View Full Version : On The Loose Agin By Courtney and Denise
Jo/Blair_fan
02-04-2002, 07:47 AM
Here it comes.
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On The Loose Again By Courtney and Denise
It was the middle of the winter and Jo and Blair had just come home from a long day at Langley College. It was their freshman year, and midterms were coming up soon. They had just entered the shop when they heard Mrs. Garrett calling their names.
Mrs. Garrett: Jo, Blair, could you girls come into the kitchen and help me take the Jelly Rolls out of the oven.
Jo: ok we’re coming.
(They enter the kitchen)
Mrs. Garrett: thanks, could you two get the 2 sheets on the bottom rack?
Blair: sure.
Jo: no problem.
(They take the sheets out of the oven and let the Jelly Rolls cool them place the Jelly Rolls on a different sheet to put in the display case out front.)
Blair: where is the newspaper?
Jo: I don’t know. Hey Mrs. G do you know where the newspaper is?
Mrs. Garrett: I don’t know I went to see if it was out side and I didn’t see it.
(The screen shows the Newspaper out side buried in the snow and only the headline is showing and it says, “The killer Jason Patrick is on the loose again.” The rest of paper was covered in snow.)
Jo: let me check outside. Ah here it is it was partly buried in the snow.
Blair: all I want out of it is the fashion page.
Mrs. Garrett: well I want the market page and the food section.
Jo: and Natalie will want the comics.
Blair: and Tootie will want the Show Biz section.
Jo: ok I guess I will take the rest. I will be upstairs if any of you guys need me.
Mrs. Garrett and Blair: ok
(Jo goes upstairs)
(Upstairs)
Jo: (looks at the headline on the paper and gasps) (to her self) OMG he’s out again. I can’t believe he got out. (Reads further) he is out on parole and is said to be seeking revenge form anyone who helped put him in prison. (When Jo sees this she feels a large lump in her throat form since she knew that he would come after her first.)
(Blair comes upstairs and knocks on the door)
Blair: Can I come in?
Jo: (swallows the lump in her throat) yea sure.
(Blair enters)
Blair: have you seen my new scarf that I bought yesterday at the mall in the city?
Jo: no what does it look like?
Blair: it is blue and Gold.
Jo: have you looked where you put thing when you are out of room in the closet.
Blair: no I haven’t checked under your bed. (She looks under Jo’s bed) here they are. Thanks Jo.
Jo: no problem.
Blair: well it’s time to go help in the shop.
Jo: it’s 3:00 already?
Blair: yea, time fly’s fast doesn’t it.
Jo: yea it does, lets go.
(They head downstairs.)
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Do you like it so far???????
Take it away Courtney!
Ewan's My Man
02-04-2002, 04:12 PM
OMG!!! I m on da edge of my seat!! I luz it!! OMG!!! You haveta post more u guyz!!! This is awesome!!!!
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
02-04-2002, 05:23 PM
It's GREAT!! I can't wait for more!!
ZeldaGilroy
02-04-2002, 10:10 PM
Great job! Keep going!
NMK_GG_FAN
02-04-2002, 10:14 PM
great job denise!!!
heres more
[its the next day and blair comes in the shop holding hands with some guy...Nat and Tootie were the only ones in the shop]
Blair- Hi all, I want you to meet this guy. His name is Peter and we were both shopping in the same place, to be in the same store as Blair Warner shows me he has taste..that's a plus....he also thinks im the most beautiful girl he's seen!...another plus
Peter- thats enough Blair, how about i introduce myself...Hi im Peter..and u are?
Nat- Im nat and this is tootie
tootie- dorthy..remember dorthy
Nat- okay whatever
Peter- are u guys the only two who work here?
Tootie- nope, theres mrs garret, she's Edna [points to sign] and then theres Jo, but i doubt you know her
Peter- wait who?
tootie- JO
Blair- enought about her, im suppose to be the center of attention right now!
Peter- Well, I gutta go nice meeting you...see ya Blair
Blair, Nat, Tootie- Bye, c-ya
Peter-[outside store, gets out a notebook and with Jo's name on it he crosses her name out] Got her..all i gutta do is sweet talk Blair a little longer and I've got Jo, she'll wish she never saw what she saw!!!
[inside store]
Tootie- so what ya know about this peter guy blair?
Blair- All i know is that he just came here, he told me theres one reason why he's here. I didn't ask why.
[Jo walks in with books]
Jo- hey guys, i heard someone at the door, who was it?
Blair- My new "friend" Peter!
Jo- dont know him..umm wait.....uhhh guys i gutta go
[Jo's leaves the store in panic]
Nat- what was that all about, maybe that was an old boyfriend of hers?
Blair- couldn't be....he has too good of taste for her! [Blair flips hair]
Nat and tootie [roll eyes]
ur turn denise
NMK_GG_FAN
02-04-2002, 10:15 PM
SORRY GUYS CHANGE PETER INTO JASON SORRY SORRY
Ewan's My Man
02-05-2002, 03:47 PM
MORE...NOW!!!
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
02-05-2002, 05:35 PM
Originally posted by #1JoFan
MORE...NOW!!!
I agree!!
ZeldaGilroy
02-05-2002, 09:25 PM
Come on Denise. Post your part. I want to see what happens next!;)
Jo/Blair_fan
02-06-2002, 06:55 AM
I will post after school today since i will not have any homework since i have tommarow off and friday off:D
Ewan's My Man
02-06-2002, 03:57 PM
Originally posted by Jo/Blair_fan
I will post after school today since i will not have any homework since i have tommarow off and friday off:D :eek2: :eek2: :eek2: :eek2: No fair!!! WHY!?!?! Eh...who cares...as long as u post A LOT more!!
Jo/Blair_fan
02-06-2002, 06:22 PM
Originally posted by #1JoFan
:eek2: :eek2: :eek2: :eek2: No fair!!! WHY!?!?! Eh...who cares...as long as u post A LOT more!!
HAHAHAHA. I have tomarrow and Friday off because of parent teacher confrences luckley my parents were not requsted to attend. :dance: Heres more.
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(Jo is sitting alone in the park thinking)
Jo: (to herself) it can’t be… she can’t be going out with him it must be another Jason. But what if it’s not? Blair doesn’t even know what happened since she only reads the fashion page.
(Jo starts to jog home because she wanted to think about this whole situation and the bus is too noisy to think on)
(Jo gets back to the shop and Mrs. Garrett is the only one out in the front of the shop the rest are in the kitchen where we can’t see them)
Jo: hey Mrs. Garrett where is every one?
Mrs. Garrett: they are in the kitchen. Could you get that can of olives that is sitting over there on that table?
Jo: sure (does what she is asked)
Mrs. Garrett: so what did you do while you were out?
Jo: I went to the park to think.
Mrs. Garrett: (thinking some thing is wrong and has that voice she has when she suspects something is wrong Jo.)
Jo: but don’t think any thing is wrong cause nothing is wrong I just wanted time to my self and u know how hard that is to do around here.
Mrs. Garrett: yea I know what you mean.
Jo: I’m going to go into the kitchen now; do you need any thing else?
Mrs. Garrett: go ahead and go in to the kitchen.
(Jo enters the Kitchen)
Blair: hey Jo nice to have you back.
Jo: thanks Blair, Hey Blair what is Jason’s last name?
Blair: His last name is Patrick. Why do ask?
Jo: just wondering I knew a Jason when I was younger but for some reason I can’t remember his name. But Patrick does ring a bell.
Blair: by any chance did you date this Jason you know?
Jo: heck no we were just friends.
Blair: oh ok.
Jo: (to herself) she is dating him, crud now I have a major problem I he finds out that I know Blair I am dead meat for sure.
Tootie: hey Jo why did you run out of here so fast this morning?
Jo: (trying to lie) oh I was late for a meeting at the board of regents.
Nat: oh ok. Did you get in trouble for being late?
Jo: no they didn’t mind since it was my first time to be late.
Tootie: so it was kind of like a warning.
Jo: yes it was a warning. (Annoyed) ok before I go upstairs do you guys have any more questions?
Nat: (seeing that she is annoyed) no we don’t Jo.
Tootie: but…
Nat: (quietly so Jo wouldn’t hear her) she is getting annoyed can’t you tell?
Tootie: I see it now (says to Nat in the same voice that Nat was talking in)
(Jo goes upstairs)
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Ur turn Courtney.
Did you like it????????
Ewan's My Man
02-06-2002, 06:51 PM
Originally posted by Jo/Blair_fan
Did you like it????????
:eek2: How can u be askin that?!?! Of course we do!!!
NMK_GG_FAN
02-06-2002, 07:47 PM
Good job!!
heres more!~
[upstairs]
Blair[barges in the room] Now Jo Im not just the most beautiful person in the world...i also can sense when somethings wrong...what's up with u?
Jo-[looking down] so...uhh u like this guy, Jason?
Blair [surprised Jo asked] my oh my, Jo asking me about one of my dates?...unbelieveable...u usually hate when i tell u about my many many boyfriends, but since i was going to tell you anyway....yea i like him a lot!
Jo-umm...i dont think u should stay with him?...i mean he's not ur type.
Blair- not my type?...he was shopping at Bloomingdales i couldn't have found a more perfect person....since when can u give THE blair warner advice on guys...and why do u want to?
Jo- well, uhh see...about Jason
Blair- ur jealous aren't you?...Because u knew him a long time ago u thought he was coming for u huh?
Jo- No its not like that its just...
Blair [cuts off jo] thats just shallow
Jo- u dont understand
Blair[cuts of jo again] i understand perfectly, u dont want me to be happy do u?
Jo- no blair....if u know what i know then...[stops] forget it....u wouldnt believe me anyway
Blair- what? [silence] well, im going to continue seeing Jason whether u like it or not [storms out of room]
Jo- [hitting her forehead, talking to herself] ur sooo dumb Jo why didn't u tell her, now she's in danger what are u gunna do??
ur turn denise
Jo/Blair_fan
02-06-2002, 07:53 PM
Oh thanks i will be in writers block for ever.:joke: I will try and think of more then post as soon as i can.
ZeldaGilroy
02-06-2002, 08:10 PM
Come on Denise, get over that writers block quickly! I am not very patient. I have to know what happens next.
Ewan's My Man
02-06-2002, 08:10 PM
MORE PEOPLEZ!!!
Jo/Blair_fan
02-06-2002, 11:06 PM
heres more.
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(Back downstairs)
Blair: hey Nat I think that I know the real reason Jo stormed out.
Nat: you do?
Tootie: (listening closely for gossip)
Blair: I think that Jo is jealous of me for taking Jason away from her. She probably thought that he was coming back for her instead he went out with me.
Nat: ah that would be a good reason to storm out on us.
Tootie: Yea I agree.
Blair: She said something about her knowing something about Jason I didn’t know but then I interrupted her.
Tootie: why did you do that?
Blair: because the only reason she is telling me this nonsense is so she can have Jason. But she can’t have him!
Nat: how do you know that it couldn’t of been important?
Blair: How could it be, Jason is the perfect man.
(Mrs. Garrett hears the whole conversation from the kitchen and decides to take the back stairs up to the girls’ room to talk to Jo about what she has heard.)
(Upstairs)
Mrs. Garrett: (knocks on the door) hey Jo can I come in?
Jo: yea sure Mrs. G.
(Mrs. Garrett enters)
Mrs. Garrett: Jo I overheard…
Jo: overheard? Are you sure you’re not Tootie in a disguise?
Mrs. Garrett: (laughs) no I’m not Tootie in a disguise. Back to what I was saying. I overheard the girls talking about Jason and I heard Blair saying something about you being jealous of her since you knew him before she did and you thought that he was back for you. Is what I heard true?
Jo: no, none of it is true.
Mrs. Garrett: then what is the truth?
Jo: (Very serious and holding a bible) Do you promise not to tell any of the girls or any one for that matter not even in extreme circumstances?
Mrs. Garrett: (realizing how serious she was. Places her hand and promises not to tell it to any one.)
Jo: Ok. When I was about 15 Jason was in a Gang called The Young Diablo’s which were the roughest gang in the Bronx. And I was not in school at the time and when I was on my over to my friend Jessie’s house I had to go through an ally to get there. On my through the ally I spotted Jason. He’ seemed to be high on something because he looked somewhat like a zombie would, all pale and sagging eyes. Then I saw what he was doing and I froze in my tracks. He holding a woman against a wall and stabbing a knife into her heart repeating his actions over and over again, I swear that when he turned around he saw me I began to run I ran all the way to my Jessie’s apartment. I must of rang the door bell at least 12 times before She answered when I got in I shut the door and locked all the locks. Then I told her a bout what I saw. She told me to tell the cops. I agreed with her we told her mom who had just gotten home and she took us to the police station and I told the cops. They asked me all I knew and then they said that they would catch him. The next day they caught him and found the body. They told me that I had to be a witness in court and that the trial would be the day after that day. I went to the trial and testified. When the jury decided that he was guilty and the Judge said Case adjourned He yelled I am Going to Kill you Polniaczek. Now that he is out on Parole he can follow threw with his plans. (By the time Jo was threw speaking she was shaking while Mrs. Garrett tried to comfort her) Mrs. Garrett I trust you not to tell any one.
Mrs. Garrett: ok.
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Your turn Courtney
MORE??????
Ewan's My Man
02-07-2002, 04:03 PM
MORE!!! But hun...r y sure u aren't mixin up fix...or at least charactas?!
Originally posted by Jo/Blair_Fan
James
There were some more...I just was too lazy to quote u on all of them...hehe...NEwayzie...post more soon!!
NMK_GG_FAN
02-07-2002, 07:24 PM
SRRY EVERYONE I THINK DENISE MEANT JASON.
downstairs..jo's still upstairs
Mrs. g- girls umm...well, i swore not to tell, but uhh nevermind....Blair can i talk to u alone?
Blair- sure mrs. garret
Mrs. G- stop seeing Jason
Blair- what?...u too?...what did Jo say to u to convince u to be on her side.. Mrs. Garret is that just Low down on ur part, just because she may have given u a few tears u gunna take her side. Well, u no what...im STAYING WITH HIM and he's comin' to pick me up this afternoon for dinner
Mrs. G- Blair...listen...i wish u would have......NO don't go with him
Blair- when did u become my mother?
Mrs. G- [slaps blair] dont u ever talk like that to me
Blair [looks mrs. g in the eye and storms upstairs]
[Nat and Tootie watched in total shock]
Mrs. G- I shouldnt have done that
Nat- why u so upset mrs. g??
Mrs. g-don't tell jo i told u, but she witnessed him killing someone...and she testified and now hes out waiting to hurt her
Tootie- OOO Jo's in TROUBLEEEEEEEEE
Mrs. G- and to make matters worse He's comin here tonite to pick up blair....and she thinks Jo's just jealous
Nat- hmmm.....we need to call him and cancel their date...say Blair.....is SICK thats it shes gunna be sick
[soon as Nat picked up the phone, Jason comes in. Blair and Jo hear something downstairs so they run to see who it was]
Blair- Jason ur early
Jason- sorry....JO...how are u?...remember me?
Jo- ummm yea
Jason- we have some unfinished business dont we?
[pulls out gun]
Jo- dont shoot her!
[fires]
someone screams SHES NOT MOVING
is it blair?
is it jo?
is it tootie?
is it nat?
or is it the lovelable mrs g?
ur turn Denise
Ewan's My Man
02-07-2002, 07:57 PM
U GUYZ R SOOOOOOO EXTREMELY MEAN!!! POST MORE SOON!!!
ZeldaGilroy
02-07-2002, 09:22 PM
Originally posted by NMK_GG_FAN
someone screams SHES NOT MOVING
is it blair?
is it jo?
is it tootie?
is it nat?
or is it the lovelable mrs g?
A cliffhager, huh? Now that was just plain mean!
Just kidding! But hurry and post more soon!
Jo/Blair_fan
02-08-2002, 04:45 PM
Here's some more.
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Mrs. Garrett: (After Jo dives in front of Blair and takes a hard hit to her chest. so that Blair doesn’t get hit by the bullet) OMG JO!!!!!!!!!!!! Are you ok?
Blair: Jason what was that for!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Jason: we had a score to settle.
Blair: If she doesn’t make it and I’m sure she will I will kill you unless she wants to kill you her self.
Jason: (sarcastically) oh I’m so scared.
Nat: (Jumps on him from behind and then Blair steels the gun from him and throws it into the other room then jumps on him from the front)
Mrs. Garrett: (trying to stop Jo’s bleeding.)
(Meanwhile in the other room)
Tootie: yes we would like the police to come immediately!
Police officer on the other line: ok we will be there in 3 minutes.
Tootie: and bring an ambulance one of our friends was shot and needs immediate medical attention she is loosing a lot of blood.
Police officer on the other line: All right we will be over in 3 min bye.
Tootie: bye.
(Tootie goes into the other room and tells Mrs. G that she called the Police, then goes over to James and also jumps on him)
Jo: (in a weak whisper) Mrs. G?
Mrs. Garrett: yes it’s me Jo; stay awake until the cops get here.
Jo: ok, will try. (She goes unconscious)
Mrs. Garrett: dang it she is unconscious.
Jason: (trying to get out of the girls death grips) Good.
Mrs. Garrett: you have a very sick mind.
Jason: I do not!
Blair: Yes you do
(The cops arrive at the door and grab Jason by the arms and then hand cuff him,)
Police Woman: Mr. Jason Patrick, You are under arrest for the attempt of murder of Jo Polniaczek. You have the right to remain silent, any thing you say can and will be used against you in a court of law you have the right to an attorney if you cannot afford one, one will be provided for you.
(Jason is escorted to a police car as the medics come and load Jo onto a stretcher and take her to the ambulance. Mrs. Garrett was the only one allowed to ride with Jo. Blair, Natalie, and Tootie took Blair’s car to the hospital)
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I Hope you liked it!
ur turn Courtney.
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
02-08-2002, 10:39 PM
Originally posted by Jo/Blair_fan
I Hope you liked it!
ur turn Courtney.
Are you kidding of course I liked it! I'm glad I had three posts to catch up on!!(I didn't have to wait for the cliff hanger!!!!!:lol: :happyface:)
oh, and , yes, Courtney, YOUR TURN!!!!!!!!!haha!
NMK_GG_FAN
02-09-2002, 10:58 AM
great job denise
[in St Mary's hospital Blair nat tootie and mrs g in waiting room]
Blair- this is all my fault, GOSH why did i have to be so stupid?
Mrs. G- its not ur fault, things just happen
Doctor- Are u ladies here for Jo? {they nod} Well, she took a hard blow to the chest, and {sighs} she's not going to make it. I suggest you call her parents and tell them to come right away.
Blair- WHAT?.....SHE'S HAS TO MAKE IT {cries]
doc- miss....we're trying our best
Blair- NOT HARD ENOUGH...TRY HARDER..PLEASE...WHATEVER YOU DO DONT LET HER DIE
mrs. g- come on blair calm down {holds blair
as she cries}
tootie- doctor....u have to do something..i mean she's...she's the glue that holds us together...SAVE HER PLEASE
Nat- please doctor
doctor- I dont no...ill see what i can do....if u guys would like to see her go ahead...but...im giving u warning...she might not hear you
[they enter jo's room seeing her pulled up to thing made them almost puke}
Blair- Oh...Jo please don't leave me please dont leave Us!!
{Jo opens her eyes a little}
Jo- {coughing} i never knew doing the right thing would kill me?
suddenly the she starts to breath hard and coughing then the beeping goes louder and louder...doctors rush in and push the girls out the way!
go denise!!!
Ewan's My Man
02-09-2002, 11:08 AM
AHHHHHHHHHH!!! Jo hasta live!!!
POST MORE SOON!!!
ZeldaGilroy
02-10-2002, 10:32 PM
Originally posted by NMK_GG_FAN
suddenly the she starts to breath hard and coughing then the beeping goes louder and louder...doctors rush in and push the girls out the way!
You can't let Jo die! You just can't! Hurry up and post the next part!
Jo/Blair_fan
02-11-2002, 08:05 PM
Here's the next part sorry it took so long I was very buisy.
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(Outside the room)
Blair: I’m going to go call Jo’s parents.
Mrs. Garrett: ok.
(At a pay phone in the lobby Blair dials Jo’s parents number.)
Mrs. Polniaczek: hello
Blair: (in a sad voice) Hello Mrs. Polniaczek it’s Blair Warner.
Mrs. Polniaczek: Blair u sound so sad, what is going on?
Blair: well we are at the hospital and Jo has been shot.
Mrs. Polniaczek: OMG is she ok?
Blair: well we’re not sure come up here to St. Mary’s hospital and you will find more out. Bring Charlie too.
Mrs. Polniaczek: ok, I will be right there.
Blair: bye.
Mrs. Polniaczek: bye.
(Back in the waiting room)
Blair: I’m back.
Mrs. Garrett: did you get a hold of Jo’s parents?
Blair: yes
Mrs. Garrett: did you tell her what is wrong with Jo?
Blair: I told them that they would find out the details when she got here I told her as much as I could with out making her too worried to drive.
Mrs. Garrett: Good job Blair, I’m proud of you for being able to make that hard call by your self. As a matter of fact I am proud of all of you for being able to handle the situation we had at the house.
Nat, Tootie, and Blair: thank you.
(3 hours pass and Mrs. Polniaczek walks into the waiting room.)
Mrs. Garrett: Rose thank god you’re here.
Rose: What is wrong with Jo?
Mrs. Garrett: well she was shot in the chest by Blair’s boyfriend…
Blair: ex-boyfriend
Mrs. Garrett: ok ex-boyfriend Jason Patrick. She Jumped in front of Blair so the bullet would hit her instead of Blair. The bullet hit her in the heart and the doctors give her a 15% chance of making it
Rose: OMG!!!
Mrs. Garrett: Jo is strong she will make it.
Rose: I hope so.
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Hope you liked it
Go Courtney!
nicnancy
02-12-2002, 09:05 PM
I Love this You two are definately gifted writers. Post MORE Soon!!!! :wave:
NMK_GG_FAN
02-13-2002, 05:36 PM
heres more!
[its three weeks later and she can go home, but the girls and mrs garret have to care for her]
[jo's in bed and the door opens its blair]
Blair- Listen, Jo, I'm very sorry for not listening to u. You were right i mean i....[starts to weep] I wish i could be like u sometimes, i mean u are soo strong and smart...all i have is looks and guys, in which this time i took it too far...can u ever forgive me?
Jo- blair, god, this did not have to happen. Why am i lying her right now?...huh?...because I was saving u...WHY DID I SAVE U??....[pauses and thinks].....well, i guess u are like a sister to me...how could u not believe me, blair??
Blair- [still crying] i dont no....I dont no....if it could have been me who was shot, im willing to trade, cuz u didnt deserve this, i did..
[jo cuts off]
Jo-no one deserves this...well, i forgive u.....and thanks for taking care of me, i cant wait til i can get out of this bed
Blair- but u cant walk..ur medicine makes u weak, but ull be better in a week or so!....im gunna go down stairs okay? call me if u need?
[blair leaves, jo being stubern, manages to get up and tries to walk...she gets to the door and suddenly falls on the ground]
Jo- AHHHHH HELP HELP HELP
[girls couldnt hear they were in the store]
Jo-PLEASE!!! ahh my heart!!!!! [jo cries]
do the girls hear jo?
do they get there in time?
what happeneds to jo?????????
go denise!!
Ewan's My Man
02-14-2002, 04:46 PM
U guyz have a thing for cliffhangers don't ya?!?! Grrrrrrrr...NEwayzie...post more soon!!!
