View Full Version : More New Fan FiC.."Its the real thing"
03-10-2004, 06:21 PM
ThiS is for KellY&Loren LoL! "Its the real thing"
Starts: ( In Raina and Stacys apartment)
Raina: (Just woke up) Hey Stace..how'd ya sleep..I swear I feel like a new person! I feel so..so relaxed and all (she said smiling and stretching)
Stacy: Well, not me.
Raina: Why..something wrong?...
Stacy: Actually, yeah there is.
Raina: What? Did I do something?...
xoxoxoJessie..ill finish this fan fiction continued later!
03-10-2004, 07:55 PM
If this is for me and Loren then POST MORE!!! lol
03-10-2004, 08:26 PM
Stacy: I have stuff..of mine missing from my closet.
Stacy: Yeah, my grandmothers antiques.
Raina: Oh..my there couldn't of been a robbery! Wait..are you trying to say that you think that I had something to do with that?
Stacy: No Raina..I'm just saying..oh my god they're missing! Damn it damn it! (She said pouting panicked)
Raina: Well, I do not want you accusing me of taking them! I wouldnt do that.
Stacy: Ok, how do I know this? Huh? I dont know you well enough to consider you 100% innocent.
Raina: Oh..thats it! If you wanna be a little bitch towards me..then let the games begin! Untill you apologize..which you will because I do not steal..I wont talk to you..or Ill even move out. I want a perosn who can trust me, and I'm telling you now Stacy..I did not go stealing out of your closet.
Stacy: (Shakes her head and walks away feeling part guilty and part upset)
Raina: Fine! Fine! (Phone rings) Hey Stacy I guess Ill get it, maybe its the gramma antique napper! (she said sarcastically)
Raina: *Picks up phone* Hello? Yes, this is Raina..yes inspector Raina Washington. Mo..is this Mrs Warner? It is..uh..mom? Hi..great to hear from you too. Thank you for calling, something happened. What..(looks shocked) Oh..I..umm..no im fine. Thanks for the news though..and for being brave enough to tell me. Ok I will, bye.
Stacy: (Yells from backround) Who was that..and dont get sarcastic with me again. Well, who? Hello!
Raina: *Sighs* it was my..birth mother, I told you I was adopted. I met her last year..and I was just informed that my dad..is dead. My biological..father.
Stacy: (Feels sorry for her and feels sorry for the way she acted)
Raina: Oh..my god.
Created by deborah Joy Levine..Beginning and then Commericial!
xoxoJessie more later bye
03-10-2004, 08:32 PM
YOU STOP THERE?????? NOPE THAT WON'T DO!!!! Post more NOW!
03-10-2004, 08:52 PM
Starts: ( Kates House)
Louis: Those bastards!
Kate: Calm down...
Louis: But..Kate how can they sue us for this..we have to get a lawyer.
Kate: Im getting one tomorrow morning.
Louis: Damn this, they didnt even prove it..or double check it they didnt give us a chance.
Kate: Well find some way to figure this all out..
Kate: (Goes into bathroom and fixes up KatieAnn's bathtub)
Louis: Ill go get her clothes..wh..whens our court date kate?
Kate: (Undresses KatieAnn and gently places her in tub after checking temperature)
Louis: Hows my little princess..she loves the water. I think her new nickname should be little mermaid. (He laughed)
Kate: Your right there! Her nanny is starting tonight. You are going to meet her at 8:00 and then tomorrow, we will officially have her on her first job! I told you I interviewed nannies Stacy brang to my office.
Louis: Tell me is this nanny young, old..what?
Kate: She looks around a little older than me.
Louis: Oh ok.
Kate: What? Are you calling me old? I really hope your not for your sake. (She said sarcastically smiling)
Louis: No honey, you are the youngest, prettiest, stylin grandma on the face of this earth. (He said with his arms around her)
Kate: Now, you deserve a treat..that might..ya know make you take your mind off things..(She teases)
Louis: Oh I cannot wait. (Kisses her)
Katieann: (Looks at them with a duh look with her one foot in her mouth..thinking uh ok wheres all the baby talk..I liekd that..grandma?)(Then started to make a fussy noise and feeling left out)
Kate: Oh right, not in front of my grandaughter! Shame on me! (she smiled)
More later xoxoJessie next scene coming up!
