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Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
02-26-2006, 11:56 PM
Hello all! I wanted to start a fan fic over here that people might be interested in. I have written some like this, but I know a lot about this subject so just bear with me and enjoy! :p :D
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It was a normal day in Peekskill, or so they thought. Jo and Rick and their daughter Jamie had moved back to Peekskill so Jamie could go to school at Eastland. Dorothy 'Tootie' and Tisha were living in Peekskill also while Tisha went to Eastland. Blair and Tad now had a daughter, Molly Marie and she was three. Natalie's boyfriend, Harper, died in a plane crash on his way to do a segment. She was so depressed she basically went out with anybody. She was now with this guy Ken who she thought really loved her, but she was wrong. He made her feel so self consious about herself, that she felt no one else could love her, so she stayed. Only she stayed too long. Now she couldn't leave. Blair, Jo, dorothy, and Mrs. Garrett have arranged to havve a get together that day but Natalie didn't want to go. After days and days of non stop calls, they finally convinced her to go. They didn't know why, but when she arrived they soon knew.
Dorothy- Where's Natalie? I haven't seen her in weeks!
Jo- I know, she's been really distant lately.
Blair- You know how she gets when she gets new boyfriends. I mean, ever since Harper, she's been different.
Mrs. Garrett- We've just gotta let her grieve girls. Sometimes it takes a while.
*Knock on the door*
Jo- Since when does she knock?
Mrs. Garrett- -Glares- Come in.
Natalie- Hi guys.
Dorothy- Nat! -runs to hug her but Nat backs up- What's wrong?
Natalie- Nothing, I just gotta take off my coat.
Jo- Natalie, it's 7:30pm, it's not sunny out, don't you think you should take off the sunglasses?
Natalie- I have a migraine, I'd prefer them on.
Mrs. Garrett- Natalie...what's going on?
Natalie- Nothing.
Mrs. Garrett- -Walks over to Natalie cause she knew exactly what was going on. She took off Natalie's glasses to find a big bruise-
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Well? R&R! :wave:
Miss Mar-G
02-27-2006, 12:08 AM
I APPROVE!!! ;)....AND YOU SHOULD FEEL SPECIAL...YOU GET MY FIRST POST!...HAHA LOVE YA! :wave:
JO jr
02-28-2006, 11:16 PM
KEEP IT GOIN' JINNYGIRL! I'M WAITING FOR MORE, SO I'LL STAY TUNED IN AFTER YOUR LITTLE COMMERCIAL BREAK:)
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
03-05-2006, 11:18 PM
Sorry, tough last couple of days :( Here's more though :)
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Mrs. Garrett- Natalie...what's going on?
Natalie- Nothing.
Mrs. Garrett- -Walks over to Natalie cause she knew exactly what was going on. She took off Natalie's glasses to find a big bruise- Natalie, what’s going on?
Natalie- What do you mean?
Tootie- The bruise!
Natalie- Look, it’s nothing. We had a little fight.
Jo- He hit you? Why I oughtta……..*Blair holds her back*
Blair- Come on, Jo, we’re not back in High School. You can’t fix things by punching someone out.
Jo- Right, we’ll just throw a pie in his face.
Blair- -Glares-
Natalie- Guys, I’ve got it under control.
Tootie- You mean you left him?
Natalie- Eh, not exactly.
Jo- Well what exactly do you mean?
Natalie- I’m handling it okay? It’s done, it’s over.
Mrs. Garrett- Alright honey.
Natalie- Now can we just eat and have a good time? It’s been forever since I’ve seen you guys!
Mrs. Garrett- -Sighs-
After dinner, Natalie left and the rest of the girls talked afterwards.
Mrs. Garrett- This isn’t like her girls.
Tootie- This isn’t “our” Natalie.
Jo- She thinks she’s so in love with this guy that she deserves to get beaten? That’s just stupid!
Blair- This is just so, unlike her. I remember the fun outspoken girl in high school Even when she was attacked, it took her a little while, but she bounced back.
Jo- This is a little bigger than that.
Mrs. Garrett- Girls, we have to be careful here. -Phone rings-
Tootie- I’ll get it. Hello?
Mrs. Garrett- She has been so upset ever since Harper, she just doesn’t know what love is anymore.
Tootie- Oh my god! That was the hospital.
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Well? :wave:
JO jr
03-06-2006, 01:47 AM
YOU GO (JINNY)GIRL! I'M WAITING FOR MORE. (COURSE, PROBABLY HAVE SLOWED YOU DOWN WITH YOU TAKIN THE TIME TO HELP ME AND ALL:) )
iliveforjayandnancy2
03-07-2006, 01:11 AM
WOW so far so good! Suspense, drama, HELL WE should write for Lifetime, and Nick and Nite and **** geesh! lol And I'm loving the twist on Tracy Thruman/FOL/Reunion Movie thing. Only you could pull something like that off. And write more soon damn it!!! And u best be on the look out. I got nooooooooooo man to hold me down and burdon me with problems, so I am all urs....and when I catch up on all ur fic and reply to it (since it's letting me reply now) you will SO have to write faster, my friend. lol So yes...keep up da goood work. *wink wink*
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
03-09-2006, 01:36 AM
WOW so far so good! Suspense, drama, HELL WE should write for Lifetime, and Nick and Nite and **** geesh! lol And I'm loving the twist on Tracy Thruman/FOL/Reunion Movie thing. Only you could pull something like that off. And write more soon damn it!!! And u best be on the look out. I got nooooooooooo man to hold me down and burdon me with problems, so I am all urs....and when I catch up on all ur fic and reply to it (since it's letting me reply now) you will SO have to write faster, my friend. lol So yes...keep up da goood work. *wink wink*
Hehehehe Thanks girl! I'll email you tonight telling ya I wrote more. I had a lot of fun tonight! I forgot my darn camera though! GRRRR! Annnyway, here's more! :D
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Mrs. Garrett- Girls, we have to be careful here. -Phone rings-
Tootie- I’ll get it. Hello?
Mrs. Garrett- She has been so upset ever since Harper, she just doesn’t know what love is anymore.
Tootie- Oh my god! That was the hospital. Natalie was hurt. -All the girls had a look of horror on their faces-
They all of course, rushed down to the hospital.
Mrs. Garrett- Hi, we’re here to see Natalie Green.
Doctor- I’m her Doctor. Ms. Green has a nasty bruise on the side of her face, she was found unconscious, her boyfriend brought her in. However, he couldn’t tell us what happened.
Jo- We have a pretty good idea.
Doctor- I did too, but she’s not pressing charges. There’s some other news, but I’m afraid I can’t tell you without her permission, so she will have to tell you that. Maybe you can talk to her. She has a mild concussion, but she’s free to go. Just watch her for a few days.
Mrs. Garrett- Thank you.
They all went to find Natalie’s room. She was sitting on her bed, crying.
Tootie- Natalie.
Natalie- I’m fine guys.
Jo- You were just at our house, what happened?
Natalie- Well, I told you guys I would take care of it, so I tried to talk to him. Apparently that didn’t work.
Blair- Where is he?
Natalie- He said he was going back to my place, where we can talk later.
Jo- Talk??
Natalie- He brought me here, he’s sorry. Besides, it’s not that simple anymore.
Tootie- What do you mean?
Natalie- The doctor just confirmed, I’m pregnant. -Cries-
Mrs. Garrett- Oh Natalie.
Natalie- I’ve waited for this day my whole life, and now look what it has become.
Jo- We’ll help you.
Natalie- Well, I want to go home now. I’ve got to talk to Ken.
Blair- Okay we’ll drive you.
They dropped Natalie off and everyone else went home. They spent the whole night worrying about Natalie.
Natalie- Ken?
Ken- You’re home! -Hugs her- Ouch, that looks like it hurts.
Natalie- It does.
Ken- Look, I’m sorry. When you were talking about seeing other people, I just felt like you never wanted to see me again, I got angry.
Natalie- Well it’s more complicated now. I have to tell you something.
Ken- What?
Natalie- When I was at the hospital today, the doctor told me, well…I’m pregnant.
Ken- Really?
Natalie- Yeah.
Ken- And it’s mine?
Natalie- -Glares-
Ken- Just making sure. Oh Nat, we’re going to be so happy!
Natalie- What?
Ken- I grew up without a father. I can’t let my own kid go through what I went through. Natalie, will you marry me?
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JO jr
03-09-2006, 07:40 PM
I THINK JO NEEDS TO GO HAVE A "TALK" WITH HIM, AND BRING SOME OF HER "LITTLE PUEBLO" FRIENDS! HAHA:)
JessieOrJinny
03-11-2006, 03:30 PM
Just read this and its awsome and im thinking of NMK's movie a Cry For Help as similar to this one xcept with some changes and with Nat in it. please post more
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
03-11-2006, 07:19 PM
I THINK JO NEEDS TO GO HAVE A "TALK" WITH HIM, AND BRING SOME OF HER "LITTLE PUEBLO" FRIENDS! HAHA:)
Ty everyone! I'm glad you're enjoying my fic. JO jr., you crack me up! :lol: *Talks like Jo* YOUNG DIABLOS! hehe
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Tootie- What?
Jo- What?
Blair- What?
Natalie- Yep.
Tootie- What did you say?
Natalie- Nothing. I didn’t know what to say.
Blair- How about ‘no!?’
Mrs. Garrett- Blair…
Natalie- He’s the father of my child, what am I supposed to do?
Blair- Some father.
Natalie- Things are so easy for you, aren’t they Blair?
Mrs. Garrett- Natalie.
Natalie- You have a husband who adores you, and a child who has a great father. I lost the love of my life, and now I have a child who’s father is a batterer, and I have to live with that. I have to try to change him around.
Jo- Nat, I know how you feel, but you can’t change people like that. I worked on the police force, remember? You just can’t. I see children come in every day with father who beat them, the mothers just did their best, but it wasn’t good enough.
Natalie- Well, mine will have to be.
Tootie- Nat.
Natalie- Thanks anyway guys, but I have to go. -Leaves-
Tootie- Mrs. Garrett, what are we going to do?
Mrs. Garrett- I don’t know girls. For once, I don’t.