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
02-14-2002, 05:34 PM
Originally posted by #1JoFan
U guyz have a thing for cliffhangers don't ya?!?! Grrrrrrrr...NEwayzie...post more soon!!!
uh oh, Lauren's "Grrrrrrrrrrrrrr-ing" you better post more before she gets really mad! LOL!!!!!Note to Lauren: I'm sorry, "Jo!"
Jo/Blair_fan
02-14-2002, 08:35 PM
I will try and post tommarow but I'm not promising anything cause i have a lot going on that i didnt know about until today.
BTW Happy Valantimes Day everyone!!!
Ewan's My Man
02-15-2002, 06:46 PM
Originally posted by Charlotte Rae Fan
uh oh, Lauren's "Grrrrrrrrrrrrrr-ing" you better post more before she gets really mad! LOL!!!!!Note to Lauren: I'm sorry, "Jo!"
:rotflmao:!!!!!!! OMG!!! That is too funnay!
Jo/Blair_fan
02-15-2002, 07:16 PM
sorry bout all the name mixups since i am writeing another ff at the time i may confuse the names.
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(In the shop) Nat I’m going to go check on Jo.
Everyone else: ok
(Upstairs)
(Jo is on the floor and she looks pale.)
Nat: (comes in the door) OMG Jo! “MRS. GARRETT”, she yells.
(Mrs. Garrett and the rest of the girls come up the stairs into the room.)
Mrs. Garrett: (sees Jo) Tootie go call 911.
Tootie: (also sees Jo) Ok
Mrs. Garrett: Natalie go get some cold washrags and put them on her forehead.
(Natalie does so)
Blair: I should have stayed up here with her. The second I left the room I knew something bad would happen.
Mrs. Garrett: (not wanting to argue with Blair) Blair, help me wake Jo up.
Blair: Jo, Please wake up fore my sake and everyone’s!
Jo: (weakly) Blair is that you?
Blair: thank god you’re awake!
Mrs. Garrett: Jo, where does it hurt the most?
Jo: my heart.
Mrs. Garrett: I was afraid you were going to say that. You probably tore the wound you had.
Jo: oh (drifts into unconsciousness)
Mrs. Garrett: shoot she is unconscious.
(Paramedics arrive)
Paramedic #1: we will take it from here ma’am. (They began to take her pulse and check everything vital.)
Paramedic #2: we are going to take her down to the ambulance and take her to St. Mary’s. No one can ride since she is so critical.
Blair: ok
(The paramedics take her to the ambulance while everyone else piles into Blair’s car and follows the ambulance.)
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ur turne Courtney
I hope you all liked it.
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
02-15-2002, 07:39 PM
GREAT!!!! GO GO GO!!!!
80skid
02-16-2002, 04:46 PM
keep it up!
don't make me beg, k? :)
nicnancy
02-16-2002, 11:29 PM
You guys are doing a great job. I sure hope Jo is going to be ok!
Write more !!!:typing: :typing:
Ewan's My Man
02-17-2002, 12:29 PM
MORE!!!!!
NMK_GG_FAN
02-17-2002, 03:17 PM
heres more!
[at the hospital in the waiting room. Jo's in ER and her heart stop beating regularly]
[in waiting room]
Nat- deja vu?
Tootie- NO jokes nat
Nat- well, im just as scared as the rest of u...but i will handle it the way i can okay??
Tootie- sorry
Blair-[to herself] why is my life being crushed??
Mrs. Garret-[over hearing] excuse me??
Blair-oh nothing [sighs] what if she dies mrs. Garret?
Mrs.G- she wont.....[long pause].truth is....i dont no if she will, but lets stick together and we'll get through it ...and if we are strong....Jo will be strong and she'll get through it too!
[Doctor looks at them]
doctor- we lost her for a little while, but shes back...and shes in the coma...u can see her....wait are u family?
Blair-well we..umm see...
Doctor- oh so ur not family...cant see her sorry
Blair- wait we are family doctor....whether its.... its blood or not does not matter to us.... the fact is that we've been there for eachother...and whether u believe it or not...she's our family..and i'd like to see.....[pause]...my sister now, because she needs her family
doctor-[sighs and smiles] right this way ladies
[in the room, Jo hooked up to plugs and IVs]
Tootie-[holding back the tears] i no it doesnt look like it......but she knows we're here....she can feel us
Blair-[tearing up] its not suppose to happen this way....u no?...Friends of young age dont watch eachother die...its just not like that...this is not true mrs. garret .....tell me its not for real? [cries on mrs garrets sholder]
Mrs g- i wish i could say something to make this all go away but i cant.....its not easy for me either....its like watching my daughter right there begging and fighting for her life....and we all no parents dont watch their children die.
[started to get dark. All the girls were sleep in Jo's room.]
[mrs garret wakes all the girls up and drove home...the car ride was silent]
[when they got home they went to bed]
[in the girls room]
Blair- im gunna sleep in Jo's bed tonite.....[silence]......I love u guys...i wish i could say that to jo...but i cant.....so im saying it to u..{smiles}... g'nite
[suddenly the telephone rings, everyone gets up and in horror that its the hosptial]
Mrs.g- Hello?
Ur turn denise
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
02-18-2002, 09:01 AM
"You guys have a thing for cliffhangers don't ya?" As Lauren said once! LOL! ANYWAY, you should post more...ASAP........MORE MRS.G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ewan's My Man
02-18-2002, 02:09 PM
Originally posted by Charlotte Rae Fan
"You guys have a thing for cliffhangers don't ya?" As Lauren said once! LOL! ANYWAY, you should post more...ASAP........MORE MRS.G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HEHE!! YEP!!! I totally agree wit u...well...except for the fact that there should be more Mrs G...;)...lol! Ok...NEWayzies...if I said it once I will say it again, "You guys have a thing for cliffhangers don't ya?" Post more peoplez!
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
02-19-2002, 08:42 PM
you gurlz should REALLY post more...I'm dying here........wait a second, maybe those weren't exactly the right words to use!LOL! You know wut I mean!
NMK_GG_FAN
02-20-2002, 05:47 PM
[mrs garret answers the phone]
Mrs G- hello?
Mr. Parker- Edna, I no only two of ur girls are here at Eastland and u dont work here anymore....but...
Mrs. - Do u no how late it is?
Mr. Parker- ya....but um well, we're hosting a dinner tomorrow...can u cook something....by 3:00?
Mrs.G- NO MR PARKER I WILL NOT.....MY...MY...DAUGHTER IS SICK
mr parker- Edna u dont have a daughter?
Mrs.G- yes i do.....Jo is LIKE my daughter...okay.. so i have to go because Jo needs her mother, me
[hangs up...the girls are back asleep...Mrs garret gets her coat and goes to the hospital]
[in jo's room...Hooked up to IV's]
Mrs G-...{reaching over to touch Jo's hand}...im here, hunny...dont worry....{pause}..I no u cant hear me, but I'm proud of u Jo....u are soo strong and yet kind hearted!...I admire u....U girls are my life..u are no longer apart of my Job ...I learn so much from u girls ...I guess i throw myself into my work after u guys were just people who worked in my kitchen {smiles} but i care about u....{teary eyed} Jo dont leave me..i need u just as much as u need me....talk to me, god, let me know u feel me here
Jo-{slightly opens her eyes and and in a very low voice} Mrs. G???....u there?
Mrs. G-{surprised, but Happy} Yes im here jo
Jo-{tears streaming down the sides of her eyes}....Hold me Mrs G dont let go...I love u mrs G....dont leave i need u
Mrs g.- im here darling...Im not going to leave u promise
THATS FOR ALL U MRS GARRET FANS!!! AND NO CLIFF HANGER!!!!
GO DENISE!
Jo/Blair_fan
02-20-2002, 07:43 PM
Good Job Courtney! I know you all want me to post soon but i cant post until friday cause i am very busy until then.
Ewan's My Man
02-20-2002, 09:13 PM
Originally posted by NMK_GG_FAN
THATS FOR ALL U MRS GARRET FANS!!! AND NO CLIFF HANGER!!!!
U mean for Lizzie...she is prolly the only insane one to like Mrs G...hehe...:joke: :joke: :joke:!!! And that's good for the no cliffhangers...NEwayzie...POST MORE SOON!!!
Jinny_JoFan
02-20-2002, 10:58 PM
:wave: YA GO DENISE LOL
Ewan's My Man
02-21-2002, 09:12 PM
Ok...I m replying for Lizzie cause her comp is all screwed up so she can't post! So this is wut she told me to say:
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!! I CRIED, and I LOVE IT THAT THERE'S A BUNCH OF MRS.G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!GO, CHARLOTTE!!!!!!!
That is copied straight from her e-mail! Okies...well...POST!!!
Jo/Blair_fan
02-22-2002, 05:10 PM
Thank You for all the great replys!! I will Post Tonight after i do my Homework(YUCK:mad: )
Jo/Blair_fan
02-22-2002, 09:23 PM
Here's more!
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(Three hours later)
Mrs. Garrett: Jo I’m going to go make a phone call to the girls to tell them you’re awake and that I won’t be home for a while, ok?
Jo: (weakly) ok
(In the lobby Mrs. Garrett dials the girls’ number)
Blair (on other line): Hello.
Mrs. Garrett: hey Blair.
Blair: where are you Mrs. Garrett you have us worried sick!
Mrs. Garrett: well I’m sorry that is had you worried but I decided to come visit Jo this morning about 3am. And I though I would let you know that I am here and that you girls should come down here and visit Jo also. Epically since she is awake! I also want you to call Jo’s parents and tell them so they can see her.
Blair: we will call then we will come down there. Bye
Mrs. Garrett: Bye.
(Mrs. Garrett walks back to Jo’s room)
Jo: Mrs. Garrett? Is that you?
Mrs. Garrett: yea it’s me. The others will be up here soon, along with your parents.
Jo: Thank You.
Mrs. Garrett: why?
Jo: for all the nice things you have done for me. For example: staying with me all night so I wouldn’t be alone.
Mrs. Garrett: I would do that for any one of you girls, you girls are like daughters to me and I will do any thing for you.
Jo: (mischievous smile on her face) any thing?
Mrs. Garrett: let me clarify, any thing appropriate.
Jo: dang it!
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I know this is'nt much but it is all i have hopefully you liked it!
Go Courtney!!!
Ewan's My Man
02-22-2002, 09:55 PM
Originally posted by Jo/Blair_fan
Mrs. Garrett: I would do that for any one of you girls, you girls are like daughters to me and I will do any thing for you.
Jo: (mischievous smile on her face) any thing?
Mrs. Garrett: let me clarify, any thing appropriate.
Jo: dang it!
HAHA!! NEwayz...post more soon!!!
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
02-22-2002, 11:40 PM
Originally posted by #1JoFan
HAHA!! NEwayz...post more soon!!!
YES!!! I was ROFLOL at that part!! Please post more!
BTW, my internet is working fine now!I can post how wonderufl it was!!! That part was, beyond words incredible!I absolutely loved it!
NMK_GG_FAN
02-24-2002, 05:36 PM
heres more!
[its been weeks and jo comes back to her health and is at the house]
[phone rings]
Jo-Hello?
Mr.Klien- Hello...this is mr klien
Jo-yea i no my lawyer!!...u get anything?
Mr.Klien-well, yes, the court date is set, but we need u to testify against the man that shot u
Jo- WHAT?..I MADE THAT MISTAKE BEFORE...AND IT ALMOST GOT ME KILLED...NO...n- n- NO WAY.
mr klien- please..we need to put him away for a long time and u are the person we need for that.....[sighs]...at least think about it okay?..and call me back
Jo-whatever..bye
[hangs up....the girls noticing jo is messed up]
Blair- who was that?
Jo-no one
Nat-it had to be someone
Jo- [annoyed] I SAID NOBODY
tootie- [under her breathe to nat] well, at least shes back to normal
Mrs.G-Girls, can u excuse jo and i...i would like to talk to her alone
[as they start up the stairs]
tootie- somebody is in TROUBLEEEEEEEEE
jo- hey, toot, want me to turn ur face inside out?
Tootie- i think ill pass [runs up stairs fast]
Mrs G- jo, mr klien asked u to testify, right?
Jo- how'd u no?
Mrs. G- i could just tell by ur expression
Jo- yea,... but im not going to do it
Mrs g-[grabbing jo's arms] JO, NOW, I'V NEVER KNOWN U TO BE AFRAID OF ANYTHING, NOTHING.
jo-well, u no what?...maybe u dont no everything about me {pushng away}
Mrs g-WELL, I GUESS I THOUGHT WRONG....I'VE THOUGHT U WERE TOUGH...AND THAT U WOULD DO THE RIGHT THING NO MATTER THE COST
jo-WELL, THE COST HAPPEN TO BE MY LIFE THIS TIME...AND THATS SOMETHING IM JUST NOT WILLING TO GIVE UP
[long pause]
Mrsg- i really believe in u jo....that u could do anything....i admired that...where is the jo that i used to no...ur changing
Jo- i am not...[long pause]...ill do it...but if i do...will u be there
Mrs. G- in the hostpial, didnt i say i would never leave u alone?
Jo-ya {smiles} thanks...im gunna call mr klien and tell him im gunna do it!
Mrs.G-dont call now
Jo-y not?
Mrs G-because i want a hug first!
[they hug]
ur turn denise
Ewan's My Man
02-24-2002, 06:17 PM
Awww...I luved that part!!! Lizzie prolly likes all the Mrs G parts also...haha!!! Post more soon!!!
CharlotteRaeWANNAB
02-25-2002, 08:42 PM
HEY!!It's Lizzie, I probably will NEVER be able to get back on CharlotteRaeFan, cause my main computer's internet isn't working and I always have to use my daddy's lap-top.So, I now have this screen name for that purpose. This is BEYOND WORDS INCREDIBLE!!!!!!OH I LOVE THE MRS. G PARTS!!!!LAUREN WAS RIGHT, for once...dont' tell her I said that!!!LOL!!!!sorry Laudie, but ya know I love ya sis!!Anyway, you girls should post more ASAP!!!!!
NMK_GG_FAN
02-27-2002, 12:32 AM
[on the phone]
Jo-hello?..Mr. Klien?
MrKlein-yes thats i!..is this jo?
Jo-yes....well...
[long pause]
MrKlien-umm....yes??.....
jo-sorry[smiles]...I'm gunna testify
mrklien-Oh jo!!..im soo proud of you...i promise u...we will get u justice!
jo-thank u
mrklien-welcome
jo-no i dont think u understand....thank u for..just being my lawyer and fighting for me
mrklien-[smiles] anytime!..well, im gunna go...see ya monday to go over you tesimony
jo-ill be there!..bye
[they hang up]
[mrs garret comes in]
Mrsg-so...u tell him?
jo-[smiles]yes...and i have to say...im kind of proud tha i did...and that was all because of u, mrs g
mrsg-no no..that was all u jo
jo-we...[mrs g interups and holds up finger]
mrs g-GIRLZ COME DOWN FOR A SECOND
[jo smiles]
[they all come running down stairs except blair]
mrsg-where's blair?
nat-shes brushing her hair
tootie-yeah...shes on number 89 she only has 11 strokes left..then she'll be down
[blair walks down]
blair- miss me?
jo[under her breath] no
mrsg-okay girls, we are going to be going to court soon..and we need to be strong through all of this.....okay?
all-okay
mrsg[smiled][looking at each girl as she called their name] ha..i remember little tootie..skatin' around the dorms...and u little nat always making jokes to lighten the mood in the atmosphere...and little...well, older blair...always admiring herself in the mirror..and little jo always threating blair.....u girls are growing up...[smiles]...i love ya..u know that right?
all-yes, we love u too!
mrsg-so.....to if we get through this [puts hand in the middle...girls put their hands on top of hers] understand we are a team and family.
that sucked sorry
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
02-27-2002, 05:10 PM
Not only did it NOT SUCK....it WAS TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!!!OMG!!!I LOVED IT!!!POst more ASAP!
Jo/Blair_fan
02-27-2002, 06:48 PM
I will post more later but i have to get caught up on some stuff since my net was down for a while.
Ewan's My Man
02-27-2002, 09:06 PM
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!
Jo/Blair_fan
03-01-2002, 05:24 PM
Originally posted by #1JoFan
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!
You wanted more I'll give you more.
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(30 minutes later Jo and Blair are sitting on the couch talking to Nat and Tootie who are each sitting in an armchair.)
Blair: hey Jo how come Jason said remember me when he came in the door? And I know it was not from when I introduced him to everyone or at least I thought it was everyone but you were not there so that rules out that possibility.
Jo: well I might as well tell you about this now. When I was about 15 Jason was in a Gang called The Young Diablo’s which were the roughest gang in the Bronx. And I was not in school at the time and when I was on my over to my friend Jessie’s house I had to go through an ally to get there. On my through the ally I spotted Jason. He’ seemed to be high on something because he looked somewhat like a zombie would, all pale and sagging eyes. Then I saw what he was doing and I froze in my tracks. He holding a woman against a wall and stabbing a knife into her heart repeating his actions over and over again, I swear that when he turned around he saw me I began to run I ran all the way to my Jessie’s apartment. I must of rang the door bell at least 12 times before She answered when I got in I shut the door and locked all the locks. Then I told her a bout what I saw. She told me to tell the cops. I agreed with her we told her mom who had just gotten home and she took us to the police station and I told the cops. They asked me all I knew and then they said that they would catch him. The next day they caught him and found the body. They told me that I had to be a witness in court and that the trial would be the day after that day. I went to the trial and testified. When the jury decided that he was guilty and the Judge said Case adjourned He yelled I am Going to Kill you Polniaczek. I trust you guys not to tell any one. (She looks at Tootie and Natalie.)
Tootie: why are you looking at Nat and I?
Blair: because you two have the biggest mouths in New York.
Nat: I won’t tell anyone.
Tootie: me either.
Blair: Does Mrs. G know?
Jo: yea I told her before I was shot.
Blair: ok, that clears up almost every thing. But there is still the matter of why you took the bullet for me.
Jo: well when he took the gun out he would hurt you guys instead of literally killing me, but he knew that if you guys got hurt would kill me more than a bullet would. So I jumped in front of the bullet so it wouldn’t hit you Blair.
Blair: (has a few tears running down her face)I think I can speak for all of us right now. We didn’t know we mean so much to you.
Jo: yea you do mean a lot a lot to me. I thought you guys knew that.
Blair: we did but we didn’t think it was so much you would put your self in the hospital for us.
Jo: well I didn’t plan to put my self in the hospital, but yea you do mean that much.
Tootie: and you mean that much to us. Right Nat.
Nat: right, Right Blair.
Blair: right.
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How was that??
Ur turn Courtney.
Ewan's My Man
03-01-2002, 09:13 PM
Geesha Beesha (lol, Lizzie)...I need more!!!
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
03-02-2002, 12:47 AM
Originally posted by #1JoFan
Geesha Beesha (lol, Lizzie)...I need more!!!
GEESHA BEESHA LAUREN, you say that WAY TOO MUCH, youare so CRAZIFUL!!! LOL!!!!! YOUR TURN COURTNEY!!!!GREAT JOB DENISE!!!!
NMK_GG_FAN
03-02-2002, 09:23 PM
heres more
[Jo, Nat, Tootie, Blair, and Mrs G. are in Mr Klien's office practicing their tesitmony]
MrKlien-okay you are first Mrs Garret..will u sit right here?
MrsG-sure
Mrklien-okay all u have to do is try to answer all the questions correctly, okay?
MrsG-that shouldn't be hard[smiling]
Mrklien-okay let's start......Mrs Garret, how did u meet jo?
MrsG-well, I was a the school dietition(spell?) at Eastland...and jo became a student there
MrK-well, she was like any other student, right?
Mrsg-umm yea
MrK-well, y do u have such a good friendship with her?
Mrsg-because[small chuckle]well, her and the other girls[motions to the girls] stole the school van and went to a bar.....and because they were under age, stole the van, and assulted a police officer...they were put in jail [nervis laugh] nothing too big
Mrk-so...are u saying joanna marie was a juvenile delinquent?
MrsG-ahh...No...dont put words in my mouth
Mrk-but...u clearly stated she stole the school van, went to a bar and assulted a police officer....am i correct?
Mrsg-well,...i...uh....see....umm....
Mrk-did u or did u not say that?????
Mrsg-[whisper]yes
MrK-what?
Mrsg-I said yes
jo-Oh my gosh, im screwed [covers her face with her hands]
Mrk-sorry for being so mean mrs garret, but thats whats going to happen they are going to try to use reverse psychology.....we'll work on u....okay blair will u stand up?
blair-okay
Mrk-okay blair...are u and jo best friends?
Blair-[trying not to fall into the same trap as mrs garret] YES she is!
MrK-do u ever fight with her?
Blair-never
Mrk-what are you wearing today?
Blair[surprised he asked, but also happy]well, im wearing a baby blue dress blouse from Bloomingdales..yes, u heard right Bloomingdales...I am wearing tan pants...from
[mr klien interupts]
MrK- uhh blair....does jo like ur wardrobe?
Blair-[without thinking] NO she hates all my clothes we argue over it all the time..cuz i want to help her with her clothes, but u no its normal its just another fight.......[notices what she said]...ooopss
Mrk-yes 'oops' is right
Blair-sorry
jo-GOSH, im really screwed now
[nat takes blairs place]
Mrk- would u say u are close to jo?
Nat-close as friends can get!
Mrk-what do u guys do together?
Nat-there was once when we were talking and she threatened..[covers mouth]
Mrk-excuse me?..did u say threaten?
Nat-umm.....i gotta go use the bathroom
[tootie takes nats place]
Mrk-miss ramsey....is it tru that u are the youngest of the girls?
Tootie- that is correct [babbles on like she usually does] and jo was always like a big sister to me...hah like the time that they were all about to get drunk, but they wouldnt let me have some...jo got the beer but dont askwhy cuz all she would say is 'i got the beer alright?' [mocking jo]
Mrk-tootie?
tootie-I no...sorry its a habit i get out of hand
mrk-well, ladies i have another client, but we will finish this later....cuz u guys need work okay?
[they leave the building]
u like it?
ur turn denise
Ewan's My Man
03-03-2002, 09:14 PM
:rotflmao: That part was goooooooood. Ok...well...post more soon!!!
Jo/Blair_fan
03-08-2002, 08:39 PM
I'm Sorry that I couldn't post sooner but i had a lot of stuff to do. I would have posted right after school today but i had a school dance. So here is what you have been waiting for.
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(At the house)
Jo: hey Blair, would you help me with something upstairs?
Blair: sure.
(They head upstairs)
Nat: Mrs. Garrett, do you know what we are having for dinner?
Mrs. Garrett: well we will be having Taco’s and cheese nachos.
Tootie: yum.
Nat: yea!
(Meanwhile upstairs)
Jo: Do u think I be able to make it through this testimony?
Blair: honestly?
Jo: yes honestly.
Blair: yea I think you can as long as we are with you.
Jo: thanks Blair.
Blair: don’t mention it.
Jo: well I better go call Mark and find out what time he is picking me up for out date.
Blair: you are going on a date?
Jo: oh yea I forgot to tell you guys. Mark asked me out yesterday after trigonometry. We are going to see a movie and eat a late dinner.
Blair: you better tell Mrs. Garrett.
Jo: why.
Blair: well she needs to know how much dinner to make.
Jo: you are right. I will tell her right now.
(Downstairs)
Jo: Mrs. G, I am going out to dinner and to a movie tonight so I won’t be here for dinner.
Mrs. Garrett: who are you going with?
Jo: Mark, he asked me out yesterday after trigonometry.
Nat and Tootie: oooooooooh.
Jo: enough with the ooooohing.
Mrs. Garrett: ok what time do you think you will be back.
Jo: well we are going to eat dinner at 7:00 and the movie is at 10:00 and it is a 3-hour movie so probably around 1:30.
