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Polniaczek-Bonner
03-22-2001, 08:17 PM
A short, red haired old woman sat on the couch of their child-hood home when the phone rang.

Polniaczek-Bonner
03-22-2001, 08:44 PM
Sorry i got cut off so i'll start all over again.

A short, red haired old woman sat on the couch of their childhood home when the phone rang.
"hello" tshe said tiredly.
"hey Mrs.G" the voice said.
"Oh my God, Jo?" Mrs. G answered in shock.
"Ya, how ya doin'"? Jo said calmly.
"Great. Bruce died a few years ago, so i moved back in here with beverly. Andy and Pippa are on their honeymoon, but should be back soon, and Eastland is doing great. Blair is still headmaster, and has a daughter, who is about 14, I think.
"Wow! I'm sorry to hear about Bruce." Jo said sadly.
"Thats ok." Mrs.G continuted. "So what about you?"
"Well, I also have a daughter ,Ricki, thats about 14 too, and 12 years ago, Rick and I got a divorce."
"Oh, thats too bad." Mrs.G said
"Thats ok" Jo continuted "I still love him, but it didn't work. I havent heard from him since he moved to LA right after the divorce. O well, anyway the reason i'm calling is I have something important to tell everyone, and I was wondering if we could have a get-together thing, like a reunion.
"Well, that sounds like a great idea! How about in a month or so?"
"No, it has to be sooner. Please Mrs.G, it's very important!" Jo said, with pain coming out in her voice.
"Ok, Jo, is something wrong?" Mrs. G questioned nervously.
"yes, but i want to tell everyone together, including my daughter."
"Ok" Mrs. G said. "I'll call them. How does next week sound?"
"Perfect, the sooner the better!" Jo said quietly.


Well what do you think so far? is it good?

NancyJoJinny
03-22-2001, 08:55 PM
PPLLEEAASSEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! The suspense is killing me!!!!!!

Chrisjo7
03-22-2001, 08:57 PM
Love it! post more tonight!

FOL-FAN
03-22-2001, 09:18 PM
Originally posted by NancyJoJinny:
PPLLEEAASSEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! The suspense is killing me!!!!!!

Ditto!

Polniaczek-Bonner
03-22-2001, 10:04 PM
Ok, here's some more! I'm glad you like it!

Mrs.G was pacing back and forth. "I can't believe you mother can't make it!" She screamed up the the stairs.
"My mother is an extremely busy woman, what can I say?" said a blonde girl, coming down the stairs, flipping her hair. "Being a headmaster is very stressful."
"I know Ashley, but Jo said it was important, and something is wrong." Mrs.G said both angrey and worried.
"From what my mother tells me about Jo, Wrong could just mean her bike needs a lube job." Ashley said with her mother's sarcasim.
"Ashley!!!" snapped Mrs.G "She sounded scared."

Just then the doorbell rang.
"I'll get it." Ashley said, followed by a sigh. She opened the door to see a girl, about 14, with a leather jacket, jeans, a plain blue t-shirt, and brown hair down to her shoulders.
"Please don't hurt us!!" Ashley screamed as she pulled back, and threw her hands in the air.
"I'm lookin for a Mrs.G?" the girl said.
"Thats me, you must be Jo's daughter, Ricki."
"ya, how'd ya know?" she said just like her mother.
"She's the only one who calls me Mrs. G." she said as she laughed. "come in, come in. Where's your mother?"
"She had a doctors appointment, but she should be here in a few hours. She told me to come and wait here, do ya mind?" She asked, trying to sound nice"

i g2g write more later

Polniaczek-Bonner
03-22-2001, 10:05 PM
Ok, here's some more! I'm glad you like it!

Mrs.G was pacing back and forth. "I can't believe you mother can't make it!" She screamed up the the stairs.
"My mother is an extremely busy woman, what can I say?" said a blonde girl, coming down the stairs, flipping her hair. "Being a headmaster is very stressful."
"I know Ashley, but Jo said it was important, and something is wrong." Mrs.G said both angrey and worried.
"From what my mother tells me about Jo, Wrong could just mean her bike needs a lube job." Ashley said with her mother's sarcasim.
"Ashley!!!" snapped Mrs.G "She sounded scared."

Just then the doorbell rang.
"I'll get it." Ashley said, followed by a sigh. She opened the door to see a girl, about 14, with a leather jacket, jeans, a plain blue t-shirt, and brown hair down to her shoulders.
"Please don't hurt us!!" Ashley screamed as she pulled back, and threw her hands in the air.
"I'm lookin for a Mrs.G?" the girl said.
"Thats me, you must be Jo's daughter, Ricki."
"ya, how'd ya know?" she said just like her mother.
"She's the only one who calls me Mrs. G." she said as she laughed. "come in, come in. Where's your mother?"
"She had a doctors appointment, but she should be here in a few hours. She told me to come and wait here, do ya mind?" She asked, trying to sound nice"

i g2g write more later

FOL-FAN
03-22-2001, 10:11 PM
You're killing me here! Post more soon; It's going great!

Chrisjo7
03-22-2001, 10:16 PM
So your posting more tonight right? (I hope)

NancyJoJinny
03-22-2001, 10:46 PM
You know how to leave people in suspense, but its killing me so pplleeaassee finish

KerriBerri687
03-23-2001, 03:29 PM
ooooooooh! i'm lovin this! awsome awsome awsome! write more asap!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Luv yaz!
~Kerri~
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BlairztheBest (IM me there..itz not my e-mail address though...)

Wild Child
03-23-2001, 05:02 PM
Please write more soon! I'm dien ova here! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eek.gifYour doing a great job so far... http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Polniaczek-Bonner
03-23-2001, 05:46 PM
I'm glad you like it so much. Ok here's some more:

"No, no. You can stay as long as you want." Mrs. G answered.
"Thanks." Ricki replied as she walked in, and past Ashley.
"I'm Ashley Warner." Ashley said proudly, flipping her hair back. "I'm obviously Blairs daughter."
"No!" Ricki said sarcastily. "I'm Ricki Polniaczek! I'm obviously Jo's daughter." She said, mocking Ashley as she went to sit on the couch. She looked at the chocolate chip cookies on the table and smiled. "I've been dying to taste you cookies."
"Why, doesn't you mother make cookies?" Mrs.G questioned.
"Sadly, and she makes me eat them." Ricki said, with a sour face. She picked up a cookie, and tasted it. "Wow! These are really good." she mumbled with her mouth full
"I know," Mrs.G said, sounding a little concited. They all laughed, then the doorbell rang.
"I'll get it." Ashley said, sounding annoyed. She opened the door to see Tootie and Jeff, with a 12 year old girl, and Natale and a blonde haired guy with a 10 year old girl. "Who are you?" Ashley asked
"I'm toote, this is Jeff, and this is my daughter Emily." Tootie said, walking over to Mrs.G.
"Tootie! Jeff!" Mrs.Garret yelled. "It's so nice to see you both. And it's nice to meet you Emily."
"It's nice to meet you to, Mrs.Garret." Emily said nicely.
"It's nice to see you too, Mrs.Garret. It's been to long." Tootie finished as her and Jeff both hugged Mrs.G.
"And I'm Natalie, this is my husband Chris, and our daughter Julia." Natale said as her and her family followed tootie to hug Mrs.G.
"Oh Nat, I've missed you soooo much," said Mrs.G with tears in her eyes. "And it's nice to meet you Chris and Julia."
"It's nice to meet you too," they both said.
"Uh hem," Ashley cleared her throat, and awaited a response.
"Oh yes, this is Blairs daughter, Ashley," Mrs.G said pointing to her.
"Hi, it's very nice too meet you. my mother told me so much about you both." Ashley said, again flipping her hair.
"you too," Tootie said smiling.
"And this is Jo's daughter, Ricki." Mrs.G said, pointing to Ricki.
"Hey how ya doin?" Ricki said.
"Yep, thats Jo's daughter." Natalie said.
"Well, you know what they say, like mother like daughter." said Tootie, as they all laughed, except for Ricki.

Just then the door bell rang again.
"I'll..." Ashley started but was interupted.
"I'll get it," tootie interupted. She ran to the door, and opened it to see Jo!!!
"Jo!!!" Natalie and Tootie ran to give her a hug.
"Hey guys, how ya doin'?" Jo asked, sort of smiling, but sort of not.
"This is Jo?" Ashley said with her mothers tone.
"Ya, this is me!" Jo said. "And let me take a wild guess, you Blairs daughter?"
"Yes, I am!!!" She said loudly and prodly.
"So, where's your mother?" Jo asked.
"Ya where is Blair?" Tootie continued.
"Oh, she couldn't make it, she had a very important meeting in France." Ashley answered
"Oh" Jo said sadly. "Well where is everyone else?"
"I'm here!" Ricki said, trying to get her mother's attention, knowing something was wrong.
"Oh, I guess you all met my daughter Erica Blair Marie Polniaczek!"
"Ricki!" Ricki said repetedly. "Ricki"
"Yes, and she's just like you" Tootie said.
"Thats what i'm affraid of!" Jo said as they all laughed.
"Oh, Jo, this is my daughter Emily," Tootie said,
"hi" Emily said nicely.
"Hey" Jo answered.
"And Jo, this is my husband Chris" Natalie continued "And my daughter Julia."
"Hi" They both said at once.
"Hey" Jo replied. "Where's Andy and Pipa amd Bev?"
"They all went to the store, but should be back soon." Mrs G said. "Hi JO."
"Hey Mrs.G" She said as she gave her a hug. "Sorry, I forgot about you."
"Oh, thanks." Mrs G said sarcastily.
"So, Jo what was so imortant that we had to hear?" Asked ashley meanly.
"Hey, be nice" Mrs G snapped.
"you guys better sit down" Jo said "Especially you Ricki"
"Whats wrong mom?" Ricki asked as they all sat down.
"Well, I don't know how to say this..." She started to get a little shaky. "I'm...I'm..."
"Your what?" They all asked.
"I'm dying!!!" She said as tears rolled sown her face...

Well, i want to leave you in suspence. So tell me how you like it!

Chrisjo7
03-23-2001, 06:00 PM
Really good!!!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Love The Facts Of Life
03-23-2001, 07:25 PM
This is so good don't leave me hangin post more soon http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points.
Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law

Blair:If I don't spend money soon,well I'll just pull all my hair out.
Jo:Good,we'll finally get to see what color the roots are.
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Wild Child
03-23-2001, 09:05 PM
This is going great! I like being in suspence...but not a lot so post more soon! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Polniaczek-Bonner
03-23-2001, 10:57 PM
Ok here's some more:

Everyone's face dropped!!
"Excuse me?" Ashley said.
"What!?" yelled Ricki. "Why? How? Who?"
"ricki, Ricki, calm down." Jo said surprisingly calm. "It's ok."
"Ok! Jo, how can you say that?? Whats wrong? Why are you dying?" Tootie jumped up at Jo, while yelling.
"I have AIDS."
"Oh my god, Jo." Mrs.G said, her eyes tearing up. "How?"
"It was just a one night stand with a guy at a bar. I had no idea." Jo said as she wipped her tears away. Ricki got up and stomped up the stairs. "I only have about a month at the most to live. Thats why I had to go to the doctors. To get my time limit."
"Maybe I should go talk to her" Ashley suggested.
"No, thats ok, I'll take care of it." Jo ran up the stairs, into her old room, where she figured Ricki would be. When she walked in, Rick was looking around in amazment.
"So, you used to live here,?" She said trying to sound ok.
"Ya, nice, isn't it!" Jo replied, knowing Ricki was upset. "Are you ok?"
"What do you think, ma? You just told me you were dying! How long do you have? A year or two?" Ricki yelled at first but calmed down.
"I told everyone downstairs a month, but thats at the most." Jo replied with a tear in her eye.
"WHAT!! Thats not true! They can tell people at least a year in advance!" Ricki was again screaming.
"I've known for about a year, I just didn't want you to worry about me. I wanted you to have a normal life, without feeling like you had to take care of me..." Before Jo could finish, Ricki interupted.
"What do you mean! Your my mother.."
"Yes, I am aware of that," Jo said, trying to add humor with her tears
"I'm supposed to worry about you. I'm supposed to take care of you! If you told me when you found out, all I would have done differently was treasure the little time we see each other." Ricki started to cry, hard. "I love you, mom, I love you so much!!" she ran over to her mother and hugged her.
"I know, I know" Jo said as a tear fell from her eye, onto Ricki's forhead. "I love you too!"

I've got to go, i'll write more later, but now i want to watch the division, it's on in 5 mins (Even though it's really lame)

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Blair- It's 1984, isnt it
Jo- Very good, now do you wanna guess what planet we're on

BlairandJo
03-24-2001, 01:08 AM
Keep going this is great.

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The rest of Brooke's friend is coming soon,keep looking.
The Facts Of Life Rules!!
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N:I can't belive it!
J:Well you did'nt have to yell!
N:Well I was mad!!!
J:A library Is like a church you are suppose to be nice and Quiet!!!!
B:SSSSHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
J:Take a hike.

