View Full Version : "Out of Sight" posted now
01-27-2001, 08:19 PM
Finally! The story that was previewed here weeks ago is finished and hitting the net! The pages are being uploaded this evening and tomorrow.
Because of the length of the story -- you might want to download the sections (there are 10) to read offline.
Thank you one and all for your patience and kind words of encouragement. Your comments are always appreciated!
Hope you enjoy the adventure!
01-27-2001, 08:48 PM
Wow! I read a lot of it, but I didn't get Section 6, 7, or 8 up on my computer, some kind of error. I'll try to fix it, but I read the last section and it is GREAT!
01-27-2001, 09:03 PM
Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Just wanted to let you know that those sections might not be on the server yet. Some of the files have been getting kicked back in the transfer so the problem is probably with my server not your computer. Hopefully, I can get around the trouble and get them all up tonight or tomorrow.
Have a great evening!
01-27-2001, 10:04 PM
I really want to read it, but I went to the link and it said that the page couldn't be found.
01-28-2001, 12:06 AM
lesliem14 -- I just checked the files and they all seem to up and available now. (Whew!)
Sorry about any inconvenience! If you feel like trying again, here's the link:
01-28-2001, 01:19 AM
I just finished it and you really have raised the bar for these fanfics. It was awesome. Really, really, really good work!!!!
Mystery Jo Fan
01-28-2001, 08:45 AM
I just finished reading your fanfic and I have a couple of things I want to say.
1. If anyone hasn't read this story, do so NOW. This isn't just an "it's good" story, this is an "if you only read one...read this one" story. This goes on the recomended reading list.lol
2. If we didn't have the problem with copyright laws, I'd be suggesting you get this published. I would pay the $6.00 for a paperback copy of this. In a heartbeat.
3. To the author... Write another one! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif
This is the first piece of fanfic I've read That was written by you, and now I want more!! (Same length, one completed story a day will suffice. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif)
4. Just absoloute Kudos, Props, and Accolades on this story. Keep up the great work!
- Mystery Jo Fan
01-28-2001, 12:44 PM
I have to just say "Ditto" to all of the comments that Mystery Jo Fan made. I finished reading your story last night and I absolutely loved it. I hope you write some more fan fictions in the future! Keep up the good work! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif
01-28-2001, 12:49 PM
Just read it again! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif Love it!
01-28-2001, 01:05 PM
It's not workin for me!!!
Jo:You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl.
01-28-2001, 05:59 PM
i read the whole thing last night and all i can say is wow! it took me a while to read it but it was worth it! that is wicked awesome~!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up wrtiting the great fan ficS!
Tootie: hot stuff coming through, and the pizza's are warm too!
Jinny: i think i am going to give up men
Magda: you, give up sex?
Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee!
Jinny: You sure he's still up and moving around there, Cap?
Captin: Jinny do you really think that a crack about the age of your commanding officer is the smartest thing you could say under the circumstances
Jinny: umm.. probley not
Captin: thats what I thought
01-28-2001, 07:09 PM
If you want I could copy and paste it for you into email... (might be a couple emails) Well I will do it if Devon doesn't mind. Let me know if you are still having trouble reading it.
01-28-2001, 07:46 PM
I'm thrilled to hear all the kind comments -- thanks! I just hoped that all the best parts of the characters would come through and that I'd turned them loose in an interesting plot.
As for e-mailing the text to folk who can't access the pages... that sounds fine. Thanks for asking!
01-28-2001, 08:15 PM
This story was great! OHMYGOSH, I couldn't wait for the computer to load the next section!
T: Oh no! She's right! Sweet little me IS a mass murderer! But I don't remember any of it. Multiple personalities! That's gotta be it! Six faces of me! Each face responsible for a different death! Andy, George, Natalie, Blair, Beverly Ann, Jo.
B: And then there was Tootie!
T: AAAAHHHHH! Blair! But... I thought you were...
B: Dippity-dooed? That's what I wanted everyone to think! That made it easier to get rid of the rest of you!
T: You? You're the murderer? Blair, that's so inconsiderate!
B: Don't you see? That's part of my plan to eliminate everyone who falls under the fifty percent tax bracket!
T: But we were your friends!
B: My friends don't wear polyester! They don't drive motorcycles or ramblers! They don't buy their shoes from the supermarket!
T: I get mine from Paris, honest!
B: Face it, Tootie! You're hopelessly middle-class!
T: Blair! Blair! Please, wait! Please! Blair! Oh no! AAHH!
BA: No, please, please! No! Don't kill Tootie! No!
N: Beverly Ann, wake up!
BA: Don't drink the cocoa!
01-29-2001, 08:49 PM
Just a quick note -- if those pages still won't load for some of you guys, then you can get the text at the http://www.fanfiction.net
I'm really losing faith in my ISP! Grrrr...
02-03-2001, 06:52 PM
Devon, I just have to say, you are an awesome fanfic writer! I hope you write another one like it soon!
Jo: "I hate it when you do that!"
Blair: "I don't sigh!"
Jo: "Well if it isn't a sigh you've got a slow leak!"
Jo: "You did it again!"
Blair: "That's called breathing."
Jo: "You do it just to annoy me!"
Blair: "No,I do it to keep from dieing."
Jo: "Now there's an idea!!"
02-10-2001, 10:18 PM
Dang, I finally got to get around to reading this and.... wow! This thing was definetily worth the wait. Devon King- i'm glad you listened to my encouragement and also happy that you wrote a great fanfic. Keep up the good work!
02-10-2001, 10:44 PM
I totally agree. I thought it was fantastic. I only wish I had more time on my hands to read it again. Something tells me eventually I'll make the time again. Great job.
02-27-2001, 10:30 PM
Wow! Just can't say "Thanks!" enough to you guys that have let me know your thoughts on this story. I realize it was a long read and I'm grateful to everyone who hung in there to the end!
Would this be a bad place to announce that there's another one in the works? <big grin>
02-27-2001, 10:44 PM
I am so happy to hear you're writing a new one! As if the first one wasn't enough. Can't wait to read it!
02-27-2001, 10:59 PM
You just made my night especially since I'm complaining over my ECON lab report I finally finished and getting up tomorow for 5:45 am practice. I can't wait!! (for the fanfic, I can do without morning practice!)
02-27-2001, 11:02 PM
Can't wait to read it. Your story was the best.
02-28-2001, 08:16 AM
i can't get to it! i really want to read it though! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif
02-28-2001, 11:22 AM
Here's another kudos from me as well. Your fanfic was excellent. I'm looking forward to the next one. Keep up the great work.
Natalie: A flashback within a flashback..I'm so brillant it scares me
02-28-2001, 08:35 PM
Blair n' Jo Rock -- Give the link below a try. It should jump you to the fanfiction.net site and the page that has the Facts fiction. You'll find "Out of Sight" there in two parts and some other good stories ... including a great one by TVAddict!
How's that for a shameless plug? <grin>
02-28-2001, 08:39 PM
thanks sooooo much! all i can say is...wow. that was a totally amazing fanfic! i loved it!
02-28-2001, 11:21 PM
wow that was a really awesome story i could actually picture it in my mind and you caught each characters personality so well can't wait for another story
J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
03-01-2001, 12:06 AM
Thanks for plugging my story Devon!
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