Mrs. Garrett: ok.
Tootie: how come her and Blair get to stay out soo late? (Mad)
Mrs. Garrett: we have gone over this before. (Leaves the room)
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Hope you liked it!!
ur turn Courtney!
NMK_GG_FAN
03-11-2002, 04:26 PM
[on mark's and Jo's Date]
[sitting down at the table]
Mark- sooo.......tell me about urself jo
Jo-theres not much to tell [laughes]
Mark-I no there is something special under that toughness
Jo-u no mark....u dont want to be with me
Mark-what?.....y would u think that?
Jo-because Im not in a good situation right now and....and if im not than u arent either and i dont want to bring u into all of whats going on
Mark-Jo...i dont care..im really starting to like u
Jo-i like u too, but I know its best if u dont see me anymore
mark-please dont choose whats good and not good for me jo i think can do that myself...and when i look at u i see something really good!
Jo-u dont understand...okay?....im just going to go okay? bye
[storms out of resturant]
[mark looking puzzled]
[back at the store]
Blair[putting up items]...ohhh Jo how as ur date???
Jo-i dont wanna talk about it
Blair-come on jo spill the details
Jo-I SAID I DONT WANNA TALK ABOUT IT
Blair-okay okay
[long pause]
Jo-we're not seeing eachother anymore
Blair-aww did he dump u??
Jo-[offended] NO, i let him go...im not going to let him get involed wit me...while everything is going on
Blair- this would be the perfect time to say how dumb and bad look, but im gunna be serious....he really likes u..and i think he is willing to be there with u through almost anything..those type a guys dont come everyday...yes i go out on many dates...okay...many many date...but them are like mark
JO-[looks at blair and smiles] thanks blair that mant a lot
Blair- just here to give adivice what im good at........MEN!~
ur turn denise
Ewan's My Man
03-11-2002, 04:57 PM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!
Wild Child
03-11-2002, 05:39 PM
Post more SOOOOON! This is REALLy good! Can't wait for more!
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
03-12-2002, 05:28 PM
HEY MRS. GARRETT???!?!????? LOL...I'm kidding...this is awesome girls~!!!!
Jo/Blair_fan
03-13-2002, 08:49 PM
I will try to post tommarow or friday i have a lot going on with it being the end of our quarter and spring break starting.
Jo/Blair_fan
03-16-2002, 11:45 AM
I know i said that i would try to post yesterday but i became very busy and i can't post untill tommarow im sorry:(
Ewan's My Man
03-16-2002, 01:59 PM
Grrr...ok...I'll be patient...
Jo/Blair_fan
03-17-2002, 05:37 PM
Here's more!!
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(The next day)
(In the kitchen)
Jo: (thinking about if she should call Mark and explain about last night.)
Blair: (comes in the kitchen) hey Jo what are you doing?
Jo: just thinking.
Blair: about what?
Jo: about weather or not I should call Mark and explain about last night.
Blair: You should call him.
Jo: yea I should I’m going to go call him right now! (Dials Mark’s number on the telephone.) Hi Mark?
Mark: Hi Jo, why are you calling?
Jo: I want to explain about last night.
Mark: ok.
Jo: well the reason I said what I said was because I have to testify at a trial because I saved my best friend from getting shot by jumping in front of her and taking a bullet for her. The man that was shooting at her was a man I saw kill another man many years back and I testified against him then and the reason he shot at her instead of at me was he wanted to kill me and he knew that by killing my friends would kill me more than actually killing me. Do you understand that is why I said what I said earlier, but if you still want to go out with me I will be willing to try.
Mark: heck yea I am still willing to go out with you. And I’m sorry that all that had to happen to you.
Jo: thank you. I have two tickets to a bike race this afternoon and I was wondering if you would like to go to it with me?
Mark: sweet! I’ve been trying to get tickets to that race forever. I’d love to go with you. Do you want me to pick you up or what?
Jo: sure that would be great how bout you come over here at 2:30 so you can meet my friends, then we can leave for the race.
Mark: ok. Bye, see you soon.
Jo: bye. (Hang’s up the phone.)
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I hope you liked it!
you're turn Courtney.
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
03-18-2002, 05:11 PM
GREAT!!!!!!!!
NMK_GG_FAN
03-20-2002, 04:46 PM
Here's more
[The telephone rings]
Mrs Garret- Hello??
Man-hey, lady, you and your girls better not tesify, because if you do there are going to be some major problems...so i suggest you leave you house tonight and don't come back until the court drops the case...you understand me?
Mrs G-Oh no, who is this?
[man hangs up phone]
[yelling from the kitchen]
Jo-Mrs. G...who was that?
[Mrs. G doesn't answer, as she stands still stunded from the telephone call]
Jo-Mrs G?
[silence]
Jo-[walks into the living room] I know you heard me...who was it?...[noticing something was wrong]...you okay Mrs. G?
Mrs G-[trying to cover up] Uhhhh.....whew those people always tryin' to sell me stuff, don't they ever get it that I don't want to buy their product [nervis laugh]
Jo-[confused,yet curious] okay whatever you say
[Blair walks in]
Blair-[walks past jo] Mrs. Garret....
[jo interrups]
Jo- the woman is loosing her mind!
Blair-[laughs] Mrs. Garret....
Mrs G- we have to go......now
Jo-what?
Mrs G-[not wanting to tell them, fake smile] want to go on a small vaction?....How about we get hotel rooms downtown and have a girls night out?
Blair-[whisphers back at jo] you are right she is loosing it
Mrs G-no i mean it!...Between school and the store...we don't get anytime to hang out me, you, jo, nat, and tootie...how bout it?
Jo-hey!..I'm game!
Blair- same
Mrs G- NAT, TOOTIE...come downstairs for a quick second
[both running downstairs]
Tootie-you called?
Mrs g- well, see, we...
[before she can get it out
Blair-we're going on a small vaction!!!
Nat-[looks at tootie]are they loosing it?
Blair-nope, we are gunna go downtown and check in a hotel and relax!
Tootie-how long are we staying?
Blair-I don't know, jo?
Jo-hey, don't ask me, mrs garret????
Mrs g-let's not worry about that lets just go!
[they all pack and are ready to go]
What's going to happen at the hotel????
ur turn denise!
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
03-20-2002, 05:21 PM
ROLL CALL!!! I've got my Jo, (Lauren, aka, #1JoFan) ....okay, I'm joking people, don't think I'm weird or anything..lol..I'm just.....Mrs. G....Anyway, this is REALLY AWESOME, so you need to POST MORE ASAP!!
Jo/Blair_fan
03-22-2002, 11:01 PM
Here is more!!!
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(Meanwhile at an old abandon warehouse)
Jason: ok the plan is finished
Harrison (his Lawyer, The same Harrison that tried to take advantage of Jo): Great I can’t wait to get my hands around Blair’s neck and strangle her.
Jason: hold on there we are going to use guns or knife’s so no one will know we killed them.
Harrison: You are a genius.
Jason: I know
(At the Hilton Hotel)
Jo: I can’t pay for a place like this.
Blair: you don’t have to I have a account at all the Hiltons in the world and when I stay at a Hilton everyone I bring with me can stay for free.
Jo: ok I’ll buy that.
Mrs. Garrett: well lets go check in.
Everyone else: ok
(They go to check in. Jo and Blair are sharing a suite. Nat and Tootie are sharing another suite and Mrs. Garrett has her own suite.) Note: each suite is one floor of the hotel.
(In Jo and Blair’s suite)
Jo: wow this is huge!
Blair: I know
Jo: What do you think was wrong with Mrs. Garrett?
Blair: I don’t know but I want to find out.
Jo: yea so do I.
Blair: how about when we are finished packing we go and see what it is all about?
Jo: that is a great idea.
(In Natalie and Tootie’s suite)
Natalie: wow this is as big as the Drummonds penthouse!
Tootie: yea!!
Nat: I wonder how much this would cost.
Tootie: probably a couple thousand per 5 hours.
Nat: that sounds reasonable.
(In Mrs. Garrett’s suite)
Mrs. G: (to her self) I wonder what the girls are thinking of their suites. I wonder who it was that made that call the voice was so familiar, maybe it was Jason? It had to have been him he is the only one who would threaten us. Well I better finish unpacking.
(Knock)
Mrs. Garrett: who is it?
Jo: it’s Blair and me, can we come in?
Mrs. G: sure let me unlock the door for you.
(Mrs. G unlocks the door and lets them in)
Jo: (thinking to herself) now I wonder why she had the door locked in the middle of the day. I know you would do that at a crummy hotel like a motel 6 but at a ritzy place like this where if your clothes don’t cost at least 100 dollars you are low class scum. I should know they looked at me like I was a bum! (Not thinking to her self) Mrs. Garrett we have to talk to you about an important matter. (she takes a seat.)
Blair: (takes a seat near Jo) yea, we wanted to know what that phone conversation was about and who was calling.
Mrs. G: well I guess I should tell you that a man called I’m not sure who it was he didn’t say who it was but I have reason to believe it was Jason.
Jo: what did he say?
Mrs. G: he said that we better not testify or there will be trouble and that we shouldn’t stay in our house until our case is dropped by the court.
Blair: oh my word.
Jo: oh crap, what time is it.
Blair: 10am why?
Jo: thank the lord. I have a date with Mark at 2:30 and he said he will pick me up at the house I better call him and tell him to pick me up, I better call him and tell him to pick me up here I am going to tell him why I am here also. Just to be sure he is not tracking us by phone I am going to go call him from a pay phone.
Mrs. G: ok good idea.
(Jo goes to call Mark)
(At payphone)
Jo: (dials mark’s number) Mark?
Mark: Jo, where are you I have been trying to call you.
Jo: Mark I am at the Hilton.
Mark: (interrupts) why are you at the Hilton.
Jo: (explains everything going on)
Mark: oh. Are you ok?
Jo: yea, I am.
Mark: I am going to rent a room at the Hilton just to make sure you are safe.
Jo: you don’t have to do that.
Mark: I know I don’t have to I want to.
Jo: no, I mean you don’t have to rent a room. Blair has a special account at every Hilton on earth and every person she brings with her gets to stay for free in a suite. I’m sure she would grant you permission to get a free suite. When you come to pick me up we will just stay here and I will help you unpack.
Mark: if you say so.
Jo: good see you at 2:30 in the lobby. Bye Love you.
Mark: love you too. Bye.
(They hang up and Jo goes up to Mrs. Garrett’s room.)
Blair: hey Jo.
Mrs. Garrett: welcome back.
Jo: Blair, do you think that you could get Mark a suite.
Blair: sure, why.
Jo: well he wanted to come and make sure I was safe by renting a room…
Blair: (interrupts) nonsense. I will rent him a suite.
Jo: will you let me finish? Well I told him that and he agreed.
Blair: so when do we meet him for check in?
Jo: 2:30.
Blair: isn’t that when your date is?
Jo: yea he is going to check in and then we are going to go eat at the restaurant downstairs.
Blair: great idea.
Jo: and by the way Mrs. G, you are going to have to tell Nat and Tootie about all of this.
Mrs. G: but this will just freak them out.
Jo: well it’s better that then having them make one phone call and we get killed. It might not be to that extreme.
Mrs. G: yea you’re right.
Blair: well we have to finish getting settled.
(Knock on Tootie and Nat’s door)
Nat: who is it?
Mrs. G: it’s me.
Tootie: come in
Mrs. Garrett: you guys need to know something. I received a phone call this morning and I have reason to believe it was Jason. He said that if we testify something horrible will happen and that we should stay out of our house until the case is dismissed. I called Eastland and told them that you girls were going on vacation and would get your homework when you got back. Also you girls can’t talk on the phone because Jason might be tracking us by it. Jo and Blair already know.
Nat: wow!
Tootie: ok we wont talk on the phone.
Mrs. G: I’m glad that’s taken care of.
(In Jo and Blair’s room)
Jo: I am going to call Mr. Klein and tell him about all of this.
Blair: ok see you in a little bit.
(At the pay phone.)
Jo: (dials Mr. Klein’s number) hello, Mr. Klein?
Mr. K: Jo, is that you.
Jo: yea it is. We are staying at the Hilton right now because of a call that is assumed to of come from Jason.
Mr. K: whoa slow down, now start over and tell me every detail.
Jo: (explains what happened.)
Mr. K: ok, I want you and Blair to meet me in the restaurant in the Hilton tonight at 8.
Jo: ok but why just Blair and I?
Mr. K: incase he is watching us we don’t want to create too big of a crowd.
Jo: good point.
Mr. K: where are you calling from, I certainly hope it is not your room.
Jo: no it is not our room. I figured that they could be tracking us by phone so I am calling you and everyone else that I have to call from a pay phone right out side of the Hilton.
Mr. K: ok, good.
(Meanwhile at the warehouse)
Harrison: they are falling into our trap.
Jason: yes, now we need to pick a time to visit them.
Harrison: time of death 6:30pm.
Jason: now you’re talking my kind of language.
(Back at the Hilton in Jo and Blair’s suite.)
Jo: he said for us to meet him at 8 in the restaurant.
Blair: ok
Jo: well Blair it’s 2:25 I guess we should be heading down to the lobby.
Blair: yea we better.
(Down in the lobby Jo and Blair sit and wait for Mark.)
Mark: Hi.
Jo: hey (goes over and lightly kisses him since they are in public.)
Blair: hello I’m Blair.
Mark: nice to meet you Blair. I’m sure you already know who I am.
Blair: yes I do you are the famous Mark I have been hearing so much about. Shall we check in?
Mark: sure, thank you for doing this for me.
Blair: it is no problem. A friend of Jo’s is a friend of mine.
Jo: (smiles)
Blair: well let me go get you a suite. (She goes to get a suite.)
Mark: (leans over and Kisses Jo passionately.)
Jo: (kisses back then breaks it because of lack of oxygen.) What was that for?
Mark: Because I Love you.
Jo: ahh. You’re soo sweet.
Blair: you’re suite is right bellow ours and there is a spiral staircase that leads up to ours hidden in your closet.
Mark: ok. See you soon. (Kisses Jo bye and goes up to his suite)
Jo: Well we better get back to our Suite.
Blair: yea.
(They go to their suite.)
Blair: hey Jo what do you think could happen to us if they find us?
Jo: well I really don’t know but my first thought would be that they would kill us.
Blair: thanks for the encouragement.
Jo: I’m just telling you the truth.
(They hear a knock coming from their closet.)
Jo: (opens the door and sees mark in only a pair of swim trunks that look incredibly sexy on him and a towel over his shoulder.) Hi, Wow you look good.
Mark: thanks I was wondering if you wanted to come down to the pool with me.
Jo: uhh sure. Let me go change. (Jo goes and changes into her suit, puts on a pair of shorts and grabs a towel.) Ready
Mark: great lets go.
Jo: bye Blair.
Blair: bye. Be back in at least 3 hours.
(At the pool)
Mark: I never told you what I do for a living.
Jo: no you didn’t.
Mark: would you like to know?
Jo: yea sure.
Mark: I am an Olympic swimmer.
Jo: no wonder you look so sexy with out your shirt on. Or even with your shirt on.
Mark: thank you. (Dives in)
Jo: how’s the water?
Mark: perfect.
Jo: (Dives in) it is freezing cold.
Mark: no it’s not it is perfect for swimming in.
Jo: well I am going to believe you since you are the Olympic swimmer.
(Meanwhile back at Jo and Blair’s suite)
(Knock)
Blair: Who is it?
Nat: It’s just Tootie and I.
Blair: (opens the door) Why are you guys here.
Nat: we wanted to talk.
Blair: about what?
Tootie: we don’t know we just wanted to talk. By the way where is Jo?
Blair: Oh she is down in the swimming pool with mark.
Nat: ohhh.
Blair: NATALIE!
Nat: sorry
Blair: It’s ok.
Tootie: so what is going on between Jo and Mark?
Blair: well from what I can tell they are in deep love.
Nat: how deep?
Tootie: yea, like marrying deep?
Blair: not quite marrying deep, but not far off.
Nat: wow.
(Mrs. Garrett’s suite)
Mrs. Garrett: (to herself) I think I am going to take a look around this place and see all that there is to do around here.
(She leaves her suite and first checks out the restaurant. Next she checks out the exercise room. Once she is threw with the exercise room she goes to the pool room)
(In the poolroom)
Mrs. Garrett: hey Jo.
Jo: oh hi Mrs. G. This is Mark.
Mrs. G: hi Mark, it’s nice to meet you after hearing so much about you.
Mark: hello Mrs. Garrett, It is a pleasure to meet you Jo has told me many good thing about you.
Mrs. G: well I better be going, have fun you two!
(Outside of the poolroom)
Mrs. G: (to herself) maybe those weren’t the best words to say. Oh well.
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Tell me if you liked it!!!!
ur turn Courtney!
Ewan's My Man
03-22-2002, 11:34 PM
OMG!!!! MORE!!!
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
03-25-2002, 05:31 PM
Originally posted by #1JoFan
OMG!!!! MORE!!!
ya know, she's got a point!
NMK_GG_FAN
03-26-2002, 03:31 PM
heres more
{It is 6:00, Blair and Jo are in their suite, Mark is in his, Nat and Tootie are in theirs, and Mrs. Garrett is in hers}
{Nat and Tootie's suite}
Tootie- [lying on the bed] Nat
Nat-[writing]what?
Tootie-would you take a bullet for me?.....like Jo did for Blair
Nat-[stops writing and looks up at tootie]hmm....We'll cross that bridge when we get to it
Tootie-[sitting up] no, nat, I'm serious
Nat-I really don't know tootie, you know you're my very best friend, but I don't know if I'm willing to die over you...sorry..are you mad?
Tootie-[smiles]no, i understand because I don't know either
[long pause]
[nat writes again, and tootie lays down again]
tootie-[gets up really fast] nat
Nat-[annoyed] WHAT?
tootie-I just had a really bad feeling in the pit of my stomach
Nat-maybe you ate too much
Tootie-No, nat its not that, its like i feel danger
Nat-[sarcastic] thank you madame zelda, now will you tell my future
Tootie-Nat im serious no joke, lets go in Jo's and Blair's room
Nat-no, you can go, i want to continue to write
Tootie-[smirks at nat leaves room]
{as she leave he clock reads 6:27}
{Harrison and Jason arrive at the hotel}
Harrison-which room is her's?
Jason- I'll go to the clerk and ask
Harrison-how are you gunna get him to give you a room number?
Jason-watch
[harrison smiles]
Jason-excuse me sir...im...uhh...Jason..Warner
Clerk-Warner?
Jason-yes! my sister is here, can you please tell me her room number
Clerk-[looks at him] She has four suites in use here, and i dont know which one she's in
Jason-thats okay, all the suites will be fine
Clerk{tells him}
{Jason goes over to Harrison tells him the numbers}
{They pass Jo's and Blair's room and they go to Nat's}
{They knock}
nat-ahhh, tootie...im coming, im coming [answers door]
Jason-I'm back
Nat-OMG [tries to close door but they barge in]
{MEANWHILE IN JO'S AND BLAIR'S ROOM}
tootie-[out of breath] are...are...you guys okay?
Jo-what?...yeah...why?
Tootie- i dunno, i just have a very bad feeling in the pit of my stomach
Blair-did you eat too much?
Tootie-NO, nat said that
[she walks in]
Jo-speaking of which where is nat?
tootie-she didn't wanna come
[telephone rings]
Blair-who would call us?...Its prolly Mark calling for Jo [smiling, picks up phone] hey mark
Jason-It's not mark, its jason
Blair-[confused] jason?....jason?...jason?....OMG jassssonn
Jason-[yelling to nat] SHUT UP....u hear that blair?...its your dearest friend nat
Blair-Nat..oh no..what are you doing to her? [sobbing]
Jo-what's the matta blair, who is that?
Blair-its....its...Jason and he has nat
Jo and Tootie-WHAT???
Jason-Listen to me
Blair- we hav.....
Jason- I SAID LISTEN...i want Jo at my front door in an half hour, and if she's not, you won't have to worry about seeing Nat again, understand?
Blair-yes....yes.....is she okay
Jason-yes, but she wont be if Jo's not at the door
Blair-[crying hard] lemme speak to her
{jason hangs up}
{phone rings again}
Blair-LEAVE US ALONE JASON
MrK-hello?...this is Mr. Klien....Blair is that you?..You heard from Jason?
Blair-Oh mr Klien i'm sooo happy to hear from you....Jason is here with Harrison and they have Nat under hostage..and...and...just get here NOW okay?..bring the police...hurry we only have 20mins
MrK-wait wait slow down....he's at the hotel?...Ill be there with the police dont worry. Why only 20min?
Blair-JUST GET HERE NOW
Mrk-okay okay..stay put
{they both hang up}
{they all start to hug and cry}
{MEANWHILE IN MRS. GARRETT'S SUITE}
Mrs.Garrett[folding her clothes]
{phone rings}
Mrs. Garrett-hello?
Jo-mrs. garrett...Jason is here
Mrs. Garret-what?..jo?..are you okay are all the girls okay
Jo-yes, except nat...they have her
Mrs.Garrett-What??....Where was Tootie?
Jo-I'll tell you later, but he wants me down there in 15 min....and i have a plan
MrsG-whatever it takes to get nat back, I'm with it!!
ur turn denise
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
03-26-2002, 04:47 PM
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!MORE MORE MORE!!
Ewan's My Man
03-26-2002, 08:32 PM
OMG!!! MORE!!
Swimfan85
03-30-2002, 05:29 PM
POST MORE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON
Jo/Blair_fan
03-30-2002, 06:14 PM
Originally posted by hockeybabe528
POST MORE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON
I will post more tommarow!!
Jo/Blair_fan
04-01-2002, 07:02 AM
here's more!!!
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Jo: ok come up here and I will tell u about it!
Mrs. G: ok (hangs up and heads up to Jo and Blair’s place)
Jo: now the only person I have to call is Mark (dials mark’s number)
Mark: Hello?
Jo: Mark, Jason’s here!
Mark: OMG!
Jo: he has a hostage, Nat. But the rest of us are safe and he wants me upstairs in front of Nat’s suite. But I have a plan so come up stairs so we can discuss it.
Mark: ok Love you bye. (He hangs up and heads up threw the closet secret passage way)
Jo: Ok every one is coming up here, and it will be ok.
Tootie: I am going to go splash some cold water on my face.
Jo: k
Blair: Jo?
Jo: what?
Blair: I’m soo scared; I mean what if one of us gets killed or something? (is all teary eyed)
Jo: it will be ok I have a surefire plan!
Blair: ok.
(They hear a knock coming from their door and their closet door.)
Blair: I will answer the front door ok?
Jo: ok I will go great Mark.
(They go to answer their doors)
Jo: (greats Mark with a passionate kiss.)
Mark: (kisses back then breaks the kiss) well that was a warm welcome.
Jo: thank you.
(Blair and Mrs. G walk over to them)
Mrs. G: where’s Tootie?
Tootie: (comes out of the bathroom) right here.
Mrs. Garrett: ok. So Jo, what is the plan?
Jo: well I planned on me going down there and telling him that I was ready for what ever he had coming while Mark and Blair sneaked up the other staircase that lead’s to Nat and Tootie’s room where he and Nat are and when he answers the door I tell him to let Nat go and when he dose, Blair and Mark will sneak up from behind and jump on him.
Mrs. Garrett: but what if he has a gun?
Jo: easy we will do the same thing except when they jump on him I will steal his gun and hold it at his head until the police come.
Tootie: and what do Mrs. Garrett and I do?
Jo: you two wait in the lobby and tell the cops and Mr. Klein get here then tell them where we are.
Tootie: ok let’s do it.