KerriBerri687
03-24-2001, 11:10 AM
sniff sniff! i have tears in my eyes! this is so good! so sad...but sooooooo great! keep it going! i luuuuuuuuv it!

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<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Luv yaz!
~Kerri~
Pal2125@aol.com

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815
03-24-2001, 06:17 PM
this is awesome so far!!! keep going~

AlexzBonner
03-24-2001, 06:43 PM
Kenzie: (screams! Then falls out of chair.) AHHHHHHHHH! Can't... go... on... Must... have... more... fan fic... (Sighs Blair's sigh.) Pwease?

Seriously, this is GREAT!!!!! I LOVE it! Keep it comin'!

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B: God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference.
J: Where'd you hear that?
B: It's on the plaque over there.
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J: Tell Mrs. G we're out of mouthwash!
B: Well, if it isn't the kissing valedictorian.
J: Blair I have a sense of humor just like everybody else, but there are certain things in life we do not laugh at.
The Yankees and what Roy did to me. Never, are you ever to mention that!
T: He really planted one on you, didn't he?
N: Your face turned purple!
T: No oxygen!

God bless your every footstep,
~_~ Kenzie ~_~
E-Mail-- LoveNancyMcKeon@webtv.net
or
teddysangeljinny@yahoo.com
or
toocuteforyou67890@yahoo.com

Polniaczek-Bonner
03-24-2001, 08:35 PM
Ok, here's some more.

Just then, everyone came in, including Bev, Andy, and Pipa. Jo and Ricki quickly backed away from each other, and wipped there tears.
"Oh my God, Jo, we're so sorry." Bev said, as she went to give Jo a hug.
"Hi, Bev."
"Are you ok, Jo?" Andy asked, as he hugged her after Bev.
"Ya, I'm fine." Jo answered and then turned and looked at Pipa. "How ya doin, Pipa?"
"I'm doing great." She answered as she hugged Jo.
"Congradulations, by the way. I'm very happy for you two." She said as Andy put his arm around Pipa.
"Thanks" They both said sadly. Then they turned and looked at Ricki who was holding back her tears, and wipping away the ones that made it through. "Are you going to introduce us?" Andy asked.
"Oh, ya." Jo said as she motioned for Ricki to join them. "This is my daughter, Ricki."
"Hey" Ricki said, still wipping her tears away.
"Hey, it's nice to meet you." Bev said.
"You too" Ricki said with a little smile.
Everyone just looked in awww.
"Well, I'm hungrey. Lets go eat!" Jo said, walking out of the room.
"Good idea" Mrs.G said, looking like she was going to cry.
"Ya!" said Emily. "I've always wanted to taste Mrs.Garrets cooking.
"Me too" Said Ricki, following her mother "Lets go eat!" They all leave the room.

3 weeks later.

Emily and Julia are playing cards on the table. Ricki is watching TV, and Ashley is on the couch next to her, fixing her makeup. Jeff and Chris had gone home and back to work. Mrs.G and Bev are in the kitchen, Andy and Pipa are upstairs, and Nat, Tootie, and Jo all went out.
"YA!! Homerun! Go Jeter!!" Ricki yelled at the TV. "Yankees are kickin' butt!" She said as she turned to Ashley.
"Did they get another touch down?" Ashley asked, seeming interested.
"Homerun!!! A touch down is football!"
"I knew that" Ashley said just like her mother. Just then the phone rang. "I'll get it." Ashley said, walking over to the phone. "Hello? Oh, hi mother. Yes,everything is fine. Another two weeks? Mother you've been in France for almost a month. Ok, I love you to. Bye."
"Was that blair?" Ricki asked
"Yes" Ashley answered. "She cant make it this week. She has to stay in France another 2 weeks!"
"But what about her "surpise" visit for my mom? My mom really wants to see her before...you know." Ricki said, starting to get sad again.
"She tried to get out of it, but unless she wants to loose her job, she had to stay. I'm sorry, Ricki" Ashley said, realizing how much Ricki wanted to make her mother happy.
"It's ok. It's not your fault." Ricki said as she turned to watch the game again. All of a sudden, Nat and Tootie came in, supporting Jo so she could stand up.
"Mom!" Ricki jumped up and went to see what the problem was.
"I'm ok, really. I just got weak. I just need to..." Jo fainted before she could finish.
"Whats all the...Oh my god, call 911!" Mrs.G said as her and Bev were coming out of the kitchen.
"Mom! Mom! Wake up! wake up! you have to! You cant die! MOM!!!" Ricki yelled and started to cry.
"We'll call 911" Julia said as her and Emily ran to the phone.

At the Hospital.
They were all waiting in the living room. Just then a doctor came in, and took a deep breath.
"Please tell me she's not dead" Tootie said despretly.
"She's not dead....yet." The doctor replied.
"What do you mean yet?" Nat asked
"She's ok for now, but she only has a few days left. I'm sorry, but you can go see here now." The doctor turned and left, seeing the family needed to be alone.
"We'll, I guess we should go she her" Andy said, holdin Pipa close to him.
"Why don't you guys go first." Ricki told Nat and Tootie with tears in her eyes, and sadness in her voice. "I hafta call my dad anyway."
"No, why don't we all go." Tootie said. "We'll meet you in there. Are you going to be ok, Ricki?"
"Ya, tell mom i'll be right in." Ricki said as she walked away.
They all went into Jo's room. She had wires everywhere, and a needle in her arm.
"Hey Jo." Mrs.G said, trying not to cry. "How are you?"
"As good as can be expected from someone who's dying." Jo answered, trying to sound better then she was.
"Jo, dont say that!" Tootie said as she started to cry. "You can't die!! You can't just leave us here."
"Mom, mom, it's ok" Emily said, scared to see her mother cry.
"Emily's right." Pipa said. "It's goning to be ok. We just need to stick together."
Jo smiled, and Tootie wipped the tears away from her face.
"Where's Ricki?" Jo asked, looking around.
"She went to..." Ashley was interupted by Ricki.
"I went to the bathroom." Ricki said, not wanting her mother to know she called her father.
"Sure, your mothers dying, and you have to go to the bathroom" Jo said sarcasticly, making everyone smile.
"I'm sorry mom, but natured called, what are you gonna do about." Ricki said, trying to add some humor to the room. Everyone laughed a little, but then came back to reality.
"I don't beleive I'm never gonna get to say good to Blair." Jo said, her smiling turning to a frown.
"I'd never say never...." A voice said from outside the room. "Hello, all" Blair said as she entered the room.


well, i g2g i hope you like it. I'll write more later.

FOL-FAN
03-24-2001, 08:53 PM
Awesome! Keep it going!

