The Wedding

[JoExstead]

ok tell me how you like it

Jinny and Teddy were walking down the street holding hands. Jinny slowly looked at her watch and her eyes widened.
"Oh God! It's almost 12!" She yelled as she looked around at the dark streets that were completly empty. She started to walk away but Teddy stopped her.
"Wait a second" he said as he hugged Jinny "I have to ask you something" Jinny laughed a little
"Oh really" She said sarcastically "what?"
"Well.." Teddy started as he got down on one knee
"What are you doing" Jinny said..still laughing
"Just listen...As you know we've been dating for a while, and I love you very much" Teddy reached in his pocket and pulled out a ring "Will you..." Teddy cleared his throat "Will you marry me?" Jinny looked down at Teddy and smiled.
"Get up here" Jinny said playfully as she grabbed Teddy, pulled him up, and kissed him for a long time.
"Is that a yes?" Teddy asked happily when they were done
"Ya" Jinny smiled "That's a yes" Teddy smiled, kissed Jinny, and left. Jinny ran all the way home smiling. When she got to her apartment, she started to shake Jessy "Wake up!"
"Alright, alright, I'm awake. What do you want?" Jessy moaned as she rubbed her eyes, and leaned up.
"Guess what!" Jinny said excited
"Jinny, Jinny, it's.." Jessy paused and looked at her watch "It's 12:30 at night. Don't you think it's a little late to be playing guessing games."
"No, this isn't a game" Jinny said, still very excited.
"Well, how about I sleep now and guess in the morining if I HAVE to guess" Jessy said very tired.
"No..Jess...Teddy asked me to marry him" Jinny said happily
"Really Jinny I...what?" Jessy questioned, very shocked, once she realized what Jinny said.
"I'm getting married"


ok tell me what you think

[NancyJoJinny]

OOOOoooh... Ooooooooh. Ohhhhhh! MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

~!@#$%^&* DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~!@#$%^&*

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

[Jinny_Extead]

Write more ASAP! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

[WildChildJinny]

Omg, This is really good. Keep writing!

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "
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One Of Jinny's Major Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

[JoExstead]

"Jinny, you said you'd stop drinking" Jessy said, shaking her head.
"I'm not drunk" Jinny said annoyed "Teddy asked me to marry him so i said yes!" Jessy sighed and layed back down.
"Well...congradulations and good night" She said as she put her face in her pillow.
"Goodnite" Jinny said as she patted Jessy and went into her bedroom.


The next morning, Jinny walked into the Division happier then usual, and her friends noticed.
"You ok?" CD asked as her, Magda, and Angela walked over to her.
"Yep!" Jinny said smiling as she walked over to her desk, followed by the three.
"Is there something you want to share with us?" Angela asked
"Yep" Jinny answered, but not saying anything else
"Well..." Magda said, waiting for Jinny to talk
"ok, ok" Jinny said as she turned to everyone. "I'm engaged" Jinny looked at everyone, and waited a response. They all just looked at her. "Well...what do you think?"
"I think you had a little to much to drink last night" Magda said as she hopped on Jinny's desk.
"No! I was not drunk! Teddy asked me to marry him!" Jinny said, very annoyed.
"Your serious?" CD questioned, very surprised.
"Yes, very!" Jinny looked at everyone and smilied againg. "You guys busy tonight?" She asked
"No why?" Magda asked
"Cause we're going out to celebrate!" Jinny yelle as she jumped up out of her seat and gave CD, Angela, and Magda a hug.
"Uh..Exstead" Captain said, as she motioned Jinny to come in her office.
"After our ****s over at the Ancorside, ok guys" Jinny said as she walked away into the Captians office. "Whats up Cap?"
"I was going to ask you the same thing?" Captain said as she sat down.
"oh...that" Jinny said as she laughed a little. "Well...I'm just a little excited, thats all" Jinny smiled and shurgged her shoulders.
"Oh ya, about what?" Captian asked suspisiosly.
"Ohh...about my engagement" Jinny said as she put her finger out so Cap could see her ring.
"Your engaged to ONE person?" Cap asked meanly.
"Hey...I can handle it. I love theodore." Jinny said madly
"Whatever you say" CAptain said as she looked at the papers on her desk. Jinny looked madly at her for a while, but then left.


