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06-05-2007, 02:07 PM
I started this a couple nights ago and now I'm at a spot where I'm comfortable posting and know that I'll finish it so here's the start!
*About a year after the reunion, Jo, Jamie, and Rick are in Los Angeles, Jo is still a cop and Rick plays piano at a local bar five nights a week. Blair and Tad are still in Peakskill, Blair is the headmaster at Eastland and Tad took over Blair’s dad’s spot at Warner Textiles. Natalie and Harper live in Manhattan and Natalie is an investigative journalist for the New York Times, as is Harper. Tootie and Tisha live in Manhattan as well, Dorothy is still an actress and Tisha started Eastland two years ago*
*Los Angeles at 3:00 in the afternoon*
Jamie: *Walks into their house* Dad! I’m home!
Rick: In the living room, sweetheart! How was your first day of high school?
Jamie: It was, okay, didn’t get lost.
Rick: How’d you manage that?
Jamie: Made friends with upperclassmen, I’m not going to be treated like garbage this year. I’m going to be what they call a “good freshman.”
Rick: When I was in high school there was no such thing,
Jaime: God, I hope there is now. *Goes and sits on the couch by Rick*
Rick: I can’t believe my little girl is in high school, pretty soon I’m going to have to start scaring off boys that are after you.
Jamie: Dad you wouldn’t…oh who am I kidding, of course, you would! I’m going to go get on Myspace for awhile, tell Tisha how high school is, since Eastland combines high school and middle school.
Rick: Okay, sweetie.
*New York at 6:00 in the evening*
Dorothy: Tisha, I’m home!
Tisha: In the office, talking to Jamie!
Dorothy: How was her first day of high school?
Dorothy: And how was your day?
Tisha: Good, typical first day, we did absolutely nothing.
Dorothy: Yeah I always hated that about the first day. I would have rather slept in.
Tisha: Well I was excited about seeing everyone.
Dorothy: Well, you have to remember, we moved back into the dorms two days before classes started so we saw each other. Truthfully I can’t believe Blair didn’t bring back dorm life.
Tisha: I’m glad she didn’t, I don’t know if I could room with a group of girls.
Dorothy: Oh it was a bunch of fun. That’s were Aunt Jo, Aunt Nat, and Aunt Blair and I became so close.
Tisha: I know.
Dorothy: I’m going to go change clothes.
Tisha: Robert isn’t coming tonight?
Dorothy: No, tonight it’s just us girls.
Dorothy: Yeah, two girls alone on a Monday night, what will we do?
Tisha: Go rent a movie and eat popcorn?
Dorothy: Sounds good to me, go get your coat and we’ll go.
Tisha: Okay, *Shuts Myspace down and goes to her room and gets her coat*
*Peakskill at 9:00 at night*
Blair: Tad, I’m thinking about taking a trip.
Tad: Sweetie I cant.
Blair: No, you don’t have to come.
Tad: Oh, where are you going?
Blair: I’m thinking Los Angeles. I really miss Jo.
Tad: Yeah, I knew this was coming.
Blair: Well what do you think.
Tad: I think it’s a good idea, anything to make you happy.
Blair: Thanks, I’ll call her.
What do you guys think so far?
TFOL FAN 4 LIFE
06-05-2007, 04:58 PM
I Love It!:)
06-05-2007, 05:51 PM
You are off to a really good start. :)
06-06-2007, 01:53 PM
Okay guys heres more!
Jo: Hey guys! I’m home!
Rick: In the kitchen. *Jo goes into the kitchen* Hey how was work? *He kisses her*
Jo: Good, I guess. First day lunch hour was insane.
Rick: I bet.
Jo: I hate that the department is right next to the high school.
Rick: I bet the kids aren’t too crazy about it either.
Jamie: Hey mom.
Jo: Hey how was your first day?
Rick: Yeah she’s what they call a “good freshman.”
Jo: When I was in high school there was no such thing.
Jamie: That’s what dad said. *The phone rings*
Jo: I’ll get it. *Answers* Hello…hey Blair…what were you thinking?…you want to come here?…you know I couldn’t get away from work…well if you insist…bye. *Hangs up* So, Blair’s coming out here.
Jaime: Really that’s great! I miss her.
Jo: So do I.
Jo: She’s looking up plane tickets. She’s going to call back later or tomorrow. So how are Tisha and Dorothy?
Jamie: Why do you ask me?
Jo: Cause I know you’ve talked to her
Jamie: They’re fine, they’re renting a movie and eating junk food tonight.
Jo: Sounds like Dorothy. I remember one spring break she vegged out in front of the TV and watched game shows for four straight days, then Nat’s grandma called and invited us to stay in her condo in Ft. Lauderdale for the rest of break.
Jamie: You did the Florida spring break thing!
Jo: When I was in college, yes.
Rick: And in high school Eastland wanted her and your aunts to study abroad so they sent them to Paris for a month.
Jo: Outside of Paris.
Jamie: Still Paris! Mom that’s amazing…So how much shopping did Aunt Blair do?
Jo: None while we were stuck at the school, once we snuck off though and went our separate ways then I don’t know. I went off and met a French guy.
Jamie: You almost married a French guy!
Jo: No! Far from it, he was just really sweet and all, he took care of me that week.
Rick: Didn’t you fall in love in Ft. Lauderdale too?
Jo: I didn’t fall in love there either! I had been in love once before your father and that was with Eddie.
Jamie: Oh the Navy guy.
Jo: Yeah, man in uniform :blush:
Rick: Oh hunny, back to Earth!
Jo: Yeah, yeah, I’m here. So, what’s your schedule, Jamie?
Jamie: Algebra I Excel, Health, English I, and P.E.
Rick: Oh, I forgot about block scheduling. What do you think about that?
Jamie: Classes are really long, but I think it’ll end up being a good thing.
Jo: Oh yeah over the years definitely! So, what’s for dinner?
Rick: Deal with it, your mom and I like tomatoes and bacon so since you don’t, well, tough luck.
Jamie: I’m going to go call Alexz.
Jo: Going to see if you can eat there?
Jamie: Yep! *Grabs the phone and runs to her room* Hey Al, it’s Jamie…not much…hey do you think your mom would mind if I came over for dinner?…Okay, I’m on my way. *Hangs up and goes back to the kitchen* I’ll be back by nine! *Leaves*
Jo: So when are we going to tell her?
Rick: Whenever your ready.
Thats all for now, offtopic: I would have more but last night I stayed up till 1 am reading all 6 parts of The Way We Were (didnt finish it) and so I just finished it about ten minutes ago...I cried But yeah add that to the list of FOL ff's you need to read if you havent. Its really long it'll take forever but it is worth it. It's odd ive been an FOL fan since I was 10 (7 years) I dont think i've been this into it since the show went off the air on Hallmark, and I wish I wasnt broke so i could buy Season 3 if I ever find it before they decide to release 4 so I can be caught up. But I'm starving and I'm gonna watch Days so more later!