03-11-2004, 12:40 AM
Can't wait for more
03-11-2004, 08:35 PM
03-14-2004, 01:45 PM
Jinny: *In her office**Or at her desk*
Magda: *Picks up the phone and hands it to Jinny*
Jinny: (Gives her a confused look)
Magda: (With food in her mouth) Its Saturday, Jin. Hank gets to find out that hes a FaTHeR.
Jinny: I know Mag!
Magda: So, just do it. You may be surprised at what he'll say.
Jinny: Part of me isnt afraid of telling him because it was truthful. And the other part..is him..
Magda: (Cuts her off) Saying the exact thing Jonah said to me when I had that pregnancy scare.
Jinny: Something like that.
Magda: Honey, please..don't get scared and change your mind. Do it now. Just tell him you want to meet him in the division lobby.
And to talk..
Jinny: Good..that sounds good to say..uh..uh..ya got any more of those good lines, Mag?
Magda: (Laughs a little) I am good arent I? Yeah, Ill help ya. Remember Jinny, you have any problems with your pregnancy or anything you'd like to know, you come to me, ok? I am behind you 100% with your decisions and with this baby.
Jinny: I know..okay I will..Thank you. (she sighed)
Magda: Go ahead, call him.
Jinny: (Dialed the numbers)
Hank: Uh, Hello?
Jinny: Hank, hi.
Hank: Hey its my homoside inspector Jinny Exstead...
Jinny: (Laughed nervously) Yeah, its me.
Hank: I was worried about cha.
Jinny: I know..Im sorry I didnt call last week. I left a message though that we could meet on saturday.
Hank: Well, do you need to tell me something?
Jinny: Ok, meet meet you in about 3 hours..that is when I get out early. (She told him getting anxious)
Hank: Ill be there..don't worry.
Jinny: Thanks, um, I have to go now..bye..uh..Hank, I lo..ve you.
Hank: Bye, I lo..ve you too. (He said happily and touched at the same time)
Magda: (Wheeled her chair over) How did.. it go?
Jinny: Just, fine now.
(Magdas House when its 2 hrs later)
Magda: *Sees Gabe in her house*
Magda: *puts her keys down just as she walks in the front door*
Gabe: Hey, Magda.
Magda: Hi Gabe, what are you..doing here? (She said surprised and a bit lost)
Gabe: Well, Ben called me.
Gabe: Yeah, Ben called me saying the babysitter you hired for him for a short amount of time, had to leave on an emergency.
Magda: What, Oh my god. Umm, Gabe I had no idea, she would do that...
Gabe: Mag, its ok, I just dont like that idea. So anyway, he smelled smoke and it was from the toaster and oven and it seems that she had left it on today and then there was a little grease fire..
Magda: Oh my..Grease fire?? Oh my..are you sure hes alright, he wasnt hurt at all?? I cant beleive this! Im so sorry..wheres Ben?
Gabe: Yes, Mag, yes..calm down.
Magda: How can I calm down........wheere is he?
Gabe: Ben! Your mothers here. Come on..
Ben: Comes out of the hallway hi mom. That babysitter wasnt a good one! Shes so stupid that she almsot caused the whole house to go up in flames!
Gabe: Well, we arent going to get any more of those babysitters.
Ben: Guys, I dont need a babysitter, why would I need one if I have a dad already?
Magda: *Looks at Gabe*
Ben: Since dad isnt..moving back in, yet..cant he at least come over the days you have to work and Im not in school?
Gabe: *Sighs* As a matter a fact, that is a good idea. I would be very glad to come over and have fun with you. Of course we have to check with..your mom.
Magda: *Looks at Gabe and Ben together* Ok, that does actually sound good. If it will make you happy, Im happy then.
Ben: Really!? Thanks mom!