That night everyone was at the Ancoridge. Jinny, Jessy, Magda, CD, Angela and even Captain. They'd been there for a while, so everyone was getting ready to leave.
"Well, I have to go" CD said as she got up "Congradulations Jinny, see you tomorrow"
"Ya, I should probably go to" Angela said as she got ip and followed CD "Congradulations" She said as the two left.
"well, i need sleep" Captian said as she got up "See you tomorrow, and be on time" Captain urged as she left.
"oh..c'mon where's everyone going?" Jessy asked.
"Home" Magda said as she got up "Whitch is where I need to go. You coming Jinny?" Magda asked as she got up, but Jinny stared at the bar.
"No...I just want to have alone time. Can you take Jessy home?" Jinny said but she didn't take her eyes off the bar.
"Sure" Magda said as Jessy got up "Are you sure you want to be here by yourself? It's been almost 2 months since you've had a drink"
"Ya, I'll be fine" Jinny assured her "See you at home Jess, and see you tomorrow Mag"
"Ok, Bye" Jessy said as she started to leave.
"Bye" Mag said as they left. After five minutes, when Jinny was sure they were gone, she went up to the bar.
"hey, haven't seen you in a while" The bar tender said
"Ya well...can I have a usual" Jinny asked as she kept looking at the door, making sure Magda wasn't there
"Sure"


well....

[ISmellFine]

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!

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Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point.

Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

Jinny: Here comes the other shoe.

Jinny: I can coddle.

Jinny: Three eggs scrambled soft not runny, hashbrowns crispy not hard, rye bread lightly toasted not burned, butter on the side, and don't forget the jalepeno's, extra hot if you have any.

Jinny: Cause you're buck naked my friend! Alright Teddy, just how nervous are you?

Jinny: You're a peach.

Wanna talk about Nancy? E-mail or IM me at NancyMcKeonRox@aol.com.

Visit my website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

Nancy's a very cool lady! She's even cooler than the real Slim Shady. She's a bad ass chick who's tough as can be. That's why she's cool -- It's plain to see.

Personal Quote: All mean people suck except for me, NancyJoJinny, Adele, and Joanna Marie_1.

[NancyJoJinny]

Oh no!!!!!! Jinny started too drink!! Oh boy am i over reacing or am i over reacting? More PLEASE!?!?

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

[JoExstead]

The next morning, Jinny rolled over to see a guy next to her. At first she didn't think anything of it, and rolled back over and shut her eye's. After a few seconds, her eye's widened. She sat up quickly and looked around. She wasn't in her bed, in her room, or even in her apartment, and that guy wasn't Teddy.
"What the..." Jinny stared, but then stopped, not wanting to wake her sleeping "Friend". She quickly threw on her clothes and ran home. When she got there, she looked at the clock.
"Damit!" She yelled, when she realized it was 2:00pm. Jinny stared at the clock for a while, and then she started to cry. She cried for a while, then felt sick. She ran in the bathroom and threw up. When she was done, she walked into the living room, to see Jessy just coming in the door.
"Hey Jin" Jessy said, not looking up as she threw her backpack on the couch.
"Hey..." Jinny said softly as she put her hand to her head.
"Are you ok?" Jessy asked as she looked up at Jinny.
"Ya..I...I..." before Jinny could finish, she fainted, just missing the table with her head.
"Jinny! Jinny!" Jessy yelled as she ran over an knelt next to her sister. Just then there was a knock at the door. "Help!" Jessy yelled to whoever was at the door. The door flew and Teddy ran and knelt next to Jessy.
"Oh my God! What happened?" Teddy asked, worried.
"I dunno! Just call 911" Jessy yelled. Teddy jumped up and ran to the phone and called.
"911..." The lady started, but Teddy inturrepted her.
"Help...my fiance fainted." TEddy said, as he held back his tears.
"Ok, someone will be right there." The lady said. A few minutes later and ambulence came and took Jinny to the hospital as Teddy and Jessy followed closly in Teddy's car.

[JoExstead]

The next morning, Jinny rolled over to see a guy next to her. At first she didn't think anything of it, and rolled back over and shut her eye's. After a few seconds, her eye's widened. She sat up quickly and looked around. She wasn't in her bed, in her room, or even in her apartment, and that guy wasn't Teddy.
"What the..." Jinny stared, but then stopped, not wanting to wake her sleeping "Friend". She quickly threw on her clothes and ran home. When she got there, she looked at the clock.
"Damit!" She yelled, when she realized it was 2:00pm. Jinny stared at the clock for a while, and then she started to cry. She cried for a while, then felt sick. She ran in the bathroom and threw up. When she was done, she walked into the living room, to see Jessy just coming in the door.
"Hey Jin" Jessy said, not looking up as she threw her backpack on the couch.
"Hey..." Jinny said softly as she put her hand to her head.
"Are you ok?" Jessy asked as she looked up at Jinny.
"Ya..I...I..." before Jinny could finish, she fainted, just missing the table with her head.
"Jinny! Jinny!" Jessy yelled as she ran over an knelt next to her sister. Just then there was a knock at the door. "Help!" Jessy yelled to whoever was at the door. The door flew and Teddy ran and knelt next to Jessy.
"Oh my God! What happened?" Teddy asked, worried.
"I dunno! Just call 911" Jessy yelled. Teddy jumped up and ran to the phone and called.
"911..." The lady started, but Teddy inturrepted her.
"Help...my fiance fainted." TEddy said, as he held back his tears.
"Ok, someone will be right there." The lady said. A few minutes later and ambulence came and took Jinny to the hospital as Teddy and Jessy followed closly in Teddy's car.