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Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
03-16-2006, 01:59 AM
Anyone? :( :D
JO jr
03-16-2006, 02:16 AM
GIRL, I THOUGHT YOU FELL OFF THE FACE OF THE EARTH!:) I TRIED TO LOOK ON HERE EVERY DAY TO SEE IF YOU POSTED MORE, AND I'M GLAD YOU DID. KEEP IT UP JINNYGIRL. I, ALONG WITH OTHERS ARE WAITING:)
BY-THE-WAY, LOVE YOUR NANCY SITE-1ST CLASS. JUST TO LET YA KNOW, I HAVE READ EVERYONE'S POSTS, ETC. BUT HAVE NOT HAD THE TIME TO JOIN IN. I'M HOPING THIS WEKEND OR NEXT WEEK TO GET INVOLVED. I CAN TELL YOU HAVE PUT A LOT OF WORK INTO IT; AND I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW HOPPING IT'S GONNA GET! CONGRATS AGAIN, JINNYGIRL:)
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
03-16-2006, 02:22 AM
GIRL, I THOUGHT YOU FELL OFF THE FACE OF THE EARTH!:) I TRIED TO LOOK ON HERE EVERY DAY TO SEE IF YOU POSTED MORE, AND I'M GLAD YOU DID. KEEP IT UP JINNYGIRL. I, ALONG WITH OTHERS ARE WAITING:)
BY-THE-WAY, LOVE YOUR NANCY SITE-1ST CLASS. JUST TO LET YA KNOW, I HAVE READ EVERYONE'S POSTS, ETC. BUT HAVE NOT HAD THE TIME TO JOIN IN. I'M HOPING THIS WEKEND OR NEXT WEEK TO GET INVOLVED. I CAN TELL YOU HAVE PUT A LOT OF WORK INTO IT; AND I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW HOPPING IT'S GONNA GET! CONGRATS AGAIN, JINNYGIRL:)
Thank you very much! I didn't realize it's been that long since I've written anything until you just mentioned it lol I'll write more right now before I go to bed, since it's 2:21AM where I live lol. And thank you for the support for my group! I can't wait till you get involved with the posts, then I know we'll have a blast! :wave I'll get to writing then!
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
03-16-2006, 03:37 AM
Sorry, got a little tied up lol but here it is and I'll post more tomorrow! :D
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Natalie went straight home to tell Ken she would marry him. All Nat could think about was how she felt when she didn’t have her father anymore, and she didn’t want her child to ever go through that.
Ken- You will??
Natalie- Yes I will.
Ken- -Kissed her- I won’t disappoint you, Nat.
Natalie- You have to make me a promise.
Ken- Okay.
Natalie- You can never ever hit me again, or this baby.
Ken- I swear to you. I will be the best husband ever. Come on, let’s celebrate!
They waited three weeks to have the wedding and went to city hall, since Natalie didn’t want to be showing at her own wedding.
Ken- I do.
Natalie- I do.
When they kissed, everyone clapped, except Jo, Blair and Tootie. They clapped of course but they didn’t mean it. They knew this was going to end badly but they tried the best to their ability to warn Natalie, but nothing worked. Everyone went up to Nat and Ken to wish them the best.
Mrs. Garrett- Natalie. -Hug- I hope you’ll still visit me.
Natalie- Of course Mrs. Garrett, you’re like a mother to me.
Mrs. Garrett- I know if your mother were alive to see you today, she’d be so happy.
Tootie- My best friend is married, I can’t believe it.
Natalie- Thanks Tootie. -Hug-
Jo- I still think you’re in over your head, but promise you’ll call if you need anything.
Natalie- Promise you’ll be there for me.
Jo- Always. -Hug-
Blair- I never thought I’d say this, but you’re the prettiest one in the room Natalie, and I’m 2nd prettiest.
Natalie- -Laughs- Thanks Blair…I think. -Hug-
Ken- We got to go.
Natalie- Bye guys!
Tootie- Have a great honeymoon!
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JO jr
03-17-2006, 03:04 AM
EVERYTIME YOU WRITE, I CAN JUST PICTURE THE SCENE, AND THE GIRLS TALKING THE WAY THEY DO. I'M TRYING TO PICTURE "KEN" THOUGH. CAN YOU GIVE A DESCIPTION OF HIM?
I'M HUNGERING FOR MORE....
AND THANKU MUCH FOR YOUR KIND WORDS TOO, JINNYGIRL. YOU PUT A SMILE ON MY FACE THIS EARLY AM. WHAT A NICE WAY TO GO TO BED! :)
Shine
03-18-2006, 12:33 AM
Great story, Kelly. :)
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
03-18-2006, 04:48 AM
EVERYTIME YOU WRITE, I CAN JUST PICTURE THE SCENE, AND THE GIRLS TALKING THE WAY THEY DO. I'M TRYING TO PICTURE "KEN" THOUGH. CAN YOU GIVE A DESCIPTION OF HIM?
I'M HUNGERING FOR MORE....
AND THANKU MUCH FOR YOUR KIND WORDS TOO, JINNYGIRL. YOU PUT A SMILE ON MY FACE THIS EARLY AM. WHAT A NICE WAY TO GO TO BED! :)
Well here is some dolls I made of what they look like at this moment in this story. I hope it helps you JO jr.! Anyway, thanks everyone! Here's more!!
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A few months later, Natalie was getting bigger and more worried. She started to realize, there’s an actual person inside of her, and she worried. She was afraid she made the wrong decision. She made the girls promise to stay close by and keep an eye on her. Ken hadn’t done anything wrong, but she was just scared, which worried the girls. One day, the girls decided to take Natalie shopping for baby clothes. What they didn’t know was that Ken followed them. He had a bad feeling about how Natalie has been acting lately, so he just listened.
Tootie- Are you really okay Natalie?
Natalie- Yes Tootie, I’m fine.
Jo- You don’t seem fine.
Natalie- I’m just overwhelmed. You know how it is to be overwhelmed and excited at the same time.
Blair- It’s more than that!
Natalie- -Starts crying- I’m scared.
Tootie- Of what honey, what are you scared of?
Natalie- I know he might not be fully “cured” and I’m so scared he’s not. I really screwed up.
Jo- -Hugs Natalie- You didn’t screw up Nat. You’ll make it work, you always do.
Natalie- You think?
Jo- Yeah. And you know we’re always here.
Natalie- Thanks guys.
After the shopping, Natalie went back home. They bought a bunch of baby clothes and some other things for the nursery.
Natalie- Hi.
Ken- Where have you been?
Natalie- I was out shopping with the girls, why?
Ken- You didn’t tell me.
Natalie- I didn’t think I needed to check in.
Ken- Don’t play games with me. You weren’t shopping.
Natalie- What do these bags look like in my hands??
Ken- Don’t get smart with me. You want to leave me. I heard you.
Natalie- What are you talking about?
Ken- I followed you. I heard you tell everyone you’re scared of me. Is that what you like to do, embarrass me?
Natalie- 3 people isn’t everyone and they knew from the beginning! The marks you gave me weren’t exactly invisible!
Ken- So, that’s it. You want to leave?
Natalie- No, I want this to work out. I want you to be the husband you said you’d be. I want you to get a full time job. I can’t work much longer you know.
Ken- -Sighs- Okay. I’m sorry Natalie. But you have to know how this makes me feel.
Natalie- I’m sorry too. -Hugs-
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:D :wave:
JO jr
03-18-2006, 03:03 PM
THANKS FOR THE KEN PIC. WITH WHAT I "KNOW" ABOUT HIM FROM YOUR STORY, HE REALLY LOOKS LIKE A SLIMEBALL, TOO.
WILL BE LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE:)
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
03-20-2006, 05:28 AM
THANKS FOR THE KEN PIC. WITH WHAT I "KNOW" ABOUT HIM FROM YOUR STORY, HE REALLY LOOKS LIKE A SLIMEBALL, TOO.
WILL BE LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE:)
Thanks everyone for reading! Here's more for you! :wave:
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The next scene shows Mrs. Garrett, Jo, Blair, and Tootie sitting in a hospital waiting room. Tootie was pacing back and forth.
Jo- Tootie, would you please sit down?
Tootie- It’s been forever.
Blair- It takes a while you know. Remember when you had Tisha?
Tootie- Yeah, I know. I’m just anxious.
Mrs. Garrett- We all are Tootie.
Jo- You alright, Mrs. G.?
Mrs. Garrett- -Paused- What? Oh yeah I’m fine. Just getting old.
Blair- You’re not old Mrs. Garrett.
Mrs. Garrett- I’m about to become a Gr--Auntie again! Trust me, I’m old. -They all laugh-
Doctor- Okay Natalie, just one more push and you’ll see your baby.
Ken- You can do it!
Natalie- -Out of breath- Okay. -Pushed and screamed-
Doctor- It’s a girl. It’s a beautiful little girl.
Natalie- -Turns to Ken- We have a baby girl.
Ken- I know Nat. -Kissed her forehead- I’ll go tell them.
Natalie- Okay.
Ken walked out to the waiting room and all the girls stood up.
Ken- It’s a girl.
Tootie- -Rushes over to Ken and hugged him as much as she hated to- Congratulations!
Ken- Yeah thanks
Jo- When can we see Nat?
Ken- I don’t know I’ll talk to the doctor.
Mrs. Garrett- And Natalie’s okay?
Ken- Yes she’s fine.
Mrs. Garrett- -Sigh of relief- Thank goodness.
Ken- I’m going to go see how they’re doing. -Leaves-
Blair- Did he seem a little strange to you?
Jo- When doesn’t he seem strange?
Tootie- I know what Blair means. He seemed very…cold.
Ken went back into Natalie’s room where she was sleeping. The nurse was taking her blood pressure.
Nurse- Your baby is in the nursery if you’d like to go into the hall and see her. As soon as Natalie wakes up, you two can hold her.
Ken- Thanks
He walked out to the hall and looked through the glass. The nurses there knew who he was and picked Natalie and Ken’s daughter and held her to the window. He just stared and mumbled.
Ken- A girl.
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Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
03-20-2006, 07:16 AM
Here's another pic. This is just how I picture them. Maybe I can get to the other girls later on :)
JO jr
03-20-2006, 09:16 PM
HE SOUNDS DISAPPOINTED-"KEN, YOU WEINIE!" (JO STYLE)
I THINK NAT SHOULD NAME HER JO jr (HEE HEE) :)
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
03-23-2006, 02:23 AM
HE SOUNDS DISAPPOINTED-"KEN, YOU WEINIE!" (JO STYLE)
I THINK NAT SHOULD NAME HER JO jr (HEE HEE) :)
As always, thank you JO jr for being a very faithful reader! :) Heeeeere's more!