Jo: for extra protection I bought a knife after he attacked us and I am going to carry it when I go down there, I would of bought a gun but I knew how much Mrs. Garrett hates gun’s.
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I hope you enjoyed that!!
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
04-01-2002, 05:06 PM
Niffty-0!!!! lol.........NIFFTY!!! This is good! Keep Going!
NMK_GG_FAN
04-02-2002, 11:03 AM
heres more
[it was time for the plan]
Blair-[sneaking a knife in her pocket] I'm ready Jo
Jo-this is very brave of you Blair, thank you.........LETS GO
[jo kncoks on the door]
Jason-WHO IS IT?
jo-JO
Jason-your early by two minutes
Jo-the sooner the better right?
Jason-[looks at harrison]..okay here i come
[harrison watches jason,blair sneaks up behind]
Jason-[opens door] We meet again[grabs jo by the arm]
Blair-[jumps on Jason back and holds him down shes on top of him holding the knife to his throat] I swear I will kill you
Jo-[grabs Harrison and holds him with his arm twisted behind this back]
Jason-you dont have the nerve
Jo-[holding harrison] dont do it Blair it's not worth it
Blair-[tears running down her face] YOU'VE GIVEN US THE MOST TROUBLE, I SWEAR ILL PUT AN END TO IT NOW
[suddenly Mrs. Garrett comes running with the police]
Mrs.G-Blair??...what are you doing?
Tootie-Nat!![goes and unties nat]
Blair-ILL KILL HIM, IM NOT AFRAID, ILL STAB HIM RIGHT NOW
Mrs.G-Blair, this goes agaisnt everything I've taught you......u could go to jail
Jo-don't do it blair please
Blair-HE DOESNT DESERVE TO LIVE
Mrs.G-Blair, dont do it...its an order....we did not come this far so you could go to jail
[the police jump and knock blair off of jason...they handcuff jason]
Jo-[punches harrison] I just wanted to do that
[The police handcuff harrison and the police leave]
[blair is on the floor crying]
Ewan's My Man
04-02-2002, 11:59 AM
MORE!
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
04-02-2002, 05:30 PM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!! LOL....this is awesome! GO MRS.GARRETT!!!
Jo/Blair_fan
04-05-2002, 09:54 PM
heres more
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(Mrs. G goes over to Blair but Blair pushes her away (sorry Lizzie) next Nat goes over to Blair then Blair does the same thing that she did to Mrs. G to Nat then to Tootie. Finally Jo comes over and sits down beside her and comforts and holds Blair, while Mrs. G tells the girls to go back to their suites. Mark kisses Jo on the head and says goodbye for the time being. Now it is only Jo and Blair)
Blair: I’m sorry.
Jo: for what, I would of wanted to kill him for what he did I sure as heck wanted to kill Harrison for what he did recently and what he did when we were juniors.
Blair: really?
Jo: yea I did but I didn’t want to go to Prison for murder or get the death penalty I have too much to live for. So do you!
Blair: face it Jo I’m worthless just like you used to say I was.
Jo: no you’re not, don’t believe any of those insults I say their just teasing or ways to get back at you for something you did to annoy me.
Blair: thanks.
Jo: for what?
Blair: for everything! I really do care about you even though I say all of those things I say!
Jo: I care about you too
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I kno that wasnt much but i couldn't think of more to write.
Go Courtney!
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
04-05-2002, 10:42 PM
MRS. GARRETT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MRS. G MRS. G MRS.G!!!!!!!!!!!!LOL....sorry.....I'm a little...wacko.......at least I got an apology...lol.......NEWAYS........POST MORE........MORE MRS. GARRETT!!!!!!!!!!!!lol...I've said it before and I'll say it again, I always think there shoudl be more Mrs. G.....even eps that CENTER around Mrs. G.....lol.......I just like to see Mrs. Garrett in action......
and now that I've made a complete idiot of myself, I'll quit rambling.
Ewan's My Man
04-06-2002, 02:57 PM
MORE!!! This is AWESOME!!
NMK_GG_FAN
04-06-2002, 11:13 PM
Heres more!
[everyone in Jo's and Blair's suite]
[Mrs. Garrett walks over to the window looking hurt]
Tootie-you okay Mrs. Garrett?
Mrs. G-[stunned] Uh....Uh....yes......yes I am
Tootie-okay [walks away]
[Mrs. G can hardly walk to the chair]
Blair-Mrs.Garrett, what's the matter?
Mrs.G-oh......[looks at Blair's face]...I cant lie to you...I havent been well lately
Jo[walks over biting an apple] Hey, What's da matta Mrs. G?
Blair-she's not feeling well
Jo-she's not allowed to be sick [chuckles]
Blair-Im serious jo
Jo-really?....Mrs. G. what kind of ill are we talkin' bout....flu...cold...what?
Blair-Jo, she hasnt been to the doctor she doesnt no
Mrs.G-actually that's where your wrong Blair....see, I've been to the doctor....and he told me what i have
Blair-I don't think i wanna hear this
Jo-so...what he say?
Mrs.G-oh its nothing too bad, i would just need a lot of rest, my blood pressure is up....and to tell you the honest truth this thing with Jason and everything is not making me feel any better
Jo-why didnt u tell us earlier?
Mrs.G-I duno....i guess i didnt want to worry you girls..i mean the trial is soon...and u dont need to have to worry about me too
Blair-but Mrs.G...u worry about us.....let us take care of u...i insist
Jo-yea....its kinda like returning a favor...plus...i could use something to take my mind off this maddness
Mrs.G-u girls would do that for me?
Blair-no doubt about it
Nat-what;s going on?
Blair-we are gunna be taking care of Mrs. Garrett for awhile [smiles at Mrs. G]
Nat-huh?...why?
Jo-[shoots her the famous look]
Nat-no not like that...i mean is there something wrong
Blair-yea, well...she....
MrsG-uhh, Blair, I'm big girl i think i can tell her myself
Blair-hah sorry
MrsG-my blood pressure is extra high...and i need to rest...and these girls insist on taking care of me....u in?
Nat-ofcourse...im gunna tell tootie [leaves]
Mrs,G-i owe u girls BIG
J-No we owe you everything we have.....so just sit back [smiles] relax...and i'll be ur personal..servant
MrsG-reminds me of when Nat begged Tootie to be her slave..haha
they all laugh
ur turn denise
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
04-07-2002, 03:30 PM
GO MRs. GARRETT!!!!!!! whoops.....sorry...I'm a little wacko right now...ask Lauren......... "ITALISISM!!!!" lol Lauren.....anyway............I love the fic! Love that there's Mrs. G.....so, you should like....keep going...
Jo/Blair_fan
04-21-2002, 01:53 PM
I kno its been awhile since i posted but i have been really busy.
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(Mark enters the suite)
Mark: hey what’s up?
Jo: (kisses him) not much.
Blair: we should probably stay here until the trial is over just to make sure nothing happens but now we can make phone calls out of here and go places.
Nat: does that mean that Tootie and I have to go back to school?
Jo: yes it does.
Tootie: (pouts) ok.
Nat: but we don’t know the bus stops out here.
Blair: that’s ok, either Jo or I will drive you.
Nat: we wont both fit on the back of Jo’s bike.
Jo: we wont take my bike we will take Mrs. G’s car cuz she isn’t supposed to be driving.
Mrs. G: right.
Tootie: are you two going to go back to Langley?
Jo: Don’t you remember that we got out of school 4 weeks ago?
Nat: oh yea that is not fair!
Blair: yes it is we start earlier than you. Plus we have been taking night courses so we can get out earlier in the summer.
Tootie: fine then that is fair.
Mark: yea it is.
Jo: Mark do you want to go get a pizza or something?
Mark: sure, lets go. We can take my car; I can also drive them to school.
Tootie: awe you’re so sweet. Good choice Jo!
Jo: thanks Tootie; yea your convertible will be fine.
Nat: he sure can take us to school a convertible will make us so popular.
Jo: Nat!
Nat: fine.
Blair: well you better get going if you want to beat the lunch crowd.
Jo: yea you’re right.
(At the pizza place they are seated and order a pepperoni pizza)
Jo: you never told me where you grew up.
Mark: I was born in Seattle Washington, then moved to Texas when I was 2, I stayed there until I was 8 then we moved to Brooklyn and I lived there until college when I started at Langley, I travel some for the Olympics but only every 4 years. I have to go to LA this summer for them, and I was wondering if you wanted to go with me I have to leave 1 week after the trial, and everyone else can come with us. I have 5 tickets for them and I need to use them up they are for every event. So do you think you can come?
Jo: Yea I can come I don't have anything planned for this summer when we get back we can ask the others. I grew up in the Bronx and then came to Peekskill when I was 16 my mom wanted me out of the neighborhood if I didn’t leave I would probably be the head of some gang right now, but I am glad I left or I would have never met Blair, Nat, Tootie, Mrs. Garrett, and you. My mom put me at Eastland then I continued on to Langley and here I am.
Mark: I’m glad we met during Tech. (Deeply kisses her)
Jo: (kisses back then breaks the kiss) so am I.
Waiter: Here’s you pizza.
Mark: thank you.
(Waiter leaves)
Jo: did you pay upfront?
Mark: yea that is the main reason I like this place you can pay before you get your food so you don’t have to wait for the bill.
Jo: good point.
(30min later they are done eating and back at the hotel in Jo and Blair’s room where everyone else is)
Blair: how was your date?
Mark: it was great. We have a question for all of you.
Jo: How would you like to go to the summer Olympics the week after the trial?
(Everyone looks stunned)
Blair: How did you get tickets if you got them form a dealer by the docks I am not going!
Jo: Mark got them cuz he is participating in the events. And he has 5.
Nat: you are in the Olympics! What event?
Mark: I am in all of the Swimming events. The tickets are for all events and I don't need a ticket to go so I wanted all of you to come.
Mrs. Garrett: well I had nothing planned I will go!
Nat: I will have to check with my parents but I think I can go let me call them.
Jo: that reminds me I am going to call my mom and tell in case she wonders where I am going. I will use the 2nd phone line.
Blair: let me tell my mother and father that I am going and do you guys have a special jet you all go on?
Mark: no we will have to pay for plane tickets.
Blair: nonsense we can take my daddy’s company jet he won’t mind.
Mark: are you sure?
Blair: I will double check with him when I call and tell them. I will use the 3rd phone line.
Tootie: let me check with my parents I guess I will use the 4th phone line be right back.
Blair: Daddy said that we could take his private jet and they don't mind me going.
Nat: I can go.
Tootie: so can I.
Jo: well I told my mom and she was going crazy that I was going out with a Olympic she is thrilled she wants to meet you.
Mark: how about we go up tomorrow since the trial isn’t for another week we could stay for about 3 days.
Jo: sounds good to me.
Mrs. G: just be careful.
Mark: we will (puts his arm around Jo)
Mrs. G: ok.
Jo: I am going to go pack so I can be ready for tomorrow.
Blair: I will help you.
Jo: fine.
Mark: I should go pack also (the three of them go to pack or in Blair’s case help pack)
(The next day)
(Knock on Jo and Blair’s door.)
Mrs. G: it’s us.
Jo: coming (opens the door and lets them in) Hey.
Mrs. G: we just came by to say goodbye.
Jo: thanks.
(Mark walks over.)
Mark: hey. We better get going so we can get there early.
Mrs. G: where are you staying or are you staying at your mom’s apartment?
Jo: we are staying at a embassy suits in Manhattan and commuting in and out, on our bikes we know better than to take a BMW into the Bronx we are also going to Brooklyn to see his father, we will be at my mom’s from the moment we get there until 1pm Tuesday then we will be at his father’s place from the moment we arrive until we will leave there early on Thursday. So we will be gone longer than we originally planed. (Author’s note: the day is Sunday)
Mrs. G: ok. What is your parent’s number Mark, just incase we have to get a hold of you.
James: (574) 243-5694 (Author’s note: made up number) Bye.
Jo: bye
Everyone else: Bye.
(They leave)
(At Jo’s mom’s apartment.)
(Knock on the door)
Rose: coming. (Un-do’s all 6 locks) I can’t get it open.
Jo: let me try it from out here. (Opens it). Remind me to fix that while I’m here.
Rose: ok.
Jo: ma this is Mark Conway.
Rose: nice to meat you. Jo, where are you two staying we are staying at the embassy suites in the city.
Rose: ok. So what has been going on have you had the trial yet?
Mark: Well we had a little encounter.
Rose: what do you mean?
Jo: well (tells her mom the story)
Rose: wow a lot has happened to you guys. And I though Peekskill was safer than her.
Jo: hehe, it is that happens everyday here and just once every 4 years there.
Rose: So Mark, What sport are you participating in?
Mark: Well ma’am I am participating in all of the swimming events.
Rose: please call me Rose, wow how does it feel to be Olympic material?
Mark: it feels great; it is a lot of fun that is why I swim.
Jo: Let me work on the door. (Goes into her room and grabs her old toolbox. Then walks over to the door.)
Jo: (looks at the door and immediately sees the problem.) the only thing wrong is it’s missing a nut.
Rose: that's it?
Jo: yea. Fixed it. Hey mom can you make some pizza?
Rose: only if you two go and get the ingredients
Jo: sure we will be back in 45 minutes.
Rose: k
(Jo and Mark get on their bikes and Mark follows Jo to Big K-Mart.)
(At Big K-Mart.)
Jo: we need a cart.
Mark: k (gets a cart)
Jo: lets go get the ingredients we can find them all on the far side of the store. (They go get the ingredients for the pizza and some sweets, along with some Pepsi, some chips, and some dip, and a case of beer. Then they stuff the goods in the compartments on each of their bikes and head back to Jo’s apartment)
(At the apartment)
Rose: did you get all the stuff?
Jo: yea and some extra stuff.
Rose: like what?
Mark: sweets, chips, dip, Pepsi, and a case of beer, the beer was Jo’s idea.
Jo: are we ready to get cooking?
Rose: I think so. You can start to chop the toppings and grade the cheese and I will make the sauce and the crust.
Jo: k Mark would you start to dice the tomatoes, cut the black olives, and cook the sausage. I will grade all the cheeses, cut the pepperoni, and the green onions. And I will cut the artichoke hart.
Mark: k
(1 hour later the pizzas are done.)
Jo: hey Mark would you grab me a beer.
Mark: sure (gives Jo her beer), what would you like to drink Rose?
Rose: I’ll have a Pepsi please.
Mark: ok (gives her a Pepsi and grabs a beer for himself, and they begin to eat their pizza)
Rose: so when are you two leaving?
Jo: we are leaving at 1pm Tuesday and we will be heading to Mark’s parents house in Brooklyn and we will be there until early Thursday then we will head back to Peekskill.
Rose: sounds good to me. What are you planning on doing while you’re here?
Jo: I was thinking about visiting some old friends and seeing if they named the detention hall after me. Does that sound good to you Mark?
Mark: yea sounds great.
Rose: I’m sure they named the detention hall after you; you probably have the playing hooky the most time’s award to.
Jo: I’m sure I do. When we get done eating how bout we go down to the gym.
Mark: sounds good to me.
(At the gym around 4pm.)
Mark: (is holding the punching bag.)
Jo: (punches it then back fist’s it then jump round house kicks it then tornado kicks it) (authors note: I am in Tae Kwon Do so I know all the kicks and stuff so I may use some names you have never heard of)
Mark: nice roundhouse kick.
Jo: thanks (goes to hold the bag for him)
Mark: (Palm heel strikes the bag then knife had strikes the bag then he goes in with a hook kick then a inside crescent kick, then to finish it off he comes in with a fury of fists.)
Jo: that was a great hook kick.
Mark: Thanks lets move to the bench presses. (They take turns bench pressing while the other one spots.)
Jo: Sparing?
Mark: sure lets go rent some gear.
(They go rent some gear then they put it on and start to spar and Jo kicks Mark’s a$$.)
Jo: whew what a work out. You want to visit one of my friends?
Mark: sure who?
Jo: Jessie.
Mark: k (lets go)
(They arrive at Jessie’s)
Jo: (rings Door bell)
Jessie: (answers the door) Jo?!?!?
Jo: Hey Jessie! This is Mark my boyfriend.
Jessie: nice to meet ya. Come on in.
(Jo and Mark go in)
Jessie: what have you been up to lately?
Jo: I have been busy with school and in the shop and I am always working on my bike. What about you?
Jessie: just the normal going to bars working at the bike shop and take care of my son while my husband works at the Mall as a security guard.
Jo: You have a son? Who is your husband?
Jessie: yea I have a son his name is Tom he is asleep right now and I got married to Mike you remember him?
Jo: Mike, the only person who even stands a chance against me in pool.
Jessie: ya that Mike, he has gotten better at pool you might play against him while you’re here. I will go get Tom. (Jessie goes to get Tom.)
Jo: k, maybe I will.
Jessie: (comes back with Tom)
Jo: awe he looks Just like Mike. How old is he?
Jessie: yea he does. He’s 2 months old he was born April 5th.
Mark: hey Jo weren’t you born April 4th.
Jo: yea, well that is one more card I have to send for birthdays.
Jessie: I heard about that big trial you’re in against that bas**** Jason.
Jo: yea but when the trials over we are going to the Olympics.
Mark: what she means by we is me cuz I am a percipient in all the swimming events and her and Blair, and Natalie, and Tootie, and Mrs. Garrett. Jo I forgot I still have one more ticket stashed away. Maybe Jessie would like to come. If you can that is.
Jessie: I think I can but only if I can find someone to take care of Tom while we are gone, just during the day at night Mike will be here.
Jo: What about your mom?
Jessie: she doesn’t like me being married to Mike so she will refuse.
Jo: well I think my mom might take care of him since she has those two weeks off that we are gone. Let me call and ask her, is the phone where it used to be?
Jessie: yea.
Jo: k. (Dials her mom’s number)
Rose: hello?
Jo: hey ma it’s me we found out we had one extra ticket for the Olympics and we asked Jessie to come but she needs some one to watch Tom her son while she is gone but only during the day Mike her husband can take him at night. So what do u say?
Rose: how old is he?
Jo: he is 2 months old.
Rose: yea I can since I have those two weeks off any way.
Jo: thanks mom. I’m gonna put Jessie on so you two can discuss the details.
Rose: ok.
Jo: (puts Jessie on)
(Rose and Jessie discuss the details)
Jessie: (hangs up) Well it is all settled, I just have to tell mike and I will tell him tonight when he gets home.
Jo: great I will come by and pick you up that Friday we are going to go early so we can see some of LA and we are going to stay at the Hilton next to the Olympic stadium. Don’t worry about the plane tickets we are taking Blair’s fathers private jet and the hotel is free cuz Blair has some sort of deal with all the Hiltons.
Jessie: Wow a Hilton and a private jet.
Mark: oh and the rooms at the Hilton are suites.
Jessie: AWESOME.
Jo: we better be going it’s getting late, I don’t want to be out when all the Gangs come out.
Jessie: why they are all afraid of you.
Jo: yea I know but I just don't feel like fighting right now.
Mark: yea and then I would get brought into it and I don't want to get charged with murder.
Jo: Good point.
Jessie: I see what you mean, call me later Jo.
Jo: sure. Bye
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ur turn courtney.
do you like it?
Ewan's My Man
04-21-2002, 03:44 PM
This is awesome, post more soon!!
NMK_GG_FAN
04-27-2002, 10:43 PM
HERES MORE i was on vaction sorry
[Blair's out shopping, Jo and Mark are at the arcade, Nat is out with friends, and tootie and mrs. garrett are together at the hote]
[back at the hotel]
Mrs Garrett[watching tv] aww I dont feel good
Tootie-[waking up from her sleep] what?...are you ok?
Mrs. Garrett-oh i didn't know you were awake....im fine
Tootie-whatever you say[goes back to sleep]
Mrs. Garrett-AHHHHHH THERES A PAIN GOING UP MY ARM [panting]
Tootie-AHH what???
Mrs. Garrett-TAKE ME TO THE HOSPITAL
tootie-I cant I cant i dont drive
Mrs. Garrett-CALL 911. PLEASE HURRY AHHHHHHHH
tootie-okay [calls tells directions]
Tootie-mrs g hang in there c'mon [crying] Please be okay
Mrs.Garrett-[Panting] did u call 911?
Tootie-[nods because she cant speak]
[911 arrives and takes mrs garrett to the hostipal, tootie rides with her]
[rolling her in ER...Mrs. Garrett is unconsious]
[tootie tries to go in the room, but they push her back]
Tootie-[crying] WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO HER.....LEMME IN...LEMME IN...PLEASE.....LEMME IN
[jo comes in with mark running]
Jo-tootie...OMG...where is she..i heard as soon as i stopped by the hotel...is she okay...what happened...how she get here..where are the other girls?
Tootie-I DUNOO I DUNNO...IM JUST...I DONT NO...IM SCARED JO IM SCARED...SHE...SHE...SOUNED SOO BADDDD......JO
[doctor comes out]
Doctor-Edna Garrett?
[JUMPING UP]
All three-YES
more?
ur turn denise
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
04-29-2002, 05:42 PM
I hate it when you do that! LOL!!!!! I hate it when you leave my hangin'!!!!!!!!! ANYWAYS....POST MORE SOON (and Denise, if you make Mrs. G die, I, the second Mrs. Garrett, will make you worship her!!!! LOL!!JK!!!:crazy: I think i need to check into the looney bin!)
Jo/Blair_fan
05-15-2002, 07:31 PM
Originally posted by Charlotte Rae Fan
I hate it when you do that! LOL!!!!! I hate it when you leave my hangin'!!!!!!!!! ANYWAYS....POST MORE SOON (and Denise, if you make Mrs. G die, I, the second Mrs. Garrett, will make you worship her!!!! LOL!!JK!!!:crazy: I think i need to check into the looney bin!)
yes lizzie you do need to check into the looney bin along with lauren.
heres more!!
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Doctor: well she has 3 clogged arteries and we will have to do triple bypass surgery, which is a very risky procedure.
Jo: what do you mean risky?
Doctor: well about 2/3 of the patients treated with the surgery die
Tootie: OMG are you serious?
Doctor: I’m afraid I am.
Jo: well what is her current condition?
Doctor: she is conscious but very tired, she can have 2 visitors at a time I have already talked to her about the procedure she is willing to take the chance.
Jo: ok, when can we see her?
Doctor: right now.
Jo: thank you doctor.
Doctor: your welcome.
(Doctor leaves)
Jo: Tootie why don’t you go in there right now while I call everyone else.
Tootie: ok (Tootie heads to Mrs. G’s room)
Jo: (goes to a payphone and calls Blair’s car phone)
Blair: hello?
Jo: hey Blair, we have a problem.
Blair: what?
Jo: well Mrs. Garrett is at St. Mathew’s hospital. She had a heart attack.
Blair: OMG. What did the doctor say?
Jo: He said that they are going to perform triple bypass surgery the only problem with that is that only 2/3 of the people who have the surgery die he told Mrs. G about the surgery and she is willing to take the chance.
Blair: I will be at the hospital right away, but first I have to stop by the hotel and leave Nat a note.
Jo: ok Blair see you soon. (Hangs up)
(Jo leaves the phone booth and goes into Mrs. G’s room)
Mrs. G: hey Jo
Jo: hi, so you’re going with the surgery?
Mrs. G: yes Jo I am.
Jo: that's good. Blair and Mark are on their way up here Blair is leaving Nat a note to come here.
Mrs. G: that's good. Do you guys mind if I take a little nap?
Jo: no I don't mind.
Tootie: neither do I.
Mrs. G: (goes to sleep.) (heart monitor flat lines.)
Jo: DOCTOR, WE NEED HELP, A WOMAN JUST FLAT LINED.
