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Kate McCafferty
01-02-2002, 08:29 PM
Hey...tell me if this totally sucks.

*At the SFPD*
It's 12:30 p.m., CD., Angela, Jinny, and Magda are sitting at their desks finishing their lunch.
Angela: I can't believe it's past lunchtime and the captain's still
not here.
Jinny: Yeah...that's strange since she's always on me about
being late. I hope everything's okay.
CD: Me too.
Magda: Well we have our cases we should get started. *Opens a
folder*
Jinny: What is ours?
Magda: A four year old girl is missing from her bedroom. Her
parents went in to wake her up this morning and she
was gone.
Angela: We have a homicide...a bride was found murdered the
morning after the wedding. Her husband is gone.
CD: I think he did it...probably married her, planned on killing
her, and probably get all of her money.
Angela: That's unlikely...he wouldn't have left town if he killed
her.
CD: Maybe he panicked. *Tosses her trash away* Let's find
out*

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Should I post more??

-*Forever*-
01-02-2002, 08:33 PM
Write more! Itz good so far!!!

JinnyRulz2932
01-03-2002, 09:46 PM
POST MORE POST MORE! i like the cases..lol! *Nate pinches CD's butt*..haha im still laughing! Private joke people...

XoVanillaRain90oX
01-11-2002, 08:19 PM
Originally posted by JinnyRulz2932
*Nate pinches CD's butt*

:lol:

MORE WHITNEY!!!!!!!:D:D:D:D

Babes_Cat
01-12-2002, 11:46 AM
OHHHH I LOVE IT SO FAR! Please post more soon!

-*Forever*-
01-12-2002, 12:33 PM
Please write mooore!!!!! And Bonnie can eat some.... GOOOOOOEY GOOOOOEY PICKLES!!!!! LMFAO

BonniesLilCutiePie
07-31-2002, 02:18 PM
It's awesome so far! Keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more!