More on "The Accident that was planned"

[NancyMcKeonFan8976]

Magda: She's dropping...she's dropping!
Anglea: Great just when i got her calmed down.
(You hear Jinny's hospital door slam)
Casey: Oh, god! This is all my fault!
Kate: No, it isn't.
Casey: (cuts her off) Yes it is! I had to be...gay...and now jinny has to suffer.
(Jinny's Dad walks in)
Mr. Exstead: Hey guys...how is Jinny? (worry in his eyes)
C.D: We are not sure yet!
Doctor: Walks out of the room sweating and has blood on his hands.) We need a doner!
Magda: Of what?
Doctor: A kiddney..she was shot there and we thought it was fine...but it got a clot...so can i check anyone who would be willing to give up their kiddneys in the blood test room?
Casey: I'll go!
Dad: No way...mine is weak any way...she wouldn'et want mine!
Magda: I'll try to see if i am her blood type!
Angela: Me too!
C.D: I am right behind you! (She looks at the Captain)
Kate: Last, but not least ...me!

(40 minuets later)
Doctor comes into the waiting room with the results)
Doctor: Well... i am sorry...but none of you are her blood type
Magda: Oh, god...oh...please no
Doctor: But...i checked her family files and someone related to her named John has the same blood type. Do you think he would be willing to give up his kiddney for her?
C.D: He will have to...if she wants to live!
Kate: Magda, Angela you stay here with Jinny. Casey, C.D, Mr. Exstead you come with me to the station go have a chat with John.

(The Station)
Kate: Well, Well Well, John...you finally went over the edge.
John: What do you want?
C.D: John, we need you to give up your kiddney to save Jinny!
Casey: You owe it to her!!! Right Dad?
Mr. Exstead: What?...Oh yeah...
John: I won't do it!
Kate: Fine guys let's go...
Casey: But...Captain...Jinny needs it
Kate: We can't force him to do something he doesn't want to do!
Casey: So, we'll watch her die when she could have been saved? John, you hear that? You killed your own sister!

Should i continue? You like?

[ssgoalie8]

yeah continue this is good
-colleen-

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[LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815]

awesome so far and please continue!!!

[JJ]

Yeah! Continue, continue!

[NancyMcKeonFan8976]

Thanx for the support guys!!! It really makes me feel good about my writing!!! I really appriciate it! I will write more later tonite!!!

[NancyMcKeonFan8976]

Okay, i have homework so i can only write a little bit...but i will write more later!!

(Kate,Casey, Mr. Exstead, and C.D all return to the hospital)
Kate: Teddy?
Teddy: Yeah, i came home from Chicogo as soon as i heard...i am not her match(he looked down). What did John say?
C.D: He said...no, he doesn't care.
Magda: No, deep down he does! Let me go talk to him.
Angela: You sure?
Magda: Yes, i owe this to her..she would do the same for me!

(At the jail)
Magda: Hello John!
John: Oh..if it isn't Jinny's best friend here to rescue her.
Magda: Do you really want to let Jinny die? Even when you had a chance to save her? do you want to live with that?
John: You know...she wouldn't do the same for me.
Magda: Oh, come on John! You know she would!!! She loves you! Please, she needs you...your her older brother!!
John: NO!
Magda: But...(John cuts her off)
John: I said NO!
Magda: Fine...i'll tell Jinny you said goodbye...(she starts to walk away) forever!
(John, looks down as a tear stains the dusty floor.)

(Back at the hospital, Magda walks in)
Casey: So...?
Magda: He said no! I'm sorry!
C.D: Magda, don't be...we know you tried you best!
Magda: If i had gotten there sooner...
Angela: No, it isn't you!
(The doctor walks in with a conserned look on his face)
Doctor: So, where is John...Jinny doesn't have much time left...
Kate: He isn't coming!
Doctor: Well...what do you want me to do? Unplug her and let her die peacfully or let you all talk to her for the last hours she has left.
Mr. Exstead: I want her to stay with us as long as possible!
Doctor: She is awake! Who wants to see her first!
(Just then Magda's cell phone rings)
Magda: Hello?
John: Hi, this is my only call!
Magda: Fine what do you want?
John: I want to give Jinny my kiddney!
Magda: Yeah, right! You just want to get out of jail and then run for it, not save your younger sister!
John: No, really, i owe her this.
Magda: Fine, she has 3 hours. Get a cop to drive you here now...you have my consent!
(Magda hangs up the phone)
Kate: Who was that?
Magda: John...he said that he will give Jin one of his kiddneys!
Angela: That's great!
Magda: Well...lets see if he gets here?
(Kates phone rings)
Kate: Hello?
Officer: Hey, um...John was taken out of jail and he ran...we tried to catch him, but couldn't. We didn't try to shot him...because he is related to a cop of yours!!
Kate: WHAT??? FIND HIM!!!!
(Kate slams the phone on the desk)
Casey: What is it? John?
Kate: Jon is gone!!!
Magda: Then..that means Jinny has no chance....

To be continued if you want i will do more tonite!!

[Exstead]

Keep going Pleassseee!!! I really wnat to know what happens!!!

[JinnyExstead897]

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