ZeldaGilroy
03-24-2001, 10:06 PM
This is sooooooo sad! I don't know if I can finish reading it. You have done a great job writing this fanfic. I cried when Jo told her daughter she only had a month to live. I know it sounds crazy, but although I really like this fanfic, I may be too emotional to read the ending.

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815
03-24-2001, 10:43 PM
omg this is soooooooooo sad!!!i am bout to cry(sniff sniff), but this is soooooooooooo great cant wait for more, u cant leave me hanging here!

KerriBerri687
03-24-2001, 11:22 PM
omg...we must talk...tell me ur secrets! i try and try and try but my most emotional fanfic can't even compare to one section of this! this is soooooooo good! write more asap!

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Luv yaz!
~Kerri~
Pal2125@aol.com

[This message has been edited by Blair n' Jo Rock (edited 03-24-2001).]

Polniaczek-Bonner
03-25-2001, 12:04 AM
I'm glad you guys like it soo much. This is my first fanfic, but i think i'm gonna end up writing somemore. I can only write a little now, but it should be finished in the nexted day or so. Thanx for your support.

Everybodies face dropped!
"Blair!!" Everyone but they kids said
"Mother!" Ashley ran to give her mother a hug. "I thought you were going to be in France for 2 more weeks! You couldn't have gotten here from France that fast!"
"I called you from the airport in New York City. I wanted to surprise you all." Blair said proudly. She made her way to Jo's bed, hugging everyone, except the kids, on the way.
"Jo" Blair said quietly with a tear forming in her eye.
"Blair" Jo said, with a little smile. They looked at each other for a minute, then hugged each other very tightly. Then they both started to cry.
"I missed you so much" Blair said through her tears.
"I missed you too" Jo said, also through her tears. Finally they let go of each other.
"Oh" said Jo, wipping her tears away, "This is my daughter, Ricki" She pointed at Ricki, and Ricki stuck out her hand.
"Hey, how ya doin?" Ricki said just like her mother. But instead of shaking her hand, Blair threw her arms around Ricki and hugged her almost as much as she hugged Jo.
"Noo" Ricki said as she tried to pull away. But Blair just kept holding her. Finally Ricki just gave up and patted Blair on the back. After what seemed like forever, Blair let go.
"Your just like your mother" Blair said, tears rolling down her cheak.
"I know" Ricki said "Beleive me, I know" she said, a little annoyed. Everyone smiled and then they heard a familar voice. Well, familar to some of them.
"Hey honey" Said Rick as he walked in the door. Everyone but Ricki looked in disbelief.
"Rick? What the hell are you doin here?" Jo asked really surprised.
"Well now i feel right at home" Rick said at Jo's mean remark. "Ricki called me and.." before he could finish, Jo turned to Ricki.
"Ricki..." She said, sounding like she was gonna scream. "How did you find him!" she said, with a sudden happness.
"Well, you have his number near the phone. So I called him. And no, mom, he doesn't live in LA. He lives in New York City." Ricki said, very happy to see her dad.
"Erica Blair Marie Bonner." Rick said looking at her happily.
"Polniaczek!" Ricki corrected him. "It's Polniaczek. And don't call me that. Ricki is just fine!!"
"Your daughters middle name is Blair?" Blair said, again with the tears. "What an honor." Everyone just smilied as Rick walkedover and kissed Jo.
"I love you" He wispered, while he was bent over. "I always have, and always will" Then he stood up straight, and turned to Ricki, who was right next to Jo's bed. She just looked at him, then jumped up and hugged him for a long time.
"I missed you dad!!!" She said, very excited to see him.
"I've missed u too, Ricki, I've missed you too."


Well i got to go again, but like i said, it should be finished in the next day or so.

[This message has been edited by Polniaczek-Bonner (edited 03-25-2001).]

BlairandJo
03-25-2001, 01:34 AM
This is soooooooooo good,Post more soon

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The rest of Brooke's friend is coming soon,keep looking.
The Facts Of Life Rules!!
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N:I can't belive it!
J:Well you did'nt have to yell!
N:Well I was mad!!!
J:A library Is like a church you are suppose to be nice and Quiet!!!!
B:SSSSHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
J:Take a hike.

FOL-FAN
03-25-2001, 10:28 AM
OMG This is reallly sad! I think I'm going to cry now. Post more soon!!!

Polniaczek-Bonner
03-25-2001, 12:39 PM
Ok, here's more:

Once Ricki finally let go of her father, he turned around and hugged Bev, Pipa, Tootie, Nat, and Blair, and then Andy.
"I missed you guys." Rick said. "And let me guess, you are Mrs.G!" Rick said, turning around to look at her.
"Yes, thats me. It's very nice to meet you Rick" She said with a smile.
"You too." He said "But i feel like i already know you. Jo used to talk about you all the time"
"Well.." She said her smile getting bigger.
Then Rick turned and looked at Ashley, Emily, and Julia, who were kind of near Ricki.
"And who, might i ask, are these 3 lovely ladies?" Blair walked over next to him and looked at Julia and Emily.
"I was wondering the same thing" She added.
"Oh, this is my daughter, Emily." Tootie said as she walked over to her.
"Yes, and this is my daughter, Julia" Nat said, following Tootie.
"Hi girls." Rick and Blair said.
"Hi" They answered
"And who is this" Rick asked Blair, looking at Ashley.
"Obviously this is my daughter, Ashley"
"Obviously" Rick said sarcasticly. "It's nice to meet you, Ashley." He said politly.
"Nice to meet you too, Mr.Bonner." Ashley said, while flirting her eyes, and flipping her hair.
"You can call me Rick" He said "Mr.Bonner sounds, soo....I dunno, just call me Rick."
"Ok, Rick" Ashley said still flipping her hair.
"Well," said Bev. "Me, Edna, Andy, and Pipa are going to go to the cafiteria to eat. Do you guys want something?"
"Ya, Can I..." Ricki started, but her mother interupted.
"No, we're fine" Jo said.
"MA!" Ricki complained.
"Ok, we'll see you guys later." Andy said, as he folled the rest of them out of the room. Then the room was quiet for a while. Emily stood near Tootie, Julia near Nat, Ashley near Blair, and Rick and Ricki near Jo's bed.
"Mom," Emily started "I'm hungry"
"Ya, me too" Julia added "Can we go to the cafeteria, and meet up with Andy and them"
"Ya," Nat said" Go head.
"Thank you!" Emily said as they both ran out of the room.
"Well," Jo said. "I don't think this could get any better. I'm glad I have you guys, all of you." Everyone got up and moved to Jo's bed. Ricki and Ashley backed away and sat down at the other side of the room.
"I don't know how I'm going to make it with out her" Ricki said to Ashley.
"You have us" Ashley said, trying to make her feel better.
"I know, but thats not enough,"
"You have your dad" Ashley continued. "you have Natalie and Tootie"
"My dad isn't sticking around for long. He's getting married in a week." Ricki said sadly. "And Natalie and Tootie have family's of their own. And so don't you. I don't know who i'm gonna stay with." Just then there was another familiar voice.
"Hey guys" He said as he walked in, Everyone that was huddle around Jo's bed, turned around.
"Eddie!" Jo yelled "I don't beleive this" She said, sounding kind of mad. "I haven't seen you for so long!"