[Jo_Po]

Hey! Post more soon please, this story is getting so good!

~Steph

[JoExstead]

Sorry bout the double post last time...

Teddy and Jessy waited in the waiting room for over an hour. They called Magda to tell her what happened and she said she'd be there as soon as she could get away from the Captain. Finally the doctor came out.
"Exstead?" He asked, looking at Teddy and Jessy.
"Ya!" Jessy said as she jumped up.
"What's wrong? Is she ok?" Teddy asked as he followed Jessy over to the doctor.
"Don't worry. She's fine. There is nothing wrong with her" The doctor said happily.
"And it took you an hour to tell us that?" Jessy said with her sisters aditude.
"She's just not used to her condition" The doctor added, ignoring Jessy. Jessy and Teddy looked at each other and sighed. But after a second they looked back at the doctor.
"What condition?" Jessy asked with a confused look on her face.
"You don't know?" The doctor questioned, very shocked.
"No, damit! What is it!" Jessy yelled as she looked at the doctor, then at Teddy, who was getting scared.
"Well I guess I should tell you" The doctor said "Ms Exstead is pregnant" When the doctor said this...Teddy almost fell over. "I'll leave you two alone. You may see Ms Exstead whenever you want. She's in room 413" The doctor said as he smiled and walked away, leaving Teddy and Jessy speachless.
"Woa!" Jessy said "This is awsome! Unexpected, but awsome! I'm only 14 and I'm gonna be an aunt!"
"Ya..." Teddy said sadly, as he slowly sat in the chair.
"You dont look so happy" Jessy said as she sat next to Teddy and patted him on the back. "Whats wrong?" Teddy didn't say anything. He just stared off into nowhere with a disturbed look on his face. "Hello!" Jessy said loudly, waving her hand infront of his face.
"Ya..." Teddy said, shaking his head.
"Welcome back, now whats wrong?" Jessy asked as she stood up and looked down at Teddy. Teddy sighed and looked up at Jessy.
"It's not mine" Teddy said as he looked back down.
"What?" Jessy asked "What are you talking about?"
"The baby...it's not mine" Teddy said as he stood up and stared down at Jessy, with a little tear in his eye.
"How do you know?" Jessy asked, not believing him.
"Me and Jinny never....you know" Teddy said as he turned away.
"Your telling me that you're engaged and you haven't done it?" Jessy said shocked...and wanting to laugh a little.
"We almost did one time when Jinny was almost killed, but she got to tired so we just went to sleep." Teddy said as he looked at the room Jinny was in, since it was right across the hall. "I gotta go" Teddy said as he started to leave, but Jessy grabbed him.
"Wait..." She said as she dragged him towards Jinny's room
"What are we doing?" Teddy asked madly.
"We're going to yell at my sister...this time she has gone to far!" Jessy said as she stopped infront of Jinny's door.....

well....should i keep going?

[WildChildJinny]

Gimme me a "M"
Gimme me a "O"
Gimme em a "R"
Gimme em a "E"

GIMME ME MORE!!!!
Lol I LOVE THIS STORY!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

[NancyMcKeonFan8976]

Originally posted by WildChildJinny:
Gimme me a "M"
Gimme me a "O"
Gimme em a "R"
Gimme em a "E"

GIMME ME MORE!!!!
Lol I LOVE THIS STORY!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif



so well said!!!! more please!