(Doctors rush in and one of them tells Jo and Tootie that they have to leave.)
(In the Waiting room)
Tootie: She has to live, she just has to (Starts to sob into Jo’s arms)
Jo: don’t worry Tootie.
Mark: you want to go get a quick bite to eat down in the cafeteria?
Jo: yea maybe food will clear my mind.
Mark: ok lets go is that ok with you Tootie?
Tootie: yea that is fine with me.
(Jo and Mark go down to the cafeteria and get some food for each of them)
Jo: god I hope she makes it I don’t know what I’d do with out her.
Mark: So do I. If she makes you that happy you must love her a lot.
Jo: yea she is kinda like a second mother to me.
Mark: I am here to help you in any way you know that right?
Jo: yea I know that.
(Blair walks into the cafeteria)
Blair: hey Jo, Mark, may I sit here?
Jo: sure pull up a chair.
Blair: so what is going on?
Jo: well while Tootie and I were in Mrs. G’s room she flat lined
Blair: OMG what else?
Jo: that is all we know so far we were just getting ready to head back to see if we could find anything out.
Blair: well let’s go.
(They all go back to the waiting room)
(Tootie and Nat are in the waiting room)
Nat: Tootie just finished telling me all that has happened.
Jo: great, hey Tootie has the doctor come out with any news while we were gone?
Tootie: no not yet.
(Doctor comes out)
Jo: any news on Mrs. Garrett?
Doctor: well we had to perform the triple bypass surgery immediately and we are not sure if it worked we will have to wait over night to see.
Blair: ok when can we visit her?
Doctor: right now she is awake but very weak only one of you at a time can go in.
Tootie: ok.
(Doctor leaves)
Tootie: can I go in now?
(Everyone says ok and Tootie goes in)
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What do ya think????
UR TURN COURTNEY!!!!!!!!
Ewan's My Man
05-15-2002, 09:33 PM
AWESOME!!! POST MORE SOON!!!
NMK_GG_FAN
05-16-2002, 10:39 PM
heres more
[outside in the lobby Jo and Blair are sitting together and Mark and Nat went to get food]
Jo-Blair
Blair-yes?
Jo-im gunna go
Blair-sure....ill tell you when anything happens
Jo-no u dont understand....i have to leave peekskill right now
Blair-what?..jo,...jo thats crazy talk...mrs garrett needs us
Jo-i no i no thats the problem....shes never needed us so much and...and i dont no if i can take the pressure..this case..and this...blair...if...if i dont have time by myself soon...i could kill myself I need to think
Blair-want me to come?
Jo-no....but thanks...i dont need to be alone
Blair-this is nuts jo...
Jo- no whats nuts is the way im feeling right now...i going insane blair
Blair-how are you just going to leave me like that?...we are a team jo...whether u like it or not.....we take care of the other girls...they need us....mrs g needs us...heck, we need eachother y must you leave?
Jo-BECAUSE BLAIR, LOOK AT ME, I DONT NO WHO I AM ANYMORE....i've lost myself.....wheres the old jo...im looking for her and this is the only way i can get her back....i need to help myself before i help anyone else blair im a mess
Blair-[silence] where are you going?
Jo-i dont no...somewhere....im not going to tell anyone....ill come back
Blair-but but but....what am i suppose to tell mrs garrett when she calls out for you?
Jo- tell her.....i love her
Blair-and mark?
Jo-same thing
[gets up and starts to walk to the door]
Blair-JO wait
Jo-yes?
[blair hugs her}
Blair-im going to miss you....take care of yourself and when i see u again, i wanna look at the old jo [smiles]
Jo-I will...take care of everyone for me...dont get too confortable without me because ill be back and fully charged [laughs]......love you blair, bye
[leaves]
{5minutes later]
[mark comes back]
Mark-[holding coffee] wheres jo [sees blair crying]
what what happen you hear bad news about mrs garrett?????
Blair-no.....jo's gone
Mark-she went back to the hotel?
Blair-no...shes gone...and shes not coming back for awhile
Mark-what?...why would she do that?
Blair-she needs to clear her head
Mark-did she say anything?
Blair-yes she said she loves u
ur turn denise
[we could do some of the fic from where jo is too}
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
05-17-2002, 01:37 PM
This is AWESOME!! POst more ASAP!
Jo/Blair_fan
06-09-2002, 12:23 AM
I know it has been a while but i have had terrible writer's block. here's more
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(Meanwhile Jo is sitting in her mom’s apartment on the couch waiting for her mom to get home from work)
(Rose enters the apartment)
Rose: Jo what are you doing here?
Jo: I needed to sort things out for a few days do you mind.
Rose: of course not you’re my daughter. What do you need to talk about?
Jo: (tells her mom the whole thing about Mrs. G and everything and ends up in tears) that is why I came here.
Rose: (comforting Jo) Hunny it’s ok. Don’t worry I’m sure she will be ok.
Jo: But what if she isn’t I’d feel incomplete, I wouldn’t feel the same
Rose: Lets not focus on the what if’s let’s focus on reality.
Jo: thanks mom I feel much better now. I’m going to go for a ride be back later on tonight don’t bother waiting up for me.
Rose: ok.
(Jo heads down to the parking lot and hops on her bike and takes off.)
(2:00 am Jo walks back into her apartment and see’s her mom waiting up for her)
Jo: I thought I told you not to wait up for me.
Rose: have I ever listened to you? You never listen to me so why should I listen to you?
Jo: good point
Rose: so what else did you do besides ride?
Jo: how do you know I was doing something else?
Rose: You can’t ride around for 5 hours. You’d be extremely sore.
Jo: ur right I went and played some pool and won 1,000 dollars.
Rose: 1,000!?!?! That’s great!!!
Jo: yea 1,000, it is a nice amount I came back here to put it in a safe place now I am gonna go back and play some more I haven’t lost a game yet!
Rose: ok just be careful. I’ll see you in the morning.
Jo: ok. See you then.
Rose: (goes to her room and goes to sleep)
Jo: (leaves the house after putting the large amount of money in a safe place while still making sure she had a hundred dollars in her pocket.)
(At the Pool house)
Jo: I win again pay up!
Guy: dang ur getting even better Jo. (Gives her 200 dollars)
Jo: Who’s next?
Rich Guy: I’ll play you for 10,000 dollars if you don't have you don't have to pay me if you win.
Jo: what’s the catch?
Rich Guy: you come home with me tonight if you loose.
Jo: ok. (Knows she will win. And plays the guy)
(30 min later)
Jo: I won pay up.
Rich Guy: You have a good game (pay’s her)
Jo: So do you it was nice playing you.
(3 hours later Jo is at home sleeping on the couch since she was really tired and didn’t want to go all the way to her room.)
(Rose walks into the room and Jo wake’s up)
Rose: I’m sorry did I wake you?
Jo: yea but it’s ok I was about to wake up anyway. You’ll never guess how much I won total.
Rose: How much?
Jo: 14,000 dollars.
Rose: 14,000 dollars?
Jo: yea 14 grand.
Rose: OMG!!! How did you get all of that?
Jo: a rich guy came in and I played him for 10,000 dollars.
Rose: That’s incredible.
Jo: First I’m gonna go pay off college and I should have 3,000 left which I am going to give to you for paying bill’s and for food.
Rose: I don’t need your money.
Jo: Yes you do! You are as stubborn as I am. You need this money I am using all of it that I need. So you can use the rest. I get all the money I need from working in Mrs. G’s shop. And if I’m ever in a pinch I can always go to Blair even though I hate doing that. (Say’s to herself) I’d never go to Blair (normally) so you can have it.
Rose: Ok I’ll take the money. Maybe you should play pool more often.
Jo: I will play some more the next time I visit. Right now I am going to go back to Peekskill where people need me right now. Bye I love you.
Rose: Bye (hug’s Jo) I Love you.
Jo: bye (heads out the door and gets on her bike and ride’s to Peekskill)
(Jo arrives in Peekskill at 10:00am and heads to the hospital. When she arrived she parked her bike next to Blair’s car and headed inside the hospital with the money she won in her pocket.)
Jo: hey Blair.
Blair: your back!! (Hug’s her)
Jo: How is Mrs. G?
Blair: She is still in the ER.
Jo: It’s been 12 hours.
Blair: I know. Where did you go any ways?
Jo: I went back to my mom’s apartment and played pool all night. I won 14,000 dollars I am going to pay off college and I gave the other 3,000 to my mom for bill’s and food.
Blair: That’s great. That was real sweet what you did for your mom.
Jo: thanks. Where is Mark?
Blair: I think he went to get some coffee he should be back any minute.
(Mark enters the waiting room)
Jo: hey baby.
Mark: Your back!!! (Pick’s her up and swing’s her in a circle and end’s it in a hug) I missed you.
Jo: I missed you too. (Passionately kisses him)
Blair: I think I will go get something to eat. (Exits the room)
Mark: (end’s the kiss) where did you go? I was worried about you.
Jo: I went back to my mom’s apartment and played pool all night. I won 14,000 dollars I am going to pay off college and I gave the other 3,000 to my mom for bill’s and food. But I kept $100 for me.
Mark: That was a real sweet thing you did for your mom. Maybe you should play pool professionally?
Jo: I might just do that. Good idea.
Mark: I’ll ask around for anyone who knows how you get to the pro’s.
Jo: ok. I Love you.
Mark: I love you more than life.
Jo: (kisses him deeply and passionately and they start to make out until they remember they are in a hospital and end the kiss)
Mark: that was incredible.
Jo: yea maybe we should continue it at the hotel.
Mark: only if you are sure. I don’t want you doing anything you aren’t sure of or may hurt you in the future. I can wait if you want to.
Jo: yea I’m sure I want to be with you for the rest of my life. I want to marry you someday.
Mark: Speaking of marriage I have something to ask you. (Get’s down on one knee and pulls out a ring) Joanna Marie Polniaczek, Will you marry me I love you with all of my heart if you say no I won’t be mad I understand if you want to wait. (Author’s note: keep in mind this is the summer before season 7)
Jo: (speechless) Let me think about it over night ok?
Mark: ok would you wear the ring on you right hand so I know that you like it? I’m going to go get some more coffee are you thirsty?
Jo: no thanks; yes I will wear the ring on my right hand. (Puts it on)
(Mark leaves and Blair enters)
Jo: (stares at the ring on her right hand.)
Blair: What is that (referring to the ring)
Jo: James asked me to marry him and I told him I’d wear the ring on my right hand while I was thinking of it.
Blair: OMG!! Are you going to?
Jo: I want to but I’m not sure if I am ready I think I am this time. I know I wasn’t last time but this time I think I am old enough and ready for marriage.
Blair: I will support which ever you choose if you decide to marry him that’s great and if not there is always another time.
Jo: thanks Blair.
Blair: you’re welcome. That is a lovely ring, looks like 24 carrot gold. The 5 diamonds are lovely!
Jo: Yea it is a lovely ring.
Blair: I just went and talked to the nurse and they said that Mrs. G is out of surgery and in recovery. The surgery went extremely well and she should be out of here in a week. She is asking for you Jo.
Jo: I wonder why?
Blair: why don’t you go find out?
Jo: I will (goes to Mrs. G’s room)
Mrs. G: Jo, is that you?
Jo: yea it is. How do you feel?
Mrs. G: Great. What is that on your hand?
Jo: Mark asked me to marry him and I told him I’d think about it. I Love him with all my heart and I want to marry him
Mrs. G: but?
Jo: but I wanted to make sure that you didn’t have a reason why I shouldn’t marry him. I think I am old enough to marry him and it will take at least a year for us to get married so we will both be 22 then and I have college paid off for my next two years because I won 14,000 in pool I am about to pay 11,000 to Langley and I gave the extra 3,000 to my mom for bill’s and food so I have money covered. And we can both survive off of his paycheck since he get’s 1million a year since he is an Olympic swimmer. So what do you say?
Mrs. G: I think you should go with what ever your heart tells you I also think you are old enough to get married and your right you can survive on his paycheck. That was a kind thing you did for your mom.
Jo: Thanks Mrs. G!! I’m gonna say yes to him.
Mrs. G: congratulations!!!
Jo: I’m gonna go tell Blair then Mark.
Mrs. G: ok bye when ur done telling Blair can you send her in here?
Jo: Ok bye.
(Jo exits)
Jo: Blair, I’m going to say yes to Mark.
Blair: Congratulations!!! Good luck. :)
Jo: Thanks. Mrs. G wants to see you.
Blair: ok (goes to see Mrs. G while Jo goes to find Mark)
Jo: There you are Mark.
Mark: hey Jo. (Kisses her)
Jo: yes.
Mark: yes?!?!?!?
Jo: YES!!!
Mark: I love you soooooooooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jo: I love you too. (kisses him long and hard then ends the kiss)
Mark: Who else knows besides me?
Jo: only Mrs. G and Blair.
Mark: ok. You want to head back to the hotel?
Jo: that sounds good lets go tell Blair or Mrs. G we are leaving.
Mark: ok (they head to Mrs. G’s room)
(In Mrs. G’s room Blair is finishing telling her everything that has been happening lately)
Jo and Mark: (enter the room)
Blair: There you two are.
Jo: yea. We are going back to the hotel I thought we should let you know so you didn’t worry.
Mrs. G: ok but before you go can I have a word with you mark?
Mark: sure.
Mrs. G: (see’s the girl’s still standing there) alone?
Jo: oh sure let’s go Blair (they go outside the room and get out some glasses and put them to the door with their ear’s to the glasses and figure out the door is sound proof) well this sucks.
Blair: no kidding.
(Back in the room)
Mrs. G: Mark, I just want to know that you will treat Jo right and never hurt her before you two get married.
Mark: I won’t Ma’am I will treat her better than she deserves to be treated and love her with all of my heart.
Mrs. G: (smiles) Ok you two go have fun.
Mark: yes ma’am. Oh and feel better soon!
Mrs. G: thanks. Bye.
Mark: Bye (leaves the room)
Jo: you ready to go?
Mark: yea let’s go. Did you take your bike here?
Jo: yea. We can ride back on it.
Mark: ok hold on. Blair, can you have Nat drive my car back to the hotel? Jo and I are taking her bike.
Blair: no problem. I’ll have her right on it.
Mark: let’s go.
(Jo and Mark leave for the hotel)
(Back at the hotel in Mark’s room)
Jo: (passionately kisses Mark and they head toward the Bedroom (you know what happens next)
(Back at the Hospital)
Blair: now I have to go find Nat!
(Goes off to look for Nat.)
Jo/Blair_fan
06-09-2002, 12:24 AM
do you like it???
your turn courtney!!
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
06-09-2002, 04:08 PM
It's good...I can't wait for more! *HINT HinT COURTNEY!*;)
NMK_GG_FAN
06-20-2002, 11:51 PM
Here's More
Blair-{finds Nat} Hey Nat..Oh my Gosh i have news for you
Nat-I need to really tell u something
Blair-okay you first
Nat-uh..No you first
Blair-go ahead, my news can wait....tell me
Nat-Well, I wanted to tell tootie, but u no how she blabs everything, right?..so im gunna tell u....i think...i....i...have a crush on mark, jo's boyfriend....when i went to get the drinks at the vending machine with him..i dunno...i felt something
{blair looks blankly}
Nat-are you going to same something?
Blair- i cant..i didnt expect that to come out of ur mouth
Nat- yea i no..but I love jo, shes one of my best friends...but i feel stongly about Mark...i mean i can see me with him
Blair-oh
Nat-{sighs} so..what was ur news?
Blair-uhh...{changing what she was going to say}..uh...Mrs. Garrett is doing a lot better
Nat- Great!...(starts to leave, turns around) Should i tell jo?
Blair-NO NO NO NO
Nat-y not?
Blair-uhh...shes...uhh...shes stressed
Nat-right...okay im gunna go to the lobby (leaves)
Blair-Gosh, i need to talk to someone...who?..who?...MRS. GARRETT..wait shes just getting well...i better not
{blairs cell phone rings}
Blair-hello?
{on the other end}
JO-hey, OMG blair i just had the best time of my life
[unenthused]
blair-great
jo-whats the matter
blair-oh nothing [sighs]
jo-u no i hate it when u sigh...tell me?
blair-well.......
ur turn denise
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
06-21-2002, 12:04 AM
THIS IS TERRIFIC!!! POST MORE SOON DENISE!!
Jo/Blair_fan
06-22-2002, 12:04 AM
Blair: Um Nat kinda has a crush on Mark (says quietly)
Jo: (in shock) did u say what I think you said? (Her voice quivering)
Blair: yea she thinks she is in love with him. I’m sorry.
Jo: (in tears) I knew something had to be wrong my life couldn’t once go right could it? Something always has to happen to screw it up.
Blair: (trying to comfort her) Jo, calm down. Don't worry mark loves you and he is two old for her. I didn’t tell her you two were engaged I didn’t want to be the one to break it too her. Maybe if Mark were the one to do it she would realize how much he loved you and that she couldn’t possibly break that love.
Jo: good idea. I’ll tell him
Blair: So u said that ur night was AWESOME??
Jo: Oh yea it was incredible, more than I ever thought it could be.
Blair: that sounds pretty dang good.
Jo: it was good. I have to go. Bye Blair TTYL LYLAS. (hangs up)
Blair: (Hangs up her cell phone (BTW does any one know if they had cell phones back then?)
Jo: (to mark) hey, I have some shocking news for you. Nat has a crush on u she thinks she love’s u.
Mark: does she know we are engaged?
Jo: no she doesn’t Blair couldn’t break the news to he she thought if u broke the news to her she would realize how much in love we really are and she couldn’t possibly break that love.
Mark: I’ll do it. I love you no matter what, and nothing will interfere with it.
Jo: I love you too. U wanna head to the hospital and tell Nat???
Mark: Sure, may as well get it over with.
(They get on Jo’s bike since Mark’s car is still at the hospital and they figured that they may as well just take one bike so that the other can drive his car home.)
Mark: (spots Nat and goes over to her with Jo) Hey Nat we have some awesome news for u!
Nat: (kinda has a dreamy look in her eyes looking at Mark) What?
Mark: (puts his arms around Jo) We are getting married!!!
Nat: (surprised and realizes that they love each other too much and that later on she would ask Jo to ask Mark if he had any single brothers.) WOW, Congratulations!!! When is the wedding?
Jo: well we haven’t set a date or anything he just asked me today. Hopefully by the end of this next school year.
Nat: that's great I will be expecting a invitation.
Jo: don't worry you will get one.
Nat: good.
Jo: can I speak to u alone Natalie?
Nat: sure.
Jo: I’ll be right back Mark (they go off to a waiting room to talk)
Nat: What’s up?
Jo: Nat, u wanna talk to me about something? Like maybe having a crush on mark?
Nat: umm….
Jo: It’s ok, u ok thought?
Nat: yea I am I realized how much you two love each other by the way could u ask him if he has any brothers that are single?
Jo: Sure, I guess if u can’t have him the next best thing is one of his brother’s huh?
Nat: exactly!!
Blair: (comes over and hears the last couple of sentences.) Make that two brothers that are single. (Laughs)
Jo and Nat: (Laugh along with her)
Jo: (sees Mark coming over) Hey Mark, These two want to know if you have two single brothers.
Mark: actually I do.
Nat: Really? Could u fix one of them up with me?
Mark: sure
Blair: and the other with me?
Mark: ok I will. I have one each of your ages.
Blair: well that is perfect the one my age must be ur twin.
Mark: yep.
Nat: how about mine?
Mark: my younger brother is the sweetest guy u ever met and looks just like my twin and I.
Nat: sounds good to me.
Mark: as a matter of fact they are both Olympic swimmers also, and you will meet them next week when we go to the Olympics.
Blair: that’s great.
Nat: yea I can’t wait. Literally.
Blair: (laughs) neither can I.
Mark: maybe I will invite them over for dinner at the Hilton.
Blair: please do.
Nat: I just remembered about Tootie she is going to feel left out.
Mark: not to fear I have a friend that is tall dark and hansom just for her. She already asked me earlier and I told her I had just the person.
Jo: what are these guy’s names?
Mark: Blair’s man is Dane, Nat’s is Paul, and Tootie’s is Jeff (yes the same Jeff she meet’s in season 5 but lets pretend she didn’t meet him)
Blair: What does Dane look like?
Mark: he has just about the same frame as me but he has green eyes and blond hair.
Blair: hansom.
Nat: and Paul?
Mark: he has brown hair but will often spike it or put in a colored jell and spike it. And he has Brown eyes like mine. Same frame also.
Jo: well if they are as hansom as you are I’m sure Nat, Blair, and Tootie will be pleased.
Mark: they will be. Dane and Paul may appear rough at first sight but deep down they are the sweetest guy’s u ever met. If you stay with them long enough that they trust you they will let down their tough guy exterior. Kinda like you Jo. Just don't let their first impression fool you.
Jo: that does sound like me.
Blair: ok if I can become best friends with Jo I can surely go out with them.
Nat: I should be fine I can make friends with just about anybody.
Mark: I’m sure they will both love you.
Blair: I hope so BTW what should I wear?
Mark: Something that doesn’t make you look so preppy just be your self with them like you are with us. Just wear some Jeans and a hoodie and u’ll be fine
Blair: a hoodie?
Jo: a hooded sweatshirt.
Blair: I don't have one of those.
Jo: Well I thought I would never say this, Let’s go shopping and I am doing the choosing of the clothes this time.
Nat: can I come cuz I’m probably gonna need something like that.
Jo: ok, U guy’s wanna go now?
Blair: sure lets go.
Nat: k.
Jo: only problem is I rode my bike here.
Mark: why don't u guy’s take Blair’s car?
Jo: good idea.
Blair: u can drive Jo since u know where you are going.
Jo: k
(They leave)
(30 min later they arrive at a skate shop for the hoodies.)
Blair: where are we?
Jo: we are at a skate boarding shop they have some of the best hoodies and some pretty good jeans. Along with some nice t-shirts. (goes over to the cloths) Btw we also have to get you some shoes I know you don't have any skate shoes.
Blair: I like the blue one with the word element on the front with that little picture of the tree.
Jo: first of all the name is Element and their symbol is that little tree.
Nat: how about the black one with the picture of a hawk skull with some bones around it.
Jo: That would be a Birdhouse Hoodie, good choice.
Nat: thanks.
Blair: isn’t mine a good choice?
Jo: yea it is. I am going to get myself a blind hoodie and a Zero Hoodie and a DC hoodie. Now for jeans Probably some Santa Cruz Jeans would be the best or some World Industries possibly Black Label would probably work well too so would Birdhouse, Blind and Foundation.
Blair: (look’s around) I like these black ones with The Santa Cruz Sign stamped on the side pocket.
Jo: Ok. They are a good choice.
Nat: I found some Blue Birdhouse pants that I will get.
Jo: sounds cool. I’ll get a pair of Black Blind pants (BTW all the pants are skate pants which if u don't know what they look like they are cargo pants that are really loose and baggy that no matter how small u get them u still need a belt!) and I will get some Foundation pants. And some Santa Cruz pants like Blair has. Now for belts, I advise that you get the belt with the same name as ur pants cuz then it don't look to weird.
Blair: ok (finds a belt)
Nat: Sure (also finds a belt)
Jo: (finds her belts and gets some extra in Birdhouse for some of her other pants and some in Element. Now we get some shoes, Etnies and Es are the best along with DC’s. So take your choice.
Jo: (gets some gray DC’s with the word DC on the side in orange.)
Blair: (gets some black Es’s with a blue stripe on the side going all the way around the shoe.)
Nat: (gets some Etnies that are blue with white black laces.)
Jo: ok now you may want a t-shirt cuz it might be hot and u can wear it under your hoodie and take ur hoodie off if you get hot.
