My First Fan Fiction "True Love"

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

This is my first Fan Fiction so I may suck at it, so don't get mad at me. Here is what it is going to be about. Kate is in a car wreck. She has so many scars and brusies that she thinks that she will never be pretty again. But, Ross comes to her rescue and shows her just how pretty she really is! Sound good? I hope so! I think is it! LOL! Tell me how you like it! Thanks. :) :) :) :D :D

[TeddyisMINE!!!!]

Sounds good, Can't wait to read it!

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

Thanx. I will try my very best to post the first part of it this afternoon.

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

"True Love"

At the Division everyone is leaving* Kate: Goodbye everyone! See you all tomorrow

Magda: Bye Captain

Raina: See you in the morning

C.D. *nods*

Nate: Bye

Jinny: See you guys later.

Everyone leaves. Kate is in her car on the road.All of the sudden a car runs a red light and smashes into Kate! Someone else sees this happen, and calls 911. The Paramedics come and take Kate to the Emergency Room. They find her purse and find out her identity. They call Magda.*

The phone rings at Magda's house*
Magda: *answers the phone* Hello?...Yes I know her. Is something wrong?... Oh My Gosh! *starts to get teary eyed* ....I'll be right there. Bye *hangs up*

Magda calls everyone else on the squad. Then she calls Ross.*

Ross: *answers the phone* Hello?...OMG! Is she okay?...OMG!... *trying to hold back the tears but it isn't working very well.* I'll be there in 10 minutes. Bye.

Ross sits down on his bed, puts his head in his head and sobs. Then he goes to the hospital.*

At the hospital. Ross walks into the hospital room where Kate lays the bed looking helpless and lifeless. Ross ruhes to her side.*

Ross: *stares at Kate for a minute* I love you Kate! *Ross kisses her, and he takes her hand.* I love you more than you will ever know! *Ross starts to sob again.*

[TeddyisMINE!!!!]

Awwwww ! keep going!

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

I will. I just have to figure out what to say next lol

[TeddyisMINE!!!!]

well,hurry up. I wanna know what happens next!

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

Okay. Well here it goes

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

*Then Magda walks in Kate's hospital room*

Magda: Am I interupting something?

Ross: Oh no. Come on in.

Magda: *walks in* How's she doing?

Ross: She's uncouncis right now.

Magda: Oh my gosh! She looks so helpless lying there like that.This must be really hard on you. How are you taking all this?

Ross: I am okay I guess. I could be doing a lot better though. I just wish the doctors would come in here and tell mmething. I can't stand seeing her like this.

Magda; Yeah. I understand. I'll go and ask a doctor about her.

Ross: Okay. Thanks.

Magda: You're welcome *leaves the room*

Ross: Don't worry darlin. We are going to get through this. I am here for you.

*Outside in the hall*

Magda: Doctor!... Can you give me any information about Ms. McCafferty?...*fighting back her tears* Okay. Thank you. ... * goes back to Kate's hospital room*

Ross: What did they say?

Magda: They said... Well...She's... She's going to have to have a kidney transplant. *Starts to cry*

Ross: OMG! This can't be happening! Are they sure?

Magda: They are positive. *Hugs Ross* Everything will be fine. Don't worry.

Ross: I hope that you are right.

Magda: me too... Me too

*A couple of minutes later*

Magda: I need to go home now. My son, Ben, is probably getting hungry by now. Will you be okay here by yourself?

Ross: Yeah. I'll be fine.

Magda: *gives him a phone number* Call me when you find out something.

Ross: I will.

Magda: Bye *leaves*

Ross: Bye *looks at Kat for a minute*

Ross: Kate, if you can hear this, then please answer. I love you so much! More than anything in the world! Before you came into my life, I was nothing. Now that I have you in my life, I feel like the greatest man alive! If we ever get through this, I am going to take you away for the weekend. I love you so much, and nothing will ever change that. You make my life worth living. You are the most beautiful person that ever lived. I am so greatful to have a woman like you in my life.

Kate: Oh Ross! I love you too!

Ross: Oh Kate! *kisses her* How do you feel?

Kate: I was feeling awful, but now that you are here I am feeling better.

Ross: *smiles* That's my girl.

Kate: What happened to me?

Ross: Well, you were in a car accident. They rushed you here to the hospital, and you were uncouncis. Also you um... you... well... You need a heart transplant.

Kate: Oh god! Why me?

Ross: We are going to get through this. Together. I promise. I can't stand the thought of losing you.

Kate: Oh Ross! I can't stand the thought of losing you either. You mean the world to me. I love you so much!

[LiLCaptAinKaTe06]

Good job. It's coming along great! I can't wait to read more of it when I get back from vacation!:)

[-*Forever*-]

Erm.... no comment Laura.

[JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo]

Originally posted by ~*Roxie Rickman*~
Erm.... no comment Laura.

what's that suppose to mean?

I think it's good.. keep going

[-*Forever*-]

Originally posted by JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo


what's that suppose to mean?

I think it's good.. keep going

You know Little Dixie Carter (AIM Name - DixieCarterRulz or DixieCarterYea)? *whispers* Any Bonnie user names except for Kate McCaffery and Bonnie's Biggest Fan are her.