[JoExstead]

Teddy and Jessy both waited for the other one to go in first, but niether of them wanted too. They couldn't bare to look at Jinny, and didn't know what to say.
"Well..." Teddy said finally, pointing at the door.
"I aint goin' in first, she's your girlfriend" Jessy said, backing away.
"Was..." Teddy corrected "She was my girlfriend" Teddy pushed the door in madly and went in. Jessy stood there, surprised that he went in, but then quickly followed. When Teddy walked, Jinny looked up. AS soon as she saw who it was...she looked back down. Jessy stood in the door way, watching to see what was going to happen. Teddy slowly walked over to Jinny's bed, and stood silently.
"Teddy I..." Jinny started as she looked up at him.
"No..." Teddy inturrupted "I dont want to hear your sympathy or your excuses."
"I'm really..." Jinny tried to talk, but Teddy just shook his head.
"How could you do this to me, Jinny? I loved you and still love you soo much." Teddy said as he walked over to a chair in the corner and sat down.
"I love you too" Jinny said sadly "And I wouldn't blame you if you wanted to call off the wedding and never see me again. But I want you to know that I love you...I always have, and always will." Tears ran down Jinny's cheak as she got up and walked over to Teddy. "I am so...so sorry, and I know that doesn't fix what I did...but can we still be friends?" Jinny looked down at Teddy, as one of her tears fell on his lap...


ok..i got to go to Maine until Monday
so tell me what you think and I'll write more when I come back

[NancyMcKeonFan8976]

nooooooooooooooooo u can't go and leave us there! that is against the law!!!! i love it, by the way

[JoExstead]

ok..I'm back...here's some more.

Teddy stood up and looked at Jinny.
"No.." He started "We can't be friends." Jinny looked down at the floor and started to cry hard. But Teddy lifted her head up with his finger. "Do you know why?" He asked, as Jinny just looked at him. "Because we're getting married." Jinny's face lit up as she smiled and hugged him.
"I love you and I promise this won't happen again." Jinny said as she kissed Teddy. Jessy rolled her eyes and shook her head.
"Stupid...real stupid" she said quietly to herself as she watched the two together. Just then the doctor came in.
"Well Ms Exstead, you may leave when ever you want" He said as he smiled and left.
"Well, we'll wait for you in the car." Teddy said as he walked over to Jessy. "Come on" He said to her.
"I'll be right there. I need a sec alone with Jinny" Jessy said as she walked over to her.
"Ok" Teddy said as he smiled and walked away.
"What?" Jinny asked, as she sat on the bed.
"You are so lucky.." Jessy said madly as she looked at Jinny.
"I know" Jinny said as she looked down. But she quickly looked back up and smiled. "I'mgetting married and having a baby"
"You don't get it, do you?" Jessy asked madly. "You almost blew it with Teddy"
"I realize that" Jinny snapped, as she jumped off the bed and looked down on Jessy.
"But Teddy forgives me and it wont happen again."
"sure..." Jessy said sarcastically "Like it wasn't going to happen the first time" Jinny looked madly at Jessy, but then turned and looked at the wall.
"Do you have a point?" Jinny asked madly as she folded her arms.
"Ya..I do..." Jessy said "Your a slut and an alcoholic and nothing you do is gonna change that." Jessy stopmed over to the door. Jinny turned around and looked at her sister with tears in her eyes. "WE'll be in the car" Jessy said as she turned around and nearly walked into Magda. "Sorry" Jessy said as she stopped.
"Thats ok...What's wrong with Jinny?" Magda asked Jessy.
"She's pregnant...and she can tell you why thats a bad thing" Jessy said as she looked at Jinny and then left.


well...what do you thing should i keep going?

[hockeychiC518]

AHHH i hate this since MCAS IS over i have hw once again!! OK well to the point post more soon!!! its awesome!! hope u had fun in Maine


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Jinny: They all start laughing at you. I mean we're not talking little girly giggles ,Theodore. We are talking ear splitting humiliation inducing derition here!"
Thoedore: "Why?"
Jinny: "Cause you're BUCK-NAKED my friend....

"one time at band camp..."-American Pie

"im wearing a dress..ive got gel in my hair...i havent got sleep in two days...im armed...dont mess with me"-Miss Congenality

[JoExstead]

ok i'll add a little more sice i'm bored.

Magda watched Jessy walk away, then turned to Jinny very confussed.
"Your pregnant?" She asked, very surprised.
"Ya" Jinny said, still upset from what Jessy said.
"We'll how's that a bad thing?" Magda said as she walked over to Jinny and put her hand on her shoulder.
"Because it's not Teddy's" She said as she put her head down. Magda stepped back a little and shook her head.
"What? Does Teddy know?" Magda asked
"Yea, he knows, but he forgives me and it's ok." Jinny paused and looked sadly at Magda. She put her head down and started to cry. Magda went over and hugged her.
"Hey Jin, it's ok. He forigives you and your getting married." Magda said, trying to comfort her.
"It's not that." Jinny said wipping her tears away. "Jessy said....well...." Jinny paused "She said i was a slut and a alcoholic and nothing i did was going to change that? Do you believe that?" Jinny backed away from Magda and looked at her.

ok...i'll write more tomorrow, hope u like it.

