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05-29-2005, 10:21 PM
05-30-2005, 08:19 AM
I love it!! You have done a good job of keeping the characters in character!! Can't wait to read more!! :happyface :happyface :lol: :lol: :D :D :) :)
It's very good! Makes me want to read more too!
05-30-2005, 12:22 PM
You're good! Good story already, can't wait to read more! :D
05-30-2005, 03:01 PM
Ah, thanks guys :D I will post the next bit here when it's written (next week prob'ly) :)
05-31-2005, 03:46 AM
I may be too late to comment, but I agree with the others, it makes me want to read on! Excellent stuff. :D
You've really 'got' David and Maddie too - it sounds like them speaking and reacting and thinking. Whilst I read, I'm actually imagining them acting it out!
I look forward to the next installment!! :wave:
05-31-2005, 02:45 PM
05-31-2005, 03:18 PM
It's great! I look forward to reading the next installment!
06-14-2005, 12:56 PM
Excellent job on this! You have definitely captured the spirit of the two of them, and this could have been torn out of an episode.
I can't wait to see where you go with this. :)
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