss a passionate kiss)
(the scene fades into ward and june talking. the boys had already went to bed.)
June:you know i never really realized just how serious beaver and violet were about each other.
Ward:well june they have been going steady for a few years.
June:yes...my little babies growing up.soon he'll have little babys and then some day well be grandparents and than...
Ward:well lets just get thru the wedding june.
June:it just seems like yesterday beaver was just a little baby.
Ward:well he's 18. he's all grown up.
June:well i sure am proud of beaver.i'm sure beaver and violet will be very happy together.
Ward:me too june. me too.
to be continued...
i hope you enjoyed the 3rd part. i know it was short but i'm kinda' stumped. :)
*InThisMoment*
03-11-2003, 12:37 AM
i know this last part turned out short and kinda' bad so i "thunk" up some good ideas for the next one :)
*InThisMoment*
03-11-2003, 06:27 PM
ok heres the next part...
the scene fades into wally and mary ellen on a date together at a movie...
Mary ellen:are you enjoying the movie wally?
Wally:sure it's a great picture.just i was thinking.soon beaver and violet will be married.
Mary ellen:maybe some day wedding bells will be ringing for us. (puting her hand in wallys)
(now just to get someting straight.in all my other short fics wally's steady girl was julie foster. like it was at the end of the real LITB series.so they had just got back together.but you all know mary ellen. and she really likes wally.just mentioning this so you might understand this part in my fanfic)
Wally:maybe.i don't know if i'm quite ready for marriage.
Mary ellen:well wally your in your 20's you have to get married some time.
Wally:well i just wan't to be sure i don't rush into things and marrie some one i won't get along with.ya know mary ellen.marriage isn't anyting to rush.
Mary ellen:are you saying i wouldn't make a good wife!?
Wally: of course not.look i'm just not ready to get married ok? can we just watch the picture?
Mary ellen:well wally cleaver i think i get the picture!
Wally:wait!
(mary ellen madly walks away)
Wally:mary ellen!
(the scene fades into the kitchen one week later wally and mary ellen and wally still haven't got back together. june is baking a cake) (oh and just so you all know mary ellen IS coming to the wedding)
June:hi wally.
Wally:hi mom
June:some thing wronge?
Wally:i tryed to call mary ellen but she refused to talk to me.
June:what she mad about?
Wally:well i told her i didn't want to rush into marriage and she took it personal and thought i was saying i wouldn't want to be married to her.
June: oh.well how are you gonna face her.we already invited her to the wedding.
Wally:thats why i'm trying to makeup with her.i never ment to insult her.
June:well i'm sure you will makeup in time.
Wally:girls sure are touchy.
June:wally?
Wally:yea mom i'll go try to call back mary ellen
(just a update... the wedding is in 2 weeks)
(ok now back to beaver and violet)
Violet:hello honey. (she just walked into the den)
Beaver: oh hi violet.
Beaver:i just came home i was looking around for a room in a apartment.
Violet:no luck?
Beaver:no luck.
Violet:well i'm sure we will find one.
Beaver:me too.
Violet:i think we sent out all the wedding invatations.
Beaver:we did send one to uncle billy didn't we?
Violet:don't you remember that was the 5th one we sent out.
Beaver: oh yea.i sure can't wait to see uncle billy's face when he sees the radiant beautiful girl i'm marrying. (huging violet)
Violet: oh beaver!.you can really make a girl feel special.
(she kisses him)
Violet:i can't wait to be married
Beaver:me too.
(they go back to kissing)
(just then wally walks in to the den to try to call mary ellen)
Wally: oh (turning around)
Beaver: oh it's ok wally you can come in.
Wally: oh thanks beav.i have to try to phone mary ellen.
Beaver:sure.wally if you see a apartment for rent will ya tell me?
Wally:sure thing beav.
(beaver exits the room)
(wally trys to call mary ellen but still no luck so he goes over to her house)
Wally:hi mary ellen (who just answered the door)
Mary ellen:hi wally
Wally:look mary ellen. i'm real sorry about what i said.
Mary ellen: oh(still mad). oh wally i'm sorry too!