[NancyRox11]

I love it! Keep posting!

[hockeychiC518]

its great but i have one ? how could be bored if ur talking to me on AIM, come geeze thanks i am feeling a little rejected here jk its awesome post more!

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Jinny: They all start laughing at you. I mean we're not talking little girly giggles ,Theodore. We are talking ear splitting humiliation inducing derition here!"
Thoedore: "Why?"
Jinny: "Cause you're BUCK-NAKED my friend....

"one time at band camp..."-American Pie

"im wearing a dress..ive got gel in my hair...i havent got sleep in two days...im armed...dont mess with me"-Miss Congenality

[JoExstead]

Magda shook her head and looked at Jinny.
"No..I don't believe that. I believe that you need to get your act together, but your not a slut or an alcholic" Jinny looked at Magda trying to figure out if that was good or bad. Finally she just smiled and grabbed her clothes.
"I'm gonna change then I'll meet you at the Division. Alright" Jinny said as she started to walk towards the bathroom.
"Ya..and I'll let you tell the captian your good news" Magda said as she smiled and left.

[jinny_jo_2001]

MORE AND SOON!!!!

[ISmellFine]

This is awesome!!!! Write more!!!

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Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point.

Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

Jinny: Here comes the other shoe.

Jinny: I can coddle.

Jinny: Three eggs scrambled soft not runny, hashbrowns crispy not hard, rye bread lightly toasted not burned, butter on the side, and don't forget the jalepeno's, extra hot if you have any.

Jinny: Cause you're buck naked my friend! Alright Teddy, just how nervous are you?

Jinny: You're a peach.

Wanna talk about Nancy? E-mail or IM me at NancyMcKeonRox@aol.com.

Visit my website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

Nancy's a very cool lady! She's even cooler than the real Slim Shady. She's a bad ass chick who's tough as can be. That's why she's cool -- It's plain to see.

Personal Quote: All mean people suck except for me, NancyJoJinny, Adele, and Joanna Marie_1.

[JoExstead]

When Jinny got to the car...Teddy smiled.
"I have an idea" he said. Jessy rolled her eyes because she already knew what it was.
"Let's get married next month!" Jinny just looked and him. All of a sudden, she opened the car door and threw up. "I guess you don't like it?" Teddy said sadly as he watched Jinny close the door.
"No, no, that's a great idea...i mite actually still look skinny" She said happily. Teddy's eye's lit up as he started the car and drove away. When Jinny got to the Division, her friends were looking at her.
"So..." CD said as he and Angela walked over. Magda just sat at he desk and smiled.
"So...what?" Jinny asked, acting innocent.
"Magda said you had a surprise" Angela said, looking at jinny as she sat down at her desk.
"Ooh, that. It's no big deal" Jinny said, turning to look at papers on her desk.
"c'mon Jinny...first your getting married..." CD started, waiting for Jinny to finish.
"Ok, ok, I'll tell you....I'm..." Jinny stalled and looked up at her two friends. She sighed and laughed a little "I'm pregnant" CD and Angela's mouths dropped to the floor.
"Wow..that was fast" Angela said as her and CD luaghed. Jinny looked at the ground, and prtened to be happy.
"Congradulations for the second time this week" CD said, but then she noticed there was something wrong with Jinny. She looked sick, and then fell on the floor in pain.
"Dam!" She screamed as she grabbed her stomach. "What the hell is wrong!"
"Hold on Jinny, we'll call 9-1-1" MAgda said as she picked up her phone. Everyone ran to Jinny, to see if she was ok. Then The Captian came out, and tried to get Jinny up.
"Help me" She told CD, as the two picked her up.
"Captian, what are you doing?" CD asked.
"WE're bringing her to the hospital, ambulences take too long." Captian said as her and CD started helping Jinny out of the Division. "Call Teddy and Jessy and Tell them what happened, then meet us at the hospital" She told Magda, as she hung up on 911, and started to dial Teddy's number.

well...do u like it?

[NancyJoJinny]

Oh Mwy gawd... You like haaaaaave to like, post more... Like Now!

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Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

[WildChildJinny]

OMG! MORE NOW! THIS IS SOOOO GOOD! Keep writing!

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

[BlairW_1]

Leaving this story un-written on for more than .125 seconds is illegal! Grr, snarl, snarl! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif Sunday I'm leaving for bball camp for a week, so you HAVE to finish this before I leave! And after that, guess what, another bball camp for another week! Please at least write more soon!

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My mind is like lightning: one brilliant flash, then it's gone.

~*Danielle*~

[ISmellFine]

more more more more!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAZZZ!!

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Jinny: Well, he's a horse's ass, but he has a point.

