All Over Again (1st Episode)

[Polniaczek-Bonner]

ok, here is part of the first episode in my series.

Ricki just found out that she may not get ot go back to the Bronx. Her and Jr are out side, and she is really mad!
"What do you mean?" Ricki said, as she jumped back "We may not get to go back to the Bronx?"
"Well..."Jr said "My father wants me to go to Bates, and you to go to Eastland. And I thought that it would be a good idea."
"I can't afford that! My mother didn't have that much money. How in the..." Ricki was interupted by Jr.
"Hey, hey, calm down". He hugged her close to him. "Blair said you could go for free. She will pay for you." He said as he put his hand through her hair. Ricki took a deep sigh
"I dunno..." she started. "I'd rather be in LA with my father. I'm going back to the Bronx, if I have to live by myself." She let go of Jr, and ran down the street to the house.

how do you like it so far? Is it dull?

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

[KerriBerri687]

i think it's great so far! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Luv yaz!
~Kerri~
Pal2125@aol.com

Blair- When I was little I used to be afraid of the Boogie Man and my daddy would say "don't worry hunny. we own the Boogie Man!

[Jo's Girl]

It's great!!! Please keep going your fan-fics are awesome...so are everyone elses!!

[Polniaczek-Bonner]

Jr went running after her, but she locked the door behind her.
"Ricki!" He yelled "Ricki this isn't funny.! Rick...oh forget it" He said as he sat dont on the ground.
Mean while, Ricki ran upstairs, pulled out a back pack, and started packing. She then looked at the clock.
"7:39" She said outloud to herself "I hafta stall for an hour and a half. how am I supposed to...." She started out frowning, but then got an idea. "I know!" She said as she ran downstairs, and opened the door.
"Well thanks a lot!" An angrey jr said, as he stomped inside. He started to walk over to the couch...but Ricki grabed his arm, pulled him back, and kissed him. At first Jr was surprised, and tried to pull back. But after a while, he got into it. After a while, they stoped, and went and sat on the couch.
"I'm sorry" Ricki said "You're right! Eastland will be a great school! If my mother could do it, then I can do it." She smiled, and then so didn't Jr.
"Thats great!" He said "I'll go tell my dad!" He got up, and ran into the shop. Ricki just sat there and smirked.
"Ya right!" She said to herself. "Me, at Eastland!" She laughed to herself then turned on the TV "ha!" She said one last time.

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.