(falling into his arms)
Mary ellen:i shouldn't of taken it so personal.
Wally:well i'm just glad we are back together again.
Mary ellen:me too. i know what you men't and wally.and i really am sorry.i promise i won't rush you.marriage IS a thing you shouldn't rush into.
Wally:well i'm glad ya understand mary ellen.
to be continued...
i still got some more good ideas for the next part, hope you all liked this part of my fanfic :)
I don't see why you said you weren't a good writer! This is an excellent fanfic! Can't wait to read more!
*InThisMoment*
03-11-2003, 07:27 PM
Originally posted by BeaversBiggestFan
I don't see why you said you weren't a good writer! This is an excellent fanfic! Can't wait to read more!
thanks alot i need all the confidence i can get! ;)
Originally posted by TheFonzIsCool
thanks alot i need all the confidence i can get! ;)
Well...that's what i'm here for...
TO PUMP YOU UP!:crazy:
*InThisMoment*
03-11-2003, 07:38 PM
Originally posted by BeaversBiggestFan
Well...that's what i'm here for...
TO PUMP YOU UP!:crazy:
well i'm glad. because your the one who gave me the confidence to write it and think atleast ONE person would like to read it.i'm serious.
Originally posted by TheFonzIsCool
well i'm glad. because your the one who gave me the confidence to write it and think atleast ONE person would like to read it.i'm serious.
:blush:
That's so sweet.
(If you ever get stumped and need ideas on FUTURE fanfics [which there better be some future fanfics] just let me know!)
:wave:
*InThisMoment*
03-11-2003, 07:48 PM
Originally posted by BeaversBiggestFan
:blush:
That's so sweet.
(If you ever get stumped and need ideas on FUTURE fanfics [which there better be some future fanfics] just let me know!)
:wave:
thanks. i proably will! :)
Originally posted by TheFonzIsCool
thanks. i proably will! :)
Good.
Dude, this is almost like real time instant messaging! Sweet!
*InThisMoment*
03-11-2003, 07:52 PM
Oh and there just might be some future fanfics! the only reason i am always saying my fanfics stink is because this is only the second fanfic i ever wrote. (my first one was a gilligans island fanfic that IS very bad) so... i think you under stand ;)
Originally posted by TheFonzIsCool
Oh and there just might be some future fanfics! the only reason i am always saying my fanfics stink is because this is only the second fanfic i ever wrote. (my first one was a gilligans island fanfic that IS very bad) so... i think you under stand ;)
Oh ok. Well, it just bums me out to see people putting themselves down. Ya know what I mean? So...DONT!:lol:
Good luck with the fanfic. I am actually working on one now that is the first of a series. It's something that didn't happen in the show, but this fanfic shows my imagination of what it would have been like if this particular thing did happen. ahh yeah...suspense.
*InThisMoment*
03-11-2003, 08:05 PM
Originally posted by BeaversBiggestFan
Good.
Dude, this is almost like real time instant messaging! Sweet!
oh my gosh! my thoughts igsactly!
*InThisMoment*
03-11-2003, 08:07 PM
Originally posted by BeaversBiggestFan
Oh ok. Well, it just bums me out to see people putting themselves down. Ya know what I mean? So...DONT!:lol:
Good luck with the fanfic. I am actually working on one now that is the first of a series. It's something that didn't happen in the show, but this fanfic shows my imagination of what it would have been like if this particular thing did happen. ahh yeah...suspense.
oooooooooh! suspence is right. but come on you can tell me! (sneaky voice) ;) j/k
.:BF:.
03-11-2003, 08:30 PM
i think this is one of the best fanfics on the board, Keep it coming. :happyface
Corvetteguy
03-11-2003, 08:56 PM
Fonz another great fan fic. I can't wait to read more.
*InThisMoment*
03-12-2003, 02:49 PM
ok heres the next part...
(the scene fades into wally and eddie talking in his room.wallys room that is)
Wally:yea me and mary ellen are back together.
Eddie:way to go sam!
Wally:thanks. i sure am glad i wouldn't wan't to have to face her at the wedding after all that happened.
Eddie:well sam i got to be going.ya know how cindy is if i'm late for a date.she goes crazy!