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Two days later, Natalie and Ken took their daughter home. They named her Bridget Joanne Smith. The next few weeks went the same way. People often came by to see the new baby and Natalie. For some reason, Natalie noticed Ken was acting strange. He barely wanted to go near the baby. He was acting like this since she was born, and she couldn’t take it anymore. She had to talk to him about it, so she put the baby down for her nap, and went into the bedroom so they could talk.
Natalie- What’s going on?
Ken- What?
Natalie- You’re acting weird.
Ken- -Getting angry- Weird??
Natalie- Well, yeah. You barely look at your own daughter! Why?
Ken- None of your business.
Natalie- I’m your wife it is my business.
Ken- -Grabs her shoulders- Because she’s a daughter that’s why!
Natalie- You mean you hate her because she’s a girl, you wanted a boy? -Pauses- I can’t believe this. What about all that crap you told me about being a great father?
Ken- That’s when I thought I was going to have a son.
Natalie- Why didn’t I listen, why?
Ken- What?
Natalie- Ken, I want a divorce, as soon as possible.
Natalie left the room and started to grab her things. Ken followed her.
Ken- I don’t think so.
Natalie- I can’t believe I was so stupid. -Continues packing-
Ken- You’re not going anywhere.
Natalie- And you’re gonna stop me huh?
Ken- Yes I am.
Natalie- Ken, I will call the police, now just stop it.
Ken- You wanna play with threats now? Okay.
Ken grabbed her and pushed her up against a wall and put his hand over her mouth.
Ken- You want to try mouthing off?
Natalie- -Shook her head no-
Ken- I thought so.
Natalie- -Bit his hand-
Ken- OW! You little…
He grabbed her before she had a chance to run anywhere and started hitting her. He got a few minutes of punching in and Natalie knew she had to get her and the baby out of there, so she kneed him and while he was on the floor thriving in pain, she quickly got up grabbed Bridget and her car keys and ran out. Got in her car and drove away.
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JO jr
03-23-2006, 08:10 PM
OOOH, THERE'S GONNA BE TROU-BLE! YOUR STORY GETS BETTER & BETTER. I'LL BE WAITING FOR MORE WHEN YOU HAVE THE TIME TO WRITE, JINNYGIRL!:)
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
03-24-2006, 02:26 AM
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Natalie drove over to Jo’s house. With her being an ex cop and all, she felt safe there. She knew all the girls could come over once she got there. Jo and Rick were sitting on the couch watching TV when they heard a knock on the door.
Jo & Rick- You get it.
And another knock.
Jo & Rick- No, you get it!
And another…
Rick- Fine. -Opens door- Hi Nat.
Natalie- Hi Rick. Can we come in?
Rick- Sure! Hon, It’s Natalie.
Jo- -Gets up- Hi Nat, come in.
Natalie- I’m sorry to bug you so late.
Jo- You’re not---what happened!?
Natalie- -Starts crying- I’m so stupid.
Jo- Come here. Rick will watch Bridget upstairs with Jamie, you sit down, I’ll get you a drink.
Natalie- Thanks.
Rick- Let me see that little one. -Picks up Bridget- She’s gorgeous Nat.
Natalie- Thank you.
Rick took Bridget upstairs while Jo got a few cups of coffee.
Jo- Here we go. -Puts cups down- What happened?
Natalie- He just went crazy. When I told him I was leaving, he started punching me.
Jo- Why did he start this up again all of a sudden?
Natalie- Because I had a girl. He wanted a boy.
Jo- Oh Nat.
Natalie- I’m sorry for busting in and laying all of this on you, but I didn’t know where else to go.
Jo- You can stay here as long as you need to.
Natalie- Thank you. -Hug-
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Sorry it's so short but I'm sleeepy. *Yawn* :wave:
JO jr
03-24-2006, 11:44 PM
TELL NAT SHE CAN COME OVER TO MY HOUSE, TOO, AFTER I RETURN FROM MY OLD STOMPING GROUNDS (CHICAGO) THIS WEEKEND! I'VE GOT A BAT BY THE DOOR WITH KEN'S NAME ON IT! :)
Shine
03-25-2006, 10:18 PM
This is a great story, Kelly. :) I can't wait to read what you come up with next.
Shine
04-01-2006, 01:18 AM
Hey Kelly, when are you going to write more of the story? Let's get with it girl.;) :lol: Just kidding. Seriously, I look forward to the next chapter in the story.:)
JO jr
04-04-2006, 12:59 AM
GIRL, WHY'D YOU LEAVE US HANGIN? THERE'S GONNA BE TROU-BLE (HAHA) :)
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-04-2006, 01:25 PM
GIRL, WHY'D YOU LEAVE US HANGIN? THERE'S GONNA BE TROU-BLE (HAHA) :)
Omg guys I'm so sorry! LOL For the past few nights, I've been going to bed before 9:00pm! Verrry unlike me, I'll write some more right now before my brother's tutor comes to the house and I'll write as much as I can before Friday since that's my surgery and I don't know how long it'll be before I post more. Anyway, I'm on it right now!:wave:
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-04-2006, 01:46 PM
:D :wave:
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Jo had called all of the girls to come over. She didn’t tell them why but they came. Natalie was upstairs with Bridget since she started crying. Jo’s doorbell rang and they were all standing there at the door. She let them in and they knew something was very wrong.
Blair- What is it Jo?
Jo- Nat’s here. Ken went after her.
Mrs. Garrett- Oh no.
Tootie- I honestly thought he’d change after the baby came.
Jo- He would’ve…if it was a boy.
Blair- What?
Jo- He wanted a son, not a girl.
Blair- You’ve got to be kidding me.
Jo- No. He beat her up pretty good, she got away and came over here.
Mrs. Garrett- Thank God.
Jo- But now what are we going to do?
Tootie- Hide her.
Mrs. Garrett- What?
Tootie- Next time, he could kill her. She can’t take that chance. I think she should hide as fast as she can!
Blair- It’s not a terrible idea.
-Later when Natalie came down and they discussed the idea with her-
Natalie- No no no no no!
Tootie- What? Why?
Natalie- I’ve already let him ruin my life for the past year, I’m not going to let him run me out of town too!
Tootie- Nat, he could kill you, don’t you understand?
Natalie- If I run away, he wins. I don’t want my daughter to grow up like that.
Jo- So what are you going to do Nat?
Natalie- I don’t know. I just don’t know.
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:)
JO jr
04-05-2006, 12:28 AM
THANKX. I GOT MY FACTS FANFICTION FIX. I THINK YOU'RE ONE OF THE BETTER WRITERS. YOU WRITE JUST LIKE THE GIRLS WOULD ACTUALLY TALK, AND THAT'S IMPORTANT, TO BE BELIEVABLE.
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK, WHEN YOU CAN. WE'LL BE PATIENTLY WAITING.
I WISH YOU A SPEEDY RECOVERY, AND KNOW THAT YOUR FRIENDS CARE AND ARE THINKING ABOUT YOU, JINNYGIRL (I'M INCLUDING MYSELF IN THAT, ALTHOUGH WE'VE NEVER TECHNICALLY "MET"). YOU AND YOUR FAMILY ARE IN MY PRAYERS. LOVE YA, JINNYGIRL, AND TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF, PLEASE!
:)
I think the girls should have Natalie guarded by the police.
JO jr
04-05-2006, 12:06 PM
I think the girls should have Natalie guarded by the police.
EITHER BY INSPECTORS EXTEAD & RAMIREZ, OR REMEMBER THAT IN THE FACTS REUNION, JO IS IN THE FORCE. THIS COULD TIE IN WITH HER WANTING TO BECOME A POLICE OFFICER. OOPS. SORRY, GOT CARRIED AWAY, JINYGIRL. CAN'T WAIT TO SE WHAT YOU PRINT NEXT.:wave:
Shine
04-05-2006, 12:44 PM
Keep up the great work, Kelly. :)
Eminem4lyfe1987
04-08-2006, 09:23 PM
Hey all....this is Kelly's friend Angela. I'm using my sisters sn real quick because mine doesn't seem to want to let me sign in. Like ALWAYS. I just wanted to let everyone know, kelly will be back to working on this ASAP. Right now, she just had surgery on her foot and her computer crashed at the same time. So sit tight, and she'll return to write on this REALLY amazing fic as soon as she can. Which by the way Kelly is really really well done I can't wait to read more. :-D
JO jr
04-10-2006, 02:51 AM
SO, IS THAT WHY KELLY NEEDED FOOT SURG, SHE KICKED HER COMPUTER? HAHA
I'M SO GLAD SHE'S DOING WELL, AND THANKU ANGELA FOR GIVING US AN UPDATE. I APPRECIATE IT! CAN YOU PLEASE LET HER KNOW JO jr SAID "HI, I CAN'T WAIT FOR HER FANFICTION, AND MORE IMPORTANTLY, I'M RELIEVED THAT HER SURG WENT WELL, AND WISH HER A SPEEDY RECOVERY-PLEASE? OH, YEAH, AND ONE MORE THING:
HEY KELLYGIRL, 29 DAYS & COUNTING!!!!:)"
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-11-2006, 06:25 PM
OMG Thank you everyone! Thanks Angie for giving them the message, I know how my FOL readers don't like to sit tight haha Well we got a new computer but unfortunately, I'm still supposed to be in bed so I'll be sneaking on here. I don't know when I'll be able to write more, hopefully it will be soon! Thanks everyone!:wave:
JO jr
04-12-2006, 03:11 AM
GREAT TO HEAR YOU'RE BACK, JINNYGIRL! GO AHEAD AND SNEAK BACK HERE, WE WON'T TELL. BUT DON'T OVER DO IT. ANY SURGERY, NO MATTER HOW MINOR YOU MAY THINK IT IS IS STILL SURGERY NONETHELESS, AND CAN TAKE A LOT OUT OF YOU. SO STILL GET YOUR NEEDED REST, TOO, OK? SORRY, GUESS MY OLD HOSPITAL DAYS ARE STILL WITH ME.
