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Polniaczek-Bonner
03-27-2001, 04:13 PM
I'm glad that you all liked my first fanfic. And if anyone wants to do a joint one, you can e-mail me at ray1324@mediaone.net, or talk to me online at BikerGirl182. Anyway, here's the introduction to my next fanfic. It just tells whats been happinging. I wrote this during history, while listening to a speach about Martian Van Buren, so it might be a little off....but i hope it's good.

It had been three days since Jo died. They were the longest three days that everyone had ever experinced. Especially Blair, Nat, Tootie, and Mrs.G. They would cry on and off for hours at a time. Ashley, Julia, and Emily went back to their normal lives, or at least tried. The had never seen their parents so sad. Andy and Pipa were doing better,too. They were busy packing and moving their stuff to their new appartment across town. Of corse everytime they found something of their past, they started to cry. Bev was busy taking care of everything around the house, because Mrs.G wasn't up to it. Bev was being pretty strong, except when she saw Ricki. Then she would lose it too. Rick wasn't around much. He would pop in every few hours to check on everything, and to make plans for the funeral. Ricki spent a lot of time with Eddie and Jr, and learned a lot about her mother she didn't know. Secret stuff. She looked at her ring every once and a while, and thats when she would cry. Then when she cried, Eddie did, and Jr calmed them down. Everone was also trying to figure out what was going to happen to Ricki. Rick couldn't take care of her because he was getting married in a few days. Blair wanted to adopt her, but Ricki said no. So they are still thinking, but have decided that the funeral will be the day before Rick's wedding, which is in 4 days. Now Ricki, Ashley, Julia, Emily, and Jr are in the living room watching a movie. Blair, Nat, Tootie, Bev, Mrs.G, Eddie, and Rick went to look at funeral homes. Andy and Pipa are upstairs packing.

Ok, so what do you think so far? Now i'm going to start it. This was only the intro.

BlairandJo
03-27-2001, 04:19 PM
great so far,I'd love to do a joint fan fiction,But I can't start till I finish Brooke's Friend,Its almost done,If You let me do one with you we could start right after
I finish Brooke's Friend.Let me Know.

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The rest of Brooke's friend is coming soon,keep looking.
The Facts Of Life Rules!!
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N:I can't belive it!
J:Well you did'nt have to yell!
N:Well I was mad!!!
J:A library Is like a church you are suppose to be nice and Quiet!!!!
B:SSSSHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
J:Take a hike.

FOL-FAN
03-27-2001, 04:26 PM
So far so good http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Wild Child
03-27-2001, 04:40 PM
It sounds great!I can't wait to read it....Only one question.Will I need more tissues for the funeral? http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

KerriBerri687
03-27-2001, 05:34 PM
awsome! can't wait for more!

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<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Luv yaz!
~Kerri~
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LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815
03-27-2001, 06:41 PM
great cant wait for more!!!

lil_Miss_actress
03-27-2001, 08:46 PM
Originally posted by Wild Child:
It sounds great!I can't wait to read it....Only one question.Will I need more tissues for the funeral? http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif


I know! I've cried sooo much today while reading these fan fics! We need a warning *Caution May Produce Tears*
j/k~
Jessica



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So things change your born, you move on, you die-thats life!- Jo
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Jinny: And little red blew the big bad wolf's big hairy butt to smitheriens!
Magna: Thanks alot Jinny..
Jinny:And they all lived happliy ever after..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ C.D: Why don't you let me talk to her? Jinny: What's that about!? C.D: Jinny, She just needs a little coddling right now.. (leaves) Jinny: I can "Coddle"
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"Buddy, I got PMS and a Gun, Any questions?"- Jinny Exstead

Exstead
03-29-2001, 07:28 PM
Originally posted by Wild Child:
It sounds great!I can't wait to read it....Only one question.Will I need more tissues for the funeral? http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif


That Speaks for me!!!!


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Jinny:God She's got to bug up her a** for me.
CD: Why?
Jinny: Oh how should I know...maybe I'm not her idea of what a lady cop should look and act like.

~Exstead~

james_baby87
07-30-2002, 04:24 PM
Originally posted by Wild Child
It sounds great!I can't wait to read it....Only one question.Will I need more tissues for the funeral? http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!
I got the same question

Impressions
07-30-2002, 04:32 PM
That is very sad, I'd hate that to be in the show it would be to depressing, maybe in a spin-off, that was very good, I really like to hear the rest of it! :crying: They don't call me the leaky faucet for nothing, lol.

BonniesLilCutiePie
07-31-2002, 10:51 AM
It sounds awesome so far! I can't wait to read it! You truly have a TON of talent!