Wally: ok bye eddie (kind of chuckling)
Eddie:bye (beaver walks in)
Beaver:hi eddie
Eddie:hi romeo i heard your geting married!
Beaver:yep to violet rutherford
Eddie:i know i know.it's all over town that your gonna be related to lumpy rutherford!
Beaver:well.thats not so bad.
Eddie:sure it is!
Beaver: oh dry up eddie!
Eddie: ok. ok! don't blow your top!
(eddie exits the room)
Beaver:hi wally
Wally:hi beav
Beaver:i got to get ready me and violet are going out to a movie.
Wally:you got all the wedding invatations sent out?
Beaver:all except eddies.
Wally:holding out huh?
Beaver:no it's just violet forgot to.but were sending it out to day on our way to the movies.
Wally: oh. ok
(beaver continues geting ready and then leaves to go with violet)
(beaver is passing thru the den and there is two envelopes on the table. one is adressed to eddie (the wedding invatation) and the other one is a envelope adressed to marie micheals (one of violets friends) beaver who is in a hurry calls volet to hurry up and at the same time grabs what he thinks is eddies invatation and sticks it in his pocket)
Beaver:hurry up violet were gonna miss the movie!!!
Violet:i'm coming!
(she comes from the kitchen were she was helping june with dinner)
Violet:sorry i was helping mom.
Beaver: ok. well we still got 20 minutes til the movie comes on
Violet: ok
(and they leave with the wronge envelope)
(later on beaver and violet are still at the movies and wally and eddie are up in his room)
Wally:what you wan't to do?
Eddie: oh i don't know. i'm bored
(wally and eddie go on talking and somehow get into the subject of marriage and are discussing beaver and violet)
Wally:yea he sen't out all the invatations.
Eddie:hmm.i didn't get mine yet.
Wally:well i'm sure he gave you one he told me so.
(the conversation goes on and soon the scene fades into 3 days later at eddies house.he is looking thru the mail looking for his invatation)
Eddie:hmmm.it's not her.it's not here! the little rat didn't invite me to his wedding! why would he do a thing like that everybody loves me! (pause) well almost everybody. well i don't really care i got plenty of friends who would just love to have me at there wedding!
(ward is at his desk going thru envelopes and notices a wedding invatation adressed to eddie...
Ward:huh it's not sent out yet.hey beaver come here!
(Beaver comes down stairs)
Beaver:yes dad?
Ward:did you ententionally NOT send out eddies invatation?
Beaver: oh no! i must of got the wronge letter last night.i'll just give it to him later on.
(back at eddies house eddie is furious and is refusing to talk to beaver because he thinks he was not invited to beavers wedding)
to be continued...
well thats all i can think of for a while :)
.:BF:.
03-13-2003, 01:15 AM
Coming along Great! i actuly feel sorry for eddie, i feel sorry for the beav too.
*InThisMoment*
03-13-2003, 03:05 PM
Originally posted by BeAvEr FaN
Coming along Great! i actuly feel sorry for eddie, i feel sorry for the beav too.
glad ya like it. i'll proably write the next part later today or tommorow. :)
*InThisMoment*
03-13-2003, 08:55 PM
the next part...
(the scene fades into the cleavers dinner table where they are all enjoying dinner)
June:beaver?
Beaver:yes mom?
June:did you send out eddies invatation yet?
Beaver:no eddies proably coming over her tommorow and i thought i'd give it to him then
June: ok.i just wouldn't wan't eddie to think we didn't invite him.
Beaver: oh boy mom what a diseaster that would be.
(back at eddies house he is siting up in his room angry at beaver)
Eddie:boy oh boy what a creep! not inviting me to his wedding! wait eddie old boy your not going about this the right way! you got to turn on the charm.make him beg you to come.
(the scene fades into the next day in wally and beavers room)
(eddie enters)
Eddie:hey wally
Wally:hey there eddie.
Eddie: ya know that little creep you call a brother...
Wally:huh?
Eddie:he still didn't send out my invatation!
Wally:but...
(just then beaver walks in and eddie "turns on his charm)
Eddie:shh!. why hello there beaver.how are you today?