I'll write more later! Hope you like it.

Wild Child
03-25-2001, 02:52 PM
Eddie's back!! LOL...This is really awsome. I
love this story.It's sad but good!Post more soon. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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FOL-FAN
03-25-2001, 03:04 PM
Ditto!

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815
03-25-2001, 03:50 PM
well i wasnt expecting eddie to come back but yah hes back!!! great so far cant wait to read more

Polniaczek-Bonner
03-25-2001, 04:57 PM
ok, here's some more:

"Well, well, well," Blair said as she started to walk around Eddie "Eddie, Eddie, Eddie"
"Blair, Blair Blair" Eddie said, mocking her. They just stared into each other's eyes with a mean look, then all of a sudden Blair threw her arms around him. Rick looked at them, then when Blair was finished, walked over to him.
"So, your Eddie" Rick said firmly.
"Ya, who are you?" Eddie answered
"I'm Rick, Jo's husband." Rick said
"Ex-Husband" Jo corrected. Eddie smiled at Jo, and pushed by Rick to go see her. He gave her a small kiss on the cheak, and then looked around. Tootie and Natalie ran right up to him and gave him a hug. Then Eddie turned and looked at Ricki, who had a "What the hell" Expersion on her face.

80skid
03-25-2001, 05:33 PM
ooooooooh post more! luv it! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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"I'm not quirky, I'm just me!" - Badminton A rocks!

Jo: How about you park it on Blair's face?
Natalie: She's a breath of fresh air, isn't she?

Jo: When my dad doesn't like people, Blair, he doesn't show it. Look how he treated you!

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FOL-FAN
03-25-2001, 05:42 PM
Love it. Love it. Love it!!!

Love The Facts Of Life
03-25-2001, 06:07 PM
This is SOOOOOOOOO good you have 2 write more soon http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points.
Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law

Blair:If I don't spend money soon,well I'll just pull all my hair out.
Jo:Good,we'll finally get to see what color the roots are.
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God Bless Everyone
email me @ jinnyandteddy4ever@yahoo.com

KerriBerri687
03-25-2001, 07:51 PM
post more ASAP! this is soooooooo good!

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Polniaczek-Bonner
03-25-2001, 08:06 PM
Sorry i didnt put much last time. I was supposed to be doing my chores and my dad was coming. well, anyway, here you go:

Eddie walked over to Ricki, and Ricki got up.
"Hey, How ya doin'?" Ricki said.
"You must be Jo's daughter" Eddie said, looking at her and smiling.
"And mine" Rick added. Ricki and Jo gave Rick "The look" and then Ricki turned back to Eddie.
"Ya. Ricki" She said, as he held out her hand.
"Eddie" Eddie said, as he shook it. Then a boy, Ricki and Ashley's age walked in the room. He was tall, dark, and yes, very handsome. "Oh, everyone, I would like you to meet my son, Eddie Jr." Eddie said, as the boy walked over to him. "Eddie, this is Jo, Blair, Natalie and Tootie" he said as he pointed to each one of them.
"Hi" Eddie jr. said.
"Hi Eddie" Jo said "You look just like your father did when he was you age."
"I know, sad isn't it." He said as he laughed. "Oh, and you can call me Jr. if you want"
"Ok" they all said.
"Oh ya, and this is Ashley, Rick, and Ricki"
Eddie said pointing to them as well.
"Hello" Ashley said, very friendly. Maybe to friendly. "I'm Ashley warner." She said trying to impress him. But he wan't looking at her. He couldn't keep his eyes of Ricki.
"What..? Oh hi" He said when he realized she was talking to him. Then Rick walked over.
"Hi, Jr." He said.
"Hi Rick? It is Rick, Right." Jr answered.
"Ya."
Ricki then walked over to him.
"Hey, how you doin?" She asked, at first she was smiling a little, but then when Jr. Only looked at her in a weird way, she gave him "the look". "What!" She said and snapped him out of it.
"Oh, hi."
"Thats better." Ricki said as she rolled her eyes.
"Well you guys, I'm really tired" Jo said, laying her head down. "Why don't you guys go home, and come see me in the morning?"
"Ok, are you sure Jo?" Nataile asked.
"Ya, I'll be fine. It was nice to meet you Jr." she said, while he was following everyone out the door.
"You too, Jo" He said
"Bye" Jo said while yawning.
"Bye" Everyone answered

A few days later.

Ricki was the first one down the hall, on the way to her mother's room, when the doctor whojust came out of Jo's room stopped her, with a sad look on his face.

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Jo- Very good, now do you wanna guess what planet we're on

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ssgoalie8
03-25-2001, 08:16 PM
c'mon just stop at the good part ugh
-colleen

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jofan4life
03-25-2001, 09:15 PM
This is getting really good. Please write more soon!!!!!!

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Quotes said by Jo (my fav character)
Your born You move on You die
Thats life
There are people in this world who get shoved around and there are people who do the shovin
I thought you liked me in that way that you like somebody when you like them in that way
You're so stupid you couldnt spell IQ
I hate teaching people how to drive;they're nervous, they make mistakes, and they cry when you slap them
Here's to all who wish me well and all the rest can go to...
Jersey

KerriBerri687
03-25-2001, 09:41 PM
oooooooh! omg, omg, omg! u neeeeeeeeeed to write more! this is just toooooooooo good! lol! i luv it! write mooooore! lol

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FOL-FAN
03-25-2001, 10:32 PM
I agree. THis mey sound extreme but if don't post more soon I'll die. OK... maybe not. But PLEEEEASSSSEEEE post more!!!!!