TFOL FAN 4 LIFE
06-06-2007, 04:23 PM
I want to know wha they're going to tell her. Post more soon please. :)
06-07-2007, 12:06 AM
Well sorry but that question doesnt get answered yet but here's more!
Tisha: That was fun, mom.
Dorothy: Yeah it was.
Tisha: Well I have some homework, so I better get on that.
Blair: So I found a flight.
Tad: Cool, when?
Blair: Next week.
Tad: For how long?
Blair: I’m thinking a week but I need to call Jo and finalize things. *Grabs the phone and dials* Hey Rick is Jo there?…Hey…yeah I’m looking at them now….How long do you want me….I was thinking a week….yeah I found one for next week for a week but wanted to talk to you before I booked it…Really…Okay, then booking…Next Wednesday…Okay…Talk to you later…bye.
Tad: Ready for bed, sweetheart?
Blair: Yeah, I guess so. *Gets up and they go to bed*
Tad: You excited?
Blair: Yeah, thanks for letting me do this.
Tad: Hey, she’s your best friend, I don’t think I could keep you apart if I wanted to.
Blair: I absolutely hate it that I haven’t seen her in twelve years.
Tad: I know, but its not either of your guy’s fault, its both of your faults put together.
Blair: Thanks, feel a lot better.
Tad: How’s the little Warner doing? *Puts his hand on Blair’s swollen stomach*
Blair: Just fine.
Tad: So your due in February?
Tad: Have you thought of names yet?
Blair: Well, I’ve got a girl name picked and that’s not changing, but a boy I have no idea, what do you like?
Tad: What’s the girl?
Blair: Joanna Brooke Warner.
Tad: I like it. For a boy? I think Shawn Douglas Warner.
Blair: I like it.
Tad: Well, now that that’s taken care of, I’m tired, so goodnight, sweetheart.
Blair: Night. *They lay down and eventually fall asleep*
Tisha: *Mom I’m getting on the Internet!
Tisha: I want to listen to Jamie’s song, she’s got one of my favorites. *Gets on Myspace, and brings up Jamie’s page and turns her song on and continues working on her Algebra.* “She was a fast machine, She kept her motor clean, She was the best damn woman I had ever seen, She had the sightless eyes, Telling me no lies, Knocking me out with those American thighs, Taking more than her share, Had me fighting for air, She told me to come but I was already there…” I need to find a new song. Mine’s Glamorous, It was cool at first but yeah, its time for something new… Ohh, I know, *Clicks on music and types in Avril Lavigne and puts Girlfriend as her song* “Hey, hey, you, you, I don’t like your girlfriend! No way, no way, I think you need a new one! Hey, you, you, I want to be your girlfriend! You’re so fine I want you mine, you’re so delicious, I think about ya all the time your so addictive, Don’t you know what I could do to make you feel alright, Don’t pretend I think you know I’m damn precious, And Hell Yeah ,I’m the motherf****** princess, I can tell you like me too and you know I’m right…” I love this song! I don’t think Jamie will bug me as much for this. *Goes back to Jamie’s page and leaves her a comment* Hey girl, its Tish changed my song, you might like this one better. Love yaz! *She posts it and gets offline and finishes her last two Algebra problems and turns on the Fresh Prince of Bel-Air and eventually falls asleep*
Okay guys there it is there would be more and yes this is mostly lyrics but I'm really pissed at my dad and sister and my friend is in the middle of counseling me on it so thats all I have.
TFOL FAN 4 LIFE
06-07-2007, 04:56 PM
06-08-2007, 10:28 PM
Good job. :)
06-08-2007, 11:21 PM
K I Jus Caught Up, It's Pretty Good Keep It Comin :D
06-09-2007, 12:04 PM
Okay its not a whole lot but its something
Jamie: *Comes in at 8:45* I’m home!
Rick: Wow, you’re early. Amazing.
Jamie: Well, Alexz has World History and apparently Mr. Jones gave homework on the first day. I’m glad I have geography next semester, not World History.
Jo: I never liked World History.
Jamie: I’m gonna go see what Tisha’s up to.
Jo: Okay. *Jamie goes to her room* So, how do you think she’ll take the news?
Rick: I don’t know, she’s been our one and only for fourteen years. Even though, I have a feeling she’ll be a great big sister.
Jo: So do I.
Rick: Tell her later?
Jo: Yeah. Let her get settled into high school. Then we’ll worry about this.
Rick: Are you sure?
Jo: Of course, I am!
*The week goes by, and now it’s a little before Blair leaves for Los Angeles, its 11:00 am*
Blair: I wonder if it’s warm there?
Tad: Call Jo and find out.
Blair: She’s going to be sick of me before I even get there. I’ll just pack for any temperature.
Tad: And if worse comes to worse, you’ll go shopping, right.
Blair: Right, I haven’t shopped in L.A. in years. Maybe, Jo, Jamie and I can make a day out of it.
Tad: I’m going to miss you.
Blair: I’ll miss you too. *They kiss*
*Los Angeles 8:00 am*
Jo: *Go goes into her and Rick’s room and lays on the bed and runs her fingers through Rick’s hair* Rick, sweetie, wake up, Blair’ll be here this afternoon. And I have to go to work.
Rick: I’m awake, what cleaning still needs to be done?
Jo: Just vacuuming.
Rick: You look happy.
Jo: I am, I haven’t seen Blair in a real long time.
Rick: I know. And I’m sorry for that.
Jo: It’s not your fault I’m the one who moved us out here for my career.
Rick: We don’t blame you, Jamie loves it out here, sure she misses Tisha, but she’s lived here all her live.
Jo: I’m not saying I wanna go back to Peakskill.
Rick: Oh, okay.
Jo: Do you?
Rick: Nah, there was nothing there for me, except for you.
Jo: I really need to go to work, I’ll try to be here by four but if I’m not you and Jamie are stuck with her for a little while.
Rick: I think we can handle it. I love you.
Jo: I love you too, *They kiss* Bye.
Rick: You know I hate you job on a regular basis but especially now that your pregnant.
Jo: Yeah, I know. Bye. *She leaves*
Sorry thats short but I have to go help my g'ma set up for tonight, she's expecting its going to take 5 hours to clean up her backyard and cook....she's insane!!! Oh well I'm getting paid...
06-09-2007, 03:36 PM
really good, I like it:D
06-10-2007, 04:33 PM
Well done :)
06-11-2007, 03:02 PM
Here's some more
*That evening Blair arrives around 5:00 and takes a cab to Jo’s*
Jaime: Aunt Blair’s here! * Her and Jo jump up from where they were sitting in the living room*
Rick: Okay, don’t scare her off.
Jo: Yeah Jamie get out of the way, I’m going to go help her with her luggage. The cab driver probably really doesn’t want to do it again.
Jamie: How much can she have?
Jo: You’ll see. *She goes outside* Hey airhead!
Blair: Hey you! *Jo runs down and hugs her*
Jo: You need help?
Blair: Yeah. *Gets out of the car with one big suitcase and one little one* There’s one more in the trunk.