Beaver:fine just fine (looking kind of suprised)
Eddie:is there anything i can do for you?
Beaver:uhh no. oh and heres your invatation to the wedding.sorry 'bout the wait i accidiently grabbed the wronge letter i would of mailed it to you.but i didn't want you to get shookup about not geting your invatation.
Eddie:thanks beav.
Beaver:by the way why are you being so nice to me?
Eddie:well can't a guy be nice without a reason?
Beaver:sure he can but...
Eddie:well wally i've got to be going.
(eddie exits beaver and wallys room)
Wally:eddie was all shook up about not getin' a invatation to the wedding.
Beaver: oh. well let's not get into a big thing about it.
Wally:gee after some of those things he said about bein' related to lumpy i thought you'd love ta' rubb it in
Beaver:well i guess if i were him i'd proaby be a little embarrased.
Wally:yea i guess so.i bet he's mopin' around all week.just to find out it was all a mistake
(the scene fades into the next day in the living room where beaver june and violet are talking. the wedding is near and beaver and violet needed a place to stay but were short on cash.the subject came up while talking to june...
June: oh beaver no butts you and violet will stay here until you earn enough money to get a room some where.
Violet: oh we couldn't...
June: oh yes you can!
Beaver:well..gee thanks mom.
June:your welcome.all you need to worry about is having the best wedding you can.
Violet: oh mom you don't know how much we apriceate this!
to be continued...
i know it wasn't much but atleast it's something. i'll write the next part if i get a couple replys :)
.:BF:.
03-14-2003, 01:37 AM
Good Part Cant wait to see what else happens, I'm glad every thing worked out all right between beaver & eddie i hope beaver comes up with some cash to pay for a room. Keep It Coming. :happyface
*InThisMoment*
03-14-2003, 02:20 PM
Originally posted by BeaversBiggestFan
Sounding good!
glad you like it.i will write the next part later today or tommorow.by the way funny quote in your sig. oh and just cause my sig is about happy days i still love LITB ;)
*InThisMoment*
03-15-2003, 05:25 PM
heres the next part...
(the scene fades into beaver and violet at the movies talking)
Violet:beaver?
Beaver:yes violet?
Violet:do you remember the first time we ever played together?
Beaver:yea.(chuckling) you gave me a black eye.
Violet:yea.well i guess thats just the way little girls act.
Beaver:yea.and ever since we've been friends.
Violet:strange how you and me ended up geting married.like we are.
Beaver: oh it isn't so strange.
Violet:i guess your right.
Beaver:i'm glad we are though.
(puts his hand on hers)
Violet: me too.
(the scene fades into ward and june all alone in the kitchen talking)
June:just think soon beaver will be geting married.
Ward:yep.i'm very proud of beaver.
June: funny i always pictured wally geting married first.
Ward:me too.i guess beaver is just a little quicker with the women (in a joking voice)
June: i'm glad he and violet are though.they always seemed so close.but i just could never picture our beaver geting married.
Ward:well june lets go to bed it's geting late.
(the scene fades into the next morning beaver is just waking up)
Beaver: (yawn)
(june walks in)
June:good morning beaver! i was just coming up to wake you.
Beaver:i'm up i'm up.
June: oh good it's geting late. (in a kind strange voice)
Beaver:some thing wronge mom?
June:no.i was just thinking soon you'll be married.
Beaver:yea.
June:were so proud of you beaver (almost crying)
Beaver: oh mom don't cry.
June:well i'm sorry beaver.it's just your growing up so fast.
Beaver:well mom i can't help it
June: (laughing)oh beaver i know you can't.it just takes a little geting used to.you know i still think of you as my little baby.
Beaver:i'm 18 now mom.i'm a adult
June: oh beaver no matter how old you get you'll always be my baby.
Beaver:i guess your right.
June:you know some day you might know what i mean.
Beaver:yes mom
(she hugs him)
i'll write the next part later.sorry for the wait but i was stumped! :)
.:BF:.
03-15-2003, 06:32 PM
Another good part, feel sorry for june with the crying and all, Keep it coming.
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