Blair: ok (gets a Santa Cruz t-shirt to go with her pants)
Nat: (gets a birdhouse t-shirt)
Jo: (gets a blind t-shirt a foundation t-shirt and a Santa Cruz t-shirt) You may want a wallet cuz a purse wouldn’t really go very well with what you are wearing.
Blair: I can’t believe Jo is giving us fashion advice. Ok I’ll get this Element wallet. Why does it have a chain on it?
Jo: The chain attaches to your pocket or belt loop and that way no one can steal ur wallet with out you noticing and it also looks good.
Blair: ok
Nat: I’ll get this Birdhouse one that matches my hoodie.
Jo: ok I’m getting a new one cuz mine is warn out I almost always get a Blind wallet. I am also getting a new board cuz mine is getting too warn out. (Goes over to the boards and picks up a Blind board that she likes cuz it has good pop, has a nice concave, has a fine grip tape and has a nice set of wheels) you guys can get a skateboard if u want to but I figured you wouldn’t want one.
Blair: I’ll get one. Which one is a good one?
Jo: I’d go with either a Zero or a Blind or a Birdhouse, Element would also be a good choice.
Blair: I’ll get the element one cuz it goes with my hoodie and wallet.
Nat: I guess I’ll go on a spending spree and get one. I’ll get a Birdhouse. (Gets the birdhouse)
Jo: if u have a board ur gonna need a helmet and some pad’s. (Goes over toward the helmets and hats.)
Blair: is their any certain one we should buy?
Jo: not really I normally buy the one of the ones that is the same brand as my board. (goes and grab’s a blue helmet with the blind logo on it.)
Blair: (also gets a blue helmet except it has the element logo)
Nat: (goes and grabs a black helmet with a birdhouse logo on it.)
Jo: now for hat’s u can get one if you want I am. (Grabs a black blind hat)
Blair: (grab’s a black element hat)
Nat: (grab’s a blue birdhouse hat)
Jo: Now for a watch. (Gets a silver blind watch)
Blair: (gets a silver Element watch)
Nat: (gets a silver birdhouse watch)
Jo: now for pads get the same pads as the helmet. (Gets her pads
Blair: (gets her pad’s)
Nat: (gets her pad’s)
Jo: last but not least socks. I advise getting the same brand of socks as you shoes
(They all go and get their socks.)
Jo: Ok that’s it let’s go pay. (Has some money left over from playing pool and pays for her stuff with that)
Blair: (whips out her credit card and pay’s for her stuff)
Nat: (has been saving her money lately and has enough in her account to use her credit card for her stuff)
Jo: ok that's it lets go!
(They all head back to the hospital to show everyone else what they got)
Mark: hey ur back so what did you get?
Jo: (takes some of the stuff out and puts it on some chairs in the waiting room) I got a blind hoodie and a Zero Hoodie and a DC hoodie, a pair of Black Blind pants some Blue Foundation pants. And some Gray Santa Cruz pants. Along with a Blind wallet and a Santa Cruz t-shirt, DC shoes with DC socks and a Blind Board, along with a blind helmet and pad’s, and a silver Blind watch.
Mark: Wow, you think you got enough?
Jo: Yea I do.
Blair: I got (tells him what she got) (I don't want to type everything everyone else got so I am gonna cut them short)
Nat: I got (tells him what she got)
Mark: wow. I’m sure that Dane and Paul will be impressed.
Blair: now what about makeup.
Mark: I’ve seen you with out makeup and you don't look bad with out it why don't you try to go with out it.
Blair: ok
Jo: are you feeling ok Blair?
Blair: yea why?
Jo: you never go any where with out your make up.
Blair: I am going to try a change do you have a problem with that?
Jo: no not at all.
Mark: while you were gone I called Dane and Paul and they said that they would love to go out with you guys and I also called Jeff he wont be in town until next week and that's when he said he and Tootie will go out.
Jo: ok. We can go out while their out or all three couples can have dinner the same time.
Blair: that’s a good idea we could all eat at the hotel it has good food and we can all sit together.
Nat: yea.
Mark: then it is set I’ll tell the guys. They are coming tonight.
Blair: ok.
Jo: what time?
Mark: they said 6:00.
Blair: we better get back to the hotel so we have 1 hour to be ready in.
Jo: ok can u guys take my stuff? I rode my bike here.
Nat: sure. Do you want it in yours and Blair’s room or in Mark’s room?
Jo: Mark’s if that's ok with him I know how long it takes Blair in the bathroom.
Mark: that’s fine with me in that case why don't I just take your stuff so they only have to make one trip?
Jo: ok good idea.
Mark: one more thing Blair, your hair looks best straight down with that smaller curl at the end.
Blair: ok
Mark: lets go.
(They go tell Tootie and Mrs. G about their dates and they leave to get ready)
(Mark’s room which Jo is slowly moving into but not realizing it)
Jo: which pants should I wear honney?
Mark: how about the Blind?
Jo: ok. (puts on the pants along with the belt and wallet then puts on the T-shirt she had in her suitcase that was a blind one and then puts on her hoodie and socks and shoes along with her hat on backwards and last but certainly not least a silver Blind watch) How do I look?
Mark: beautiful.
Jo: you look good too.
Mark: thank you (he has on Foundation pants with a foundation shirt with a Foundation hoodie with DC shoes on and DC socks with a Foundation Belt and a Foundation wallet and with a Foundation hat on backwards and finally a silver foundation watch)
Jo: I’m going to see how Blair is doing ok?
Mark: ok, (Kisses her goodbye)
Jo: (kisses back then leaves) (enters Blair’s and her room)
Blair: hey.
Jo: hi. You look fantastic.
Blair: (surprised that Jo said that she looked fantastic and figured she must really look good in her new look.) So do you. Do I really look that good in my new look?
Jo: I think it looks like it would be more comfortable and practical and yes it does look fantastic on you. Only one thing needs fixing.
Blair: what?
Jo: (goes over and turns Blair’s hat around so it is backwards.) that.
Blair: backwards?
Jo: yep only we have to take it off when we leave the room, but oh well.
Blair: yea. Well we should go check on Nat.
(They leave for Nat’s room that she is sharing with Tootie.)
Jo: (knocks then enters) hey Nat.
Nat: hey Jo, sup Blair?
Jo: I see you have the skater language down.
Nat: yep.
Blair: we were just coming to see how you were doing.
Nat: I’m doing fine, you two look great!!
Jo: so do you Nat!
Nat: thanks. Which way do I wear the hat?
Jo: backwards.
Nat: k but u know we have to take it off when we leave the room right?
Jo: yep we already discussed that. Mark said that him and his brothers will wait for us down in the lobby.
Blair: well what are we waiting for, let’s go.
(They head downstairs)
Jo: (spot’s mark and the other guy’s) (BTW Think tall and handsome for these guy’s I based them off of some really not guy’s I know and believe me they are hot!!!) hey Mark.
Mark: hey baby. Hi Blair hey Nat. Dane, Paul This is Blair Warner (motions to Blair)
Dane: hey.
Paul: nice to meet you.
Blair: hi, you too.
Mark: and this is Natalie, Nat for short.
Dane: hi.
Paul: hello.
Nat: hey.
Mark: and my fiancé Jo.
Dane: hello
Paul: we have heard so much about you it is nice to finally meet you.
Jo: hey, I have heard a lot about you guy’s too.
Mark: ready to go and eat?
Blair: hey I was thinking about we eat with our date tonight so we can become better acquainted then we can all eat together?
Dane: I was kinda thinking the same thing.
Nat: so was I is that all right with you guys?
The others: yea
(They are all seated.)
(Dane and Blair’s table)
Blair: so your Mark’s twin?
Dane: yea I’m the oldest I was born 5 minutes before him.
Blair: that’s cool.
Dane: Mark told me you were beautiful and he was lying you are gorgeous. I haven’t known you very long but I have a feeling you are that way on the inside to.
Blair: Thank you. Mark told me you looked good but not as good as him well he was wrong, you look much better than him. He looks good but you look marvelous.
Dane: thank you, do you know what is good to eat here? I have never ate at a Hilton before.
Blair: Well the ________ (put in a name I don't know of any meals that the Hilton has) is very good.
Dane: then I will have that. I think I can trust your judgment you sound like you eat here a lot.
Blair: yea my family has a special deal that when ever any of my family or friends stay at a Hilton they can get a free suite, or as many as they need.
Dane: wow your family must have a lot of money. But let me say one thing, I will never love you for your money only for your self.
Blair: (can tell he is a special guy) thank you. All the guys I normally date go out with me so they can get a hold of my money. But you, your different your special. Thank you.
Dane: your welcome. So what do you do in your spare time?
Blair: What spare time, between college, working in Mrs. Garrett’s shop and fighting over closet space and the bathroom with Jo, Nat, and Tootie I don't have much time but normally it is just hanging out or shopping.
Dane: who is Mrs. Garrett and I think I heard of Tootie Isn’t that the girl that Mark said he would fix her up with Jeff?
Blair: Yes, when Jo, Nat, Tootie and I were at Eastland (tells the whole story of how they came to live with Mrs. G and how they stayed together.)
Dane: wow, you guys must really be close.
Blair: yea we are. What do you do?
Dane: well I am in college at Langley. I was at NYU but I moved over to Langley this year. For money as Mark has already told you I am a Olympic swimmer and I also race motocross and get 32,000 for every race I win that is a small race for the bigger races events I get paid more. Right now I am looking for a place to live in Peekskill. I saw a nice looking place above a office next to the place you said you worked Edna’s Edibles?
Blair: I have seen those they look awfully nice.
Dane: yea they do I’m seriously considering moving in there. I think I will I am going to take one last look there tomorrow then I will probably buy one. When I do get it my brother Paul the one you met earlier will probably move in next door to me and Mark is moving in across from me.
Blair: well that sounds good to me. Maybe that way we can see each other more often
Dane: yea hopefully we can.
(Waiter comes over and they order their meals (BTW they are both having water to drink)
(Nat and Paul’s table)
Nat: so Paul what do you do?
Paul: I’m going to be attending Langley in the fall. And Mark probably already told you what I do for a living.
Nat: yea he did. I am also going to attend Langley (BTW u know how Nat didn’t attend Langley during season 7 well I’m changing that) this fall, and I work in a gourmet food shop with Jo, Blair, Tootie, and the owner and long time friend.
Paul: I think I have heard of Tootie, is she the one that is going to go out with Jeff?
Nat: yea she’s the one.
Paul: cool. So where do you live?
Nat: I live above the food shop we have a up stairs we live in along with the back of it which is a living room.
Paul: nice, I think my brother was looking at a place next door to that shop is it called Edna’s Edibles?
Nat: yea he must be looking at the apartment above the office below it.
Paul: yea I am probably going to move to that building in the room right next door to him and Mark will be across the hall.
Nat: great idea.
(The waiter comes over and they order)
(Mark and Jo’s table, they have already ordered and have their food)
Mark: I’ve been meaning to ask you this, would you move in with me?
Jo: yes. How much privacy would we get if we stayed where I am at now.
Mark: that’s great and I am moving to a apartment right next door to the shop I’m moving in across the hall from where Dane and Paul bought apartments so you will still be near everyone.
Jo: You are such a sweetie.
Mark: thank you. How is your food?
Jo: delicious. Yours?
Mark: Simply Devine. So how was shopping with Blair and Nat?
Jo: pretty good. It’s better when I take them somewhere they aren’t used to the types of clothes sold. The kept asking me what to get which is why they look so good tonight.
Mark: you did a lovely job.
Jo: thank you.
Mark: what do you say we go to a movie after dinner?
Jo: sure sounds good. What movie do you want to see?
Mark: doesn’t matter we probably wont see much of it anyway.
Jo: your right.
(Back to Dane and Blair’s table they have received their food and are finished eating and waiting for their bill.)
Dane: would you like to go for a walk in the park after we get our bill?
Blair: that sounds great I cant tell you the last time I have walked in the park.
Dane: well your going to have to tell me how to get their considering I don't know this town extremely well.
Blair: ok. Did you drive here or take a cab from the train station?
Dane: I drove here in my corvette.
Blair: ok
(Now at Nat and Paul’s table they have also waiting for the bill, and Nat has told him all about Mrs. G being in the hospital)
Paul: after we get the bill you wanna go see how your friend Mrs. Garrett is doing? I would really like to meat her.
Nat: that sounds great.
Paul: ok I brought my car with me.
Nat: oh really what kind of car.
Paul: it’s a blue mustang convertible.
Nat: wow! Nice!
Paul: thanks.
(every one has received their bills and told the others where they were going.)
(Dane and Blair’s walk threw the park)
Dane: you have the most beautiful eyes.
Blair: thank you. You are the tallest man I have ever dated and I think I like it.
Dane: thank you. I heard you and everyone else has to participate in a trial?
Blair: yea (explains everything)
Dane: Wow. I’m sorry you all had to go threw that.
Blair: so am I, but it will all be over in a few days.
Dane: that's good. Look at those stars they are beautiful.
Blair: yea they are. I think I am falling in love with you.
Dane: I have been falling in love with you from the moment I laid my eyes on you.
Blair: (kisses him at first it is a gentle kiss but soon turns deep and passionate.)
Dane: (kisses back and finally ends the kiss) you are the best kisser I have ever met.
Blair: you aren’t so bad your self hot stuff.
Dane: thanks.
Blair: (shiver’s) it seems to have turned a bit chilly out
Dane: (takes his coat off and puts it on Blair)
Blair: thank you. Are you going to be warm enough?
Dane: yea I will be all that matters is you.
Blair: you are so generous and gentlemanly.
Dane: Thank you.
(Nat and Paul visiting Mrs. G and Tootie)
Tootie: it’s nice to meet you Paul.
Paul: you too Tootie.
Mrs. G: it’s a pleasure to meet you.
Paul: the pleasure is mine I have heard many great things about you.
Mrs. G: well I would love to know more about you.
Paul: (tells her about him self)
Mrs. G: well you sound like a great guy. If you two will excuse me I am getting kind of tired and am going to go to sleep now.
The others: ok (leave)
(Jo and mark’s date)
Jo: (kissing mark deeply in the back of the theater and then breaks it) what is this movie about anyway??
Mark: (kisses Jo and then ends it) I don't know. All I know is I am having a good time.
(they go back to what they were doing)
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SO?????????
ur turn courtney. BTW courtney you know where the character of Dane came from. (raises eyebrows)
Ewan's My Man
06-24-2002, 11:58 PM
I luv this fic!! It rox!
Denise...think you wrote enuf?
Jo/Blair_fan
06-25-2002, 12:56 PM
Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
I luv this fic!! It rox!
Denise...think you wrote enuf?
I'm not sure Lauren!! I think i should of wrote more but if i did i would of probably never stoped writeing!!!!!!
NMK_GG_FAN
06-26-2002, 11:49 PM
Here's More!
{Blair and Dane are in the park cuddling}
Blair-Dane?
Dane-yes?
Blair-You know how I'm starting to fall in love with you and all?
Dane-[chuckles] yea?
Blair-I'm not completely honest
Dane-about?
Blair-this isn't how I dress...I'm not like this...I wear dresses and designer shirts and stuff like that..are you still going to like me?
Dane-haha Blair do you actually think your clothes matter if I like you or not?
Blair-well....?
Dane-well it doesnt {smiles} just lay on my shoulder and enjoy the night
Blair-{smiles} it would be my pleasure
{a couple of minutes pass}
Dane-ahh Blair?
Blair-yes?
Dane-I haven't been that honest myself
Blair-try me!
Dane-I think you should know this because, well, I like you a lot and I really see us together in the future
Blair-yes same!
Dane-and....
Blair-just tell me it cant be that bad
Dane-well, there was this girl I liked a lot...and...and...
Blair-thats not bad there were boys I liked a lot too
Dane-no no..thats not all
Blair-{smiles} well get to the point slow storyteller
Dane-{big sigh} she got pregnant...and I made her have an abortion.
Blair-[speechless] wha..wha..what?
Dane-I made her have an abortion, you dont understand... it was....i wasnt ready to be a father..I had to worry about myself
Blair-is that all you do, worry about yourself?
Dane-No No...that was then, this is now...what we have is...is..different than my situation then
Blair-and the girl?
Dane-what?
Blair-what happened to the girl?
Dane-she didn't want to see me anymore...I'm not sure what's going on with her now a days
Blair-would you do it again?
Dane-do what?
Blair-kill the baby?
Dane-I didn't ki.....
Blair-yes u did [teary eyed] I knew this couldnt be perfect
Dane-but..but it is perfect..I love you...and NO i wouldn't do it again...Please don't leave me Blair...I felt we were on a level where we could be personal with each other..and..and..and I'd rather you know now what kinda jerk you were liking..
Blair-[sighs} ur not a jerk, Everyone makes mistakes right
Dane-but..[starts to cry] but this was the biggest mistake
Blair-[hugs him] my biggest mistake would be leaving you
Dane-do you mean that?
Blair-{nods}
Dane-Gosh, you are perfect for me..I need someone like you..I've never cried to a girl before..this has to be special
{they both laugh as they wipe their tears}
Blair-[smiles]
Dane- I could stay here with you forever
Blair-Sorry to break your wish Prince Charming, but Mrs. Garrett is going to get worried [smiles and kisses him]
[Mark and Jo are talkin in their suite]
Mark-hey my beautiful wife
Jo-hey hubby!..I never thought I'd say that haha
Mark-haha...so when are we going to start to have children, I want some asap
Jo-huh?...no way..im totally not ready
mark-no?..c'mon I want kids while we're young and we can handle it!
jo-but I don't wanna have kids, now
Mark-why not
jo-cuz i dont..Mark we're just engaged
Mark-thre has to be a reason...and I'm talking bout when were married
Jo-i dont have to tell you my reason
Mark-Im ur husband
Jo-and?
{silence}
{they both laugh}
Mark-look at us
Jo-yea kinda silly huh?
Mark-our first fight as a soon to be married couple
Jo-yea
Mark-lets not talk bout this now...lets go to bed okay?
Jo-agreed!
ur turn denise
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
06-29-2002, 11:29 PM
this is totally awesome girls!!!:):):):):)
Jo/Blair_fan
07-03-2002, 11:23 PM
(Meanwhile at the hospital Blair and Dane walk into Mrs. G’s room)
Mrs. G: Hey Blair who is that?
Blair: Mrs. G this is Dane, Dane this is Mrs. Garrett.
Dane: It is a pleasure to meet u I have heard a lot about you.
Mrs. G: well it is nice to meet you to. Do you live in Peekskill?
Dane: I am moving to Peekskill this week. I have transferred to Langley and am going to move into a apartment next door to your shop my brother Paul is going to move in to the place next to mine and Mark is going to move in across the hall.
Mrs. G: that is great
Blair: I know!
Dane: Have you met Paul yet?
Mrs. G: yea I have. He is as nice of man as you.
Blair: sorry to cut this short but we have to go
Mrs. G: that’s ok I’ll talk to you later.
Blair: ok see you soon bye.
(Blair and Dane leave the room)
Dane: she is a very nice lady.
Blair: Yea she is. (Passionately kisses him)
Dane: (kisses back and deepens the kiss.)
Blair and Dane: (end the kiss at the exact same moment and pull into a deep hug)
Narrator: It has been 1 week and Blair and Dane have been seeing each other almost every second the have free until it is time to go home and sleep. Paul and Nat have hit it off and are also seeing a each other every spare moment. Mrs. G who is now out of the hospital and is living at home with everyone else since they had the trial and everything went as planed and Jason and Harrison went to jail for life sentence. Jo has told Mrs. G and the girls about moving in with Mark and they are working on packing her stuff and moving it next door. Tootie has met Jeff and they are becoming close as they go on dates almost every night.
(The house Blair and Dane are sitting on the couch talking while everyone else is upstairs.)
Dane: Blair I know I barely known you for more than a week but I love you and (gets down on one knee) I want you to marry me I will understand if you say no-
Blair: Yes I would love to marry you I love you sooooo much!!!!
Dane: I love you too!! (kisses her) now for the next question do you want to move in with me?
Blair: yes lets go upstairs and get packing.
(they head upstairs)
Jo: hey why are you guys up here I though you hated packing.
Blair: Dane and I are getting married and I am moving in with him.
Jo: (hugs her) That’s great!!!
Blair: Thanks.
Mrs. G: That is Wonderful! How about you and Jo have a double wedding?
Mark: that’s a great idea.
Dane: yea.
Jo: If Blair agrees I will.
Blair: I will if you will
Jo: ok then it is settled we will have a double wedding.
Blair: Lets get packing!
(They pack all of Jo and Blair’s stuff and move it in to Mark and Danes apartments.)
(Dane and Blair’s apartment)
Blair: now to unpack (u can imagine how much stuff Blair has to unpack)
Dane: do you want any help?
Blair: sure. Lets start with my clothes. (the unpack all of Blair’s clothes)
Dane: what next?
Blair: how about make up.
Dane: ok. (They unpack Blair’s make up)
Blair: I can get the misc.
Dane: ok I’ll go make us some dinner.
Blair: ok. (When Dane goes and cooks dinner Blair begins to unload the misc.
(Jo and Marks apartment)
Jo: well now that every thing is unpacked and Mrs. G will let me keep my bike in her driveway we are threw.
Mark: good why don’t we go see how Blair and Dane are doing.
Jo: ok lets go
(doorbell rings at Blair and Dane’s apartment)
Dane: I’m coming. (opens the door) hey come on in we were just about to start dinner want to have dinner with us.
Mark: ok.
Jo: If that is ok with Blair.
Blair: It’s fine with me.
Jo: ok do you want any help?
Dane: I think Mark and I can cover it.
Jo: ok.
Blair: I’ll go show u the apartment.
Jo: sure. Lets go.
Blair: (takes Jo to the bed room)
Jo: wow nice decorating.
Blair: thanks.
Jo: so how is it working out so far.
Blair: Great. U?
Jo: Swell. I think this is going to be perfect.
Blair: so do I.
Mark: (calls) Dinner.
(Jo and Blair head to the table and every one eats dinner.)
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What do u think?
ur turn courtney
Ewan's My Man
07-03-2002, 11:31 PM
AH! THAT's SOOOOOOOO SWEET!
Post more soon!
NMK_GG_FAN
07-04-2002, 02:52 PM
Great Job Denise
Here's more
(7:00pm Blair and Jo are at a table planning their double wedding)
Blair- I wouldn't imagine in a million years that I would be getting married, and never the less a double wedding with you!
Jo-{chuckles} I'm havin mixed signals, was that an insult?
Blair-No NO....haha...I'm just so overwhelmed!
Jo-well, are you ready?
Blair-ofcourse I am..He is the type of person I've been looking for, for my whole life!
Jo-well, that is good enough to convince me that you love him!
Blair-ha..okay..let's get planning
Jo-I'm thinking we do it on the beach, barefooted..{dreamy smiles}
Blair-sounds great, expect one problem
Jo-we can wear shoes
Blair-no not that...uhh...I was thinking more of a traditional wedding
Jo-no beach?
Blair-no beach, sorry. But we can compromise, you can pick the flowers that we use in the church...uhh..and the...the colors!!
Jo-I hate flowers, I don't wanna pick those
Blair-[under breath] thank god
Jo-excuse me?
Blair-nothing
Jo-but i would {rubs hands together}love to pick our colors
Blair-[nervous]..and those would be??
Jo-Black and uhhh...Blue
Blair-pretty,we were blue dresses?
Jo-no we wear the black!!