Gabe: Itll work out, dont worry.
Mores later!!! Bye xoxoJessie
03-15-2004, 07:24 PM
03-15-2004, 11:18 PM
I know I definately need more!!
03-16-2004, 09:51 PM
Starts:(Raina and Staceys house)
Raina: Ya know what Stacy, I know your sorry and thats ok were cool.
Stacy: Good..Im really sorry again about your father.
Raina: I didnt even know him (she shook her head and shocked)
Stacy: How did he die? Or do you want to talk about this later?
Raina: No, (pauses) a heart attack..he was 53 years old. As I told you before stacy, we both have different lives.
Stacy: I know, I know...Captain called 5 minutes ago, she has your fathers historical past in her office.
Raina: I'll go pick that up..I guess. There is really no reason to anyway. I mean..he isnt really a father.
Stacy: Well, he helped create you and..he biologically is.
Raina: Stacy! As I said, we have totally different lives and you have your memory album and pretty much a normal family.
Stacy: Who ever said my family was perfectly normal?
Raina: Well, then and right now compared to yours..there two totally different lifestyles we lived or live in now. So that makes you normal.
Stacy: Ok..umm If you want to talk..
Raina: Yeah..I get the message.
Stacy: *Walks away a little*
(In captains office)
Raina: (Walks in slowly)
Captain: Hey..I got the news. Are you alright? I mean..ya know..he is still your father.
Raina: Captain, its ok. I dont care..Its not my problem to deal with.
More later or tomottow bye xoxoJess
03-17-2004, 07:51 PM
03-20-2004, 07:11 PM
Starts: (They left off in caps office)
Kate: Raina..this isnt like..something you would do.
Raina: What do you mean..
Kate: Well, you wouldn't just throw away your whole past..and..
Raina: Well, this man was a screw up and raped my mother..so obviously its not worth knowing.
Kate: I know it was a horrible thing to find out from your mother who told you she didnt want much to do with you and then you find out your father is dead. And now you have the choice to explore your fathers past.
Raina: *shakes head and nodds*
Kate: I mean.....find out..who this man really is..or was..and who he was before his problems began.
Raina: *Sighs* Um..is there anything else me and Nate need to do about the transexual murder case?
Kate: Just go to Dukes house and pick up his ass for murdering..Leanne.
Raina: Oh my..he was the one who was in on the murder too?
Kate: You got it.
Hank: *Sits down at table and is eating his dinner real quick getting ready to head over Jinnys**Then hears knock*
Hank: *Gets up and answers it*
Hank: Hey Jinny, umm come in come in...arent I supposed to meet you in the lobby?
Jinny: Yeah, but now I just decided to come here. *She said playing with her jacket sleeve coming in to his apartment*
Hank: You..uh eat dinner yet?
Jinny: Yea, Im not hungry.
Hank: You needed to tell me something, right?
Jinny: Uh yees I..I did.
Hank: Jinny, you know I really care about you and as soon as I saw you, and when you talked to me and told me things about your past and all....'
Jinny: Hank...*Sighs* I am beginning to feel alot of love for you. And I kept saying in my mind maybe this is too soon, or a mistake.
But then I thought, this man seems like he is the one..and the one who can make me feel happy..make me want to get out of bed in the morning.....brighten up my life.
Jinny: ..Yeah *she said getting ready to look up with love in her eyes*
Hank: Begins to kiss her
Jinny: Kisses back
Hank: Stops after 5 seconds
Jinny: Ya know..this is just stalling time...
Hank: *Laughs a little* Yeah..really..Im gonna finish up my dinner.
Hank: Take off your coat and sit down grab anything you want to eat and tell me what you came to tell me.
Jinny: Ill just sit.
Hank: So....what..is it
Jinny: *Paused a little anxiously and nervous at the same time* She thought that if she told Hank while he was eating his favorite dinner, he might choke on it while being so shocked from the news.