Jo: I got it *Gets in the trunk, ready to lift something heavy* Blair, this is really light, what’s in here?
Blair: Nothing, that one is for whatever I buy.
Jo: Should have known. *Blair pays the driver and then they go inside*
Jamie: Aunt Blair! *Jumps up and hugs her*
Blair: Hey, Jamie *Hugs her and Rick gets up* Rick, *Hugs him*
Rick: How was the flight?
Blair: Long…five hours.
Jo: Uh, Jaime, go show Blair to the guest room so she can get settled in while your father and I start dinner.
Jaime: Okay, *Grabs a suitcase and takes her to the guest room* Need any help?
Blair: No, I think I got it from here, thanks.
Jamie: Good, I better go finish Algebra.
Blair: Okay. *Jamie leaves and Blair starts unpacking and twenty minutes later Jo calls for dinner* So do you remember the first day we meet?
Jo: Yeah and got arrested the first time we went out.
Jamie: You’ve been arrested.
Jamie: For what.
Jo: Fake ID’s, going to a bar, drinking. I think that’s it isn’t it Blair.
Blair: Yeah, pretty sure.
Jamie: So much I don’t know.
Jo: And there’s no much that you don’t need to know.
Jamie: What’s that supposed to mean?
Jo: I don’t want to ever bust you for anything.
Jamie: You wont.
Blair: So do you have any days off while I’m here?
Jo: All but tomorrow. They need me.
Blair: Good, how about Saturday the three of us go shopping.
Jamie: Sounds good to me.
Jo: Don’t be so quick to agree, you’ve never been shopping with Blair. It’s no easy task.
Jamie: It sounds fun.
Jo: Okay, but don’t say I didn’t warn you.
Jamie: You’re coming, aren’t you mom?
Jo: Yeah, I’ll come.
Rick: What about me?
Jo: Aw, you wanna come too?
Rick: No, that’s okay, I’ll pass.
Jo: Figured. *The phone rings* Hello…yeah it’s me…a little bit why?…well, we have company…your kidding me… armed…I’m on my way…bye. I gotta go, robbery, two guys, each with two guns, they need me.
Jo: Sorry, Rick, I gotta go. *Runs in there room and puts her uniform on and then runs back through* Bye. *Kisses Rick*
Rick: Jo, be careful.
Jo: I will don’t worry. Sorry about this Blair.
Blair: It’s okay.
Jamie: Well, I’ve still got homework so yeah, bye. *Goes to her room leaving Blair and Rick alone*
Blair: You hate her job don’t you?
Rick: With every fiber in my body. This morning we were talking and I thought she was talking about moving back to Peakskill but she wasn’t. Yes, she wants Jamie to go to Eastland, and Mrs. Garrett and you girls but she would have to leave to the department and I don’t see that happening.
Blair: I’ll talk to her, we actually have a opening at Eastland for a guidance counselor.
Rick: She’s qualified.
Blair: Yeah, I know. I think she’d do good.
Rick: There is another reason I want her to quit.
Rick: *Looks and make sure Jamie isn’t listening* She’s pregnant.
Blair: And you let her go out there tonight!
Rick: What was I supposed to do, you lived with her for eight years you know that there’s no stopping her once she gets an idea in her head.
Blair: Oh trust me, I know all too well.
Rick: Don’t let her know I told you about the pregnancy though, she wants to tell your herself, Jamie doesn’t even know yet.
Blair: She doesn’t!
Rick: We haven’t found a good time yet.
Blair: Well, I guess they’ll be about the same age, like Jamie and Tisha.
Rick: What are you talking about?
Blair: I’m pregnant as well, three months.
Rick: Does Jo know?
Blair: Yeah. But your going to have to tell Jamie soon, Jo will start showing or getting sick a lot.
Rick: Yeah, we’ll tell her. *The phone rings* Hello…Al, what’s wrong…what do you mean she’s been shot?….How could this happen?…Where is she?…L.A. Memorial…okay we’re on our way. *Hangs up* Jo was shot. Jamie! Grab your purse, lets go! *They all leave and race to the hospital*
Little bit more than usual so enjoy :)
06-11-2007, 11:57 PM
I would be posting more now but I've been dealing with my sister for the past two hours..she's pregnant so cant deny her attention
06-13-2007, 01:55 AM
Here's more, would've come sooner but my best friend is having boy trouble right now and I got on the phone at nine, and now its basically one and we just hung up.... but here's more I typed while she talked...
Tisha: That was odd. *Signs off of Myspace messenger where she was talking to Jamie and goes to the living room where Dorothy is reading over a script*
Dorothy: How’s Jamie?
Tisha: That’s the thing, she just signed off without warning. I hope everything’s okay. She was talking about how Aunt Blair got there today and in the middle of dinner Aunt Jo got a call, some robbery or something, two men two guns I think and then all of a sudden she’s off.
Dorothy: I hope Jo’s okay.
Tisha: Me too.
Dorothy: I’ll call Blair, how’s that sound.
Dorothy: Okay. *Gets up and gets the phone and dials and puts it on speaker phone*
Dorothy: Hey Blair is everything okay out there. Tisha just said Jamie was in the middle of a story and just got offline, is everything okay?
Blair: No, Thank God you called, Jo was shot.
Dorothy: I’ll call Natalie and Harper and we’ll be there.
Blair: Call Mrs. G. too, Jo will want her here too.
Dorothy: Your right, I’m on it, word will be out in five minutes.
Blair: Good I gotta go we’re pulling into the hospital.
Dorothy: It’ll be okay, Blair.
Blair: Thanks, Tootie.
Dorothy: Hey, Tootie’s always here.
Blair: I know, bye. *They hang up*
Dorothy: What am I going to do with you while I'm in L.A.
Tisha: I'm going with you.
Dorothy: Tisha, I don’t know.
Tisha: Hey you’re going for your friend, I need to be there for mine.
Dorothy: Your growing up to quick, okay go pack. *Tisha runs to her room and Dorothy calls Natalie*
*Natalie and Harper’s apartment*
Natalie: Is there anything good on TV?
Harper: Not that I’m seeing. *The phone rings* I got it *Gets up and answers* Hey Dorothy…Yeah Natalie’s right here. *Hands the phone over*
Natalie: Hey…what!…shot…yeah we’ll pack and be over…Harper can fly us…okay bye. *Hangs up* Go pack.
Harper: What’s wrong?
Natalie: Jo was shot, we’re all going to L.A. *They get up and go pack*
*Edna Garrett’s house*
Edna: Beverly Ann what’s that burning smell?
Beverly Ann: Nothing.