Blair-what?..I refuse to be apart of a wedding with Black dresses
Jo-..and I refuse to be apart of a wedding in a big church and not on the beach...and plus i dont wanna wer black dresses, I was kidding, but now i see your true feelings
Blair- I don't care..I'm not having a barefooted wedding on some sand..sorry but it just doesnt float my boat
Jo-well, you don't have to be apart of mine
Blair-u don't even have to COME to mine
Jo-fine
Blair-Fine
{they both storm out the room}
{Blair storms out the house door, and Jo by accident storms into the bathroom}
JO-[comes out] *to herself* Did I just storm into the bathroom?..I'm losin' it
{at Blair and Dane's apt}
Dane-[kisses her] how'd it go?
Blair-not so well...Jo wants a beach wedding, with..with no shoes...and I want a traditional wedding in a big church
Dane-Personally I like the beach wedding!
Blair-WHAT?
(Mark and Jo's apt)
Mark-so...how's our lovely wedding going?
Jo-its not so lovely
Mark- y not?
Jo- Well, Blair wants a traditional wedding and I wanna beach wedding with no shoes
Mark- I kinda liked a traditional wedding
Jo-WHAT?
(Blairs apt)
Blair- I know who will fix this lil' problemo
Dane-who?
Blair-Mrs. Garrett
(flashes to Jo's apt)
Jo-hmm..what am i gunna do...oh yes..I no the perfect person for this
Mark-who?
Jo-Mrs. Garrett
(It is 10 o'clock now Jo is knocking on the store door and Blair is knocking on the front door, both not knowing the other is at the door}
Mrs. garrett(coming down stairs) I'm coming I'm coming {hears the store door, goes towards it...then hears the other door and goes towards that..and back and forth, she finally decideds and opens the front door}
Blair-Mrs. Garrett we need to talk
Mrs. Garrett-wait (goes and opens up the other door)
Jo-Mrs. Garrett we need to talk
Mrs. Garrett-deja vu
Jo-huh?
Mrs. Garrett-go look into the living room
JO-(goes in) What are you doing here Blair?
Blair-what are you doing here, jo?
Jo-i asked you first
Mrs. Garrett-Gurlz
Blair-(not paying attention to Mrs. Garrett) I dont care..answer me
Mrs. Garrett- Gurlz
Jo-I dont have to answer you
Mrs. Garrett-GURLZZZZZZZ
Jo and Blair- what?
Mrs. Garett-let's sit and talk
(they start towards to the kitchen)
kinda left ya hangin sry...but go ahead denise!!
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
07-04-2002, 09:21 PM
I LOVE IT!!! IT's......GREAT!!
Ewan's My Man
07-04-2002, 09:30 PM
Originally posted by Charlotte Rae Fan
I LOVE IT!!! IT's......GREAT!!
Ditto
Jo/Blair_fan
07-07-2002, 11:39 PM
(In the kitchen)
Jo: What are you doing here? (question directed to Blair)
Blair: I have come to ask Mrs. G too solve this wedding problem. U?
Jo: same.
Mrs. G: well, what is exactly the problem?
Blair: well Jo wants a beach wedding with no shoes and I want a traditional wedding
Mrs. G: well how about you have the wedding in a church and have the reception on a beach?
Blair: I will agree to that.
Jo: so will I, I knew that u could figure this out Mrs. G.
Blair: so did I.
Mrs. G: thanks. Why don’t u call Dane and Mark and tell them.
Blair: ok (gets out her cell phone and calls Dane while Jo gets out her cell phone and calls Mark)
(five min later)
Jo: ok it is settled. Now what will the colors be?
Blair: how about blue and black and White.
Jo: ok I’ll do that.
Blair: now for my specialty dress shopping.
Jo: how about we discuss this later?
Blair: ok.
(meanwhile Nat and Paul are having a romantic dinner at Paul’s apartment)
Nat: this food is delicious.
Paul: I’m glad you like it.
Nat: I didn’t know that u could cook.
Paul: well I have always enjoyed cooking. Nat I have something to ask you.
Nat: (unsuspecting voice) What?
Paul: Natalie Sage Green I love you with all of my heart and always will I know that it is kinda soon but Will You Marry me?
Nat: YES!!!!! I have to tell Blair Jo and Tootie I will be right back first I have to go over there.
Paul: ok I’ll do the dishes while you are gone.
Nat: ok. See you soon hunney.
(Nat runs over to Mrs. G’s place where Jo, Blair, Tootie and Mrs. G are.)
Nat: You’ll never guess what happened!
Jo: what Nat?
Nat: Paul asked me to marry him.
Blair: what did you say?
Tootie: she had to of said yes, So did you say yes?
Nat: yes I did.
Tootie: why don’t you guys have a triple wedding?
Nat: I’m game if you guys are.
Jo: sound good.
Blair: I would love to do it. Lets ask the men. (calls Dane and tells him to get the other guys and come to the house.)
(guys arrive)
Mark: what is going on?
Dane: yea?
Paul: explain.
Blair: well when Nat told us that her and Paul were engaged we thought it would be great to have a triple wedding we all agreed now we need you to agree.
Dane: I’m ok with it.
Mark: ok I’ll do it.
Paul: I’d love to. Btw Nat, would you move in with me?
Nat: I would be honored to.
Paul: (hugs her) I love you sooooo much.
Nat: I love you too. Tootie, I want you to be my maid of honor.
Tootie: I would be glad to.
Jo: Well we had better be going see you guys later. (Jo and Mark leave)
Blair: We should be going too. Bye. (Dane and Blair leave)
Nat: We have to be back also I’ll see you later (Paul and Nat leave)
Tootie: I have a dinner date with Jeff tonight I will be back by 12:30 ok?
Mrs. G: ok
Tootie: who are you and what have you done with Mrs. G? You never let me stay out till 12:30.
Mrs. G: you are growing up and you deserve to have some space.
Tootie: thank you. (goes and gets ready then comes back down stairs.)
Mrs. G: when will he be here?
(door bell rings)
Mrs. G: I guess that answers my question.
Tootie: (answers the door) Hey Jeff.
Jeff: hi Tootie are you ready to go? Oh hi Mrs. Garrett.
Mrs. G: hey Jeff.
Tootie: I’m ready.
Jeff: What time do you want her back by?
Mrs. G: 1am.
Tootie: (eyes widen then gives Mrs. G a big grin) Thanks Mrs. Garrett.
Mrs. G: no problem. Now go have a good time.
(Tootie and Jeff go on their date)
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So what do you think?
Ur turn courtney. BTW great job on ur post!
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
07-08-2002, 09:55 PM
Originally posted by Jo/Blair_fan
So what do you think?
Ur turn courtney. BTW great job on ur post!
I LOVE IT!!! Your turn Courtney!! Post soon!!
NMK_GG_FAN
07-09-2002, 11:27 AM
great job Denise!!
(early the next morning)
Nat-*calling Blair* Hey Blair
Blair-*rubbing her eyes* gosh nat, do you know what time it is?
Nat-yes...but really, I need to talk to you okay?..Let's meet at the Coffee Shop on Luntz street.
Blair-*sighs* Fiinnneee...I'll be there in 5
Nat-bye
Blair-yea whatever!
Nat-*calls Jo*Hey Jo
Mark-uhh no this is Mark
Nat-well can I speak to Jo?
Mark-she's asleep and who is this by the way?
Nat-Natalie...and I dont care if shes sleep wake her up
Mark-well, she's not the happiest person when she is woken up?
Nat-Mark, I've lived with her for..I don't know how many years, don't you think I know that? *smiles*
Mark-*smiles* I guess..okay..*yells* Jo...Jo...wake up
Jo-*evil look on her face* what??
Mark-You have a telephone call
Jo-Soo..you woke me up for a telephone call?
Mark-its nat
Jo-I don't care if its the President, I don't wake up for telephone calls..why didn't you take a message
Mark-well, she seemed serious
Jo-Fine Fine...Gimme the phone...What Nat?
Nat-well, you can go back to sleep I guess it's not THAT important
Jo-NO NO NO im up now...whadda want?
Nat-Meet me at he coffee shop on Luntz street
Jo-fine
(at the coffee shop)
nat-hey blair hey jo
Blair-yea..yea what is this about?
Nat-wanna order some coffee?
Jo-I did not get out of bed to order coffee, now tell us what's going on with you!
Nat-fine fine...I-I-I can't marry Paul, sorry for ruining you guys' wedding plans *frowns*
Blair-Don't worry bout the wedding, worry about your happiness...why don't you wanna marry him?
Nat-it's not that I dont love him, cuz I think I do
Jo-so..the problem iss...?
Nat-I'm just not ready to tie the knot...it's deeper than you know
Blair-how deep?
Nat-DEEP.....something i couldnt tell you...the real reason why I cant marry him is just too awful to talk about
Jo-you can tell us
Nat-I just-just cant say it..*looks at watch* uh..i got to go..I just wanted to tell you guys about this before I tell Paul tonight at dinner
Blair-why didnt u ask tootie?
Nat-well, Jeff and tootie got home late last night about 1 o'clock...I didnt wanna wake her
Jo-*sarcasim* how nice of u...oh btw thanks for waking ME up
Nat-*laughs* sorry bout that..I just needed to tell you guys
Blair-we understand dont we jo?
Jo-*says nothing*
Blair-*nudges her* I said DONT WE jo?
Jo-yea yea i guess we do *smiles*
Nat-I have to get going..are you guys leaving?
Blair-no we're going to stay and have something to drink
Jo-we are?
Blair*gives her a look, and talks between her teeth* yes we are
Nat-suit urselves, byebye
Jo-c-ya
(nat leaves)
Jo-what was that all about?
Blair-I wonder why Nat wont marry him, he's a nice guy and all
Jo- i no i no
Blair-There has to be a deeper meaning to all of this and i'm going to find out
Jo-*puts hand up* u no better than dipping into peoples business
Blair-but she's asking for it...y would she tell us
Jo- i dunno..i do kinda wanna find out..well, lets just got to the elvis chapel of love and get married this is all too much work
Blair*smiles* shut up jo!
(at Mrs. Garrett's house)
tootie-*comes down stairs* Hey Mrs. G
Mrs.Garrett-well, goodmorning love bird
Tootie-hahahah
Mrs. Garrett-Why dont u bring Jeff over to dinnner...just me u and him?
Tooite-GREAT thanks...I'll call him!
Ur turn Denise! ( i always throw in a curve sry)
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
07-09-2002, 04:29 PM
AWESOME!!! Post more ASAP!!
blair_and_jo_fan
07-12-2002, 08:14 PM
I love it! Its so awsome and sweet
-Mandy:cool:
Jo/Blair_fan
07-17-2002, 03:35 PM
Tootie: (on the phone) yea Jeff just u me and Mrs. G.
Jeff: ok sounds good. What time do you want me to come over?
Tootie: Mrs. G said about 7.
Jeff: ok I’ll be there.
(they hang up)
(Meanwhile at Jo’s apartment her and Blair are talking)
Blair: why wouldn’t Nat want to marry Paul?
Jo: I don’t know lets just call her and invite her over and force it out of her.
Blair: ok.
(Jo calls Nat and tells her to come over)
(doorbell rings)
Jo: come on in Nat.
Nat: (enters) what did you guys want to talk about?
Blair: we’re worried about you. Why wont you marry Paul was it something he did or something you did or did you guys fight what?
Nat: nothing like that. I’m pregnant (crying)
Jo: WHAT??????????????????????????
Nat: I’m..
Jo: I heard you I just don’t believe it.
Nat: well believe it (still crying)
Blair: why are you so upset about it?
Nat: because it isn’t Paul’s
Blair: who’s is it?
Nat: I don’t know. About a month ago when I was on my way back to the hotel this guy grabbed me and pulled me behind a building…he raped me. (sobbing while Jo comforted her.)
Blair: I am so sorry. Have you told Paul yet?
Nat: no he doesn’t even know that I am going to call off the marriage.
Jo: tell him before you officially call it off.
Nat: why he will hate me and surely wont want to marry me.
Blair: maybe he will maybe he loves you enough to go threw this with you talk to him before you call it off. Why don’t you go talk to him right now.
Nat: ok. I will (she leaves for hers and Paul’s apartment)
(Nat and Paul’s place)
Nat: I have something to tell you.
Paul: what?
Nat: (holding back tears) I’m pregnant.
Paul: that’s great why are you so upset?
Nat: because it’s not yours just about a month ago I was on my way back to the hotel a man grabbed me and pulled me behind a building and he…he raped me (sobs) I understand if you hate me and don’t want to marry me.
Paul: I don’t hate you I love you, and I still want you to marry me.
Nat: but what about the baby?
Paul: I am willing to raise it like it was my own.
Nat: I love you. I’ll be right back I have to go tell Blair and Jo about this.
Paul: ok I love you too.
(Nat is over at Blair and Jo’s she just told them what Paul said)
Jo: that’s great Nat.
Blair: so the wedding is still on?
Nat: yea. It is.
Jo: so have you been to the doctors yet to find out if it is a boy or girl?
Nat: yea I have it is a boy.
Blair: what do you think you would like to name him.
Nat: I was thinking of Devin or Justin or Dustin, Josh, Chris, Jacob, Matt, Jake, Andy, Jerry, Grant, Bryan, Ryan, Kyle, and Michael, Doug, Frank, or Vern any of those appeal to you?
Jo: I Like Dustin, Jacob, Bryan, and Kyle.
Blair: I like Jacob, Bryan Grant and Kyle.
Nat: ok so Jacob Bryan and Kyle are the 3 number 1 choices and grant and Dustin are the number 2’s. I liked Jacob, Bryan and Chris the most.
Jo: you still have to talk to Paul about them.
Nat: I know. I will I just thought I would ask you guys while I am here, I still have to ask Tootie also.
Blair: ok.
Jo: so any more big news?
Nat: nope.
Blair: well, Dane and I are thinking of having kids. You know how I have always wanted a family.
Jo: yea. I know how you want one. So do I. But I think we are going to wait until after we are married.
Blair: yea same here.
Jo: speaking of marriage. When do we want to have the wedding like what date?
Nat: how about July 4th?
Jo: that’s a great Idea we have to see if a church is free that day.
Blair: Let me make a call to this really nice church just down the street form Here. (calls the church)
Blair: (hangs up after talking to some ppl) Well they are free I reserved it for us even before the guys say yes because it is a very popular date.
Jo: ok lets get the guys over here. (calls Dane who had Mark and pail over and tells them to come over to Her and Mark’s place.)
(The guys enter)
Dane: what do you girls need?
Blair: we have a date for the wedding how about July 4th?
Mark: that is fine with me.
Dane: I’m game.
Paul: I love it.
Blair: great because I already reserved the church.
Nat: how do you guys like these names for the baby? (authors note Paul told Dane and Mark about the baby) I was thinking of Devin or Justin or Dustin, Josh, Chris, Jacob, Matt, Jake, Andy, Jerry, Grant, Bryan, Ryan, Kyle, and Michael, Doug, Frank, or Vern any of those appeal to you?
Paul: I like Jacob, Doug, and Justin.
Mark: I like Chris, Josh and Jacob.
Dane: Jerry, Jacob and Bryan appeal to me.
Nat: ok all of the most popular names are. Jacob, Chris, Josh, Doug, Justin, Jerry, Grant, Bryan, Kyle, Dustin. Now every one pick two out of all of these.
Jo: Jacob and Bryan.
Blair: Jacob and Bryan.
Nat: Jacob and Chris
Dane: Jacob and Bryan.
Mark: Jacob and Josh.
Paul: Jacob and Doug.
Nat: how about we name him Jacob Bryan Swick (Swick is Paul’s, Mark, and Dane’s last name)
Jo: I like it.
Dane: Lovely.
Blair: magnificent.
Mark: awesome.
Paul: I love it hun.
Nat: good.
Paul: (talks to Nat’s stomach) How do you like that little guy?
Nat: (laughs)
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So do u like it?
ur turn courtney.
NMK_GG_FAN
07-26-2002, 12:04 PM
Great Job Denise
Here’s more!
(Jeff, Tootie, and Mrs. Garrett are sitting at the dinner table eating)
Jeff- this dinner is spectacular, Mrs. G. I want to thank you once again for letting me come over!
Mrs. Garrett- it’s my pleasure, Jeff. You are a nice boy.
Tootie- we haven’t had that much time to talk, Jeff. Tell me about your family. What are your parents like?
Jeff- I don’t want to talk about it.
Tootie- why don’t you want to talk about it?
Mrs. Garrett- because he doesn’t Tootie.
Tootie- come on it can’t be THAT bad!
Jeff- (getting angry) fine, you want to know? My parents were both killed in a car accident. (eyes getting teary)
Tootie- (speechless) I’m sorry I didn’t know.
Jeff- I think I’m going to go. Thanks again Mrs. Garrett. I’ll call Tootie. (storms out)
Tootie- what did I say?
Mrs. Garrett- when he didn’t want to tell you, you shouldn’t have asked again.
Tootie- gosh, now he’s going to dump me
Mrs. Garrett- he just needs time to clear his head, okay?
Tootie- you’re right!
(at Mark and Jo’s house)
Mark- Jo! Jo! Where are you honey, I have great news!
Jo- I’m in the kitchen
(goes into kitchen)
(they kiss)
Mark- I have great news!
Jo- Great! What is it?
Mark- Since I was a little boy
Jo- Here goes a long story!
Mark- Funny! Anyway, I’ve always wanted to go to UCLA, but they didn’t send back my acceptance letter.
Jo- and?
Mark- I GOT IT TODAY, JO! I’m so happy, honey!
Jo- (fake smile) Are you going to go?
Mark- Are you kidding, of course I am!
Jo- What about me?
Mark- you can come with me!
Jo- and attend what school?
Mark- you can apply someone or just stay home for a while!
Jo- I’m not leaving my friends and family.
Mark- I’m not passing up this lifetime offer either.
Jo- are you willing to go there instead of staying here with me?
Mark- Jo, don’t look at it that way. I’ve wanted to go there since I was a little boy!
Jo- but…but we’re suppose to get married, and have a family!
Mark- we’ll still get married. Just after I leave school, unless you want to come and stay with me.
Jo- I can’t believe you’re doing this.
Mark- gosh, Jo I thought you would be happy for me.
Jo- I am. It’s just that I thought this was going to be perfect.
Mark- I promise it will be!
Jo- I’m just supposed to wait for you until you come back from LA?
Mark- Yes. What’s the problem?
Jo- What if I meet someone, or nevertheless you meet someone?
Mark- I don’t know.
Jo- What does this mean?
Mark- I’m not sure.
Jo- is it over?
Mark- no! It’s just a break I guess.
Jo- A break?
Mark- Yea.
Jo- when are you leaving?
Mark- I leave in a week.
Jo- how often are you going to come home?
Mark- I’ll come and visit after every semester.
Jo- (wipes tear) Well, if this is our last week together (puts on devilish smile) Let’s have a little fun!
Mark- I’m your clay, do whatever you want to me!
Jo- (smiles) I have something in mind (leads to the bedroom)
(You know what comes next!)
(After everything has happened, Jo goes to the bathroom and discovers she pregnant)
(Mark is still sleep, so Jo calls Blair)
Jo- (whispering) Blair, I’m in a load of crap.
Blair- why are you whispering?
Jo- I am whispering because Mark is asleep.
Blair- oh okay. What is the trouble?
Jo- Mark is leaving to go to UCLA, and we were going to be on a break, right?
Blair- Okay, I got it.
Jo- And so we, you know, because he’s leaving in a week. Following me?
Blair- Yes. Why is he leaving you, I thought that he loved you more than anything.
Jo- No! Let’s not get into that. We’ll talk about that later, but there’s something more important.
Blair- what is it?
Jo- I’m pregnant.
Blair- (stunned) you mean baby pregnant?
Jo- Yes I mean baby pregnant.
Blair- Well, do you want the baby?
Jo- I haven’t really had the time to think about that. I’ve just been thinking about how and if I’m going to tell Mark.
Blair- First of all. You have to tell him. Second of all, would you like to have the baby?
Jo- why are you so tough on if I want the baby or not?
Blair- I just found out, I can’t have children. So, babies are blessings and I would love to have one. You’ve been given this privilege of having our own little angel.
Jo- I’m so sorry about that, Blair.
Blair- yea me too.
Jo- Do you and your husband want children?
Blair- we want children more than anyone I know.
Jo- Wow. Well, Blair, I have to go because Mark is waking up. We’ll talk later, okay?
Blair- (sniffles) okay, bye!
Mark- who was that?
Jo- Blair. Mark…..
Your turn Denise!
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
07-26-2002, 10:42 PM
GREAT!!:):):):)
Jo/Blair_fan
07-29-2002, 11:20 PM
I'm glad you like it sooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Mark: yea? What do u need sweetie?
Jo: (decides not to tell him at that moment) Blair just told me that she can’t have children and I feel so sorry for her.
Mark: that’s terrible and I know how much she and Dane want kids.
(phone rings)
Mark: (answers) hello?…… yes….ok I’ll be on the next plane out….bye.
Jo: what was that? Why do you have to be on the next plane out?
Mark: that was the duke of UCLA the want me there today. I’m sorry hun but I have to leave.
Jo: (tears in eyes) ok I’ll be making breakfast while you pack. (tear slips down cheek and Jo walks out of the room to make some eggs)
Mark: (sees the tears in her eyes and feels guilty but was stubborn enough to keeps packing)
Jo: (making breakfast while trying to figure out if she should tell him about the baby.) (to herself) I wont tell him right now maybe I can use it as something to cheer him up after a hard semester.
Mark: hey baby. (kisses her) is breakfast ready?
Jo: yea (says with no expression)
Mark: (eats breakfast) I have to go now I’ll make sure to call you everyday I don’t care how much it costs but I’ll be sure to think of you all of the time. Just remember I always love you. (kisses her deeply)
Jo: (kisses back) (tries not to cry) I love you too and I’ll be waiting for u to call. Bye.
Mark: bye. (grabs his suitcases and leaves)
Jo: (runs to Mrs. G’s place) (rings the doorbell)
Mrs. G: (answers the door and sees Jo with tears streaming down her face) Jo hunney what’s wrong?
Jo: (tells her where mark went and what he is doing)
Mrs. G: well do you love mark?
Jo: yes with all my heart.
Mrs. G: does he love you?
Jo: He has to.
Mrs. G: then there you have it he will come visit you besides remember its only 2 years.
Jo: the only thing is, Mark and I kinda had a personal going away party if u know what I mean and……..I’m pregnant (tears in eyes)
Mrs. G: well do you want the baby.
Jo: I really don’t know.
Mrs. G: Think about it have you told Mark?
Jo: no. I guess I thought it would be like a surprise for him when he came home from a long semester. Mrs. G I don’t think I’m ready to be a mother. I hardly was around mine she was gone working during the time I was home and when she was home I was gone.
Mrs. G: well Blair came by earlier and told me she couldn’t have a baby. Maybe just maybe you could go threw with the pregnancy and Blair could adopt your baby and when the time is right you and Blair could tell him or her.
Jo: I like the idea. I’ll call Blair (calls Blair and tells her to come over)
(Blair enters the door)
Blair: what do u guys need?
Jo: well Mrs. G came up with the idea that since u can’t have children maybe I could go threw with this pregnancy and you could adopt the baby?
Blair: I love it. But what about Mark what would he say.
Jo: I don’t know I didn’t tell him. (looks away)
Blair: so he doesn’t know?
Jo: no he has no clue and never will I don’t plan on telling him.
Blair: well that will be hard to do when the child grows up and wants to know who her dad is.
Jo: we can cross that bridge when we come to it.
Blair: ok I’ll go talk to Dane (goes to hers and Dane’s Place)
(1 hour later at Mrs. G’s place Jo, Blair, Dane, and Mrs. G are sitting in the living room discussing all the details of the adoption process.)
Jo: ok so it’s settled.
Blair: ok.