Jinny: Alright, alright. Enough! Put your hands up! Look buddy, I've got PMS and a gun, any questions?

Jinny: Listen, if I shoot the neighbors cat, I must take you to defend me in court.

Jinny: Here comes the other shoe.

Jinny: I can coddle.

Jinny: Three eggs scrambled soft not runny, hashbrowns crispy not hard, rye bread lightly toasted not burned, butter on the side, and don't forget the jalepeno's, extra hot if you have any.

Jinny: Cause you're buck naked my friend! Alright Teddy, just how nervous are you?

Jinny: You're a peach.

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Nancy's a very cool lady! She's even cooler than the real Slim Shady. She's a bad ass chick who's tough as can be. That's why she's cool -- It's plain to see.

Personal Quote: All mean people suck except for me, NancyJoJinny, Adele, and Joanna Marie_1.

[JoExstead]

LOL I'll try and finish it before Sunday...anyway here's more.

Everyone was waiting in the waiting room for a while.
"This is the second time today!" Jessy complained as she watched Teddy pace back and forth. Magda tapped her fingers on the arm of the chair, while CD and Angela watched. The Captain just sat there, doing nothing. She didn't no what to think of the situation. Teddy had told her the whole story of that afternoon...and she was very confused. Finally, after over 2 and a half hours, the doctor was done doing what ever doctors do. Jinny waited unpaciently in her bed to hear what the doctor had to say. He came in and put his head down....Jinny knew what that meant.
"Miscarriage" She said sadly as she looked down.
"Do you want me to tell them?" The doctor asked, heading for the door.
"No..No...I'll do it, send them in" Jinny said as she looked back up, and wipped tears from her face.
"Ok" The doctor said as he left. Not more then a minuted later, everyone came running in her room.
"Are you ok? What's wrong?" Are you going too...." Teddy asked as he sat down on Jinny's bed. But Jinny interupted him.
"Teddy, Teddy, I'm fine" Jinny reassured.
"What happened?" CD asked as she walked over to Jinny.
"Well..." Jinny started as she put her head down. But she couldn't say it. She couldn't say she had a miscarriage. She knew if she did, she would start to cry, and she didn't want to. "It's...just a pregnacy thing" Jinny finally said, covering up the truth.
"Are you ok?" MAgda asked.
"Ya, the doctor said I can go home when ever I want, and that's now!" Jinny said as she got up.
"Thank god" Teddy said as he hugged Jinny.
"WEll...i guess we'll see you tomorrow...you can take the rest of the day off" Captain said
"Gee thanks, 2 hours" Jinny said sarcastically as she looked at her watch.
"Well, see ya later Jin" CD said as her and Angela left.
"Ya, bye Jin" Mag said as she left.
"Bright and Early tomorrow" Captain said as she laughed a little and left.
"Hey, listen Jin, I'm sorry about what I said before. I didn't mean it...Entirly" Jessy said as she walked over to Jinny.
"Forget it!" Jinny said as she smiled and hugged Jessy.
"I'm just glad your ok" Jessy said. "C'mon Teddy, we'll wait in the car" Jessy said as she grabbed Teddy's arm.
"Actually you guys, I'd like to walked home" Jinny said "It's only two blocks"
"Is that good for the baby?" Jessy asked as she let go of Teddy.
"Ya, it's fine" Jinny said as she tried desperatly not to cry.
"Ok, see you tomorrow Jin" Teddy said as he kissed her and left.
"Bye" Jessy said following him.
"Bye..." Jinny said, even though they were already gone. She sat down and started to cry....she couldn't let Teddy know that she wasn't pregnant, because she felt that was the only reason he forgave her. She would have to think of what to tell him and think of it soon...the Wedding is next week....


do you like it....i'm almost done!

[NancyRox11]

You've got 2 write more!

[ISmellFine]

mmmmmmoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[NancyRox11]

You've got 2 post more soon!

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Jo: So things change. You're born, ya move on, ya die, that's life.
Tootie: They're so perfect for each other!
Jo: Yeah, she makes peoples sick and he cures them.
Blair: The moon was but a chin of gold a night or two ago. And now she turns her perfect face upon the world below. The Moon. Emily Dickinson.
Jo: It’s freezing. Jo Polniaczek

[Jinny_Extead]

You've GOT to post more!!!! It's really great! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

[WildChildJinny]

Originally posted by WildChildJinny:
Gimme me a "M"
Gimme me a "O"
Gimme em a "R"
Gimme em a "E"

GIMME ME MORE!!!!
Lol I LOVE THIS STORY!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif



HAHAHAHA I'll say it again. I NEED MORE! POST MORE SOON!