Edna: I got it. *Answers* Hello…Dorothy…yeah she’s here…what’s going on?…she was what?…Dorothy slow down…SHOT...when are we leaving…okay we’ll be there.*Hangs up* Beverly Ann throw that away and go pack, Jo’s been shot, we’re going to Los Angeles. *They pack and all meet at the airport in an hour, board and get into the air*
Not much but hey its a part and the next one will(should) be big
06-13-2007, 09:42 PM
06-13-2007, 11:40 PM
Keep up the good work. :) I am really enjoying it. :)
06-14-2007, 01:01 AM
Okay I would have more but my best friend is afraid she's gonna be kicked out of her house and yet again I've been dealing with her, but tonight i couldnt tune her out and write so I might have more tomorrow, she's coming over and we're gonna hang out most of the day so at the latest Friday
06-15-2007, 01:25 AM
Okay we're all good, my friend is all good, she didnt spend the night, thank god, she's my best friend and all but I've been on the phone with her frome ten to one every night, its kinda nice to have a quiet night but she got here at 10:30 this moring and I took her home at 6:30 this evening so I still have more than my fill but hey she's good now so its worth it, I dont have to do this again till next yeek yay! anyway enough about me here's more! The story is while y'all are here not me.
Blair: Rick she’s probably in surgery.
Rick: I gotta find her I can’t, we can’t lose her.
Jamie: We’re not going to dad. Mom’s strong, she’ll make it.
Rick: You’re right sweetie.
Blair: Dorothy, Tisha, Natalie, Harper, Mrs. Garrett and Beverly Ann are on their way. Harper is flying them.
Jamie: Good I need Tisha. Not as much as I need mom but hey. *They go inside the emergency room, Blair takes Jamie and they sit down and Rick and goes up to the receptionist.
Receptionist: Can I help you.
Rick: Yes, my wife, Jo Bonner, was brought here, she was shot.
Receptionist: *Looks at some papers* Yes, Mrs. Bonner is in surgery right now, has been for about half an hour.
Rick: How much longer will it last?
Receptionist: I don’t think it’ll be too much longer.
Rick: Thank you. *Goes and sits with Blair and Jamie.
Jamie: So when will they all be here?
Rick: Sweetie, it’ll probably be middle of the night. You’ll be home.
Jamie: You’re joking right, I'm not leaving here till I know mom is going to be okay.
Blair: Rick, if Jamie wants to stay let her stay, her and Jo are close.
Rick: If its bad news…
Jamie: Dad, I'm fourteen.
Rick: Okay, sweetie, you can stay.
Jamie: Thanks, Daddy. *A doctor walks out of a set of double doors looking at a clipboard*
Doctor: Bonner. *Rick, Blair and Jamie jump up* Are you all immediate family?
Rick: I'm Jo’s husband, *Points to Jamie* That’s our daughter and she’s…
Blair: I'm Jo’s sister.
Doctor: Hi, I'm Doctor Brady, Mrs. Bonner came in here a little over half an hour ago from being shot…
Rick: We know all this… fast forward to the surgery.
Doctor: Okay, the first bullet broke some ribs and damaged her right lung the second one…
Rick: There were two!
Doctor: Yes. shot twice.
Rick: Oh my God.
Doctor: The second one was more on the right side, broke ribs and damn the woman was lucky, missed her heart by less than an inch. Both of them are out but there was internal bleeding as well.
Rick: Oh my God, *Looks at Jamie who’s crying and he puts his arm around her* She’s going to make it, right. She’s going to be okay. Wait what about the baby!
Jamie: Baby? What baby? *Jamie moves Rick’s arm*
Rick: She’s pregnant! How’s the baby.
Doctor: Well, right now its fine but Jo’s still unconscious and unless she comes back to us soon, she’ll lose the baby.
Blair: Oh, no.
Doctor: You guys can go see her now. She’s in the ICU cubical four. *Leaves and Rick starts to go*
Rick: Come on, Jamie.
Jamie: I don’t wanna be anywhere near you. So I’ll just stay back here.
Rick: Fine. *They go to another waiting room* So I'm assuming you don’t want to go see your mother?
Jamie: I do, I'm just not going with you.
Rick: She knew and didn’t tell you either.
Jamie: Yeah and I'm pissed about it but I could lose mom and I guess I could put this aside on her part till she’s better. But I'm not putting yours off. *Sits down*
Rick: Blair, why don’t you go ahead and go see Jo. I need to have a talk with Jamie.
Blair: Sure. *Goes back into the room where cubical one through five are and Rick sits by Jamie*
Rick: Jamie, we need to talk.
Jamie: I don’t have anything to say.
Rick: Well good, cause you’ll be listening.
Jamie: How could you guys not tell me that you guys were having another kid, were you going to wait till mom’s in labor to tell me?
Rick: I thought you didn’t have anything to say.
Jamie: I thought of something.
Rick: You’re right, we should have told you sooner.
Jamie: Yeah, you should’ve why didn’t you?
Rick: God I wish your mother was giving you this talk. Jamie, you life changed this year. High school isn’t the easiest, and its hard to get used to, we didn’t want to put anything else on you, and well we were trying to do what’s best for you.
Jamie: I guess it was kinda stupid and childish for me to get mad about it. High school has been a rough transition it’s so big. I wish I was at Eastland like Tisha.
Rick: Do you really want to move to Peekskill?
Jamie: Yeah, I love Los Angeles, the idea of living here and all but I’ve always wanted to go to Eastland and come on dad, after tonight your not going to let mom go back to being a street cop are you?
Rick: Absolutely not.
Rick: I’ll make you a deal, once, if, your mom comes back and once she gets better we’ll discuss it and see what she thinks, she’ll have to get a new job, which would happen anyway, all the hassle of moving, I’ll talk to her okay?
Jamie: Okay dad, *They hug*
*In Jo’s cubical Blair walks in and pulls a chair over by the bed and sits down*
Blair: Jo? Jo, I don’t know if you can hear me but I'm talking anyway. You and Rick are busted, Jamie knows about the baby, and lets just say she took it exactly as you would. I can’t believe you never told her, but I'm sure you have your reasons. Anyway, Jo, you can’t leave us. We all need you, Dorothy Tisha, Natalie, Harper Mrs. G, and Beverly Ann are all on there way out here, right now to see you get better. God, Jo, I can’t lose you, you’re my best friend, I don’t know what I’d do without you. *Puts her head in her hands and cries*
06-19-2007, 11:42 AM
*In Jo’s cubical Blair walks in and pulls a chair over by the bed and sits down*
Blair: Jo? Jo, I don’t know if you can hear me but I'm talking anyway. You and Rick are busted, Jamie knows about the baby, and lets just say she took it exactly as you would. I can’t believe you never told her, but I'm sure you have your reasons. Anyway, Jo, you can’t leave us. We all need you, Dorothy Tisha, Natalie, Harper Mrs. G, and Beverly Ann are all on there way out here, right now to see you get better. God, Jo, I can’t lose you, you’re my best friend, I don’t know what I’d do without you. *Puts her head in her hands and cries as Rick comes in*
Rick: Sorry to interrupt.
Blair: No, it’s fine, I was finished, go ahead, I’ll go sit with Jamie.
Blair: How was your talk with Jamie?
Rick: It went well.