WE'LL ALL BE HERE WHEN YOU'RE READY TO GIVE US MORE. CONTINUE TO TAKE CARE, JINNYGIRL!:)
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-17-2006, 06:28 PM
Sorry I've let this go for so long guys! I've been absolutely exhausted. I will try to get some done on this either today or tomorrow and if I don't, I give you all permission to beat me up till I do! :lol: :wave:
Shine
04-18-2006, 04:53 PM
Sorry I've let this go for so long guys! I've been absolutely exhausted. I will try to get some done on this either today or tomorrow and if I don't, I give you all permission to beat me up till I do! :lol: :wave:
Oh, don't worry about the story, Kelly. Just work on recovering from your operation. We will still be here when you get back.:)
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-20-2006, 12:15 AM
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Natalie stayed at Jo and Rick’s house for a couple of days. Natalie felt bad about it. Ken always came around and screamed outside the house for Natalie. As soon as Jo called the cops, he’d disappear and nothing would be done.
Natalie- I’ve got to get out of here.
Jo- Where are you going to go? He’s looking everywhere for you. Why don’t you just stay here?
Natalie- Because he keeps coming here. I can’t keep doing that to your family, especially you. It’s not fair.
Jo- -Sighs- Where are you going to go?
Natalie- Home.
Jo- What??
Natalie- Calm down. I think because he keeps coming here, he left. Obviously the cops have a warrant out for him and if they haven’t caught him, he’s not home. I need to get the baby’s things anyway.
Jo- You’re as stubborn as a mule you know that?
Natalie- I picked it up growing up around this house. I’ll be fine.
Jo- At least let me go with you.
Natalie- No. Jo, I can’t keep living my life in fear.
Natalie picked up Bridget and put her in her car seat. After she put her in, she hugged Jo.
Natalie- I’ll be fine.
Jo- Okay well call me.
Natalie- Ugh, I will. Bye.
Jo- Bye.
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Shine
04-20-2006, 11:43 AM
Keep up the great work, Kelly.:)
JO jr
04-20-2006, 09:18 PM
AHHH. I'M GLAD YOU WERE ABLE TO FINALLY WRITE SOMETHING. I'VE BEEN WAITING! I AM GLAD YOU ARE FEELING BETTER TO START WRITING AGAIN, TOO.:)
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-20-2006, 11:17 PM
AHHH. I'M GLAD YOU WERE ABLE TO FINALLY WRITE SOMETHING. I'VE BEEN WAITING! I AM GLAD YOU ARE FEELING BETTER TO START WRITING AGAIN, TOO.:)
Awwwww thanks guys!!! You guys are actually caring more than my own FAMILY! lol I want you all to know how much I appreciate the thoughts :) Just for that, heeeeere's more! :)
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Natalie got home and walked into the house with Bridget in her arms. She knew she couldn’t grab things with Bridget so she put her down in the play pen in the living room. She turned on the baby monitor in the living room so she could hear if anything was wrong. While she was in Bridget’s room packing up some clothes, the front door crept open and someone snuck in. Natalie didn’t hear anything. The man walked over to the play pen and picked up the baby, and left the house. After Natalie put all of Bridget’s things into a travel bag, she went out to the living room to check on her. She looked around and saw she was gone. She started sweating and breathing fast. How could he have stolen her baby? She quickly called the police and Jo. Jo of course got there first.
Jo- Natalie what’s wrong?
Natalie- He took her. He took my baby!!!
Jo- What? Oh my god, what happened?
Natalie- The place was empty and I went into the back to pack Bridget’s things. I couldn’t hold her the whole time so I put her in the play pen. I put the baby monitor there. How could I not hear him? -She walked over to the baby monitor in the room she was in- It’s not plugged in. -Laughs at herself then cries- It’s not plugged in Jo. -Throws it at the wall-
Jo- Nat..
Natalie- What am I going to do?
Jo- -Hears a noise and looks out the window- The cops are here.
Natalie- What a great help they’re being! -Rolls eyes-
As she is explaining everything to the cops, Blair and Tootie drive up and get out of the car to see what’s going on.
Tootie- What happened?
Jo- Ken came home and kidnapped the baby. We have no idea where she is.
Tootie- Oh my god!
Blair- What was she doing here?
Jo- She wanted to come pack some things for the baby--
Blair- And you let her go?
Jo- Excuse me?
Blair- You know how crazy he is and you let her go? What kind of cop are you?
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JO jr
04-21-2006, 02:37 AM
OOOOH, THERE'S GONNA BE TROU-BLE!:) I HOPE JO DOESN'T REACH FOR HER GUN!:)
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-22-2006, 03:48 AM
OOOOH, THERE'S GONNA BE TROU-BLE!:) I HOPE JO DOESN'T REACH FOR HER GUN!:)
:lol:
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Tootie- What happened?
Jo- Ken came home and kidnapped the baby. We have no idea where she is.
Tootie- Oh my god!
Blair- What was she doing here?
Jo- She wanted to come pack some things for the baby--
Blair- And you let her go?
Jo- Excuse me?
Blair- You know how crazy he is and you let her go? What kind of cop are you?
Jo- -Getting angry- Just hold on a second. I told her not to leave, she insisted!
Blair- You’re supposed to stop her!
Tootie- Enough!
Natalie- What’s going on?
Tootie- They’re at it, what else is new?
Blair- She should have been protecting you and your daughter!
Jo- -Made her usual ‘I wanna kill her’ face-
Natalie- Blair, Jo tried to talk me out of coming here. I wouldn’t listen…and I’m so sorry for that Jo.
Jo- -Smiles-
Blair- -Made a face- I’m apologize for those remarks Jo.
Jo- Was it really that hard to say?
Blair- Ugh, I have a terrible taste in my mouth.
Natalie- Okay, now that you two are back to normal, what are we going to do?
Jo- What did the cops say?
Natalie- They’re going to put taps on the phone if he calls for a ransom or what ever he wants.
Tootie- We’ll get her back Nat. Don’t worry.
Natalie- I’m very worried Tootie. -Runs into the house- -They follow her-
Natalie- How could I not have seen this coming?
Jo- None of us did.
Blair- Well…
Jo- -Glares-
Blair- -Stops-
Natalie- Wait, what’s this? -Picks up a piece of paper-
Jo- What’s that?
Natalie- It fell on the floor. It’s a folded up menu for a diner down the street.
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JO jr
04-22-2006, 05:29 PM
OOOH, I WANT MORE! I'M INTRIGUED! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK, JINNYGIRL, AND I HOPE YOUR RECOVERY IS GOING WELL, TOO!:)
Shine
04-22-2006, 11:28 PM
Great job, Kelly. :) I hope that you are feeling better.:)
Eminem4lyfe1987
04-23-2006, 03:38 PM
Uh ohhhhh. I sense tension among the girls. But if I know them like I know I do, it will all work out! Besides...Kelly is the writer. ;) Oh and to DAX I have no idea what photoshop editing thingy u used, but ur AVATAR ROCKS!!! It doesn't even look like it was cropped it looks like it was taken that way..........AWESOME!
JO jr
04-28-2006, 01:35 PM
HEYJINNYGIRL! WHERE'S THE REST OF THE STORY? I RAN OUT OF POPCORN & PEPSI DAYS AGO WAITING FOR IT. PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! "I'M YOUR #1 FAN" (MISERY) HAHA:)
CAN YOU HEAR MY 'CRY FOR HELP'? PLEASE DON'T IGNORE IT:(
Shine
04-29-2006, 03:13 PM
Uh ohhhhh. I sense tension among the girls. But if I know them like I know I do, it will all work out! Besides...Kelly is the writer. ;) Oh and to DAX I have no idea what photoshop editing thingy u used, but ur AVATAR ROCKS!!! It doesn't even look like it was cropped it looks like it was taken that way..........AWESOME!
Thanks. :) I had a friend resize the picture for me.
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
05-02-2006, 11:58 PM
HEYJINNYGIRL! WHERE'S THE REST OF THE STORY? I RAN OUT OF POPCORN & PEPSI DAYS AGO WAITING FOR IT. PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! "I'M YOUR #1 FAN" (MISERY) HAHA:)
CAN YOU HEAR MY 'CRY FOR HELP'? PLEASE DON'T IGNORE IT:(
I'm here! lol I've been so exhausted lately but it's no excuse. Heeere's more!! :D
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Natalie- Wait, what’s this? -Picks up a piece of paper-
Jo- What’s that?
Natalie- It fell on the floor. It’s a folded up menu for a diner down the street.
Blair- Let’s go!
They drove down to the diner and saw the car outside.
Natalie- I’m going in there. Blair, call the cops. Get them down here as soon as possible.
Tootie- You can’t go in there! What if he’s armed?
Natalie- He has my daughter. I don’t care.
Before anyone else could talk her out of going in, she was already there. She saw him at the counter holding Bridget trying to feed her solid food.
Natalie- What are you doing??
Ken- Get away Natalie.
Natalie- Please just give her back.
Ken- She’s my daughter too. Now you know how it feels to have your spouse run off with her.
Natalie- You don’t even know what you’re doing with her.
Ken- She won’t eat.
Natalie- She can’t eat solid food, she’s a month old! You have to give her formula.
Ken- Well give it to me.
Natalie- I’ll feed her myself.
Ken- I have as much right to be with her as you do.
Natalie- You kidnapped her.
Ken- How can you kidnap your own kid?
Natalie- Please just give her back.
Ken- Fine, I’ll give her back.
Natalie- -Sigh of relief-
Ken- But…only if we get back together.
Natalie- What?
Ken- Do you want her back?
Natalie- Yes!
Ken- Then you have to take me back too.
Cops burst through the door and held their guns up.
Cop 1- Freeze! Put the baby gently down and put your hands in the air!
Ken- Damn you Natalie.
Cop 2- Now!
Ken- -Put the baby down on the counter and put his hands up-
Cop 1- -Cuffs him- You have the right to remain silent.
Natalie- -Grabs Bridget- Oh my sweetheart! -Kisses her-
Ken- I’m going to get you Natalie. I’m going to get you!
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Shine
05-03-2006, 11:04 AM
I can't wait to see what happens next.:)
I hope you have gotten some rest, Kelly. :) :wave:
JO jr
05-03-2006, 03:24 PM
I can't wait to see what happens next.:)
I hope you have gotten some rest, Kelly. :) :wave:
DITTO. 6 MORE DAYS, YOU GUYS! A DOUBLE DOSE OF OUR FACTS GIRLS-THE DVD & ONE THE TODAY SHOW. YIPEE!!!!:happyface
JO jr
06-07-2006, 04:21 AM
I'M WAITIING....:)
Shine
06-07-2006, 11:47 AM
I'M WAITIING....:)
Me too. :D
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
06-07-2006, 05:50 PM
I know I'm so sorry! As some of you know, I haven't been feeling too well. I will try to get online tonight and write some more for yas! :wave:
JO jr
06-07-2006, 09:44 PM
OH, KELL, I'M SORRY TO HEAR YOU'RE NOT FEELING WELL AGAIN!