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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

[JoExstead]

Jinny's alarm went off and Jinny rolled over. She shut off her alarm and saw it was 11:30.
"Damit!" She said as she sat up. It was her wedding day and the wedding started in an hour and a half. She ran over to the closet to make sure her dress was still there. There it was. It was white, and not like usual wedding dresses. It was only to her thighs and very tight. She had while leather boots and a vail to go with it. Next to her dress was Jessy's. It was baby blue, and the same length. It wasn't as tight as Jinny's dress, but it was close. Magda, CD, and Angela had the same dress as Jessy. They were all the brides maides.
"Shower!" Jinny said to herself as she ran in the bathroom. About 15 mins later, she came out. Her hair was wet, and she had no make up. And she still had to put on her dress. "****!" Jinny said madly to herself as she ran in the living room. "Jessy...Jessy wake up!" Jinny said as she shook her.
"What?" Jessy asked madly as she looked at Jinny.
"You have to get ready. We have to be at the church by 12:30!!!" Jinny said


ok i g2g..but i'll write more later

[NancyJoJinny]

Oh yeah, thats typical Jinny... Late for her wedding!!!! MWAHAHAHA!! PLEASE WRITE MORE ASAP!

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not!

Jinny: Who in the hell ARE YOU!?!?!

CD: I think its best if she talks to someone sober.
Jinny: Yep! Prob'ly a good idea.

Teddy: I dont know... it just seemed intamate.
Jinny: Intamate.... No... I sleep with him, but i sleep with all the guys in the division, just my way of breakin em in!
Teddy: Yeah sorry, none of my buissiness.
Jinny: Youre damn right.

Jinny: And Inspector Exstead, nice too make your aquaintence, as a matter of fact, after I finish my very last silver patrone, Im gonna give you the once in a lifetime opportunity to squire me home!
Officer: Luitenant said you wanted too see us?

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

[JoExstead]

At the church, everyone was panicing. It was quater to 1 and Jinny wasn't there yet. Magda, CD, Angela, and the Captain were all waiting for her in the dressing room.
"Great! Jinny can't even be on time for work, never mind her wedding!" Magda said as she started pacing back and forth.
"Maybe she's having second thoughts" Angela suggested. CD, Magda, and the Captain all looked at her. "What?"
"You don't know Jinny very well" CD said as she shook her head. "Once Jinny makes a decision, she stays with it. And if she does have second thoughts, she says so and doesn't run away"
"Oh" Angela said, now getting worried. Just then, Jinny and Jessy ran into the dressing room.
"We actaully made it on time" Jessy said surprised.
"Thank God Jinny!" Magda said as she ran up to her and hugged her.
"What? You actually think I would be late for my own wedding?" Jinny asked. Eveyone looked at her and nodded. "Give me a break!" Jinny said as she laughed.
"Well, Exstead, this is it" Captain said as she walked over to Jinny. "Are you going to keep Exstead or make it Blumenthal" She asked. Jinny thought for a second.
"Exstead Blumenthal" She said as she smiled. Everyone laughed. Then there was a knock at the door.
"Who is it?" Jinny asked as she put her hand on the doorknob, getting ready to open it.
"It's father Mark. Are you ready to start?" he said. Jinny looked around her at Mag, CD, Angela, Jess, and Captain.
"Yes. Let's do it!" She said as they all left.

ok i g2 watch JAG...write more later

[jinny_jo_2001]

this is so awesome!

[Jinny_Extead]

This is great... keep going!

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

[JoExstead]