Blair: Tell Jo about it. *Smiles at Rick and leaves*
Rick: Hey babe, *Goes and sits on the edge of Jo’s bed* Well, first off Jamie knows about the pregnancy, not the way I expected her to find out but hey, weird circumstances. All of your friends are on the way. And I need you to come back, so does Jamie, she needs you, she needs to have a mother, I cant raise a teenage girl by myself, and you of all people should know that. I love you so much and I'm just waiting for you to come back to me. We still have another kid depending on you. And it all depends on you waking up soon. Jo, I could spend hours in here just talking to you, but Jamie’s outside waiting to see you so I'm going to let her come on it. I love you. *Softly kisses her and a tear drops onto her cheek and he leaves and Jamie comes in*
Jamie: What do I do?
Rick: Just talk to her sweetie, she can’t respond, but she can hear you.
Jamie: Okay. *Goes over to the chair where Blair was and sits down* Hey mom, it’s me. This all seems weird just talking to you like this, but I guess it’s all we can do, right? So, I found out you’re pregnant. Not the way I think you wanted me to find out but hey I know so I guess that’s that. Mom, you have to come back I cant lose you! I'm starting teenage years, I can’t just have dad around. He’s great but what about when I start dating? I'm going to need you on my side to control him, and how am I supposed to explain extremely bad cramps to dad? So I'm sure you’ve already heard this but everyone on their way out here, Uncle Harper is flying. Grandma G. and Grandma Bev are coming too. We haven’t seen Grandma Bev in ages. If you wont come back for us, come back for them, but I hope you come back for all of us because I need you so much, I think dad and Aunt Blair do too. I saw daddy crying when he walked out of here, it scared me, I’ve never seen him cry before, I always saw him as a rock, I’ve never seen him crack, I don’t see it from you often but I do, you’re just as strong and I want to be just like you when I grow up. You know what I would love, I would love to go to Eastland and make friends like you did. I like it out here but I miss Tisha and my aunts and Grandma G. and Grandma Bev. But I don’t want to get into that too much until you and dad have a chance to talk. *Doctor Brady comes in*
Doctor: Excuse me, visiting hours are over, could I ask you to leave?
Jamie: Sure. *Looks back at her mom* I love you mom. Goodnight. *Hugs her and leaves and goes and sits by Rick* Now what?
Rick: We wait for everyone and wait for her to get better.
Jamie: So she’s defiantly getting better.
Rick: I sure hope so. Why don’t you try to get a few hours of sleep sweetie. *The doctor comes out* Any change Doc?
Doctor: Not much but there was a little bit of brain activity going on, not much but some, you guys need to keep talking to her, it was starting to work, but not tonight, you can go home and get some sleep.
Rick: Would it be a problem if I stayed with my wife?
Doctor: No, of course not, but you daughter and sister in law should go.
Rick: Jamie, it might be best, I think everyone will just go to the house and then you can get them all here.
Jamie: Okay. *Kisses his cheek* Bye. *Her and Blair leave*
*Back at the house*
Blair: Go on to bed, I’ll wait up for the others.
Jamie: Nah, I wont sleep much I’ll wait with you.
Jamie: I'm going to go change into my pajamas, they’re comfier than jeans.
Blair: That’s a good idea then we can find a movie to pass time with. *They go change then meet back in the living room* So what’s your favorite movie? *Turns on the television an starts looking through the channels.
Jamie: Nothing that you’d like?
Blair: Have you ever seen Footloose?
Jamie: No, mom always said it was stupid.
Blair: This is a time where your mother is wrong. *Puts it on* It starts in two minutes.
Jamie: How can we be doing this?
Blair: Doing what?
Jamie: Watching movies, having fun, while mom is fighting for her life.
Blair: Jamie, your mom fights for her life every day.
Jamie: You know what I mean.
Blair: Yes, I do, and we can do it because just sitting here in silence wont do either of us any good, I learned this from Jo years ago, forgot why, but anyway, just sitting here will make it worse and I cant do that, we have to be strong for Jo.
Jamie: Okay, for mom. *The movie comes on and they watch it, with a lot of talking mixed in and at eleven there is a knock on the door and Blair gets up to answer it*
Blair: Hey, guys.
Mrs. Garrett: Hey, how’s Jo?
Blair: Not good? *They all come in and Jamie stands up and they all hug her*
Jamie: I'm fine, guys, I'm not the one who got shot. Look I'm beat, Tisha why don’t we go to my room. *They leave*
Tisha: It’s been a rough day hasn’t it?
Jamie: A rough night more like. Day was fine.
Tisha: I'm so sorry.
Jamie: What’s scary, besides the fact that I could lose mom, hell this whole thing is scary, but dad.
Tisha: What about him?
Jamie: You haven’t seen him yet. You know how my dad’s the prankster, the joker…
Tisha: Yeah, he’s great, I'm jealous.
Jamie: When we got that phone call, he changed instantly. I’ve seen him serious before don’t get me wrong, but this its scary.
Tisha: He’s at risk of losing the woman of his dreams, of course he’s going to be different.
Jamie: Yeah but its scary I don’t like it. Why’d she have to be a cop? What was she thinking, with how dangerous it is, and me, and the baby…she’s a parent for God sake, how could she...Oh my God, Grandma and Grandpa Polniazeck!
Tisha: Aunt Jo’s parents?
Jamie: I don’t know if they know! *Runs out into the living room* Has anyone talked to my grandparents?
Mrs. Garrett: Oh my, Rose and Charlie. I should’ve called they could’ve come with us.
Blair: I doubt Rick even thought, I know I didn’t.
Jamie: I’ll call dad’s cell and ask. *Grabs the phone and dials* Dad…yeah they just got here…did you call Grandma and Grandpa Polniazeck by any chance?…No, I got it, doing it now. I’ll tell them we’ll keep them updated step by step…any change in mom?…still…okay see you in the morning…I’ll try…love you too, daddy…bye. *Hangs up* They don’t know…I gotta call them. *Dials*
*Bronx, New York, at 2:00 am*
*Charlie is sound asleep when the phone rings*
Charlie: *Yawns* Hello…Jamie…what’s wrong sweetie, its 2:00 am…What happened to Jo?…She was what!…Yeah…I’ll call Rose, we’ll be on the next flight out…are you okay, sweetie…okay…love you too. Bye. *Calls Rose and they meet in an hour and rush to the airport*
*JFK Airport Ticket Counter*
Rose: Yes I need two tickets for the next flight to Los Angeles.
Worker: There’s one in thirty minutes…but…
Rose: Look my daughter works for the LAPD and she was shot tonight and needs us, as does our granddaughter and son-in-law. Now can you get us on that flight?
Worker: Its late, there’s a real good chance that you’ll make it if you run.
Charlie: Can do. *They check they’re bags breeze through security and run to their gate where they instantly board*
Rose: What exactly did Jamie say?
Charlie: Jo had been shot twice, she’s pregnant and non-responsive.
Rose: I cant believe she’s pregnant and they still called her to go into that dangerous situation. And Rick let her.
Charlie: It’s not Rick’s fault. We all know that once Jo makes up her mind there’s no changing it.