(Tootie Enters with Jeff)
Tootie: Jeff and I have made up!
Jo: (smiles) that’s great Tootie!
Blair: (smiles) that’s good!
Mrs. G: I’m happy for you.
Jeff: thanks.
(Four Months pass and Jeff and Tootie have been going steady Nat and Paul are working their way threw Nat’s pregnancy. Dane and Blair keep thinking about the new baby that will soon be brought into their lives. Now Jo is a whole other story she had been depressed lately since Mark isn’t around and everyone is worried about her and the baby. They have found out that the baby is a boy, Her and Mark talk every day but it just isn’t the same for her. Mrs. G has been helping Jo threw her tough times and is also helping Blair get ready to become a mother.)
Jo: (gloomy look) Mrs. G, I don’t feel very good do u have any Advil?
Mrs. G: yea but I am taking you to the doctors and we are going to check and make sure everything is ok.
Jo: (too sick to argue) ok lets go.
Mrs. G: (drives her and Jo to the hospital)
(the hospital, Jo has been taken to a room and tests are being run.)
(1 hour later)
Dr. Bentley: Jo Polniaczek?
Mrs. G: yes. (stands and walks over to the doctor)
Dr. Bentley: Jo has had a miss carriage. She is ok. She is in room 344 if you have any questions please ask.
Mrs. G: (worried about how Jo is doing) no I don’t have any.
Dr. Bentley: ok if any thing comes up please have one of the staff page me my name is Dr. Bentley.
Mrs. G: ok thank you
Dr. Bentley: Your welcome (walks away)
Mrs. G: (goes to Jo’s room)
(Jo’s room)
Mrs. G: how are you doing hunney?
Jo: (softly crying) I’m fine.
Mrs. G: you don’t cry when something’s fine tell me what’s wrong.
Jo: I’m mad at my self for letting this happen. Why me?
Mrs. G: well I guess God wanted it this way. (comforts Jo and lets her cry)
Jo: the doctor said I have to stay the night for observation could you go home and tell Blair I don’t know if I’m up to telling her.
Mrs. G: ok I’ll be back soon ok?
Jo: ok (goes to sleep)
Mrs. G: (leaves for home)
(at home)
Mrs. G: Blair, I have some news for you. You’d better sit down.
Blair: what is it about (sitting down)
Mrs. G: well I noticed Jo wasn’t feeling well and I took her to the hospital and she had a miss carriage and the doctors said she would have to stay overnight.
Blair: (obviously sad but not as sad for the baby as she was for Jo) I guess that’s how it was meant to be then. I think we should call Mark and tell him everything. Maybe he will come back and bring her out of depression.
Mrs. G: this is the first one of your Brilliant Ideas that might actually be brilliant!
Blair: thank you. (calls Mark tells him about the baby and the miss carriage and how much Jo is really missing him)
Mark: well is she ok?
Blair: yea, she’s devastated but ok.
Mark: so that is why she was even more sad than possible when I left. The miss carriage was probably my fault if only I had been there.
Blair: It’s ok I just think it may be a good idea for you to come back to Langley for Jo’s sake she isn’t as cheer full or as happy as she was when you were around.
Mark: then that settles it I’m coming back.
Blair: ok. I wont tell Jo we bring you out as a suprize.
Mark: I’ll be down tonight.
Blair: that’s great. I’ll tell everyone else.
Mark: ok I’ve got to go or I wont be able to be there by tonight.
(They hang up and Blair calls everyone else and tells them about what happened and who’s coming back)
(5 hours later the door bell rings)
Blair: Mark! Hey!!! (gives him a hug) we missed you.
Mark: I missed all of you guys too. I have to get to the hospital to see Jo I just wondered if any one else wanted to go?
Blair: We have all already seen her It’s you turn.
Mark: ok I’ll see you later.
(the hospital Mark is standing in front of Jo’s room.
Mark: (enters) Hunney I’m Home!!!!!!!!! (I just love that line)
Jo: Mark!!!!!!!!!!! I thought you were in LA?????
Mark: well Blair called me today and told me everything and I figured I should stay with you. I’m going to go back to Langley. UCLA was too far away from you. I was miserable every day.
Jo: I love you soooooo much!!!
Mark: I love you soooooo much too!!!
Jo: (hug’s Mark tightly then kisses him)
Mark: When can you leave?
Jo: well they want to keep me over night but I really hate hospitals and want to leave.
Mark: well I think it is probably best if you stay but how about I ask if I can stay with you?
Jo: ok that will work (smiles)
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how do you like it????
your turn Courtney!!!!!!!
BonniesLilCutiePie
07-30-2002, 12:05 PM
Awesome!
james_baby87
07-30-2002, 12:38 PM
Its going great!!!!!!!
BonniesLilCutiePie
07-30-2002, 01:41 PM
I can't wait for more!
james_baby87
07-30-2002, 03:05 PM
Originally posted by BonniesLilCutiePie
I can't wait for more! Ditto!!!!!
Jo/Blair_fan
08-07-2002, 11:36 AM
Since Courtneys computer seems to be screwed up she sent me her part to post. so her it is
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Good job Denise!
(Mark and Jo are talking)
Mark- You seemed very sad when you found out the baby died.
Jo- Who wouldn't be sad? (sigh) I don't know, maybe I wanted the baby after all. I mean it is one of the most natural things a woman can go through. How could I hold and house a baby and not keep it?
Mark- I don't know. Why didn't you tell me?
Jo- I didn't tell you because I didn't want this to get in the way of your plans to go to UCLA.
Mark- something like that is more important.
Jo- Yeah, I…
Mark- don't explain now, just rest.
Jo- agreed.
Nat- (walking around from side to side making dinner)
Paul- can I have some more beer?
Nat- I can't get you more.
Paul- why not?
Nat- because if you haven't noticed, I am pregnant.
Paul- and…just get it, okay?
Nat- no!
Paul- ( looks at her) I am the man of this place, and you as the lady will listen to me.
Nat- No I will not. Paul you are obviously drunk, okay? Go take a nap and sober up.
Paul- don't tell me what to do. (raises his hand to her as if he is going to hit her)
Nat- I'm leaving, when and if you get your act together you can call me at Mrs. Garrett's house.
Paul- (grabs her arm) you better not leave.
Nat- just watch me. Let go of me, now! (storms out)
(at Mrs. Garrett's)
Nat- (drinking some of her coffee) It's like he is a different person when he drinks.
Mrs. Garrett- (takes a drink too) Well, most people are different when they drink. Maybe you need to talk to him about his problem.
Nat- No way! He seems like he is on the abusive side when he drinks. That reminds me of when I was raped. It scares me to death, Mrs. G.
Mrs. Garrett- (sighs) You love him, right? I mean you want to be his wife, you want him to be the father of your child, right?
Nat- yes! When he is sober, he is the sweetest person.
Mrs. Garrett- For one of the first times, I don't know what to do. We should ask the other girls.
Nat- NO! Their lives are perfect, and for mine to be less than perfect, is somewhat embarrassing. I am so jealous of them. It seems like they picked the right people, and I didn't.
Mrs. Garrett- you have no idea what goes on behind closed doors in their households.
Nat- Yeah, I guess you're right, but still I don't want them to know.
Mrs. Garrett- fair.
Go Denise!
Jo/Blair_fan
10-27-2002, 01:07 AM
I'll post even tho no one is reading this thats probably why i havent posted HINT HINT PPL REPLY!!!!!!!
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Nat: thanks Mrs. G.
Mrs. G: I know u said not to tell them but maybe we could have a intervention for him and we could send him to rehab. I mean it would probably be for the best. Then get him into AA. But he has to be willing to quit. He may have a reason he drinks you never know.
Nat: you might be right, ok I’ll tell them. I need your support though.
Mrs. G: Absolutely. I’m going to go call Blair. Be right back.
(Mrs. G: goes to the kitchen to call Blair)
Mrs. G: (dials Blair’s number)
(Blair’s House)
Phone: Ring Ring
Dane: can you get that my hands are really dirty.
Blair: no problem. (Gets the phone b4 it can ring again.) Hello?
Mrs. G: Blair, I’m glad you’re there, I need to tell you something.
Blair: what is it u sound worried.
Mrs. G: I am. Blair, Paul is a alcoholic the abusive type at that.
Blair: I don’t believe it he seemed so nice.
Mrs. G: according to Natalie he is when he’s sober.
Blair: What are we going to do?
Mrs. G: well we came up with the idea to hold a intervention then get him into AA.
Blair: That’s a great idea I’ll tell Jo. She’s probably ready for this type of news by now.
Mrs. G: ok. I’ll talk to you later. Bye
Blair: bye (hangs up)
Mrs. G: (hangs up)
Blair: Hey Dane can I talk to you for a moment it’s important.
Dane: sure.
Blair: um Natalie just experienced some of Paul’s destructive behavior.
Dane: he was dunk wasn’t he. (Says more of a statement then a question) I should of known this would of happened. So much has been happening I totally forgot about his drinking. Neither Mark nor I like to bring it up it brings back bad memories.
Blair: well Mrs. G and Nat have decided to hold a intervention for him then send him to rehab along with AA.
Dane: that’s a great idea and I’d love to support it.
Blair: I’m gonna call Jo and tell her.
Dane: no problem u do that and I’m going to call Mark on my cell.
Blair: perfect.
(Blair calls Jo and tells her everything that she found out and Jo tells her that they should all discuss it right after she gets out of the hospital which will be when she is threw signing the papers)
Dane: (Calls Mark)
Mark: hello?
Dane: hey I’ve got some news for you.
Mark: what is it?
Dane: Paul was drinking earlier today and Nat was in the way of his destructive path.
Mark: is she ok?
Dane: yea Blair said she was fine well at least that’s what Mrs. G said to Blair.
Mark: I had totally forgot about his drinking. I just noticed that ever since I met Jo I haven’t even thought about drinking or any thing that connects to it, like mom and dad.
Dane: yea. I know what u mean. I guess Paul thought of something that made him think about it (Mark knows what it is) (Authors note you’ll find out what it is later) We’re going to hold a intervention for him along with him going to rehab and AA treatment, something that should have been done a long time ago.
Mark: Yea does Jo know?
Dane: yea Blair called her and told her. She said as soon as she’s done filling out the papers she’ll come home with you she knows you know.
Mark: ok. We’re gonna leave right now so I gotta go I’ll be there soon meet me at Mrs. G’s house.
Dane: ok Bye.
Mark: bye.
(both hang up)
(at the hospital)
Jo: lets go Mark.
Mark: no problem I’m parked right outside.
(They leave and head to Mrs. G’s house)
(At Mrs. G’s house Tootie (who was called), Blair, Dane, Mrs. G, Nat, Mark, Jo and Mark, Dane, and Paul’s father who was called for the event are sitting inside in the living room talking about how to set the intervention up)
Jo: well the sooner the better for this sort of thing.
David (Dane’s Mark’s and Paul’s Father): Jo’s right. I think we should do it tonight.
Blair: where will we hold it?
Nat: how about here, it’s big and there’s a lot of seating.
Mrs. G: ok so I’m going to get one of those people who hold these things. (Calls the lady that did Jinny from TD’s intervention.) Ok I’ve got someone to do it she’ll be here at 7:00 pm tonight.
Mark: ok I’ll find a way to get Paul here.
Jo: ok then its settled 7:00 tonight.
Mark: ok we all better get back so we can get ready.
Everyone: ok.
(They all head back to their homes.)
(At Marks and Jo’s home)
Jo: why does he drink like that?
Mark: besides the fact he’s a alcoholic?
Jo: ya.
Mark: you should find out at the intervention.
Jo: Ok (knows he’s hiding something) I’ll wait.
Mark: thanks, and Jo do you ever wonder why I never order anything alcoholic? It’s because I used to drink but I quit.
Jo: ok as long as you quit and wont drink again.
Mark: I promise I wont.
Jo: k.
(That night at the intervention)
(Mark walks in with Paul and Paul thinks it’s supposed to be a party.)
Paul: What the hell is this (sees everyone sitting down and two seats empty one for mark and one for him.)?
Mark: (sits down)
Sandra: (intervention lady) This is an intervention.
Paul: Who are you?
Sandra: I’m Sandra. I hold interventions. Your loved ones were very worried about your drinking and they don’t want to loose you.
Paul: If you think I’m just gonna stand here and let you crap all over me you’re out of your damn minds. And you (looks at Nat) you know better then this I thought you loved me. I’m out of here. (Goes to leave)
Nat: Paul (Goes after him but Sandra stops her and tells her to let her go after him she deals with this all the time.)
(Paul and Sandra come in Paul still isn’t happy with the idea but finally agrees to the intervention but still doesn’t want to do it.)
Paul: so what is there assigned seating or something?
Sandra: no you can sit wherever you want. I asked everyone before you got here to think of what they admire and what their concerns about you are.
Paul: fine I’ll just sit right here. (sits down)
Nat: I guess I’ll go first on the admire and concerns thing. I love you so much I don’t want to loose you.
Paul: yea if u loved me you wouldn’t be torturing me like this
Nat: No, It’s because I do love you that I am. I want you to be the father of my child and you know that. I admire the fact that you always find a way to comfort me when I’m down. But I’m afraid of you when you’re drunk you scare me, that’s not the Paul I love. The Paul I love is kind caring and just plain great.
Paul: (doesn’t say anything just hangs his head in guilt.)
Mark: I guess I’m next. Paul you’re the best little brother ever. You’re so smart; I remember I always had to ask you for help on my homework. I’m concerned that with your drinking you’ll someday kill yourself. I don’t want that to happen. But every time you take a drink I think your getting stupider and stupider.
Paul: Oh please come on apparently everyone is able to crap all over me tonight so please step right up.
(Everyone else goes, I’d continue writing the rest in but that would probably take me forever lol)
David: I have something to add. Paul do u know how proud I was the day you got into Langley? I know I’m not real good at this sort of thing but…a…I really don’t have much to say about the drinking part
Paul: why not dad?? Afraid where it might lead?? Afraid that it might come to terms of how you drink to much
Sandra: Paul this isn’t about your father this is about you.
David: sure I like to have a couple of beers but that never really interfered with anything.
Sandra: its not how much you drink its why you drink, and what happens to you when you drink.
Paul: do you remember taking your first drink?
David: that’s a long time ago. Actually I do me and my buddies stole a six pack and drank behind the corner store we threw up all over the damn place.
Paul: do you remember my first drink?
(David shakes his head)
Paul: I was 11 we were camping in the Mountains, Mom and Dane had gone to bed, you Mark and I stayed up to look at the sky and all the sudden you handed me a beer,
David: don’t start with the excuses I did a damn good job I may not be the best father but I did a damn good job you never ever ever wanted anything
Paul: You gave me a beer.
David: SO WHAT this is MY fault?
Paul: of course not dad cause nothing could be your fault because you did nothing
David: guess what I don’t have to sit here and take this
Sandra: John please
David: I’m here for you.
Dane: Dad just sit down
Paul: tell me something dad.
Dane: Paul don’t
Paul: just answer one question
Dane: Leave him alone
Paul: You say you want to help me… maybe just maybe the answer will help me… Why? Why did she do it?
David: Paul c’mon
Paul: she was your wife, ya she was my mother. But she was your WIFE! Of thirty years, you must have a clue an inkling as to why my mother and your wife of 30 years would put a gun in her mouth and blow her head off!
David: (cringes) Paul
Nat: Paul hunney please…
Paul: what…WHAT, I thought everyone here was so anxious to get to the truth as to why I drink so much.
(Silence)
David: I don’t know why.
Paul: what?
David: I don’t know why she did it Paul. I’ve been asking my self that question for years
Paul: well you know something… I don’t believe you….What was it? Was she depressed? Were you fighting? Were you out doing some other woman were you not doing it with her? WHAT WAS IT????
David: that is none of your damn business
Paul: YES IT IS!!! IT IS MY DAMN BISNEUSS…THIS IS VERY MUCH MY DAMN BISNEUSS SHE WAS MY MOTHER!!! YOU ONLY KISSED HER ONCE… my g-d WHAT PLACE DO YOU HAVE TO BE AT TO SHOOT YOUR SELF IN YOUR OWN HOME KNOWING YOUR FAMILY IS GOING TO FIND YOU? TELL ME DAMN Y0U TELL ME!
David: I wish I knew I don’t know what happened or why… I wish I knew…Paul(kinda drags the name on u know what I mean)
Nat: (goes over and holds him only he pulls away harshly)
Paul: All right I know what you all want to hear so I’ll say it. I drink too much there you go everybody happy? And you know what I never drank at school.
Dane: I’ve seen you
Mark: so have I.
Paul: so what that doesn’t make me a addict a addict is someone who cant quit… am I right? I never tried quit if I said I’ll never take a drink again then take one tomorrow then I’d be a addict so you don’t have a case against me
Nat: Oh no yes we do. We found these stashed away in your old apartment and in your car. How could you not tell me… I love you.
Paul: THIS IS JUST SUCH A BUNCH OF CRAP!!!!! Intervention please this is just a which hunt so you can throw stones at me. Oh poor Paul why don’t we stand him up in front of all of us and tear her apart for a couple of hours. Maybe he’ll find God or a Buda or some sort of higher being so he
might actually look forward to looking up in the morning.
Sandra: Paul I know you feel ambushed
Paul: and you actually paid for this assignation how do you pay for something like this do you just chip in like you’d do for a party, where are the hats? Where are the noisemakers? I just love a damn party favor!
Sandra: do you ever ask yourself why you like to drink?
Paul: who said I liked it? When I found my mom I had just gotten home from school. My dad wasn’t home from work yet Mark was out riding your motorcycle Dane I think you were at a friends house…I remember I had a pretty good day at school I got a B+ on a Algebra test and I knew my mom was gonna be real happy about that cause she really got off on stuff like that so when I came home I called out for her but I didn’t here anything so I went to the bedroom there was such a strange smell I didn’t know what it was then I saw her two feet sticking out from the bathroom I remember I flashed on the wicked which of the east the one that Dorothy landed on (starts to cry)I went over to the door she must have fallen hit her head on the toilet or something because the whole side of her head was open then I realized what the smell was it was blood, blood there was soooo much blood I just stood there I couldn’t move I must of screamed because mark came in pushed me out of the way then black and whites they found the gun and put it in a bag they put her in a bag too. Dad, I remember your face because it looked like someone shot the side of your head off too. I knew you were in the living room and I knew you were drinking I remember the sound that the ice made… crackling in the glass as you kept pouring. I thought god that must feel good to drink and forget everything make your mind like a big blackboard use booze to erase all the thoughts that are going threw your mind all the questions…guilt…just keep pouring let it all slip away like sand threw your fingers till there’s nothing left…god I wanted to feel that way too
David: (goes over to him) Paul it wasn’t your fault she killed herself.
Paul: but maybe just maybe if I had been a little better she would of loved me.
David: Oh Paul she did love you she loved you soooo much (Paul, Mark, Dane and David all hug and cry together.) god did she love you.
Nat: (brings out the stuff they packed for rehab)
Paul: all packed huh.
Sandra: We made you a reservation at Kings point rehab center. It’s one of the best in the country. They are expecting us ready to go?
Paul: I guess it would be for the best if I did huh? You uh mind if I say good bye?
Sandra: take all the time you need we leave first thing in the morning be ready by 6:00 sharp.
Paul: thanks
Sandra: ok then I’ll be back at 6:00. bye c ya later.
(everyone says good bye)
Paul: I’m sorry for all the crap I threw at you guys I know I didn’t mean it I was just protecting myself.
Jo: we know you don’t have to apologize
Paul: Thanks (hugs her) Bye
Jo: bye. Mark, I’ll meet you at home k?
Mark: K
(Jo leaves)
Tootie: We’ll miss you Paul (hugs him)
Paul: thanks Tootie. Bye
Tootie: bye.
(Tootie goes up stairs to her room so she can leave the others alone.)
Blair: I’m sorry about all the pain you’ve went threw we love you (hugs him)bye.
Paul: thanks Blair. Bye
Dane: (goes over to him and hugs him tight) you could of told me I could of helped you. I love you so much! I’ll miss you. Get better ok?
Paul: Ok I love you too. Bye
Dane: bye. (follows Blair out)
Mark: Paul I don’t know what to say. When I stopped I thought you would I guess I was being crazy but I hope you get threw this you have a woman that loves you and friends that love you. You will do great I know it I love you man I’ll see you soon huh?
Paul: yea (hugs him tightly) bye I’ll miss you.
Mark: bye I’ll miss you too.
(Mark leaves)
David: I’m sorry I don’t know. I love you so much so did she I just want to let you know that whenever you need me I’m here for you u know that right?
Paul: ya I do dad I do (Hugs him tight) I’ll miss you bye
David: bye.
(David leaves
Mrs. G: you may think that we don’t care but we do. We love you like family. And if you ever need any sort of motherly advice come to me ok?
Paul: ok thanks. if I ever get sent to the hospital for something and I need to put down parents can I put u down on the mother spot I’ve always had to leave that spot blank.
Mrs. G: sure. I’ll miss you
Paul: I’ll miss you too. (hugs her)
Mrs. G: bye
Paul: bye
(Mrs. G: goes to her room upstairs)
Nat: well shall we go home.
Paul: yea lets go I have some things I need to clear up with you.
Nat: ok
(they go home)
(at Paul and Nat’s home)
Paul: I’m sorry for saying you don’t love me I know you do I was just trying to defend my self. I shouldn’t of done that I love you soooo much! I promise I’m going to get away from this terrible addiction. I love you.
Nat: I know your sorry and I know you’ll get threw it. I love you too. (kisses him and it leads to something) (you know what I’m talking about but I’m gonna be good and not go into any further detail.)
(next morning at 6:00)
Paul: (is ready to go and is saying goodbye to Natalie) I’ll see you soon ok?
Nat: ok bye
Paul: bye (goes to Sandra’s car and they leave)
Ryanmo97
10-27-2002, 01:27 AM
Very good, I hope there is more.
Shelley
10-27-2002, 01:58 AM
Good! I like it.
NMK_GG_FAN
10-27-2002, 08:51 PM
Here's more
A month or so later
Nat s really big now. She is at the supermarket
Nat-*drops can and tries to pick it up*
Tom- Let me get that for you.
Nat- thank you
Tom- hello, my name is Tom
Nat-Nat...*they shake hands*
Tom- you don't shop here that much
Nat- no, something new
Tom-well, umm, im going to continue shopping
Nat- same...thank you again
Tom- anything for beautiful woman*walks away*
Nat checks out and is in the parking lot
Tom-hey, can i help you with that?
Nat- no that's okay
Tom- I wouldn't mind
Nat- since you talked me into it *laughs*
Tom-*as he's putting the stuff in the trunck* I take it that you and your husband are having a baby
Nat-I'm not married
Tom-really? so.. are you seeing anyone?
Nat-I...I....have to go...thank you Tom
*she gets in the car and drives away. Tom stands there and watches her drive away*
At Mrs. Garrett's house
Nat-Mrs. G there's something I need to tell you
Mrs. G- shoot
Nat- I went to that new supermarket today...and...I met someone..this name is Tom...he was so nice and kind to me.
Mrs. G- well, that's good
Nat- no...because when the question came up 'are you seeing anyone?' I couldn't answer as if I didn't want to be with paul anymore.
Mrs. G- Well
Thats when Paul bust through the door
Paul- Honey I'm HOME!!!
Mrs. G and Nat stare at him and then at each other.
sry its so short and there arent any other characters
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
10-27-2002, 10:49 PM
cool!!
Shelley
10-27-2002, 10:54 PM
Great!
james_baby87
11-13-2002, 08:50 PM
Denise I'm begging you POST MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (I know I know I'm not paicent(SP I don't care) PLEASE post more!!!
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