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BlairW_2
04-07-2001, 09:29 PM
Okay, this is supposed to be a letter Jo wrote to Blair in Blair's dream after Jo died in her motorcycle accident that she was supposed to (they said she was gonna). This isn't a fan fiction but its a poem I wrote that is extremely emotional. Well, I hope you like it!
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Dear Blair,
Hi. It's Jo. I'm sure you heard about the crash.
I don't know how it happened - I wish my life could have last.
I was driving one night, all was fine. Until I heard a car.
I turned my head and lost control, hands off the steering bar.
I heard a loud crash, and then saw a light.
The light made it as though it wasn't even night.
I knew what had happened, but not where I was.
Was I in heaven? What was the buzz?
I then felt something. Something stange.
It was serious - nothing like a game.
I saw many flashbacks, of you and I.
I tried to avoid them, yes, I did try!
Because I knew I'd break in tears.
I am gone, I thought, after all those years.
I couldn't resist, so looked at them straight.
There were the times of cheerfullness, and even of hate.
I saw the day you and I met. And the 'best friend forever' promise we both kept.
I saw our Eastland School Graduation.
When we got our diplomas, I felt like we were in front of the nation!
I then saw all the aruguments and fights.
Remember when we stayed up late at night?
Remember when you were in your car crash?
Well, when you think of it, at least you did last.
I wanted many things, in my life.
Not only to be a normal house wife.
I wanted some children, one or two of them.
I wanted to smile at them, tuck them in bed.
I wanted to be able to tell stories of my life.
Not the painful ones, of pain and the strife.
I wanted to say "I remember those days!". When I would tell my grandkids the games I would play.
I wanted more time to enjoy my life.
I didn't know how quick, how fast it would fly.
I wanted to talk, about our past issues.
Maybe shed one or two tears on a tissue?
I wanted more time to be with Rick.
Remember he came dressed up as a chick?
I wanted to see you. See you all.
Tootie, Natalie, Mrs. G..you guys would pick me up when I'd fall.
Right now I am in heaven, I will be til then.
The day when we all will meet once again.
I really miss you, I do miss you all.
I wanted to see you, sometime this fall.
Right now I am crying - you probably are too.
You all probably did when you heard the bad news.
Out of them all, all the ones.
Your my best friend, though my life is done.
I will never forget you, not once at all.
You were a big part in my life, though it was small.
I have to go now. My time has come.
To say my goodbyes, to you and other ones I loved.
It is hard to do it, especially to you.
You helped me til my problems were through.
Now we must both start again. Something thats new.
A spiritual friendship, forever until.
I want to say sorry that I was killed.
I hope you heard me, my message is done.
Why was I God's chosen one?
Well, I am going. My time has come.
None of what happened can become undone.
Goodbye my best friend,
Goodbye everything.

~ The End ~

Well, how was it?

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NancyJoJinny
04-07-2001, 09:52 PM
Yup you were right it was sad...But i liked it alot...loved it.

Jo_Polniaczek
04-07-2001, 10:25 PM
OMG, I loved it!! I had tears in my eyes!

[This message has been edited by Jo_Polniaczek (edited 04-07-2001).]

FOL-FAN
04-07-2001, 11:09 PM
WOW! That WAS sad! I was crying like a baby when I was done http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Jo's Girl
04-07-2001, 11:32 PM
Sad...but wonderful!!! I loved it!!!

FolFanatic151
04-08-2001, 03:11 PM
Wow...that was good.

ZeldaGilroy
04-13-2001, 09:38 PM
You have a real talent for poetry! Wonderful jub!

Jo_Po
04-14-2001, 12:16 AM
Wow, that was so sad, but it was so good! Great job!


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Blair: (sighs)
Jo: "I hate it when you do that!"
Blair: "What?"
Jo: "Sigh!"
Blair: "I don't sigh!"
Jo: "Well if it isn't a sigh you've got a slow leak!"
Blair: (sighs)
Jo: "You did it again!"
Blair: "That's called breathing."
Jo: "You do it just to annoy me!"
Blair: "No,I do it to keep from dieing."
Jo: "Now there's an idea!!"
~Steph:)