Polniaczek-Bonner
03-25-2001, 10:37 PM
The doctor grabed Ricki by the arm
"Wait" he said, with a look of pitty on his face.
"Hey! Let go" Ricki yelled, and was about to kick him, but then she looked up at him and stopped. "What" she said quietly "Why are you looking at me like that?"
"Kid, your mother...." He paused. a pause that seemed like it lasted a year.
"Dead? Is she dead" Ricki said with her eye's filling up with tears.
"No" The doctor said. The biggest sigh of relief came from Ricki for that pause, she felt she was going to die. No she could breath again. "But she only has a few hours. So I would suggest you and your friends start to say your good bye's" The doctor let go of Ricki and she fell against the wall.
"Ok" she said very weakly. Then everyone turned the cornor and saw the doctor walking away, and Ricki, slide down the wall, hug her knees, and start to cry.
"Oh my god" Blair ran over "Whats wrong Ricki. Oh my god, she's dead. I knew it! I had a bad feeling this morning, I knew she was..." Blair didn't take a breath between what she was saying. But then she was interupted by Ricki
"She's not dead" Ricki said, lifting her head up. "But she's only got a few hours at the most. The doctor said we should start saying our good-byes." The tears kept running down her face.
"Well" said Andy, fighting his tears. "I guess we should go in one or two at a time. Me and Pipa will go first." Pipa started to cry, and burried her face in Andy's chest.
"We can't go in crying. We don't want her to feel bad." andy said, lifting Pipa's head up, and wipping away her tears.
"Andy's right" Mrs.G continued "We must be comforting."
"ok, well here we go." Andy and Pipa walked in the room, shutting the door behind them.
"Hey" Pipa said, trying not to let Jo know she was crying. "How are you feeling"
"Not that great." Jo answered with a little laugh. Then both Pipa and Andy lost it. The ran over to Jo's bed, tears falling down their faces like a waterfall.
"We love you, Jo, you can't leave us!" They both said inbetween their tears.
"Hey, Hey" Jo said, being the only strong one. "You have Blair, Tootie, Natalie, Bev, and Mrs.G. You'll barly know I'm gone." A single tear feel down Jo's face, but she wipped it away quick. She had to be strong. Finally Andy and Pipa stood up and started to walk out.
"Bye Jo!" they said. "We love you"
"Bye. I love you to" They both ran out of the room crying. Out side in the hall, everyone ran up to them, trying to control them.
"well" Rick said. "I guess I'll go next."
Rick walked in, to see Jo, smiling. "Why are you so happy?" he asked trying to make her laugh
"It's nice to know that you have people that care about you, that much" She said as she stared at the door. But then she turned to Rick. "You know, i didn't want a divorce" she said, looking very sad
"I know" Rick said "But I wanted to travel, to move around. I didnt want to stay here in New York." Then he paused. He walked over to Jo, and gave her the biggeset hug. "I love you." He continued as he sat on Jo's bed. "I wasn't going to come, but I'm glad I did."
"Well, thanx" Jo said with a little laugh. "I'm glad you did too." Rick laughed a little, but then got up and started to cry. "I can't beleive I'm never going to see you again" He said, wipping his tears away.
"Me niether." Was all Jo could say before another one of her tears feel. But she couldn't cry. Again she told her self that she had to be strong.
"well," Rick said still wipping his tears. "I guess I should give the other's their time." He put his hand on the doorknob. "I love you. Good-Bye"
"I love you too. Bye" Rick also ran out of the room crying.
"I guess I should..." Eddie started, but was interupted bye Ashly.
"No!" She said "Me, Emily, Julia, and Jr. should go in." Blair looked at her surprised, but then happy that she cared.
"Ok" Blair said "Butdont give her hard time"
"We won't" Jr. said as the four went in. They opened the door and went in one bye one, then closed the door.
"Hi, Mrs. Polniaczek" Ashley said
"Jo, please, in my last hours, call me Jo" Jo let out a little laugh as the four walked closer. "I wish i could've got to know you better. I'm sorry I had to meet you under such bad..." Jo was interupted by Jr.
"Hey, don't be sorry. This isn't your time to be sorry. We're just glad we could meet you after all our parents told us about you." Jr. said, with a little smirm. They all walked over, and surrounded Jo's bed.
"Well, I hope the good things they told you about me were true."
"They were all good things. And they were all true" Ashley said. Then there was a long pause. "You know, Ricki really loves you." Ashley said, trying to break the frightining silence.
"I'm glad." Jo said. "Can you guys promise me something"
"What" they all asked.
"Promise me you'll take care of her. I know she's gonna take me dying very hard. I want to know that she'll be ok." Jo sighed "I know that she will make it, with all you guys as her friends."
"Or maybe more" Jr. said with a smirk "Ahh..with your premission" Jo laughed.
"you have my permission, but you might want to take my advise too.....Don't touch her. She hurts." Jo sighed again, and the four could tell she was getting worse.
"well" Emily said. "We better be going."
"Ya, our parents are proabaly wanting to see you" Julia added. Then Each girl gave Jo a hug, and then Jr, and they all walked to the door.
"Bye" the said, with their eye's filling up with water.
"Bye" Jo said with another tear. "Dam thats three" Jo said to herseld, counting her tears. Out in the hall, each girl ran to her mother, and Jr waled over to Eddie. They weren't crying, but were very sad.
"I guess I'm next" Eddie said as he took a deep breath. "Here goes nothing." He walked in the room, and stared at Jo
"What?" she asked, getting agrivated.
"I love you." Eddie said, starting to cry.
"Not you too" Jo said. "I thought the boys were supposed to crawl all over Blair." They both laughed, and then Eddie walked over and kissed Jo on the forhead.
"I don't know what to say."
"Good-Bye has been really popular today." Jo said as she let out a little laugh. Eddie looked at her, and then laughed too.
"ok, then, Good-bye" He wipped the tears away, and then threw his arms around Jo. They hugged for a while, but then he got up and walked over to the door really fast.
"I love you too" Jo said, which really got Eddie started on the water works. "Good-Bye"
Eddie ran out the door, and to the bathroom.
"Well" Said Natalie "I guess it's our turn. We will let Ricki go last." the 3 muskuteers, looked at each other.
"Wait" said Mrs.G "Me and Bev will go"

Well, i am done for tonite, but i will hopefully finish it tommorrow. I hope you like it.

[This message has been edited by Polniaczek-Bonner (edited 03-25-2001).]

JoPol_wannabe
03-26-2001, 12:13 AM
This is great for a first time fanfic. Keep it up.

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815
03-26-2001, 02:37 PM
this is so good cant wait to read the next part!!!

KerriBerri687
03-26-2001, 03:54 PM
OMG! LISTEN TO ME... I HAVE NEVER BEEN SO INVLOVED IN A FANFIC IN MY LIFE! (except for TPSIP) THIS IS SOOOOO GOOD! yes...it is making me cry..but still! awsome! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Polniaczek-Bonner
03-26-2001, 06:25 PM
Well thanx for all your support. I think i should write another one after this. But until then, here's some more.