Rose: Yeah, she’s stubborn, like her father.
Tisha: I would have figured you would have crashed by now, I know I'm about to.
Jamie: How can I sleep? Huh? How.
Tisha: I don’t know. But I don’t get how your staying so strong, Have you cried yet?
Jamie: No, I can’t. too much to do. Don’t have time to cry.
Tisha: Keeping yourself busy wont help.
Jamie: She’s not dead, and quit acting like it! She’s gonna get better.
Tisha: Of course, she is, but you’ve gotta sleep and tale care of yourself so you can be there to help her get better. So lets go to bed.
Jamie: Okay I’ll try, and Tisha its only midnight.
Tisha: My body is saying three, let me think that.
Jamie: Okay, night. *They get into Jamie’s bed and Tisha falls asleep instantly, and Jamie lays awake for awhile and eventually falls asleep and two hours later at eight, is woken up by noises outside her room and she gets up and wakes Tisha up* Tisha get ready, we need to get to the hospital.
Tisha: Did you sleep any?
Jamie: Two hours or so, but I'm good. Get ready. *They run around the house and finally leave twenty minutes later*
06-19-2007, 03:14 PM
06-19-2007, 10:55 PM
Good job. :)
06-20-2007, 02:42 PM
Thanks for the good reviews well here I am watching the ep. Graduation on YouTube and thinking how much I'm gonna cry when I graduate high school this spring and thought I'd post a little bit more for y'all
*Jamie runs over to Rick and hugs him*
Rick: Hey sweetie how’d you sleep?
Jamie: Not much, what about you?
Rick: Maybe five minutes, I can’t believe I forgot your grandparents.
Jamie: Its okay. They’re on their way. Can I see mom?
Rick: Yeah, go on in.
Jamie: Thanks. *Goes in* Hey mom, Everyone’s here, and grandma and grandpa are on their way, I called them last night at 2:00 am in New York, kinda felt bad…I couldn’t sleep last night, Aunt Blair and I left after I talked to you we watched Footloose, wasn’t that bad of a movie, actually, Then everyone showed up and I just kept thinking of things that needed to be done, and I got two hours of sleep. I don’t think dad did too, he sure doesn’t look like it. I kept Tisha up with me all night, kinda feel bad about that but I'm sure she’s asleep in a chair right now. Shawn is bringing my homework by at lunch, you remember me telling you about him don’t you? Well, I'm assuming you haven’t told dad yet ‘cause he hasn’t been all over me about it, even though he’s preoccupied, he would still have mentioned it. *Dr. Brady walks in*
Doctor: Hi, you’re her daughter right?
Jamie: Yeah, Jamie. How is she?
Doctor: She’s healing, I just wish she’d respond. Hey, try asking her to do something.
Jamie: Like what?
Doctor: Squeeze your hand, move a finger, something.
Jamie: I’ll try. *Takes her mother’s hand* Mom, if you hear me and can do this, squeeze my hand, just give me a sign to know you’re here. *Waits* Nothing. I'm sorry.
Doctor: Jamie, it’s not your fault. Look, if you see her moving or anything, and tell everyone else this too, holler and have someone find a nurse or me, okay?
Jamie: Okay, thanks. *Doctor Brady leaves* Okay, mom, there’s a bunch of people out there, so I'm going to let one of them come in and go find a vending machine and get some food. I love you. *Hugs her* Come back to us soon. *Leaves*
Rick: How was she sweetie?
Jamie: Okay, I guess, the doctor came in while I was in there and had me ask her to squeeze my hand, but she didn’t, I got my hopes up when I asked her. I guess we’re supposed to be trying to get her to do something every so often. But dad I really thought she would do it, and then she didn’t.
Rick: It’s not that she didn’t, it’s that she couldn’t. One of you can go in, you know. I like to always have someone in there.
Blair: Mrs. Garrett, you go.
Mrs. Garrett: Are you sure.
Natalie: Yeah, if anyone can get Jo to do anything its you.
Dorothy: Yeah, Nat and I will go after you.
Mrs. Garrett: Okay, *Goes in and sits in the chair* Hey Jo, haven’t seen you in ages, and I really didn’t want it to be under these circumstances. We really missed you at the reunion last year. We’re all out there, Jo, and your parents should be here any time, we’re all rooting for you, so get better. I'm going to send Natalie and Tootie…I mean Dorothy, I’ll never get used to that, in. *Kisses her cheek and leaves* Natalie, Dorothy, your up.
Natalie: Okay, *They get up and go in and Rick goes over to Mrs. Garrett*
Rick: Mrs. Garrett? Look I know we don’t really know each other that well, only through Jo, but I need some advice.
Mrs. Garrett: Sure, about what?
Rick: Can we go somewhere a little more private?
Mrs. Garrett: Sure. *They get up and walk off* What’s bothering you.
Rick: It’s all Jo.
Mrs. Garrett: I figured.
Rick: I want her to quit her job.
Mrs. Garrett: I think we all do.
Rick: Yeah, I know. But she’s pregnant, she really doesn’t need to be a street cop regardless about what happened last night, we’re gonna have two kids. Well, Jamie’s basically taking care of herself now, she still needs Jo, and this new baby is going to need her for everything.
Mrs. Garrett: How far along is she?
Rick: A month.
Mrs. Garrett: Rick, you do know…
Rick: That there’s a big risk of losing the baby, yes, I know. That’s why Doctor Brady is a little bit more worried then he would normally be. But anyway, I was talking to Blair and there is an opening at Eastland, guidance counselor, and I want Jo to take it, but I don’t know how to talk her into moving back, getting her to quit her job I'm not worried about but moving back, we’ve made a life here, and Jamie’s been here for eleven years.
Mrs. Garrett: If Jo takes the job Jamie could go to Eastland.
Rick: I know, and Jo was saying yesterday how she wanted Jamie to go to Eastland.
Mrs. Garrett: Then maybe it wont be so hard to talk her into it.
Rick: Maybe, but could you possibly talk to her too, she really values your opinion.
Mrs. Garrett: I know, and yes, I’ll talk to her.
Rick: Thanks Mrs. Garrett, we better get back to the others see if Rose and Charlie are here yet. *They walk over to the group as Rose and Charlie come in*
Charlie: Jamie, Rick! Everybody!
Jamie: Grandpa! *Runs over and hugs Charlie* Grandma! *Hugs Rose*
Rose: Hey sweetie, how’s your mother?
Rick: Not so good *Hugs Rose and shakes Charlie’s hand* We’re just all waiting now. *Blair comes out*
Blair: Charlie, Rose, so nice to see you, terrible circumstances though.
Charlie: Yeah it is Blair. Can we go see her?
Rick: Of course, go on in. *They go in* Hey Jamie, come here.
Jamie: Yeah dad? *Rick hugs her*
Rick: It’s gonna be okay, sweetie. It really is.
Jamie: I know dad.
Rick: I was just thinking about the night she accepted my marriage proposal.
Jamie: Really, how’d you propose?
