I'm Writing Sitcom Pilot for The WB

[Sitcomwriter]

I'm in the middle of writing a sitcom pilot for The WB.The show is about well me,my upbringing an the craziness in my life.I plan to call this show "America's favorite" or "JP" or whatever but right now I'm calling it "Untitled SW Project".Heres a scene from the pilot:

John-Paul:(On Phone)Listen you work for me so you do what I want you to capicey?

Spanish guy:(On Phone)Capicey

John-Paul(Hangs up)Was the the butler or the limo driver? ah what the hell he works for me

[Bootsy Whoosh]

So basically the show is about you bossing people around? Sounds like a laugh riot. And I think you need to seriously rethink the proposed titles.

[Sitcomwriter]

Heres what I have for the pilot so far:
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"Pilot"

John-Paul:(On Pohne)Listen you work for me so whether you like it or not you do what I tell you to do because I can sue you capicey?

Spanish Guy:Capicey

John-Paul:(Hangs up)Was that the butler or the limo driver? Damn it I the great one screw up for the first time ever but that didn't really happen.......ah what the hell he works for me

Spanish Guy:I want a strike against you

John-Paul:You have been served

Spanish:But you need a lawyer

John-Paul:I'm my own lawyer

THE END (for now)

[Sitcomwriter]

Originally posted by Bootsy Whoosh:
So basically the show is about you bossing people around? Sounds like a laugh riot. And I think you need to seriously rethink the proposed titles.

yeah thats basically thats what it is.

I might call it "The Great one".

[Bootsy Whoosh]

Originally posted by Sitcomwriter:
Heres what I have for the pilot so far:
Pilot"
John-Paul http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifOn Pohne)Listen you work for me so whether you like it or not you do what I tell you to do because I can sue you capicey?
Spanish Guy:Capicey
John-Paul http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifHangs up)Was that the butler or the limo driver? Damn it I the great one screw up for the first time ever but that didn't really happen.......ah what the hell he works for me
Spanish Guy:I want a strike against you
John-Paul:You have been served
Spanish:But you need a lawyer
John-Paul:I'm my own lawyer
THE END (for now)


I'm really sorry but none of that makes any sense whatsoever. Besides the fact that you can't sue someone if they refuse to carry out your orders. You are an employer, not a slave owner.

I hope all of this is still a joke, for your sake.

[Sitcomwriter]

Heres more of the pilot:
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Spanish Guy:I can't believe your also a layer

John-Paul:I'm also better than you

Spanish Guy:I knew that sir

John-Paul:Bow down to me

Spanish Guy:Fine dear king (Bows down to John-Paul)

John-Paul:I'm not a king I'm better than a king

Spanish Guy:Yeah I heard Princh Charles wants your job

John-Paul:Stop talking or I'll sue your whole family

THE END (for now)

[Sitcomwriter]

I might rewrite the pilot to make it more about my family life like my TC spinoff that stars me called "John-Paul".

In fact thats what I'm gonna do.

[Sitcomwriter]

I'm now gonna rewrite the entire pilot as a family sitcom thanks to bootsy

[TJ]

This belongs on the fan fiction board, moving it there...

[Brian]

Gee, I haven't seen this pilot. Were you lying?

[Sitcomwriter]

Originally posted by BJL
Gee, I haven't seen this pilot. Were you lying?

I then found out that you couldn't E-mail your scripts to networks.

[Brandon]

it sucked anyways...