WELL, WRITE MORE WHEN YOU FEEL UP TO IT. DON'T PUSH YOURSELF OUT TO WRITE MORE UNTIL YOU ARE OK, OK?
YOU KNOW DAX & I, AND YOUR OTHER FRIENDS WILL BE HERE WHEN YOU GET BACK:)
PS: HOPE YOU KNOW THAT TVLAND HAS THE TOP 10 SPIN-OFF'S TONIGHT. I LIVE IN THE CENTRAL TIME ZONE, SO I'LL BE ABLE TO SEE IT IN ABOUT 15 MIN'S. YIPEE! WONDER WHERE FACTS WILL PLACE?
Yooch
06-07-2006, 10:14 PM
Continuing to keep you in my thoughts, Kelly. :)
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
06-26-2006, 02:36 AM
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Cop 1- Freeze! Put the baby gently down and put your hands in the air!
Ken- Damn you Natalie.
Cop 2- Now!
Ken- -Put the baby down on the counter and put his hands up-
Cop 1- -Cuffs him- You have the right to remain silent.
Natalie- -Grabs Bridget- Oh my sweetheart! -Kisses her-
Ken- I’m going to get you Natalie. I’m going to get you!
Natalie and Bridget went home with Jo and Ken was taken away by the cops. Three days later, Ken went in front of the judge. Natalie went to the hearing with Jo and Tootie while Blair watched Bridget.
Judge- Ken Smith, I hearby sentence you to 6 months. Sentence will be suspended if you leave the state and stay away from your wife and daughter until the custody is finalized. Do you understand the terms?
Ken- Yes.
Natalie- He doesn't even go to jail?
Jo- No he doesn't. But he has to stay away from you.
Natalie- Yeah he'll listen to that. *Rolls eyes*
Blair, Jo, Natalie, and Tootie took the kids to the park. Bridget of course wasn't old enough to run around and play with the rest of the kids so she slept in the stroller by Natalie. They sat on a bench talking when Natalie spotted Ken behind a tree.
Natalie- He's here.
Tootie- Who?
Natalie- The President. *Rolls eyes* Ken!!
Blair- Let's get out of here. When we get in the car, we'll call the cops.
Blair got right on the phone with the police. They said they'd look around for him and call her when they found Ken.
Natalie- I can't trust anything! He's supposed to be out of the state and he's still here? He can't get away with that!
Blair- No, he will be arrested. I promise.
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It's short I know but I will be posting on this more often! Till July 7th at least. Then I get my second foot done, lol. More bed, yay! :rolleyes: :p
Shine
06-26-2006, 06:35 PM
Great job as always, Kelly. :)
JO jr
06-28-2006, 02:21 PM
OHHH. WHERE'S JO WITH HER GUN? A SECRET NIGHT MISSION ALONE, OR WITH HER LIFE-LONG BUDS
NAIL THAT DUNDERHEAD!:(
NAIL THAT WEINIE!
KELL-I'LL BE THINKING OF YOU & WISH YOU A SPEEDY RECOVERY. ALSO, HOPE IT'S AS PAINLESS AS POSSIBLE. LUV YA GIRL:)
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
07-24-2006, 12:36 PM
Sorry guys, I haven't had time to write. This foot hurt worse than the other and I am on A LOT of pain meds and am sleeping all the time, so...lol. I will TRY to post more tonight. :) :wave:
DOPEY85xxx
07-25-2006, 07:01 PM
You need to be paid for that awesome writing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
09-07-2006, 11:46 PM
I will be posting more soon. I was gone for a little while but I'm back! :D
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
09-14-2006, 07:00 AM
I will be posting more soon. I was gone for a little while but I'm back! :D
I'm so sorry everyone! As some know, I'm in the process of moving. I have to go for a test on Sunday. I should be able to post more after that. It should be no problem hooking this computer up in the new house. Thank you for being so patient! :wave:
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
11-08-2006, 12:25 AM
Okay from now on, I give JO jr and Mike permission to yell at me if I ever forget this fan fic again lol. I'm hoping to keep up with this, especially when I get my new laptop ;) So, here's more!:D
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They heard a knock at the door. Natalie opened it and found two patrol cops standing at the door.
Cop 1- Mrs. Smith?
Natalie- -Cringes at the sound of her own name- Yes?
Cop 1- We’re from the Peekskill Police Department. May we come in?
Natalie- Sure.
Cop 2- Well we weren’t able to find Ken.
Natalie- Well he was just at the park, so he must be around!
Cop 2- Maybe it would help if we had a description.
Jo- Wait a minute, you were searching for a man and you didn’t know what he looked like? No wonder you didn’t find him!
Cop 1- What my partner meant is we need a more detailed description.
Cop 2- Yeah!
Jo- *Rolls eyes*
So Natalie gave them a better description and the cops left.
Natalie- I can’t keep doing this.
Tootie- This will all be taken care of soon Nat you’ll see.
Natalie- I want to go on with my life!
Blair- You will.
Natalie- What if he comes to my house?
Tootie- If you hear the slightest noise, call the police.
Jo- Or you can call one of us.
Tootie- We’re here for you.
Natalie- Thanks guys.
That night, Natalie and Bridget were fast asleep. Natalie brought Bridget’s bassinet in her room so she’d be close. Natalie heard a noise and rushed out to see what it was. She opened the door and saw a cat outside. She laughed at herself and locked the door. When she walked back into her room, Ken was there, holding Bridget.
Natalie- -Quietly- Ken! What are you doing here?
Ken- I came to see my daughter. Is that a problem?
Natalie- Yes it is, seeing how you aren’t even supposed to be in the state!
Ken- You’re going to wake her up.
Natalie- Put her down.
Ken- We need to talk.
Natalie- I’ll be able to talk as soon as you put her back in her crib.
Ken- Say please.
Natalie- -Pause- Please.
Ken- Pretty please.
Natalie- Pretty please Ken, put her down.
Ken grinned and put Bridget back down. Natalie walked over to the crib but Ken walked in front of it.
Ken- That’s far enough.
Natalie- I’m just making sure she’s okay.
Ken- She’s fine. Now, let’s talk.
Natalie- I’m not changing my mind about the divorce.
Ken- I didn’t think you would.
Natalie- Then what do you want?
Ken pulled out a gun. He was smirking as he was holding it. This terrified Natalie.
Natalie- Ken, what are you doing?
Ken- Do you want to die?
Natalie- No!
Ken- Well then, you have a choice to make. I can shoot you, you can shoot me, or we can live together as a family again. Because I will not handle a divorce.
Natalie- Don’t do this please.
Ken- I have to. I don’t want to loose you.
Natalie- Killing me won’t fix that.
Ken- Then, I guess you’ll have to shoot me.
Natalie- I’m not going to be your punching bag again. I won’t do it!
Ken- You have a decision to make. -He handed Natalie the gun- What are you going to do?
Natalie- -Stared at the gun, stunned by what he’s saying-
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:D :wave:
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
11-09-2006, 02:43 PM
Anyone? :(
Shine
11-09-2006, 05:53 PM
Keep up the good work, Kelly. :)
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
11-10-2006, 12:00 PM
Keep up the good work, Kelly. :)
Thanks Mike! Where's JO jr.?
JO jr
11-11-2006, 06:59 PM
HERE I AM! :D
I JUST ARRIVED BACK IN CHI-TOWN FROM SUN, AND WILL BE LEAVING AGAIN IN A FEW HOURS. I SURE DO MISS YOU GUYS & MY FAV I-NET SITE!
LAST WEEK I WAS GOING TO POST A "YOO-HOO! ANYONE HERE ANYMORE?"
BUT I SEE THAT YOU ARE KELL. AND I CAN'T YELL AT YOU. MAYBE I'D GIVE YOU A FRIENDLY NUDGE, BUT NO YELLING :)
YOU KNOW, I DON'T KNOW IF YOU'VE SEEN THE MOVIE, "FRIEND GREEN TOMATOES AT THE WHISTLE STOP CAFE", BUT THAT SCENE WITH KEN ,NAT & THE BABY REMINDED ME OF IT. (INCIDENTLY, THIS IS ONE OF MY TOP THREE FAVORITE MOVIES OF ALL TIME!)
I'LL BE WAITING FOR MORE KELL. GLAD TO SEE ONE OF MY FAVORITE AUTHORS HAS GOTTEN RID OF HER WRITER'S BLOCK, OR AMNESIA ;)
NOT SURE WHEN I'LL BE ABLE TO GET TO A COMPUTER NEXT, BUT KNOW THAT I'M THINKING OF YOU KELL, AND YOU DAX (THING 1 AND THING 2-HEE HEE). I THINK THAT'S MY NEW NICKNAME FOR YOU GUYS. KELL'S THING 1, AND DAX, YOU'RE THING 2. MY 2 FAVORITE PEOPLE ON HERE. NO KIDDIN :blush:
Gilda
11-13-2006, 08:16 AM
Ohhh, a major cliff hanger! How did I miss this fic?
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
12-06-2006, 01:54 PM
Thanks everyone!! Here's more I wrote while I couldn't get onto Sitcoms Online. Enjoy!
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Natalie couldn't believe the situation she was in. Her soon to be ex husband was given her a choice, one of them dies or they get back together. She didn't know what to do. She knew if they got back together, the abuse would start all over again. She had to buy some time so she could think about what she wanted to do.
Natalie- Can I think about it? Let's face it, it's a big decision.
Ken- Oh I bet it is. But no I can't. You have to decide.
Natalie- Please don't do this.
Ken- I don't have a choice. What's your decision.
Natalie- *Panicing to herself* {What do I do now? I have to buy time to ask the girls} Okay.
Ken- Okay what?
Natalie- We'll give this relationship one last try.
Ken- *Smiles* I knew you'd say that.
Natalie- But if you hit me again or even look at Bridget funny, I mean it, it's over!
Ken- I promise, I won't hurt you again. Come here *Moves closer*
Natalie- *Walks toward him* I..love you.