Rick: Through a game. “What’s My Question.” I had a game board and everything and Jo had to guess the question, the others helped of course, and Beverly Ann started telling a story about a sheep…but besides that after they figured it out we went into the kitchen and I got on bended knee and did it the right way, on bended knee, and she wanted some time to think and from that moment I started making plans, then one night I got a ladder and climbed up to her bedroom window with a sock puppet I made, I wonder if she still has that, anyway then after I got done talking myself up through the sock, I pulled out this imaginary photo album and starting talking about it, showing her pictures of our life, and the last picture I showed before she accepted was our daughter graduating Harvard Medical School.
Jamie: You guys expect me to go to medical school!
Rick: Only if you want to.
Jamie: I have no idea what I want to do.
Rick: That’s okay too. Next to the day you were born and the day I married Jo, the night she said yes was the best night of my life, then I fell off the ladder…
Rick: Hey its okay, the sidewalk broke my fall. *Jamie laughs*
Jamie: That’s the dad I know and love.
Rick: Sorry I wasn’t here.
Jamie: Its okay. *They hug*
thats all for now, I gotta go get ready.
06-22-2007, 02:56 PM
Here's a little more...
Jamie: Its okay. *They hug as Rose and Charlie come out*
Rick: I'm gonna go see your mom.
Jamie: Okay, I’ll keep grandma and grandpa company. *Rick goes in*
Rick: Jo, our little girl is growing up, I don’t like it. *Holds her hand and just sits there, then he starts singing to her* “When I hear you stop and laugh out loud, when your falling fast asleep, when your in the middle of a crowd, when your lying close to me, when I hear you softly say my name, when you high and when your low, when you don’t need me to explain, cause you already know, when you smile that way, I know, every night and day, that's when I love you, when I need you, when I care about you, that's when I know without a doubt, that I can't live without you, everyday I find another reason, every season we go through, and every little thing you do, that's when I love you” *Puts his head in his hands and cries*
*In the waiting room, Natalie, Dorothy, and Blair are sitting together wit Jamie and Tisha a couple seats down*
Natalie: What if we lose her? She’s the one that made us even closer.
Blair: Yeah, no offense guys, but I probably never would’ve hung out with you two as much after 9th grade.
Dorothy: We know.
Blair: So Jo really is the reason we’re so close. I'm glad she came guys. I really am.
Natalie: Us too. And to think all of this is because Jo was dating Eddie, and her mom didn’t like him.
Blair: It’s not only that Rose didn’t like him, there’s a little more too it than that.
Dorothy: What do you mean and how do you know?
Natalie: They stayed up till all hours talking, Blair and Jo are closer than we are, they just think their good at hiding it.
Dorothy: So why did she really come?
Blair: Well it was because of Eddie but nothing as simple as she told you guys. Rose walked in on them once.
Dorothy: When you say “walked in on them” you mean….
Blair: They were having sex.
Blair: Dorothy, grow up. You cannot tell me that you didn’t know that those two were having sex.
Dorothy: No I didn’t! Did you know Nat?
Natalie: Seriously suspected it. Come on who do you think Jo’s first was…Rick? *Her and Blair crack up*
Jamie: Okay, guys I hate thinking of the fact that my parents do it…now you got the picture of mom and Eddie…way to go.
Blair: Sorry, you know about Eddie?
Jamie: Yeah, I’ve met him.
Natalie: Really? Does Rick know?
Jamie: Yeah, I'm friends with his son, actually more than friends…but dad doesn’t need to know that.
Blair: God help us we have a little Jo.
Jamie: He’s coming by later to drop off my homework.
Blair: Eddie or his kid?
Jamie: Both I think.
Blair: Do you grandparents know?
Jamie: No, why.
Natalie: They weren’t too crazy about Eddie.
Jamie: Yeah, I figured, I just heard every word you said.
Blair: It’s so weird that they both ended up in the same section of Los Angeles. So how’s Eddie’s wife?
Jamie: He’s divorced.
Blair: Oh, God.
06-23-2007, 08:58 PM
Here's a little more its starting to storm and I see lightning so I'm gonna get off of here now but thought I'd post for ya first..
Blair: It’s so weird that they both ended up in the same section of Los Angeles. So how’s Eddie’s wife?
Jamie: He’s divorced.
Blair: Oh, God. *I'm going to go make sure Rick’s okay. *Goes in* Hey.
Rick: *Wipes his eyes* Hey.
Blair: How is she?
Rick: I have no idea. I was singing to her a minute ago thinking that might make her move but it didn’t.
Blair: *Looks at the machines* Do you know what any of that stuff means?
Rick: Not a clue.
Blair: Well, I need to tell you something. Jamie said that Eddie’s coming later this afternoon.
Rick: Eddie who…oh no…not Jo’s ex…please say it’s a different Eddie.
Blair: No, its that Eddie.
Rick: Damn it! How did he find out?
Blair: Jamie said she’s friends wit his son, and that his son is bring Jamie her homework and she thinks that Eddie will probably come too.
Rick: I can’t believe he’d do that, at a time like this…She doesn’t love him anymore, don’t know if she ever did but she doesn’t anymore…she’s my wife now…not his…she never was his, after all he put her through how does he think he needs to show up here? Jo’s parents are here! Oh, this isn’t going to be good. *Jo inches her hand toward Rick but he doesn’t see* I need to talk to Jamie, have her tell the kid not to worry that she’ll be back soon.
Blair: Rick what’s wrong…Jo loves you…there’s no need to be jealous of Eddie.
Rick: He still loves her…that’s competition.
Blair: She married you, not Eddie. She had a child, two children, with you not Eddie, I think you won.
Rick: If she wasn’t sixteen when he asked her to marry him she would’ve said yes.
Blair: No she wouldn’t have…Eastland changed Jo a lot. Eddie came to see Jo when we were about nineteen I think and yes she had feelings for him but she didn’t have half of the feelings she used too. Plus he was married, not that he told her, but she found out. And its really weird that you guys live in the same area.
Rick: Yeah, I don’t like it one bit. Jo says I'm paranoid. *Jo reaches Rick’s hand and holds it tight* Oh my God…Blair go get Doctor Brady hurry! And have Jamie come in here. Okay baby, open you eyes, your squeezing my hand now all we gotta do is have you open your eyes. You’re coming back to us, baby. *Jo opens her eyes*
Jo: *Weak* Where am I?
Rick: Thank God! Your back, your back…I love you so much, Jo. I don’t know what I would’ve done without you.
Jo: I'm here, I think…what happened? *Jamie runs in*
Jamie: Yeah dad? Mom! Your awake!
Jo: Yeah, what happened?
Rick: You were shot, twice.
Jo: The baby…how’s it?
Rick: They don’t know yet, it all depended on you.
Jo: Of course.
Rick: Everyone’s here.
Jo: What do you mean everyone?
Rick: Me, Jamie, Blair, your parents, Mrs. Garrett, Dorothy, Tisha, Natalie, and Harper.
Jo: Well that’s everyone alright.