Mrs.G and Bev walked over to the door.
"Are you sure?" Natalie asked.
"Yes." Mrs.G said, as she followed Bev into the room, and shut the door. The walked over to Jo, who started to smile, showing her teeth.
"Hey, Mrs.G. Hey Bev" She said as they walked closer.
"Hi, Jo" They both said, with their eyes starting to water. "How are you" they continued.
"I'm..." She paused. "I'm scared." A tear started to form in her eye, but thought about being strong, and held it back.
"I don't know what we're going to do without you" Bev said, starting to cry.
"Please don't cry, Thats all i've seen today, people crying. I want some laughter, or at least a smile every once and a while." Jo said, trying to smile.
"Your right" Mrs.G said as she turned to Bev. "Stop crying, it's not going to help anything."
"I'm sorry" Bev said as she wipped her tears away. Then the room was silent for a while, until Jo spoke up.
"Hey, can I ask you guys a favor" She said weakly. She was getting worse fast.
"Sure" They both said "Anything"
"Watch out for Blair"
"Blair?" they both questioned
"Ya, she's gonna take this hard, I may sound concited, but i know she is." Jo said, her smile fading quickly "Just..." Jo was interupted by a doctor, who walked in unexpectably. "What!" She yelled as loud as she could, whick wasn't much louder then her reguar voice "Can't you seee I'm in the middle of a conversation"
"I'm sorry, ma'm" The doctor apoplogized, "but...." He walked over and wispered something in her ear, then turned around and walked out.
"We will" Mrs. Garret said, "We'll watch out for Blair" then when she noticed the scared look on Jo's face, decided it was time to go. "Well, we better let the girls have their turn."
"Ya. Good-Bye Jo" Bev said as she hugged Jo, then headed for the door.
"Bye" Jo said, her voice sounding very shaky. Then Mrs.G walked over to Jo, and hugged her, and Jo lost it. She started crying really hard and burried her head into Mrs.G shoulder.
"It's ok" Mrs.G said, sort of rocking her back and forth. "We love you" Jo looked up and Mrs.G, her face red from crying, and the tears still rolling down her cheak.
"I love you too" she said as she gave Mrs.G on last hug. "Good-Bye Mrs.Garret" Mrs.G looked in shock, as she hadn't heard "Mrs.Garret" much from JO.
"Good-Bye Joanna-Marie." Mrs.G said, as she followed Bev out of the room and started to cry.
"Well, NOW it's our turn" Natalie said, looking at her friends "Here goes nothing." She followed Tootie into the room, and Blair followed her. Jo was still trying to stop crying, but as soon as she saw them, she immeditly stopped, and tried to act strong again.
"You can cry, JO" Tootie said, as she herself started to cry. Natalie ran over and hugged Tootie, until she controlled herself. The all 3 of them walked over to Jo's bed.
"Well, here we are" Blair started "The four muskuteers together again..."
"For the last time" Jo cut in.
"Don't say that" Tootie said
"But it's true" Jo continued "It's gotta be said sometime, I'm dying, and I only have a few minutes" then everyone but Jo, started to cry. It finally hit them that Jo was REALLY dying. This wasn't a dream, or a nightmare. This was life, or should I say death.
"Well" Nataile said. "Death is a Fact of Life"
"We've been through all the facts of life together, and we're going to go through this one too" Jo said, with a little laugh. Then they all put their heads down. Then Tootie walked over, and gave Jo a hug. A hug that lasted a minuted or so.
"I love you, Jo" She said, as she finally let go.
"I love ya' too, Tootie" Jo said, her eyes filling up with tears once again
"Call me dorothy" Tootie said as they all looked at her weird. "I just want to hear you say it.
"Ok..."Jo said "I love you too, Dorothy."
"Good-bye JO" Tootie said as she walked over to the door
"Good-bye" Jo said, as Natalie then went up to her and gave her a hug
"I love you, Jo" Natalie said, startig to cry
"I love you to, Nat." Jo said, as a tear fell down her eye.
"Ok, my turn," Blair said, pushing Natlie aside. She threw her arms around Jo, and nearly squeezed the life that was left, out of her. "I'm going to miss you sooo much" Blair said, as the tears fell down her face. "You're my best friend" another tear fell down Jo's face.
"Hey, Blair, will you do something for me" Jo said, when Balir finally let go
"Anything, anything you want" Blair said, the tears still falling down her face.
"Find Ricki a good home" Jo said as more and more tears fell down her face.
"What do you mean?" Blair questioned, wipping her tears away.
"I mean...Rick's not going to be around to take care of her, so she's proabaly going to have to go to a foster home" Jo said "Make sure it's a good one"
"I just had another one of my BRILLIANT ideas" Blair said, as everyone smiled "She can live with us. I'm moving into Mrs.Garret and Bev's place. She can live with us" Blair started to smile, realizing that Ricki would, not replace Jo, but somewhat take her place.
"Are you sure" Jo said, questioning the "Brillaint" idea. "I wont be responsable if she hurts Ashley." Jo said as everyone including her laughed. Then Blair looked at Jo.
"I'd never thought i's say this to you, but I love you"
"I love you too blair." then the smiles quickly turned to tears as they knew that out of the four muskuteers, only 3 were leaving.
"Good-bye you guys," Jo said "And thannks for taking Ricki in Blair"
"Your welcome, jo" Blair said, the tears falling really fast.
"Bye" The all said as they ran out crying
"I guess now it's just me" Ricki said as she walked in the room and shut the door.


well, i'll write more later, but my eyes hurt. Hope you guys like it, and i was thinking that i'll write my fanfics about Ricki, Ashley, Julia, And Emily living with Blair and Mrs.G and Bev. Just a thought.

KerriBerri687
03-26-2001, 06:38 PM
i know i know...you are getting sick of me responding but...this is so sad. so good...but so sad http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif i really love it! itz awsum

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Love The Facts Of Life
03-26-2001, 07:17 PM
This is sooooo sad I'm crying right now http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif You have to write more soon

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Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points.
Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law

Blair:If I don't spend money soon,well I'll just pull all my hair out.
Jo:Good,we'll finally get to see what color the roots are.
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God Bless Everyone
email me @ jinnyandteddy4ever@yahoo.com

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815
03-26-2001, 07:27 PM
WOW! this is so awesome and I cant not wait for more, i am starting to get all teary eyed here!!!! and when u write more fan fics cant wait to read them!!

BTW not like u care or anything but I was in Medford on sat for a hockey tournment!! HEHE thought i had to get that out of my system!!!!!!