Ken- I love you too. *They kiss*
The next morning, Natalie packed the diaper bag for Bridget and got her car keys. Ken heard her moving around and went to see where she was going.
Ken- What's going on?
Natalie- Calm down honey, I'm just going to the park. It's the day of the week that all the kids play together and us moms get to talk.
Ken- You will be back though, right?
Natalie- Of course. Do you trust me? *Smiles*
Ken- Absolutely. *Kiss*
Natalie- I'll be back. Bye.
Ken- Bye.
At the park, Mrs. G, Jo, Blair, and Tootie met up with Natalie. She had called them the night before and told them to meet her there.
Jo- So what's going on? Our day to meet at the park isn't until Wednesday.
Natalie- But Ken doesn't know that.
Tootie- Wait a minute, how does he know you're at the park.
Natalie- Well...
Blair- Oh Nat you didn't!
Natalie- Calm down, it's just an act.
Mrs. Garrett- What happened?
Natalie- Last night he snuck into my house and said either we get back together or one of us dies! He had a gun and everything. So I had to buy time.
Jo- So what's the plan?
Natalie- Well since he's threatening his life, and mine for that matter, can't we do something? I mean, he's at my house so the cops can know where he is now.
Tootie- Oh please come and stay with me Natalie.
Natalie- He knows where you live Tootie. I can't do that to you.
Jo- Wait, I have a plan.
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Shine
12-06-2006, 05:17 PM
Great as always, Kelly. :)
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
12-06-2006, 07:32 PM
Great as always, Kelly. :)
Thank you. :)
JO jr
12-08-2006, 03:11 AM
GOOD OLD JO. I KNEW SHE'D HAVE A PLAN. IT'S CALLED OPERATION SMITH & WESSON:lol:
ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT KELL...PASS THEpopcorn: MIKE:D
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
12-15-2006, 02:27 AM
Here's more. I can't sleep so here ya go. :)
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Natalie- Last night he snuck into my house and said either we get back together or one of us dies! He had a gun and everything. So I had to buy time.
Jo- So what's the plan?
Natalie- Well since he's threatening his life, and mine for that matter, can't we do something? I mean, he's at my house so the cops can know where he is now.
Tootie- Oh please come and stay with me Natalie.
Natalie- He knows where you live Tootie. I can't do that to you.
Jo- Wait, I have a plan.
That night, Natalie Ken and Bridget were all home together. Bridget was sleeping while Natalie and Ken were eating dinner.
Ken- That was great.
Natalie- Thanks it's a family recipe.
Ken- What's for desert?
Natalie- Oh, um, there isn't any.
Ken- What?? You know I always need desert after dinner.
Natalie- Well I made a pie but it burned in the oven.
Ken- Just great!
He slammed up from the table and sat on the couch and watched TV.
Ken- Can I have a beer?
Natalie- There isn't anymore.
Ken- Why not?!
Natalie- Well you drank the last one with dinner. I forgot to get some more at the store.
Ken- Can't you do anything right?
Natalie- Apparently not.
Ken- Well make yourself useful and do the dishes or something.
Natalie- No.
Ken- NO?
Natalie- I can't. I have to feed Bridget.
Ken- Dishes come before her.
Natalie- No.
Ken- *Stands up* I said do the dishes now.
Natalie- And I said I have to feed the baby.
Ken- Who cares about the baby?
Natalie- I do.
Ken got red and mad. He walked over to the sink and picked up a knife.
Ken- Get over there and do the dishes now.
Natalie- I'll be back do to them. *Starts to walk away*
Ken grabbed her shirt and pulled her back. He raised the knife when cops came busting through the door.
Cop 1- FREEZE!
Ken- I'm just having dinner with my wife. You have no right to bust in my house.
Jo- Think again Ken.
Ken- You. How'd I know you'd be involved somehow.
Jo- Get him out of here.
Natalie heard Bridget start crying so he went in her room. She picked up Bridget and hugged her. Jo stood in the doorway of the nursery.
Natalie- *Rocking her back and forth* We're free. We're going to be just fine.
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:)
JO jr
12-15-2006, 02:41 AM
OH, I LOVE YOUR FACTS FANFIC:D GREAT JOB, KELL!
I'M SORRY, BUT I ALWAYS LOVE THE FACTS ONES THE BEST, CUZ...IT'S MY FAV SHOW.
SO, I TRY TO KEEP UP WITH THE DIVISION, BUT I GET SO MUCH MORE INTO THE FACTS ONES. I HOPE YOU'LL CONTINUE TO WRITE. I'VE BEEN THINKING ABOUT WRITING ONE, BUT I DON'T KNOW. YOU KNOW HOW I RAMBLE. BESIDES, KNOWING ME, I'D WANT IT JUST PERFECT, LIKE A GOOD OL FASHIONED FACTS EP. I THINK I'D GO NUTS IN THE PROCESS. TOO, IF I LIKED IT, BUT PEOPLE THOUGHT IT WAS LAME...LIKE FACTS BRINGING IN PIPPA:lol: (OTHER FANS' THOUGHTS, NOT MINE), I'D THINK I SHOULDA LEFT WELL ENOUGH ALONE.
HEY, OFF THE SUBJECT (AS ALWAYS-SEE WHAT I MEAN? A.D.H.D. MAN;))
BUT DID YOU HAPPEN TO SEE THE POST ON THE CHIT CHAT BOARD FROM THE NEWBIE, TREEGIRL? SHE'S FROM AUSTRALIA AND ASKED IF ANYONE HAD ANY QUESTIONS. SO I WROTE YEAH, DO YOU MISS PIPPA:lol:
I SLAY ME. I DON'T KNOW IF SHE OR IF ANYONE ELSE WOULD GET THAT EXCEPT A FACTS FAN. I THOUGHT IT WAS FUNNY MYSELF. I'M LIKE NAT IN THAT WAY, I LAUGH AT MY OWN STUFF. ALL THE TIME. MY ROOMMATES ARE LIKE, "WHAT ARE YOU LAUGHING AT?", AND I TELL THEM WHAT I JUST WROTE, AND THEY LAUGH AND, LIKE ME, THINK I'M A NUTCASE TOO. BUT I SURE HAVE FUN!!!!:D
ANYWAYS...POST MORE FACTS FANFIC WHEN YOU CAN, OK? I LOVE TO READ YOURS KELL. TAKE CARE JINNYGIRL. AND I HOPE YOU'RE ABLE TO GET SOME SLEEP, TOO:sleep:
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
12-15-2006, 03:32 AM
OH, I LOVE YOUR FACTS FANFIC:D GREAT JOB, KELL!
I'M SORRY, BUT I ALWAYS LOVE THE FACTS ONES THE BEST, CUZ...IT'S MY FAV SHOW.
SO, I TRY TO KEEP UP WITH THE DIVISION, BUT I GET SO MUCH MORE INTO THE FACTS ONES. I HOPE YOU'LL CONTINUE TO WRITE. I'VE BEEN THINKING ABOUT WRITING ONE, BUT I DON'T KNOW. YOU KNOW HOW I RAMBLE. BESIDES, KNOWING ME, I'D WANT IT JUST PERFECT, LIKE A GOOD OL FASHIONED FACTS EP. I THINK I'D GO NUTS IN THE PROCESS. TOO, IF I LIKED IT, BUT PEOPLE THOUGHT IT WAS LAME...LIKE FACTS BRINGING IN PIPPA:lol: (OTHER FANS' THOUGHTS, NOT MINE), I'D THINK I SHOULDA LEFT WELL ENOUGH ALONE.
HEY, OFF THE SUBJECT (AS ALWAYS-SEE WHAT I MEAN? A.D.H.D. MAN;))
BUT DID YOU HAPPEN TO SEE THE POST ON THE CHIT CHAT BOARD FROM THE NEWBIE, TREEGIRL? SHE'S FROM AUSTRALIA AND ASKED IF ANYONE HAD ANY QUESTIONS. SO I WROTE YEAH, DO YOU MISS PIPPA:lol:
I SLAY ME. I DON'T KNOW IF SHE OR IF ANYONE ELSE WOULD GET THAT EXCEPT A FACTS FAN. I THOUGHT IT WAS FUNNY MYSELF. I'M LIKE NAT IN THAT WAY, I LAUGH AT MY OWN STUFF. ALL THE TIME. MY ROOMMATES ARE LIKE, "WHAT ARE YOU LAUGHING AT?", AND I TELL THEM WHAT I JUST WROTE, AND THEY LAUGH AND, LIKE ME, THINK I'M A NUTCASE TOO. BUT I SURE HAVE FUN!!!!:D
ANYWAYS...POST MORE FACTS FANFIC WHEN YOU CAN, OK? I LOVE TO READ YOURS KELL. TAKE CARE JINNYGIRL. AND I HOPE YOU'RE ABLE TO GET SOME SLEEP, TOO:sleep:
LOL Thanks JO! Unfortunately I'm having a lot of trouble sleeping tonight. Most night, I take my pain pill and it puts me to sleep. Now it's taking my pain away but not making me sleepy. :mad:
So I'm just sitting here watching TV and I really felt like writing. I'm glad I've been in the mood lately. It's so great having a laptop because usually if I was tired or sick, I couldn't bring the computer into my room. Now if I feel sick (since I've been in bed for 2 days straight) I can do whatever I want on the computer. :D
:lol: You probably confused the heck out of Treegirl lol. I'll have to go look at that post when I'm done writing this.
I think it would be GREAT if you were to write a fan fic. And hey, if you ever need any help, I'm here.---Omg my god! I just had another one of my brilliant ideas! ( ;) ) That is the one and only Blair line I will ever use lol. Maybe we can write one together! Like a role playing one. We will definitely discuss that lol.
Thanks for reading. I have one last post before this fan fic is over. :( So I will make it a good last one. I will probably post it tomorrow. Since I ended two fan fics, I should have time for more so maybe I will do another "FOL" one. I'm not sure, but thanks again JO!:wave:
JO jr
12-15-2006, 03:57 AM
LOL Thanks JO! Unfortunately I'm having a lot of trouble sleeping tonight. Most night, I take my pain pill and it puts me to sleep. Now it's taking my pain away but not making me sleepy. :mad:
So I'm just sitting here watching TV and I really felt like writing. I'm glad I've been in the mood lately. It's so great having a laptop because usually if I was tired or sick, I couldn't bring the computer into my room. Now if I feel sick (since I've been in bed for 2 days straight) I can do whatever I want on the computer. :D
:lol: You probably confused the heck out of Treegirl lol. I'll have to go look at that post when I'm done writing this.