Rick: Yeah. *Doctor Brady runs in*
Doctor: Hi, Jo, I'm Doctor Brady.
Doctor: How do you feel?
Jo: In a lot of pain. How’s the baby?
Doctor: Amazingly, just fine, that’s one tough child.
Rick: Like its mother. *Kisses Jo*
Jo: Okay, so I know I was shot, but where?
Doctor: First one broke some and damaged your right lung, the second on broke some more ribs and barely missed your heart.
Jo: Oh god.
Doctor: I'm going to run some test then I think we’ll be able to move you to an actual room.
Jo: How long will I be here?
Doctor: It all depends on how fast you and the baby recover.
Jo: Okay. Thank you. *Jamie and Rick leave and the doctor examines Jo*
Rick: I'm going to run out and get your mom some chocolate, she’ll feel better after that.
Jamie: Yeah she will, you might want to check the gift shop first though.
Rick: Good idea. *Wanders off*
06-23-2007, 11:01 PM
Well done. :)
06-26-2007, 02:09 AM
Heres some more
Rick: I'm going to run out and get your mom some chocolate, she’ll feel better after that.
Jamie: Yeah she will, you might want to check the gift shop first though.
Rick: Good idea. *Wanders off*
Blair: She’s up!
Jamie: Yeah, the doctor’s checking her out but once he’s done, go for it. *Doctor Brady walks out and Blair goes in*
Blair: You know Rick is never going to let you leave the house again, right?
Jo: Yeah, I know.
Blair: I just learned some very interesting information.
Jo: Yeah, what?
Blair: Oh, nothing, just that Jamie is dating your ex’s son and you never told me that Eddie lived in L.A.
Jo: Didn’t I? I'm sure I mentioned it somewhere?
Blair: No, ya didn’t.
Jo: Well, I try to avoid him, him and Rick aren’t the best of friends.
Blair: I wonder why.
Jo: But yeah the kids are getting close so I guess Rick’s gonna have to toughen up eventually.
Blair: Yeah, and quick, apparently Eddie and , Shawn, I think, are coming with Jamie’s homework.
Jo: Oh great, does Rick know?
Jo: I hope Eddie doesn’t start anything.
Blair: What do you mean?
Jo: After he moved here and I learned he was divorced, we were talking once and he told me he still had feelings for me and Rick overheard…that’s part of why Rick hates him.
Blair: What’d you do?
Jo: I went after Rick, of course, and told him that no matter how much I love him, I’ll always have some feeling for Eddie, he was my first love and I can’t change that but how I feel for Eddie doesn’t come close to what I feel for Rick. And Rick understood, he wasn’t happy about it, which is why I basically stay away from Eddie. Blair what am I gonna do?
Blair: Calm down, you don’t need to get all worked up over this, your still not fully recovered. I think the guys will just have to grow up and be men, and accept that they’re in love with the same woman, even if it’s you. I thought I was going to be the one with this problem, not you!
Jo: Where is Tad?
Blair: New York, he couldn’t get away.
*Meanwhile out in the waiting room, Shawn walks in*
Jamie: Shawn, hi.
Shawn: Hey, Jamie. How’s you mom?
Jamie: She just regained consciousness.
Shawn: That’s good, so you’ll be back in school tomorrow?
Jamie: Yeah, so you dad didn’t come with you?
Shawn: Yeah, he did, he’s in the gift shop, thought your mom will want some chocolate when she wakes up, I don’t think he expected it to be this soon though.
Jamie: Your dad’s in the gift shop! Oh no, I'm dead!
Shawn: What’s going on?
Jamie: My dad’s in the gift shop.
Shawn: Our dad’s hate each other.
Jamie: Hey everyone I’ll be back. *The two run down to the gift shop*
06-27-2007, 12:16 AM
Good job! :)
06-27-2007, 12:57 PM
Here's a little more
*Gift Shop, Rick was looking at the chocolate trying to pick what she would like when Eddie walks in and walks over to him*
Eddie: What are you doing in here?
Rick: I should be asking you that, as for me I'm getting my wife some chocolate.
Eddie: I was just getting Jo chocolate too.
Rick: She doesn’t need that much chocolate so just beat it okay.
Eddie: Oh, I'm not walking in there empty handed, if you don’t want me to get chocolate I won’t, I’ll get flowers or something.
Rick: Can’t you just leave us alone?
Eddie: And why should I do that, I care about Jo.
Rick: And you think I really give a damn if you care about her.
Eddie: Well you should. Because whether you’ll admit it or not, she still cares about me. *Rick turns to him ready to have at him when Jamie and Shawn run in*
Eddie: Stay out of this guys. It’s none of your business. *Jamie and Shawn run over to them just as Rick punches Eddie and Eddie goes for a swing at Rick and hits Jamie in the jaw as she jumps in between the two*
Rick: Oh you’ll pay for this one.
Jamie: Dad, no, I'm fine! Just get mom’s chocolate and we’ll go.
Shawn: And dad, you get, whatever it was that you were gonna get her and we’ll take it to Jo and you two can…Jamie what are they gonna do?
Jamie: I’d like to say work out their problems but I don’t think that’ll work so. You guys are going to take the stuff back to mom and forget this ever happened.
Rick: Okay, sweetheart. *Rick grabs some chocolate and goes over to the counter and pays and Eddie grabs some flowers and does the same and they all go back to the waiting room*
Eddie: Jamie, I'm sorry, are you okay?
Jamie: A little sore but I’ll live.
Eddie: Has anyone ever told you how much like your mother you are.
Jamie: Aunt Blair, Natalie, Dorothy, and Grandma G. all do, so does dad.
Eddie: Well, trust me your like a clone of her.
Eddie: Who’s Dorothy?
Jamie: You probably know her as Tootie.
Eddie: Yeah, I know who that is. *They get back to the waiting room* Hi, guys.
Blair/Natalie/Tootie/Mrs. Garrett: Hey Eddie.
Eddie: Mr. Polniazeck, Mrs. Polniazeck.
Beverly Ann: Hi, I'm Beverly Ann, I'm Edna’s sister.
Eddie: Hi, I'm Jo’s ex.
Beverly Ann: Oh, yes, she told me about you.
Eddie: Is anyone in with her now?
Rick: I'm getting ready to go.
Jamie: Great, go together. *Shoves them into Jo’s room*
Shawn: Was that such a good idea?
Jamie: Even after what she just went through, if anyone can handle the two of them, it’s my mom. Come here, I want you to meet everyone. *Introduces him to everyone and they sit with Tisha and they talk*
07-06-2007, 10:34 PM
Good job. :)
07-09-2007, 06:00 PM
Hey sorry I havent posted on this in a while been wrapped up in Life Changing Events but I'm going to write on this tonight and post it late tonight or tomorrow morning. Sorry for the wait!
07-10-2007, 06:34 PM
Okay hope y'all dont mind but I'm putting this on hold till I get Life Changing Events done with but I promise that when thats done I will come back and finish this
09-30-2007, 07:37 PM
take you time.
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