ZeldaGilroy
03-26-2001, 08:12 PM
I know I said earlier that I didn't think I would be able to finish this, but now I really want to read the end. I am so sad reading this, but it is so good I can't stop. Please finish it soon!

Polniaczek-Bonner
03-26-2001, 08:25 PM
Thats cool, who won? Anyway here's some more. Once i finish this, i will get started on my others

Ricki just looked at her mother for a while, then walked over.
"Hey" Ricki said, as she went over and sat on her mother's bed. "how ya feelin'?"
"I feel like i'm gonna die!" Jo said, trying to make her dughter laugh, but it didn't work.
"How am I gonna make it without out you?" Ricki asked, tears in her eyes.
"You'll do just fine!" Jo said "I talked to blair and she said that you can live with her, Ashley, Mrs.G, and Bev."
"Oh yay!" Ricki said sarcasticly "I get to live with Barbie and little sister kelly!" Jo laughed, and Ricki smiled, glad to see her mother happy.
"I want you to have this..." Jo said, taking a plain gold band of her finger, and putting it on Ricki's "Eddie gave it too me. It used to have a dimand in it, but I had it removed" Ricki's eyes teared up even more, and a tear fell down her face. "I want you to think of me everytime you look at it" Jo continued. "Promise me you will"
"I promise" Ricki said, looking at the ring.
"Com' here" Jo said, grabing Ricki, and holding her close to her. "I love you so much!" Jo said, as tears feel down her face.
"I love you too, ma!" Ricki said, as she started to cry hard. Then all of a sudden, Jo got weaker, and let go of Ricki. Ricki slide of the bed and Grabed Jo's hand. "MA?" She yelled, "MA! Wake up" Jo was just laying there, then all that could be heard was the heart moniter with no heart beat. "MA!" Ricki started shaking her mother and screaming, when a doctor came in and put his hand on Ricki's shoulder
"She gone" he said quietly, as Ricki just looked at her mother, then at the ring, and back at her mother. Finally she let go of her mother's hand. She stopped crying hard, but was still crying.
"Good-Bye, mom" Ricki said, as the doctor lead her out of the room.
"Do you want me to tell them?" He wispered to Ricki
"No, I will" She said as she calmed down and wipped the tears away from her face.
"Ok the doctor said as he walked away. Ricki walked down the hall by herself, to the waiting room, where everyone was.
"Well" Blair asked "How is she?" Ricki looked at everyone, and then at her ring.
"She's....." Ricki almost fell to the ground, but was caught by Jr. He stood her back up, but kept his arm around her. "She's gone" Ricki said, as she started to cry and burried her head into Jr.'s shoulder. Then everyone had tears coming from their face. Blair, Nat, and Tootie were crying the hardest, and were being comforted by their daughters. After about 5 mins everyone calmed down.
"I guess we should make funeral arrangments." Rick said, wipping the tears from his face.
"Ya" Everyone said. "We'll do it in the morning" Mrs.G said, as they all headed for the door. After everyone had left, Ricki and Jr. were still standing in the waiting room.
"Are you gonna be ok?" Jr asked, with his armstill around her.
"Ya" Ricki answered "As long as I have this ring that my mother gave me" She said pointing to the ring "That she got from your father" She contiued
"Maybe we'll be just like them." Jr said
"Maybe" Ricki said as she gave Jr a hug, and they walked out together.

THE END

So, what did you think? MY next fanfic will probably be about the funeral, then i promise i'll make a happy one, not a sad one!

ZeldaGilroy
03-26-2001, 08:33 PM
You have a definate talent for bringing out emotions in the readers of your fanfics. I loved the story, but I am now relieved it is over. I was reading post after post dreading the moment when Jo would have to die. You did a great job though, and I can't wait until you write a happy fanfic. Keep up the good work!

KerriBerri687
03-26-2001, 08:34 PM
take a wild guess what i'll say? lol...that was amazing! it made me cry...i pictured the whole thing in my head! oh...it was so...great! i luved it.

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lesliem14
03-26-2001, 08:36 PM
That was really, really good. You should be proud of yourself!! P.S.-Write More!!

FOL-FAN
03-26-2001, 10:31 PM
I hope you are not tired of hiring this but that was AAAWWWWEEESOME!!! You had me crying the hole time!

JoPol_wannabe
03-26-2001, 11:44 PM
Wow that was very good!!! After Stranger in Peekskill this is my favortie Fanfic.
They should do this as the Reunion show, since they want to do one about one of the girls dying. I can't wait for the funeral Fanfic. Your very talented keep it up.

Wild Child
03-27-2001, 12:32 PM
This was sooo awsome.You did such a great job!You actually got me cryin!That was so sad.I can't wait to read another one of your fan fics.

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Exstead
03-27-2001, 12:39 PM
Oh my I was sobbing at the end!!! That was good. Now if only we could convince hem to make that the script!!!

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815
03-27-2001, 02:37 PM
we lost in the quarter finals 3-1 but i wouldnt know that much cuz i was at my all star bball game and i couldnt make it though http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif we lost to soem high school team

but neways AWESOME FAN FIC THAT WAS WICKED GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!

BlairW_1
03-27-2001, 07:12 PM
This story was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good! I started crying in the middle, and DID NOT STOP! I even read it over 3 times! I have to say it again, this is soooooooo good! I can't wait for your next story!

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"God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference."
"Keep the courts hott, and your summers cool!" Katie Honea

.:*Danielle*:.
Go #33! Lady Bulldogs all da way! Basketball rulz!
Basketbaiichick@aol.com
or
BlairWarner33@yahoo.com
or
BlairWarner@gurlmail.com

james_baby87
07-30-2002, 03:13 PM
Originally posted by BlairW_1
This story was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good! I started crying in the middle, and DID NOT STOP! I even read it over 3 times! I have to say it again, this is soooooooo good! I can't wait for your next story!

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"God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference."
"Keep the courts hott, and your summers cool!" Katie Honea

.:*Danielle*:.
Go #33! Lady Bulldogs all da way! Basketball rulz!
Basketbaiichick@aol.com
or
BlairWarner33@yahoo.com
or
BlairWarner@gurlmail.com
Same here

chrissya
07-31-2002, 02:53 AM
wow , you just found a way to revile to the world that i do cry . Im saying this even as aI wipe the tears from my eyes.

BonniesLilCutiePie
07-31-2002, 10:16 AM
OMG! That was so awesome! You truly have TONS of talent! Keep up the great work!

MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
08-04-2002, 09:47 PM
It was really great...not much Mrs. G...but I say that too much, so, forget I mentioned it...It was REALLY REALLY great!!:):):):):):):):):):):):):)

BonniesLilCutiePie
08-04-2002, 11:11 PM
Awesomeness