I think it would be GREAT if you were to write a fan fic. And hey, if you ever need any help, I'm here.---Omg my god! I just had another one of my brilliant ideas! ( ;) ) That is the one and only Blair line I will ever use lol. Maybe we can write one together! Like a role playing one. We will definitely discuss that lol.
Thanks for reading. I have one last post before this fan fic is over. :( So I will make it a good last one. I will probably post it tomorrow. Since I ended two fan fics, I should have time for more so maybe I will do another "FOL" one. I'm not sure, but thanks again JO!:wave:
KELL-YOU ARE BRILLIANT!:talk: I WOULD LOVE TO BE ABLE TO DO A FANFIC WITH YOU! JUST TELL ME HOW WE'D BE ABLE TO DO IT, AND I'M THERE, BABE!:D
I AM SORRY YOU'RE IN A LOT OF PAIN, KELL. IT'S BAD ENOUGH WHEN YOU'RE DEPRIVED OF SLEEP, BUT IN PAIN AND NO SLEEP:( I UNDERSTAND.
I WENT THRU GALLBLADDER SURG ABOUT 2 YEARS AGO. SUPPOSED TO BE SO ROUTINE. HA! I WAS IN CONSTANT PAIN FROM THE TIME I WOKE UP IN THE HOSPITAL BED. THEY KEPT ME THERE OVERNIGHT, AND DISCHARGED ME, BUT I NEEDED HELP WALKING TO THE BATHROOM WHILE I WAS THERE (THANK GOODNESS SOME FRIENDS WERE THERE)
I WAS BASICALLY IN BED FOR OVER 2 MONTHS! I COULDN'T WALK UPRIGHT, AND I WON'T EVEN GO INTO DISCUSSION ABOUT THE BATHROOM! I WAS IN CONSTANT STOMACH PAIN. I COULDN'T DO OR ENJOY ANYTHING. I COULD NEVER GET INTO A COMFORABLE POSITION TO WATCH TV OR SLEEP (HA-WHAT WAS THAT?) MY WHOLE STOMACH ACHED FROM SIDE TO SIDE! I'M USUALLY PRETTY ACTIVE, BUT WHEN MY SISTER SAW ME, SHE TOOK ME TO THE SURGEONS OFFICE, AND THEY FINALLY DID SOME TESTS. I KEPT TELLING HIM AND MY REGULAR DOCTOR THAT I WAS IN CONSTANT PAIN BEFORE THIS, AND THEY SAID I HAD SURGERY, AND ALTHOUGH MINOR, IT IS STILL SURGERY, SO EVEN THOUGH THERE WOULD BE SOME PAIN, IT WOULD BE ALRIGHT. MY SISTER WAS SO UPSET BECAUSE I COULD BARELY MOVE. I SWEAR, I THOUGHT SOMETHING WAS LEFT INSIDE SOMEHOW, ALTHOUGH IT AS LASER SURGERY. I WANTED TO DIE, I WAS N SO MUCH PAIN! I COULDN'T MOVE, SLEEP, EAT-NOTHING. I WAS THINKING, HOW IS THIS NORMAL? I WAS SUPPOSED TO GO BACK TO WORK 2 DAYS AFTER THE SURGERY.
WELL...AFTER THEY DID TESTS...TURNED OUT A BLOOD CLOT HAD FORMED ON THE LINING OF MY LIVER. THEN THE SURGEON GETS ALL WORRIED AND SAYS, YOU HAVE TO HAVE COMPLETE BEDREST. DO NOT DO A-N-Y-T-H-I-N-G!! BECAUSE IT COULD TRAVEL OR RUPTURE AND I COULD DIE! WHAT!?! I WAS SO :mad: HERE HE WAS TELLING ME BEFORE TO TRY TO DO NORMAL DAILY ROUTINE STUFF, ALTHOUGH I WAS NEVER GIVEN A CLEARANCE TO GO BACK TO WORK AT THE TIME; AND HE BASICALLY IGNORED ME THE WHOLE TIME I WAS INFORMING HIM OF MY PAIN! THEN HE SAID THE BLOD CLOT SHOULD OBSOLVE, BUT DIDN'T KNOW HOW LONG IT WOULD TAKE. THEN ADDED, IF IT ISN'T WITHIN A REASONABLE AMOUNT OF TIME, THEY'D HAVE TO OPEN ME UP AGAIN! :eek: WHAT!???! THAT WAS THE WORST THING YOU COULD'VE SAID TO ME.
WELL, NO MEDS WORKED FOR THE PAIN AT ALL. THE ONLY THING THAT HELPED GET ME DROWSY ENOUGH WAS PURKASET (SP?) OH, I STILL FELT THE PAIN ALLRIGHT, BUT I WAS ABLE TO LAY UP AGAINST THE WALL AND FINALLY FALL ASLEEP.
OH, THAT TIME WAS SO HORRIBLE FOR ME. NOW...I GAIN ALL THIS WEIGHT, CUZ NO GALL BLADDER. DON'T KNOW IF THE SURGERY WAS WORTH IT AFTERALL (ALTHOUGH I WAS IN SO MUCH PAIN BEFORE THAT, THAT I MADE MYSELF THROW UP ALL THE TIME TO GET RELIEF FROM IT) I WAS A MESS.
MY ADVICE? ALWAYS, ALWAYS GET A SECOND OPINION BEFORE ANY TYPE OF SURGERY, OR FOR A DIAGNOSED DISEASE.
OH WELL, THAT WAS THEN AND THIS IS NOW. AND I'M STILL A MESS:crazy:
SOO SORRY ABOUT THE RANT! I WENT TO CONSOLE YOU, AND...A.D.H.D. MOMENT:)
ANYWAYS...IF YOU'RE UP, LET'S TALK ABOUT THIS FANFIC IDEA OF YOURS. IF NOT, I'LL CATCH UP WITH YA SOONER OR LATER.
I REALLY LOVE YA KIDDO AND ALWAYS HOPE YOU'RE DOING OK. I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT, OK;) TELL YOUR MOM JO jr SAYS "HI". OH, AND I ALWAYS FORGET TO TELL YOU AND MIKE...I LOVE THAT YOU CALL ME JO! NOW I REALLY FEEL LIKE WE'RE GOOD FRIENDS:D
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
12-15-2006, 04:16 AM
KELL-YOU ARE BRILLIANT!:talk: I WOULD LOVE TO BE ABLE TO DO A FANFIC WITH YOU! JUST TELL ME HOW WE'D BE ABLE TO DO IT, AND I'M THERE, BABE!:D
I AM SORRY YOU'RE IN A LOT OF PAIN, KELL. IT'S BAD ENOUGH WHEN YOU'RE DEPRIVED OF SLEEP, BUT IN PAIN AND NO SLEEP:( I UNDERSTAND.
I WENT THRU GALLBLADDER SURG ABOUT 2 YEARS AGO. SUPPOSED TO BE SO ROUTINE. HA! I WAS IN CONSTANT PAIN FROM THE TIME I WOKE UP IN THE HOSPITAL BED. THEY KEPT ME THERE OVERNIGHT, AND DISCHARGED ME, BUT I NEEDED HELP WALKING TO THE BATHROOM WHILE I WAS THERE (THANK GOODNESS SOME FRIENDS WERE THERE)
I WAS BASICALLY IN BED FOR OVER 2 MONTHS! I COULDN'T WALK UPRIGHT, AND I WON'T EVEN GO INTO DISCUSSION ABOUT THE BATHROOM! I WAS IN CONSTANT STOMACH PAIN. I COULDN'T DO OR ENJOY ANYTHING. I COULD NEVER GET INTO A COMFORABLE POSITION TO WATCH TV OR SLEEP (HA-WHAT WAS THAT?) MY WHOLE STOMACH ACHED FROM SIDE TO SIDE! I'M USUALLY PRETTY ACTIVE, BUT WHEN MY SISTER SAW ME, SHE TOOK ME TO THE SURGEONS OFFICE, AND THEY FINALLY DID SOME TESTS. I KEPT TELLING HIM AND MY REGULAR DOCTOR THAT I WAS IN CONSTANT PAIN BEFORE THIS, AND THEY SAID I HAD SURGERY, AND ALTHOUGH MINOR, IT IS STILL SURGERY, SO EVEN THOUGH THERE WOULD BE SOME PAIN, IT WOULD BE ALRIGHT. MY SISTER WAS SO UPSET BECAUSE I COULD BARELY MOVE. I SWEAR, I THOUGHT SOMETHING WAS LEFT INSIDE SOMEHOW, ALTHOUGH IT AS LASER SURGERY. I WANTED TO DIE, I WAS N SO MUCH PAIN! I COULDN'T MOVE, SLEEP, EAT-NOTHING. I WAS THINKING, HOW IS THIS NORMAL? I WAS SUPPOSED TO GO BACK TO WORK 2 DAYS AFTER THE SURGERY.
WELL...AFTER THEY DID TESTS...TURNED OUT A BLOOD CLOT HAD FORMED ON THE LINING OF MY LIVER. THEN THE SURGEON GETS ALL WORRIED AND SAYS, YOU HAVE TO HAVE COMPLETE BEDREST. DO NOT DO A-N-Y-T-H-I-N-G!! BECAUSE IT COULD TRAVEL OR RUPTURE AND I COULD DIE! WHAT!?! I WAS SO :mad: HERE HE WAS TELLING ME BEFORE TO TRY TO DO NORMAL DAILY ROUTINE STUFF, ALTHOUGH I WAS NEVER GIVEN A CLEARANCE TO GO BACK TO WORK AT THE TIME; AND HE BASICALLY IGNORED ME THE WHOLE TIME I WAS INFORMING HIM OF MY PAIN! THEN HE SAID THE BLOD CLOT SHOULD OBSOLVE, BUT DIDN'T KNOW HOW LONG IT WOULD TAKE. THEN ADDED, IF IT ISN'T WITHIN A REASONABLE AMOUNT OF TIME, THEY'D HAVE TO OPEN ME UP AGAIN! :eek: WHAT!???! THAT WAS THE WORST THING YOU COULD'VE SAID TO ME.
WELL, NO MEDS WORKED FOR THE PAIN AT ALL. THE ONLY THING THAT HELPED GET ME DROWSY ENOUGH WAS PURKASET (SP?) OH, I STILL FELT THE PAIN ALLRIGHT, BUT I WAS ABLE TO LAY UP AGAINST THE WALL AND FINALLY FALL ASLEEP.