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

Thanx Jasmine, Emma, and JoJoJoJoJo.... But as for Joyce, *I believe that's her name8 Please don't post here if you are not going to talk about my fan fiction. Thank you.

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

Ross: I am going to go and see if I match you, so I can give you one of my kindneys, so you can have the transplant. You just lay there and rest.

Kate: Okay. Thank you Ross. You are the sweetest man alive.

Ross: *Kisses her and leaves*

Kate: * goes back to sleep*

*Ross comes back a few minutes later*

Ross: Kate?

Kate: *wakes up* What did you find out?

Ross: Promise me you won't get upset?

Kate: I promise. Why would I ever get upset with you?

Ross: * tries to smile* I... I... I...

I am leaving you hanging here on purpose.


:p

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

Ross: I don't match

Kate: *is in shock* Are they sure?

Ross: They are positive. I'm sorry.

Kate: It's okay. I'm just glad that you're here now.

Ross: How do you feel now?

Kate: A little bit better, but not much. Do you think that I'll ever get out of here?

Ross: Of course you will.

Kate: Good. Because if I don't Haysbert will be all over me about this. He's probably already mad as hell that I was even in this wreck.

Ross: I'm sure he'll understand.

Kate: You don't know Haysbert. He doesn't understand anything I say.

Ross: Oh I almost forgot. While I was out I called Amanda.

Kate: Thanks. What did she say?

I know this is dumb, but I made it up as I went along. It's not my best work!

[TeddyisMINE!!!!]

It's not dumb. It's really good. Post more soon!

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

Thanx. I'll try to post more today.

[-*Forever*-]

Ok, one fast question here- how did you know my name was Joyce if you're not Laura? I go by Kaitlyn now.

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

I talked to Laura once in an IM and she mentioned the name Joyce, and told me not to talk to her.

[-*Forever*-]

Originally posted by BonniesLilCutiePie
I talked to Laura once in an IM and she mentioned the name Joyce, and told me not to talk to her.

But how did you kno it was me...?

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

She also mentioned your name here on the boards

[Bonnie Is Great!]

Hey your doing great! Keep up the good work! :talk:

[-*Forever*-]

Originally posted by BonniesLilCutiePie
She also mentioned your name here on the boards

I've changed my name 3584758473204 times. Ask anyone. Laura knew me as Annie Potts Forever.

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

Originally posted by Bonnie Is Great!
Hey your doing great! Keep up the good work! :talk:

Thanks for the compliment. I am going to try my best to add more today.

[Czas na Zywiec]

Originally posted by ~*Roxie Rickman*~


I've changed my name 3584758473204 times. Ask anyone. Laura knew me as Annie Potts Forever.

Busted. Also, Bonnie is great is also Laura. :rolleyes:

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

No it is not!

[Czas na Zywiec]

Originally posted by BonniesLilWhore
No it is not!

Don't lie. I asked TJ to check the IP numbers (meaning the computer you're from) and they were all the same number.

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

Liar!

[*Marilyn Monroe*]

Hey, even though we're not on the best of terms, this is good!

[JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo]

Originally posted by BonniesLilCutiePie
Liar!

dude... the IPs don't lie!

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

Whatever! :rolleyes: Just go to the Lifetime boards and you'll see! :rolleyes:

[Czas na Zywiec]

Originally posted by JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo


dude... the IPs don't lie!

Yea. Hey I have an idea. IM me tonight at 11:00 pm Eastern Time and then we will both IM TJ (The Creator of the boards) and ask him your IP number, Bonnie is Great's IP number, and LittleDixieCarter's IP number. If you are telling the truth, then you have nothing to fear because the numbers will not be the same. And we'll all quit buggin you. So are you up for it? I'm willing to make ammends if you cooperate with us.

[*Marilyn Monroe*]

Originally posted by Ricky Ricardo


Yea. Hey I have an idea. IM me tonight at 11:00 pm Eastern Time and then we will both IM TJ (The Creator of the boards) and ask him your IP number, Bonnie is Great's IP number, and LittleDixieCarter's IP number. If you are telling the truth, then you have nothing to fear because the numbers will not be the same. And we'll all quit buggin you. So are you up for it? I'm willing to make ammends if you cooperate with us.

Did you guys do that??

[Czas na Zywiec]

Originally posted by AliciaKeysForever


Did you guys do that??

Apparently she wasn't on AIM...........................odd isn't it?

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

I went to bed early last night! :p

[disturbed child]

13 YEAR OLD LAURA DICKERSON FROM TEXAS ... you had better quit your lying. We all know who you are. It's pretty funny watching you try to lie to us. Hahahaha! You're so pathetic.

Come on LAURA ... keep on denying the facts. It's hilarious seeing you TRY to lie!

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

Loser loser with a twist wipe a tear blow a kiss mess with me mess with this!

[disturbed child]

Originally posted by BonniesLilCutiePie
Loser loser with a twist wipe a tear blow a kiss mess with me mess with this!

Riiiiiiight ...

[?!]

Originally posted by BonniesLilCutiePie
Loser loser with a twist wipe a tear blow a kiss mess with me mess with this! :lol: What are we, FIVE??!!

[BonniesLilCutiePie]

You act like you are.