Jinny, Jessy, Magda, CD, Angela, and Captain all went to the hall and looked inside the church. Everyone they knew was there.
"You know what, this is a bad idea" Jinny said quickly as she turned around, but Jessy grabbed her a dragged her back.
"You did not make me where a dress for nothing!" Jessy said madly. "Now your getting married no matter what!" Jinny back away, kind of scared. Just then, one of the men doing the ceremony came over to Jinny holding a flower.
"Who is your maid of honor?" He asked Jinny, who had no idea.
"Uhh...I don't know" She said as she looked at her sister and her friends.
"We'll you have to have a maid of honor, and they have to wear this flower" He said as he showed Jinny the flower.
"Jessy" She finally said as she pointed to her.
"Oh..no! I don't think so. I am not wearing that thing!" Jessy said, as she puched the mans hand away when he tried to pin it on.
"You have to if your are the maid of honor" The man said as he again tried to pin it on.
"NO!" Jessy yelled as she kneed the guy in the stomach.
"Jessy!" Jinny said, but she couldn't help laughing.
"You can decied" The man said softly as she handed Jinny the flower and limped away. Jinny looked at her friends, and then at the Captain.
"Captain, will you...uh..will you.." Jinny tried to ask it, but couldn't.
"Yes." Captain said as she smiled and took the flower from Jinny. "I will be your maid of honor" Jinny's friends stood there in shock. Just then the music started playing.
"Well, here we go" CD said as they all got into a straight line, Jinny at the very back, following Captian. One by one they walked down the isle. Each one as pretty as they other. Well, except for Jinny, who stood out with her white leather boots. She was the prettiet. Finally, they got to the end of the isle. Jinny and Teddy's eyes meet...but there was something wrong with Teddy, he wasn't smiling. Jinny just figured it was because he was nervous. The priest went on and on until he got to the good part.
"Ok, now, Virgina Exstead, do you take this man, to love and to cherish, to have and to hold, through sickness and health, til death do you part?" The priest said, as he looked at Jinny, who had the biggest smile on her face.
"I do" She said as she squeezed Teddy's hand.
"And you Theadore Blumenthal, do you take this woman, to love and to cherish, to have and to hold, through sickness and health, til death do you part" the priest continued, as he looked at Teddy, who still wasn't smiling. Teddy didn't answer, he just paused.
"Teddy?" Jinny asked, waiting for him to say I DO.
"I can't..."


so what do you think.....i should finish it in the next day or two

[Jinny_Extead]

OMG... now that definately came as a shock... oh well KEEP GOING!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

[WildChildJinny]

Uh Oh! I never thought that Teddy would have second thoughts! This is really go keep going!

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

[jinny_jo_2001]

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE get the point?? I WANT MORE lol

-Lisa

[WildChildJinny]

Originally posted by jinny_jo_2001:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE get the point?? I WANT MORE lol

-Lisa

Ya what she said! lol http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif



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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

[JoExstead]

Ok, I'll write more today...but i havent been able to cuz I just got a lab top. I'm trying to figure out how to work it.....and i'm not being very succsessful. So i'll write more when Ii'm too confused to look at my lab top anymore.

[JoExstead]

Ok, I'm sorry it's been so long, but now here's the rest.

"What?" Jinny questioned nervously.
"I can't. I...I can't deal with you and your drinking and your baby" Teddy said, as he put his head down.
"Teddy, Teddy, I'm not having a baby. I had a miscarriage." Teddy looked up, surprised, but with no expression on his face.
"Oh...But I still can't deal with your drinking and sleeping around." He said, as he started to walk away.
"Wait!" Jinny yelled, as Teddy stopped, and slowly turned around. "I love you! You can't just walk out on me now, after all we've been through" Jinny said sadly, as a tear fell down her cheek. "I need you. I need you to help me with my "problems" Otherwise I'll never get over them." Jinny looked at Teddy, who now had a tear falling down his cheek too. He realized this was all his fault. If he hadn't asked Jinny to marry him while she was getting help, none of this would have happened. He ran back to Jinny and hugged her tightly. Everyone smiled as they watched. "I love you" Jinny said, as she squeezed him harder.
"I love you too" He said, as he finally let go. "Now lets get this over with" He said, as they both smiled, and went on with the marriage.

About a week later, Jinny walked into the Division with a sad look on her face.
"What's wrong newly wed?" CD asked, as she walked over to Jinny, followed by Magda and Angela.
"I...I'm pregnant...and it's...not Teddy's" Jinny said, as she slowly walked over to her desk. Her friends faces dropped! They didn't know what to say. But then a big smile came across Jinny's face. "Sike!" She yelled, as her friends took a big sigh of reielf. "It is his....." Jinny said, as she sat down and started to look at files....

THE END

OK, so what did you think?

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Jinny: How bout you and me partner up?
Magda: (Just stares at Jinny)
Jinny: Hey, woa, don't jump up and down there.

Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.
Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

CD: And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours?
Jinny: Yes, mom, but I routinly practice safe sex.

[Jo_Po]

Great Job- you should write a follow up story to this! Hope to read more of your fanfics soon =)


~Steph

[hockeychiC518]

that was awesome!!

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Jinny: They all start laughing at you. I mean we're not talking little girly giggles ,Theodore. We are talking ear splitting humiliation inducing derition here!"
Thoedore: "Why?"
Jinny: "Cause you're BUCK-NAKED my friend....

"one time at band camp..."-American Pie

"im wearing a dress..ive got gel in my hair...i havent got sleep in two days...im armed...dont mess with me"-Miss Congenality

[WildChildJinny]

AWESOME! A little late responding but awesome! Hehe

[This message has been edited by WildChildJinny (edited 09-07-2001).]