Hank: Jinny, hello.* He said trying to snap her out of a daze she was in*
Jinny: Oh, okay..Hank.....Im...preg__
Hank:*cuts her off* Umm, pregnant??! *He drops his fork*
Jinny: Oh my god, yes! Yes ..Hank..I..am with your child I am pretty sure. Your the only one Ive been with....recently.
Hank: *Shocked look* Oh my..your gonna have my baby? I..im..im..uh..
Hank: Yes, you can put it that way, yes.
Jinny: Im sorry. Hank.
Hank: Wh..why are you sorry, Jinny? You didnt make this happen..we used protection. What, you were so scared that I was going to get upset, angry and leave ya??
Jinny: *Gets emotional and confused at what hes saying to her*
Well, yeah..Hank. What do you think I felt?
Hank: Do you know how far you..are? In your pregnancy?
Jinny: I went for my first ultrasound so far, I went to Magdas Ob/GYn. She's nice. Magda was there for me and Ive talked to her baout this too. Shes here for me and I've decided to have this..baby. I just..have to figure it out. Its going to be hard for me..and all going through it. But Im willing to try. Its okay if you dont want to be a part of the babys life....I mean after all..I wouldnt blame you..you just met me not that long ago and its not your fault that this happened and all...and it wouldnt really be fair to you either so if...........*she said talking faster and faster getting hispericall and a little confused and embarassed*
Hank: *Cuts her off*
Hank: Jinny..Jin..stop. I want the baby..and you..I mean i care about cha and I want my baby in my life too. I know we've known eachother only a short amount of time. But Im willing to take this risk with you now..I have a very strong gut feeling that this will work. Jinny Exstead, will you..ma..rry me?
Jinny: *Takes deep breathe and it taken back to a flashback of her and Jack getting married and then Jinny telling Magda that there are alot of risks in life but just be happy for her. *
Hank: It doesnt have to be now..Jin.
Jinny: I..love you. I have to think this over..but I want to marry you..but there is another part of me that is so afraid that this is the same mistake that I made with Jack. There is one thing different though.
Hank: What is that?
Jinny: That, well..I feel more different than I felt when I was going to marry Jack. My feelings feel like part of this is right and part of this is not right. Not because of the baby..becasue I had this special feeling about you all along. Now with Jack..I assumed it would all workout and I didnt just rush into it..I also rushed my feelings. Me and Jack just had alot in common and I kept saying we understand eachother and....
Hank: Jinny, I am going to think this over too..but I still have a strong feeling about this.
Jinny: *Looks at him deeply*
Hank: Well, you can tell little "Jr" there (points to her stomach) that he or she is going to get a daddy.
Jinny: *Gets ready to hug Hank feeling releived*
Hank: *Hugs Jinny*
Jinny: *Hugs back*
xoxoJesssie More later!! need responses!
03-20-2004, 07:29 PM
awwww! that was sweet. post more soon!:D
03-20-2004, 11:13 PM
Aww they are sooo sweet together!! I neeed more!!!
03-20-2004, 11:20 PM
Kelly..i wanna tell you if im not online alot anymore b/c of personal probs..finish my fan fics if you can..okay bye xoxoJessie:)
03-23-2004, 10:06 PM
Starts:( In Kates Office)
Kate: I can't believe they are going to send us to court because of those damn taxes which we did pay!
Jinny: Captain, remember when I told you I was, pregnant? Well, what is my policy now..
Kate: Oh this reminds me, you will be writing at desk on light work.
Jinny: *Sighs* writing at desk, huh?
Kate: Yes, once we know..which you told me, you will be off the streets.
Jinny: Thats like..sexest captain..
Kate: Yeah, well i do agree but..its for your own good also.
Kate: Come on, this will be..more bonding. With me..
Jinny; *Smiles a little and gives her a weird look*
Kate: And if you keep giving me that look I;m going to have you listen to my old day stories back when I was a young cop. (she teased looking at her book of cops attendance records)'
Jinny: Alright, this is going to be a..long..journey. (she said as she left to go talk to a mother who could of been involved with her husbands drug dealing accounts)
More later x0x0jessie:happyface
03-23-2004, 10:09 PM
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