OH, THAT TIME WAS SO HORRIBLE FOR ME. NOW...I GAIN ALL THIS WEIGHT, CUZ NO GALL BLADDER. DON'T KNOW IF THE SURGERY WAS WORTH IT AFTERALL (ALTHOUGH I WAS IN SO MUCH PAIN BEFORE THAT, THAT I MADE MYSELF THROW UP ALL THE TIME TO GET RELIEF FROM IT) I WAS A MESS.
MY ADVICE? ALWAYS, ALWAYS GET A SECOND OPINION BEFORE ANY TYPE OF SURGERY, OR FOR A DIAGNOSED DISEASE.
OH WELL, THAT WAS THEN AND THIS IS NOW. AND I'M STILL A MESS:crazy:
SOO SORRY ABOUT THE RANT! I WENT TO CONSOLE YOU, AND...A.D.H.D. MOMENT:)
ANYWAYS...IF YOU'RE UP, LET'S TALK ABOUT THIS. IF NOT, I'LL CATCH UP WITH YA SOONER OR LATER.
I REALLY LOVE YA KIDDO AND ALWAYS HOPE YOU'RE DOING OK. I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT, OK;) TELL YOUR MOM JO jr SAYS "HI". OH, AND I ALWAYS FORGET TO TELL YOU AND MIKE...I LOVE THAT YOU CALL ME JO! NOW I REALLY FEEL LIKE WE'RE GOOD FRIENDS:D
First off, let me say you will ALWAYS be Jo to me! :D It's so awesome your name is Jodi because if I had that name, I would have everyone call me Jo! lol
Second, that is a scary story! :eek: Especially since I have to go for an ultrasound to see if it is my gallbladder acting up. I don't think it is but they don't know what's causing my pain. That's so scary and I'm sorry you had to go through all that. Second opinions are a very good idea. I'm glad you pullec through. :)
I actually feel myself getting tired, so I will PM you tomorrow about that fan fic idea. ;)
JO jr
12-15-2006, 04:27 AM
OKEY-DOKEY. NIGHTY NIGHT & SWEET DREAMS:sleep:
Shine
12-15-2006, 09:12 PM
KELL-YOU ARE BRILLIANT!:talk: I WOULD LOVE TO BE ABLE TO DO A FANFIC WITH YOU! JUST TELL ME HOW WE'D BE ABLE TO DO IT, AND I'M THERE, BABE!:D
I AM SORRY YOU'RE IN A LOT OF PAIN, KELL. IT'S BAD ENOUGH WHEN YOU'RE DEPRIVED OF SLEEP, BUT IN PAIN AND NO SLEEP:( I UNDERSTAND.
I WENT THRU GALLBLADDER SURG ABOUT 2 YEARS AGO. SUPPOSED TO BE SO ROUTINE. HA! I WAS IN CONSTANT PAIN FROM THE TIME I WOKE UP IN THE HOSPITAL BED. THEY KEPT ME THERE OVERNIGHT, AND DISCHARGED ME, BUT I NEEDED HELP WALKING TO THE BATHROOM WHILE I WAS THERE (THANK GOODNESS SOME FRIENDS WERE THERE)
I WAS BASICALLY IN BED FOR OVER 2 MONTHS! I COULDN'T WALK UPRIGHT, AND I WON'T EVEN GO INTO DISCUSSION ABOUT THE BATHROOM! I WAS IN CONSTANT STOMACH PAIN. I COULDN'T DO OR ENJOY ANYTHING. I COULD NEVER GET INTO A COMFORABLE POSITION TO WATCH TV OR SLEEP (HA-WHAT WAS THAT?) MY WHOLE STOMACH ACHED FROM SIDE TO SIDE! I'M USUALLY PRETTY ACTIVE, BUT WHEN MY SISTER SAW ME, SHE TOOK ME TO THE SURGEONS OFFICE, AND THEY FINALLY DID SOME TESTS. I KEPT TELLING HIM AND MY REGULAR DOCTOR THAT I WAS IN CONSTANT PAIN BEFORE THIS, AND THEY SAID I HAD SURGERY, AND ALTHOUGH MINOR, IT IS STILL SURGERY, SO EVEN THOUGH THERE WOULD BE SOME PAIN, IT WOULD BE ALRIGHT. MY SISTER WAS SO UPSET BECAUSE I COULD BARELY MOVE. I SWEAR, I THOUGHT SOMETHING WAS LEFT INSIDE SOMEHOW, ALTHOUGH IT AS LASER SURGERY. I WANTED TO DIE, I WAS N SO MUCH PAIN! I COULDN'T MOVE, SLEEP, EAT-NOTHING. I WAS THINKING, HOW IS THIS NORMAL? I WAS SUPPOSED TO GO BACK TO WORK 2 DAYS AFTER THE SURGERY.
WELL...AFTER THEY DID TESTS...TURNED OUT A BLOOD CLOT HAD FORMED ON THE LINING OF MY LIVER. THEN THE SURGEON GETS ALL WORRIED AND SAYS, YOU HAVE TO HAVE COMPLETE BEDREST. DO NOT DO A-N-Y-T-H-I-N-G!! BECAUSE IT COULD TRAVEL OR RUPTURE AND I COULD DIE! WHAT!?! I WAS SO :mad: HERE HE WAS TELLING ME BEFORE TO TRY TO DO NORMAL DAILY ROUTINE STUFF, ALTHOUGH I WAS NEVER GIVEN A CLEARANCE TO GO BACK TO WORK AT THE TIME; AND HE BASICALLY IGNORED ME THE WHOLE TIME I WAS INFORMING HIM OF MY PAIN! THEN HE SAID THE BLOD CLOT SHOULD OBSOLVE, BUT DIDN'T KNOW HOW LONG IT WOULD TAKE. THEN ADDED, IF IT ISN'T WITHIN A REASONABLE AMOUNT OF TIME, THEY'D HAVE TO OPEN ME UP AGAIN! :eek: WHAT!???! THAT WAS THE WORST THING YOU COULD'VE SAID TO ME.
WELL, NO MEDS WORKED FOR THE PAIN AT ALL. THE ONLY THING THAT HELPED GET ME DROWSY ENOUGH WAS PURKASET (SP?) OH, I STILL FELT THE PAIN ALLRIGHT, BUT I WAS ABLE TO LAY UP AGAINST THE WALL AND FINALLY FALL ASLEEP.
OH, THAT TIME WAS SO HORRIBLE FOR ME. NOW...I GAIN ALL THIS WEIGHT, CUZ NO GALL BLADDER. DON'T KNOW IF THE SURGERY WAS WORTH IT AFTERALL (ALTHOUGH I WAS IN SO MUCH PAIN BEFORE THAT, THAT I MADE MYSELF THROW UP ALL THE TIME TO GET RELIEF FROM IT) I WAS A MESS.
MY ADVICE? ALWAYS, ALWAYS GET A SECOND OPINION BEFORE ANY TYPE OF SURGERY, OR FOR A DIAGNOSED DISEASE.
OH WELL, THAT WAS THEN AND THIS IS NOW. AND I'M STILL A MESS:crazy:
SOO SORRY ABOUT THE RANT! I WENT TO CONSOLE YOU, AND...A.D.H.D. MOMENT:)
ANYWAYS...IF YOU'RE UP, LET'S TALK ABOUT THIS FANFIC IDEA OF YOURS. IF NOT, I'LL CATCH UP WITH YA SOONER OR LATER.
I REALLY LOVE YA KIDDO AND ALWAYS HOPE YOU'RE DOING OK. I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT, OK;) TELL YOUR MOM JO jr SAYS "HI". OH, AND I ALWAYS FORGET TO TELL YOU AND MIKE...I LOVE THAT YOU CALL ME JO! NOW I REALLY FEEL LIKE WE'RE GOOD FRIENDS:D
:( That is terrible. :(
Shine
12-15-2006, 09:15 PM
Great job as always, Kelly. :)
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
01-10-2007, 04:24 AM
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Cop 1- FREEZE!
Ken- I'm just having dinner with my wife. You have no right to bust in my house.
Jo- Think again Ken.
Ken- You. How'd I know you'd be involved somehow.
Jo- Get him out of here.
Natalie heard Bridget start crying so he went in her room. She picked up Bridget and hugged her. Jo stood in the doorway of the nursery.
Natalie- *Rocking her back and forth* We're free. We're going to be just fine.
A month later, Ken was sentenced to 3 years in prison, then 14 months probabtion. He also had to attend a wife batterers program. If he didn't go, he would go right back to jail. Natalie was granted a restraining order. Ken wasn't allowed to go anywhere near her or he'd go right back to jail. The night they got all this news, Natalie invited everyone over to dinner.
Jo- We're so happy for you Natalie.
Mrs. Garrett- You handled all of this so well.
Natalie- Well I learned from the best.
Mrs. Garrett- :)
Tootie- You think the batterer's program is going to help him?
Natalie- I hope so. He's a really nice guy. He just has a nasty temper.
Blair- Well now he will get the help that he needs.
Natalie- Now Bridget and I can get on with our lives.
Jo- And we will be there every step of the way.
Blair- We sure will.
Natalie- Thanks guys. I have the best friends ever!
The End
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Sequel to come if anyone wants it :)
Shine
01-10-2007, 01:59 PM
You did a great job with this story, Kelly. :) I hope that you decide to write another one at some point. I've been thinking of my own "Facts" fanfic to write.
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
01-10-2007, 02:52 PM
You did a great job with this story, Kelly. :) I hope that you decide to write another one at some point. I've been thinking of my own "Facts" fanfic to write.
You should. I think you'd be great at it! :)
I'm thinking about a sequel for this one.
A.D.A. Casey Novak
01-11-2007, 03:57 PM
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RoryGilmore
01-18-2008, 07:05 PM
OMG Kelly, this is excellent! I cant believe I havent read this before now! So here's my little 2 cents. If you suddenly com across some free time you should defiantly write more fan fics!
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
01-18-2008, 08:06 PM
OMG Kelly, this is excellent! I cant believe I havent read this before now! So here's my little 2 cents. If you suddenly com across some free time you should defiantly write more fan fics!
Omg thank you! I didn't think anyone read mine anymore lol. I will continue to write on this. :)
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